Blazing stallion, crouching fox.
By Wonky_Donkey
fukuwearer87@yahoo.com.au
Disclaimer: I ain't typing new one each chapter, go read the one on chapter 1!!
"Speech"
'Thoughts'
***Flash backs****
A/N: BEWARE! You are about to see a different, softer, caring side to the man called Genma Saotome! This isn't a 'beat-up-panda-man-fic'! Don't get angry at me! Send all flames to an author called "sky80" for writing an excellent Ranma-dragonball x-over fic that can be located at an outside site, which opened my eyes to a "Humane" side of Genma.
Oh, yeah, the reason why the Neko-ken was taught to Ranma, will be explained later on.
ALSO sorry to Alex Ultra, the martial artist code will be explained *NEXT* chapter.
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A wind of caution blew through Ranma's raven bangs as the young man looked into the empty lot. These empty lots were purposely placed throughout Nermia over the last two years by the council to try and curb the property destruction caused by super-powered martial artists and giant bull monsters.
It was just after dusk and there were piles of junk situated throughout the area. Shadows were the only occupants in this grim arena of rejection and disrepair. Ranma was starting to realize his folly.
Ranma was still trying to comprehend this new form of energy called chakra. From what he had heard from his mother and from his experience with Saffron, chakra users have larger amounts of energy than martial artists and can cause more damage.
Ranma had absolutely no idea what Genma could do, but on the other hand, Genma had still didn't know the full extent of Ranma's growing abilities.
During the battle at Jusendo, Ranma was forced to think of a way to kill. This was something that he had never needed to do before.
while Saffron and Ranma were being lifted into the air by Ranma's hiryushoten-ha, Ranma had been going over some of the revised versions of the hiryushoten-ha to use. The only one that could've worked at that point in time was the horizontal version, but now Ranma had another trick that he had been saving. This variation of the hiryushoten-ha would extend the range of the shrapnel and junk's usefulness, to it's greatest extent.
(A/N: I'll give you a hint. It's similar to the fight with Herb. ^_^)
The pig-tailed martial artist had been experimenting with other forms of the Hiryushoten-ha, the dragon rising ascension wave being his most powerful technique. This fight, if Genma was as strong and as nasty as his wife feared, he might be the first person to feel Ranma's new techniques.
.And if Genma forced his hand and if Ranma was forced to cripple or end the life of his father?
So be it.
-
-
The main reason that Genma had lived so long, was that he always listened to his animal instincts. Most ninjas are in touch with nature in one form or another.
Be it a summoning contract or a style of tai-jutsu similar to the actions of a certain animal (i.e: Inuzuka Kiba's dog form), the best ninjas learn that if they want to survive, to trust their animal instincts. It was one of the oldest defenses evolution had given to man-kind to ensure it's survival.
And right now, Genma was feeling like an animal trapped in a corner. Genma was prepared to beat his only son into a coma to ensure his safety if it was necessary.
And if the young fool pushed his hand and got himself killed by Genma?
So be it.
-
-
Genma silently handed the scroll to his wife to hold while the father and son fought for their lives. With the grim silence and determined looks on both fighter's faces, the fight began.
-
-
Ranma got into a basic defensive stance that left no openings in the front, above and on either sides of his body. He had learnt long ago, that it wasn't wise to rush an unknown opponent. And he didn't know this side of his father. He could only assume that he would go for a frontal aerial attack, as the Saotome School of martial arts was based on straight-forward aerial attacks.
-
Genma's face lost all expression and he got into a stance that looked similar to a horse stance, but his head and torso were leaning forwards and he had his arms hanging, crossed at the wrists in front of his body.
-
By waiting for Genma to attack, Ranma had lost his chance of victory.
Genma shimmered away into the night. Ranma wasn't impressed by this, this was just the Umisenken. Ranma knew how to play this little game, he knew what signs to look and to listen for.
-
"FOOL." Genma's voice came, booming from everywhere. "THIS ISN'T THE UMISENKEN."
