8.5.03: Fixed the grammer and spelling errors for Part 1 and 2 I noticed.... also a tiny little 'plot things' in Part 2....... Fred's last name is spelled Luo?? ..Hmmm (changed that too) Also changed name of 'parts'....
Be Warned!
This story is yaoi! Pairings? Definate Fred/Jim.... Possible Gene/Jim.
It is also an AU... Jim does not live with Gene... He lives with Fred! He is also older... (Jim, that is.) And taller. ;)
Also that I'm not the biggest Outlaw Star fan (meaning I don't know everything about it.. since I haven't seen the whole series)... so if I make some slip-ups... Don't kill me! :(
PG-13 at the moment...
Metamorphosis.... Part 1
*"Mr. Luo..."* The intercom speaks.
"Mmm..." I mean to groan in annoyance, but all my body will allow is a slight moan of pleasure.... I hate that intercom, any other way.
*"Mr. Luo, there's someone here to see you."* It speaks again...
And I sigh somewhat, to myself, being defeated.. but when I look under my sheets to "Mr. Luo".. I see he is oblivious to the machine calling his name.
He continues to kiss the inside of my thighs, and I feel my cheeks starting to blush when he looks up at me and smiles.
So I put my foot on his face and go to push him away.
"You're need somewhere else 'Mr. Luo'!" I say loudly as I do, and I hear him make a comical squeal as he falls off the foot of the bed... And I try not to smile as I sit back onto the bed.. seeing his one of his feet twitching of his two legs that are erected awkwardly toward the cieling.
*"Mr. Luo?"* The intercom persists...
...I watch as Fred doesn't attempt to move- as I wrap the sheets around my naked waist, but before moving my own self to the foot of the bed to get a better look at him.
"Come on, Fred! You have a business to run, you idiot!" I peer over the bed at him.... and he quickly- almost magically sits up from his seemingly awkward position.
"Oh, you don't have to be so crude, my sweet.... You know I'd much rather be here with you." Fred says in a joking manner- but he leans up to me... His kiss sincere, all the while catching me off guard... But I don't mind...
And he goes to climb back onto the bed with me, with our lips still together... and I give in again... This time, to Fred...
*"Mr. Luo... It's Gene Starwind." *
"Gene?!" Fred cries hopefully before he runs from the room.....
And.. while leaving me there... hanging over the side of the bed- lips empty of another's... but still posistioned from the moment contact was lost...
But I hear the door open once more... And I look up... almost hopefully.
"Guess I need some clothes..." Fred laughs some, and I fall from the bed now... finding my face to the floor- and my legs pointed awkwardly toward the ceiling.
*
Fred and I dressed before we decided to come out.... or well, before he decided.
"Gene Starwind?" I ask myself aloud... "Why does that name sound so familiar?..."
Fred wipes some invisible dust off my shoulder as we continue to walk down the hall..
"You mean you don't remember Gene?" He almost pulls off sounding very surprised, and I hit his hand away.
"Is he your boyfriend or something?" I ask, trying not to sound jealous.....But finding myself not be able to help doing so anyway.
...It's not like I should be.... Fred and I agreed we wouldn't do more than just 'fool around' with one another... Sometimes I wish we had more than that.... But I guess we just aren't ready to commit yet.
"Yeah..... I wish." Fred says, as his eyes begin to sparkle- as if he were imagining what it would be like, were he really married to this Gene guy.
It hurts what Fred is doing... But I won't let the jerk see that.
So we continue to walk to Fred's office... where this Gene character is waiting... And eventually... we make it to the door of his office...
I wait for Fred to open the door... but notice he has his attention straight toward me- making me tense up some...
"You know I was joking, don't you, kid?" Fred asks gently "Gene and I are just friends.... He prefers the company of women, the poor guy. Anyway... you know I'll always prefer your company over anyone."
....I hate when Fred talks to me like that..... and the way he looks at me when he does... His own hands even begin to rub the side of my arm- molding me... Cause he could do anything to me right now.. And I wouldn't be able to stop him...
I'm always struck dumb... I freeze.... I believe what he says for the moment... when I know I shouldn't... He good at this kind of thing... He's a merchant!... And I can't help but buy into him...
Even as he brings his lips to mine.... For I am still frozen in his soft eyes that stare into my own.... even as he kisses me gently...