For the last ten seconds, Ranma had been amplifying his hearing with his ki as to locate his father. Genma's booming voice sounded to Ranma as if he had screamed into his ear.
Hearing this sudden loud noise, Ranma was knocked to his knees and was trying to clear his head.
Ranma sense sight suddenly went slightly out of focus. His last thought was to turn around to face the Umisenken attack that supposedly came from behind. Genma took advantage of his son's situation, as a giant diagonal cut appeared across Ranma's chest.
Instantly following the cut came a giant sonic boom that knocked Ranma off his knees onto the ground.
-
No-one heard Ranma's scream of pain over the boom.
-
Genma was silent and invisible, yet his attacks were big and loud.
-
Genma had combined the Umisenken and the Yamasenken.
-
-
-
-
Ranma lay there on the ground, blood trickling out of his ears, streaming out of his chest wound. A ki powered vacuum blade had done what no phoenix demi-god or eight headed dragon had been able to do. Ranma's ki stopped emitting from his body. Ranma Saotome was dead.
-
-
-
-
Nodoka dropped to her knees, silent tears trickling down her face. Genma was feared through-out the ninja world for his silent, invisible lethal style. A style so fast that you heard the attack *after* it happened.
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Genma paled and dropped to his knees. Despite all the "Worth-less" comments he gave his student, he has always been incredibly proud of his son. And now he lay dead at his feet, killed by his own hand.
Despite all that had thought before the fight, he was only fooling himself. He couldn't bring himself to kill his own blood.
He had expected Ranma to put a defense, or to dodge at the last second. He must've put too-much chakra into that attack... he had been building his Ki reserves up over the last fifteen years.
The attack had grown immensely in terms of destructive power and of speed. It was over ten times more powerful then Kumon Ryu's attack.
He hadn't been attempting to kill his son, only to injure him enough to stop him from getting himself killed by Itachi. Now he was dead because of a simple miscalculation. He watched his son lie there on his chest, bleed to death.
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Ranma was far from dead. He would've been deceased right now, if he hadn't focused all of his ki into his chest at the last moment. And even with that, he was loosing blood fast.
Normally Ranma would've gotten to his feet and taunted his opponent's weak attack, asking if he had any more. But by lying there and lowering the last of his ki reserves he had a major advantage over his father.
-
His father's defenses and senses weren't up.
-
And the bleeding martial artist had time to plan his next attack.
Ranma decided that if he wanted to survive tonight, he would have to use his chakra, as he did at Jusendo.
Ranma reached inside of him. He knew that his mind had forgotten how to use his chakra, but after training for years, you merge it into your subconscious.
He searched deep within himself, and found.
-
'OH FU-ro!!!' (A/N: ^_^ No heavy swearing in this fic. No sir-ee! a furo is a Japanese style bath room)
'WHERE THE HELL IS MY CHAKRA STORED?!' Ranma mentally screamed. He had no idea where it was and how to use it. The last time he had used it, he was acting on impulse.
He tried to remember what his mother had said about chakra..
*****************************FLASHBACK*************************************
"You see, martial artists use their ki to enhance their speed and strength etc. Ninjas on the other hand use chakra. Chakra is a different form of ki. You could say that ki is the purer form, but in truth, chakra is ki, but uses energy from nature as well to strengthen it's power."
*************************END*FLASHBACK************************************
Ranma internally grinned. He could figure this out. Hadn't he learnt the hiryushoten-ha in 3 days? Hopefully his subconscious could work out how to do it, *before he bled to death. He relaxed and started to meditate.
-
ten seconds passed. Nothing. 'Of course nothing would happen, for god sake! You can't just order your sub-conscious to do something!' he thought 'What did I do at Jusendo?!' Ranma mentally muttered desperately.
*****************************FLASHBACK*************************************
Damnit! He wasn't going to die here, not to this loser! He reached deep dark regions of the inside of his soul, searching for a weapon or tool that he could use. As if his will to live acted as a flood light, it appeared.
He didn't know what it was, yet, he somehow knew it from somewhere... it was almost as he had locked it away. There was no time to ponder what it was. All he found all that he knew was that he needed to win. And so he did.