But! ..He soon closes his eyes- and that is when I am free from his trap....
Realization sweeps over my previous dumbed state..... And I remember where we are! ..And that people might see us!
"Ahem..."
I'm too late....
One of Fred's attendants have opened the door some... And even though it's only Alan... I can feel myself blushing wildly.... And the next thing I know...
I'm running.
"Jim?" Fred calls after me, his voice souding confused.....
But he should know why I'm running..... No matter how stupid the reason.
"Jim!" He sounds more annoyed now, but I can't stop.
Even though I know he won't run after me.
*
....I know most of Fred's attendants- and workers..( Esspecially Alan.. He's been one of Fred's attendant's even before I came to live with Fred..).- know that there's something between Fred and I....
He's gay... I'm a guy.... We share a room together... It almost elementary! ..In a sick kinda way...
But still! ...I've told Fred many times that I wasn't... and am not!.. ready to let anyone know straight out yet.... I guess that's another reason Fred and I haven't built a strong relationship...
Because I'm a coward...
But cowards always come back when they have nowhere else to go.... Fred knows that, I'm sure...
And here I am... looking at the building in front of me... where Fred holds his business....
I close my eyes and sigh.... Fred is probably not worried at all....
"Gah!" I hear a yell as I am run into- making me yell out as well.
"Watch where you're going, you idiot!" I shout at the person who ran into me.
"Hey I'm sorry, guy." The man smiles nervously and helps me 'straighten myself up'.
And as I watch him do so.... I look at him carefully......
...He looks so... familiar....
I notice he's looking at me now, blinking...
"Uhmmm..." He stares... struck dumb, like me.
Perhaps I look familiar to him as well? ...Or maybe he's wondering why I'm staring...
"Did you just come from that building?" I ask... being the first reasonable question I could ask that had popped into my mind.
"Who Fred's?" He points with his thumb to the building behind him, still looking at me... "Yeah."
..I nod some...
"You're... Gene Starwind- aren't you?" I ask.. putting my head down some... But looking at him all the while.
He smiles widely.
"Yep. That's me." He says proudly.
I remember him now........ Somewhat...
And I almost jump when he puts his hands on my shoulders.
"You look awfully familiar!" He says, looking at me closely..... and I almost blush when he brings his face so close to my own.....
"My name is-"
"Ap ap ap!" He puts his finger on my lips... and I know I am going to melt soon...
"Don't tell me... I can figure it out." He then swings me about, slinging his arms onto my shoulder.
"How about I take you out for a drink?... An if I figure out your name.... You pay!" He suggests... laughing as he does so.
..I sweatdrop...
"Then if you guess right.. I'll just lie.. " I mumble some but he holds me closer, playfully.
"Aw that's no fun." He grins as I look to him.
....So I let him drag me to wherever he will....
But I can't seem to shake off the feeling that he already knows who I am...
To Be Continued...
Good? I hope so.. Bad? I hope not!
Either way, please review! I just hope if you didn't like it- what you have to say is constructive.
But.. this story is going to go somewhere! It's up to you how far/fast. :) ;)
Be Warned!
This story is yaoi! Pairings? Definate Fred/Jim.... Possible Gene/Jim.
It is also an AU... Jim does not live with Gene... He lives with Fred! He is also older... (Jim, that is.) And taller. ;)
Also that I'm not the biggest Outlaw Star fan (meaning I don't know everything about it.. since I haven't seen the whole series)... so if I make some slip-ups... Don't kill me! :(
PG-13 at the moment...
Metamorphosis.... Part 1
*"Mr. Luo..."* The intercom speaks.
"Mmm..." I mean to groan in annoyance, but all my body will allow is a slight moan of pleasure.... I hate that intercom, any other way.
*"Mr. Luo, there's someone here to see you."* It speaks again...
And I sigh somewhat, to myself, being defeated.. but when I look under my sheets to "Mr. Luo".. I see he is oblivious to the machine calling his name.
He continues to kiss the inside of my thighs, and I feel my cheeks starting to blush when he looks up at me and smiles.
So I put my foot on his face and go to push him away.