He opened his eyes and saw. He couldn't see Saffron, but he could see a Saffron shaped flame behind the fireball. Drawing his right arm back he pooled all the mysterious energy into his hand and punched in the direction of the smaller flame he assume that was Saffron.
The energy in his hand left him and created a swirling mass of cold air that shot through the fireball and ripped through Saffron's body like rice paper.
*************************END*FLASHBACK************************************
'I saw the energy.." Ranma thought. "Now that I think of it, back then I extended my ki, to power up my attack and drew the flames in to use the horizontal hiryushoten-ha just like a.'
'..Just like a net.'
He reached out to nature, extending an invisible aurora, letting it flow through the air. Letting it flow through the air seemed to unlock the secret to chakra.
'The air.' Ranma thought, 'I shouldn't be forcing the air to move.. I should. connect myself to the air.. and manipulate it as I would my arm or my leg...'
-
Genma got off his knees and wiped the sweat-that-came-from-under-his-eyes away. Because real men don't cry, their eyes merely perspire.
He looked towards his wife. It didn't matter what Nodoka did to him now. Nothing could hurt him more than the fact that he just killed his own son.
-
Ranma grinned, put both his hands on the ground and pushed hard as he raised the air under his body suddenly. In a burst of wind propelled speed he launched himself 10 metres into the air.
-
Nodoka and Genma heard a sound from where Ranma lay and turned their heads to the spot where he was lying. Seeing his body not there they looked up, and saw their flying son. A mixture of joy and amazement shone on both of their faces.
-
'That's my boy!' Genma thought proudly.
-
'*That* was Gen-jutsu! He *actually* fooled two experienced ninjas into thinking he was dead, to gain time to think up a plan!' Nodoka thought, with a look of awe and joy. 'He may just have what it takes to avenge the family!'
-
"Time to end this pop." Ranma stated. He then rushed forward at his father before the old man could react and started the spiral.
During the fight, Ranma and his father were keeping a calm mind as they fought.. (well Ranma didn't have time to get angry and the Umisenken doesn't work if you don't control your emotions..) so the air around them was quite cool.
-
Genma was confused by this. He had been there when Cologne taught Ranma the hiryushoten-ha. He knew how in theory it worked. The Hiryushoten-ha required hot and Cold ki. 'Ranma must be loosing it' he thought before he decided to wait for Ranma to come to him, so he could knock his son out gently, and get him medical attention.
-
As Ranma ran, he created a heated aurora as he made the spiral. As he came into striking distance to his father, he crouched down instead of just outright using an uppercut to deliver the attack, causing his father's roundhouse kick to miss his head by inches.
Ranma jumped while his father was off balance, when he reached a height of 2 metres above his father, he twisted his body around. Ranma suddenly went into the exact opposite of the Soul of ice. He focused all his building emotions and punched down, pushing the air which his ki had been guiding to follow him as he created the spiral at his father who was directly below him.
-
"HIRYUSHOTEN-HA REVISED- INVERTED FLAMING DRAGON!!" Ranma bellowed.
-
All hell broke loose.
-
Picture a large hiryushoten ha. Now flip it upside down. Nomally it would *just* fling the opponent/ opponents hundreds of metres into the air and the real damage happens when they land. This one instead, SLAMMED and then PINNED Genma into the ground, crushing him.
To make things more painful, all the shrapnel in the empty lot, got caught up in the hurricane. It is enough to literally rip any normal person apart.
(A/N: Think back when Zabuza and Kakashi fought and used the water hurricane-thingee on it's side. Debris was sucked up and pelted at the person on the receiving end.)
Good thing then that Genma Saotome was, and still is no ordinary man. For when the hurricane subsided and Ranma landed, he found a mangled and broken Genma lying on the ground.
Ranma walked toward his mother, who had jumped to safety when she felt the build up of chakra. When they got within a few metres of each other, they rushed each other and created the largest hug/running-tackle in the history of man-kind. The type that make certain amazons cry with pride.
Ranma's mother handed him the scroll. When a tear of pride rolled down her cheek. Ranma grasped it and prepared to open it.
-
"Wait.. Ranma. I have something.. to tell you.. boy." Genma burbled, painfully rolling onto his side to tell his son what he felt about all of this with the last of his strength.
-
Ranma walked over to him and squatted down beside him expecting a lecture about how worthless he was, but instead he heard:
"Ranma.. I'm ..proud of you boy. *cough*.I only wish. that I could see you .whoop. the weasel's (Itachi means weasel) butt." Genma managed to get out,
Ranma stared in shock.
"I thought. that because I. couldn't kill him. you wouldn't. stand a chance..*hack* ..don't forget.. that. I'm.. proud.. of .you.."
Genma said this then collapsed onto the ground.
-
"OYAJI!" Ranma screamed! And grabbed his bloodied father to find that.
-
-
"Zzzzzzzzzzz..." Genma fell asleep and let out a giant snore.
Ranma and Nodoka performed a massive, simultaneous face-fault.
-
-
A/N: this entire chapter was way too serious for my taste. BLEAH! Serious- ness is scary. This isn't a cliff hanger and it's nearly twice as long as one of my regular chapters.
Next chapter: Ranma transforms!! OMG!! (Oh My God!) Nodoka reveals all stuff about her village!! LOL!! (Laugh Out Loud!) Genma reveals his past and the relevance of the martial artist's code!! WMTATU!! (Who Makes These Acronym Things Up?)
I need some help with my definition of Chakra. I probably won't put up another chapter for a few days so I can get some feedback on Chakra. You can Email me, or just review/Flame me.
L-sama's shadow puppet: *sob* you've been here since the start (almost 3 days now).. but if ur not careful, your compliments'l give a head so big that my neck will snap from the weight. (Yeah kakashi's gonna get whooped real good. ^_^) To ensure my neck stays intact send a flame every once in a while.
Aleh: I've tried to keep the effect of the first two chapters alive in this chapter, don't hurt me..
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WONKY-THE-DONKEY-KING SIGNING OFF!!
By Wonky_Donkey
fukuwearer87@yahoo.com.au
Disclaimer: I ain't typing new one each chapter, go read the one on chapter 1!!
"Speech"
'Thoughts'
***Flash backs****
A/N: BEWARE! You are about to see a different, softer, caring side to the man called Genma Saotome! This isn't a 'beat-up-panda-man-fic'! Don't get angry at me! Send all flames to an author called "sky80" for writing an excellent Ranma-dragonball x-over fic that can be located at an outside site, which opened my eyes to a "Humane" side of Genma.
Oh, yeah, the reason why the Neko-ken was taught to Ranma, will be explained later on.
ALSO sorry to Alex Ultra, the martial artist code will be explained *NEXT* chapter.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------
A wind of caution blew through Ranma's raven bangs as the young man looked into the empty lot. These empty lots were purposely placed throughout Nermia over the last two years by the council to try and curb the property destruction caused by super-powered martial artists and giant bull monsters.
It was just after dusk and there were piles of junk situated throughout the area. Shadows were the only occupants in this grim arena of rejection and disrepair. Ranma was starting to realize his folly.
Ranma was still trying to comprehend this new form of energy called chakra. From what he had heard from his mother and from his experience with Saffron, chakra users have larger amounts of energy than martial artists and can cause more damage.
Ranma had absolutely no idea what Genma could do, but on the other hand, Genma had still didn't know the full extent of Ranma's growing abilities.
During the battle at Jusendo, Ranma was forced to think of a way to kill. This was something that he had never needed to do before.
while Saffron and Ranma were being lifted into the air by Ranma's hiryushoten-ha, Ranma had been going over some of the revised versions of the hiryushoten-ha to use. The only one that could've worked at that point in time was the horizontal version, but now Ranma had another trick that he had been saving. This variation of the hiryushoten-ha would extend the range of the shrapnel and junk's usefulness, to it's greatest extent.
(A/N: I'll give you a hint. It's similar to the fight with Herb. ^_^)
The pig-tailed martial artist had been experimenting with other forms of the Hiryushoten-ha, the dragon rising ascension wave being his most powerful technique. This fight, if Genma was as strong and as nasty as his wife feared, he might be the first person to feel Ranma's new techniques.
.And if Genma forced his hand and if Ranma was forced to cripple or end the life of his father?
So be it.
-
-
The main reason that Genma had lived so long, was that he always listened to his animal instincts. Most ninjas are in touch with nature in one form or another.
Be it a summoning contract or a style of tai-jutsu similar to the actions of a certain animal (i.e: Inuzuka Kiba's dog form), the best ninjas learn that if they want to survive, to trust their animal instincts. It was one of the oldest defenses evolution had given to man-kind to ensure it's survival.
And right now, Genma was feeling like an animal trapped in a corner. Genma was prepared to beat his only son into a coma to ensure his safety if it was necessary.
And if the young fool pushed his hand and got himself killed by Genma?
So be it.
-
-
Genma silently handed the scroll to his wife to hold while the father and son fought for their lives. With the grim silence and determined looks on both fighter's faces, the fight began.
-
-
Ranma got into a basic defensive stance that left no openings in the front, above and on either sides of his body. He had learnt long ago, that it wasn't wise to rush an unknown opponent. And he didn't know this side of his father. He could only assume that he would go for a frontal aerial attack, as the Saotome School of martial arts was based on straight-forward aerial attacks.
-
Genma's face lost all expression and he got into a stance that looked similar to a horse stance, but his head and torso were leaning forwards and he had his arms hanging, crossed at the wrists in front of his body.
-
By waiting for Genma to attack, Ranma had lost his chance of victory.
Genma shimmered away into the night. Ranma wasn't impressed by this, this was just the Umisenken. Ranma knew how to play this little game, he knew what signs to look and to listen for.
-
"FOOL." Genma's voice came, booming from everywhere. "THIS ISN'T THE UMISENKEN."
For the last ten seconds, Ranma had been amplifying his hearing with his ki as to locate his father. Genma's booming voice sounded to Ranma as if he had screamed into his ear.
Hearing this sudden loud noise, Ranma was knocked to his knees and was trying to clear his head.
Ranma sense sight suddenly went slightly out of focus. His last thought was to turn around to face the Umisenken attack that supposedly came from behind. Genma took advantage of his son's situation, as a giant diagonal cut appeared across Ranma's chest.
Instantly following the cut came a giant sonic boom that knocked Ranma off his knees onto the ground.
-
No-one heard Ranma's scream of pain over the boom.
-
Genma was silent and invisible, yet his attacks were big and loud.
-
Genma had combined the Umisenken and the Yamasenken.
-
-
-
-
Ranma lay there on the ground, blood trickling out of his ears, streaming out of his chest wound. A ki powered vacuum blade had done what no phoenix demi-god or eight headed dragon had been able to do. Ranma's ki stopped emitting from his body. Ranma Saotome was dead.
-
-
-
-
Nodoka dropped to her knees, silent tears trickling down her face. Genma was feared through-out the ninja world for his silent, invisible lethal style. A style so fast that you heard the attack *after* it happened.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------
Genma paled and dropped to his knees. Despite all the "Worth-less" comments he gave his student, he has always been incredibly proud of his son. And now he lay dead at his feet, killed by his own hand.
Despite all that had thought before the fight, he was only fooling himself. He couldn't bring himself to kill his own blood.
He had expected Ranma to put a defense, or to dodge at the last second. He must've put too-much chakra into that attack... he had been building his Ki reserves up over the last fifteen years.
The attack had grown immensely in terms of destructive power and of speed. It was over ten times more powerful then Kumon Ryu's attack.
He hadn't been attempting to kill his son, only to injure him enough to stop him from getting himself killed by Itachi. Now he was dead because of a simple miscalculation. He watched his son lie there on his chest, bleed to death.
-
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-
Ranma was far from dead. He would've been deceased right now, if he hadn't focused all of his ki into his chest at the last moment. And even with that, he was loosing blood fast.
Normally Ranma would've gotten to his feet and taunted his opponent's weak attack, asking if he had any more. But by lying there and lowering the last of his ki reserves he had a major advantage over his father.
-
His father's defenses and senses weren't up.
-
And the bleeding martial artist had time to plan his next attack.
Ranma decided that if he wanted to survive tonight, he would have to use his chakra, as he did at Jusendo.
Ranma reached inside of him. He knew that his mind had forgotten how to use his chakra, but after training for years, you merge it into your subconscious.
He searched deep within himself, and found.
-
'OH FU-ro!!!' (A/N: ^_^ No heavy swearing in this fic. No sir-ee! a furo is a Japanese style bath room)
'WHERE THE HELL IS MY CHAKRA STORED?!' Ranma mentally screamed. He had no idea where it was and how to use it. The last time he had used it, he was acting on impulse.
He tried to remember what his mother had said about chakra..
*****************************FLASHBACK*************************************
"You see, martial artists use their ki to enhance their speed and strength etc. Ninjas on the other hand use chakra. Chakra is a different form of ki. You could say that ki is the purer form, but in truth, chakra is ki, but uses energy from nature as well to strengthen it's power."
*************************END*FLASHBACK************************************
Ranma internally grinned. He could figure this out. Hadn't he learnt the hiryushoten-ha in 3 days? Hopefully his subconscious could work out how to do it, *before he bled to death. He relaxed and started to meditate.
-
ten seconds passed. Nothing. 'Of course nothing would happen, for god sake! You can't just order your sub-conscious to do something!' he thought 'What did I do at Jusendo?!' Ranma mentally muttered desperately.
*****************************FLASHBACK*************************************
Damnit! He wasn't going to die here, not to this loser! He reached deep dark regions of the inside of his soul, searching for a weapon or tool that he could use. As if his will to live acted as a flood light, it appeared.
He didn't know what it was, yet, he somehow knew it from somewhere... it was almost as he had locked it away. There was no time to ponder what it was. All he found all that he knew was that he needed to win. And so he did.
He opened his eyes and saw. He couldn't see Saffron, but he could see a Saffron shaped flame behind the fireball. Drawing his right arm back he pooled all the mysterious energy into his hand and punched in the direction of the smaller flame he assume that was Saffron.
The energy in his hand left him and created a swirling mass of cold air that shot through the fireball and ripped through Saffron's body like rice paper.
*************************END*FLASHBACK************************************
'I saw the energy.." Ranma thought. "Now that I think of it, back then I extended my ki, to power up my attack and drew the flames in to use the horizontal hiryushoten-ha just like a.'
'..Just like a net.'
He reached out to nature, extending an invisible aurora, letting it flow through the air. Letting it flow through the air seemed to unlock the secret to chakra.
'The air.' Ranma thought, 'I shouldn't be forcing the air to move.. I should. connect myself to the air.. and manipulate it as I would my arm or my leg...'
-
Genma got off his knees and wiped the sweat-that-came-from-under-his-eyes away. Because real men don't cry, their eyes merely perspire.
He looked towards his wife. It didn't matter what Nodoka did to him now. Nothing could hurt him more than the fact that he just killed his own son.
-
Ranma grinned, put both his hands on the ground and pushed hard as he raised the air under his body suddenly. In a burst of wind propelled speed he launched himself 10 metres into the air.
-
Nodoka and Genma heard a sound from where Ranma lay and turned their heads to the spot where he was lying. Seeing his body not there they looked up, and saw their flying son. A mixture of joy and amazement shone on both of their faces.
-
'That's my boy!' Genma thought proudly.
-
'*That* was Gen-jutsu! He *actually* fooled two experienced ninjas into thinking he was dead, to gain time to think up a plan!' Nodoka thought, with a look of awe and joy. 'He may just have what it takes to avenge the family!'
-
"Time to end this pop." Ranma stated. He then rushed forward at his father before the old man could react and started the spiral.
During the fight, Ranma and his father were keeping a calm mind as they fought.. (well Ranma didn't have time to get angry and the Umisenken doesn't work if you don't control your emotions..) so the air around them was quite cool.
-
Genma was confused by this. He had been there when Cologne taught Ranma the hiryushoten-ha. He knew how in theory it worked. The Hiryushoten-ha required hot and Cold ki. 'Ranma must be loosing it' he thought before he decided to wait for Ranma to come to him, so he could knock his son out gently, and get him medical attention.
-
As Ranma ran, he created a heated aurora as he made the spiral. As he came into striking distance to his father, he crouched down instead of just outright using an uppercut to deliver the attack, causing his father's roundhouse kick to miss his head by inches.
Ranma jumped while his father was off balance, when he reached a height of 2 metres above his father, he twisted his body around. Ranma suddenly went into the exact opposite of the Soul of ice. He focused all his building emotions and punched down, pushing the air which his ki had been guiding to follow him as he created the spiral at his father who was directly below him.
-
"HIRYUSHOTEN-HA REVISED- INVERTED FLAMING DRAGON!!" Ranma bellowed.
-
All hell broke loose.
-
Picture a large hiryushoten ha. Now flip it upside down. Nomally it would *just* fling the opponent/ opponents hundreds of metres into the air and the real damage happens when they land. This one instead, SLAMMED and then PINNED Genma into the ground, crushing him.
To make things more painful, all the shrapnel in the empty lot, got caught up in the hurricane. It is enough to literally rip any normal person apart.
(A/N: Think back when Zabuza and Kakashi fought and used the water hurricane-thingee on it's side. Debris was sucked up and pelted at the person on the receiving end.)
Good thing then that Genma Saotome was, and still is no ordinary man. For when the hurricane subsided and Ranma landed, he found a mangled and broken Genma lying on the ground.
Ranma walked toward his mother, who had jumped to safety when she felt the build up of chakra. When they got within a few metres of each other, they rushed each other and created the largest hug/running-tackle in the history of man-kind. The type that make certain amazons cry with pride.
Ranma's mother handed him the scroll. When a tear of pride rolled down her cheek. Ranma grasped it and prepared to open it.
-
"Wait.. Ranma. I have something.. to tell you.. boy." Genma burbled, painfully rolling onto his side to tell his son what he felt about all of this with the last of his strength.
-
Ranma walked over to him and squatted down beside him expecting a lecture about how worthless he was, but instead he heard:
"Ranma.. I'm ..proud of you boy. *cough*.I only wish. that I could see you .whoop. the weasel's (Itachi means weasel) butt." Genma managed to get out,
Ranma stared in shock.
"I thought. that because I. couldn't kill him. you wouldn't. stand a chance..*hack* ..don't forget.. that. I'm.. proud.. of .you.."
Genma said this then collapsed onto the ground.
-
"OYAJI!" Ranma screamed! And grabbed his bloodied father to find that.
-
-
"Zzzzzzzzzzz..." Genma fell asleep and let out a giant snore.
Ranma and Nodoka performed a massive, simultaneous face-fault.
-
-
A/N: this entire chapter was way too serious for my taste. BLEAH! Serious- ness is scary. This isn't a cliff hanger and it's nearly twice as long as one of my regular chapters.
Next chapter: Ranma transforms!! OMG!! (Oh My God!) Nodoka reveals all stuff about her village!! LOL!! (Laugh Out Loud!) Genma reveals his past and the relevance of the martial artist's code!! WMTATU!! (Who Makes These Acronym Things Up?)
I need some help with my definition of Chakra. I probably won't put up another chapter for a few days so I can get some feedback on Chakra. You can Email me, or just review/Flame me.
L-sama's shadow puppet: *sob* you've been here since the start (almost 3 days now).. but if ur not careful, your compliments'l give a head so big that my neck will snap from the weight. (Yeah kakashi's gonna get whooped real good. ^_^) To ensure my neck stays intact send a flame every once in a while.
Aleh: I've tried to keep the effect of the first two chapters alive in this chapter, don't hurt me..
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WONKY-THE-DONKEY-KING SIGNING OFF!!