"You're need somewhere else 'Mr. Luo'!" I say loudly as I do, and I hear him make a comical squeal as he falls off the foot of the bed... And I try not to smile as I sit back onto the bed.. seeing his one of his feet twitching of his two legs that are erected awkwardly toward the cieling.
*"Mr. Luo?"* The intercom persists...
...I watch as Fred doesn't attempt to move- as I wrap the sheets around my naked waist, but before moving my own self to the foot of the bed to get a better look at him.
"Come on, Fred! You have a business to run, you idiot!" I peer over the bed at him.... and he quickly- almost magically sits up from his seemingly awkward position.
"Oh, you don't have to be so crude, my sweet.... You know I'd much rather be here with you." Fred says in a joking manner- but he leans up to me... His kiss sincere, all the while catching me off guard... But I don't mind...
And he goes to climb back onto the bed with me, with our lips still together... and I give in again... This time, to Fred...
*"Mr. Luo... It's Gene Starwind." *
"Gene?!" Fred cries hopefully before he runs from the room.....
And.. while leaving me there... hanging over the side of the bed- lips empty of another's... but still posistioned from the moment contact was lost...
But I hear the door open once more... And I look up... almost hopefully.
"Guess I need some clothes..." Fred laughs some, and I fall from the bed now... finding my face to the floor- and my legs pointed awkwardly toward the ceiling.
*
Fred and I dressed before we decided to come out.... or well, before he decided.
"Gene Starwind?" I ask myself aloud... "Why does that name sound so familiar?..."
Fred wipes some invisible dust off my shoulder as we continue to walk down the hall..
"You mean you don't remember Gene?" He almost pulls off sounding very surprised, and I hit his hand away.
"Is he your boyfriend or something?" I ask, trying not to sound jealous.....But finding myself not be able to help doing so anyway.
...It's not like I should be.... Fred and I agreed we wouldn't do more than just 'fool around' with one another... Sometimes I wish we had more than that.... But I guess we just aren't ready to commit yet.
"Yeah..... I wish." Fred says, as his eyes begin to sparkle- as if he were imagining what it would be like, were he really married to this Gene guy.
It hurts what Fred is doing... But I won't let the jerk see that.
So we continue to walk to Fred's office... where this Gene character is waiting... And eventually... we make it to the door of his office...
I wait for Fred to open the door... but notice he has his attention straight toward me- making me tense up some...
"You know I was joking, don't you, kid?" Fred asks gently "Gene and I are just friends.... He prefers the company of women, the poor guy. Anyway... you know I'll always prefer your company over anyone."
....I hate when Fred talks to me like that..... and the way he looks at me when he does... His own hands even begin to rub the side of my arm- molding me... Cause he could do anything to me right now.. And I wouldn't be able to stop him...
I'm always struck dumb... I freeze.... I believe what he says for the moment... when I know I shouldn't... He good at this kind of thing... He's a merchant!... And I can't help but buy into him...
Even as he brings his lips to mine.... For I am still frozen in his soft eyes that stare into my own.... even as he kisses me gently...
But! ..He soon closes his eyes- and that is when I am free from his trap....
Realization sweeps over my previous dumbed state..... And I remember where we are! ..And that people might see us!
"Ahem..."
I'm too late....
One of Fred's attendants have opened the door some... And even though it's only Alan... I can feel myself blushing wildly.... And the next thing I know...
I'm running.
"Jim?" Fred calls after me, his voice souding confused.....
But he should know why I'm running..... No matter how stupid the reason.
"Jim!" He sounds more annoyed now, but I can't stop.
Even though I know he won't run after me.
*
....I know most of Fred's attendants- and workers..( Esspecially Alan.. He's been one of Fred's attendant's even before I came to live with Fred..).- know that there's something between Fred and I....
He's gay... I'm a guy.... We share a room together... It almost elementary! ..In a sick kinda way...
But still! ...I've told Fred many times that I wasn't... and am not!.. ready to let anyone know straight out yet.... I guess that's another reason Fred and I haven't built a strong relationship...
Because I'm a coward...
But cowards always come back when they have nowhere else to go.... Fred knows that, I'm sure...
And here I am... looking at the building in front of me... where Fred holds his business....
I close my eyes and sigh.... Fred is probably not worried at all....
"Gah!" I hear a yell as I am run into- making me yell out as well.
"Watch where you're going, you idiot!" I shout at the person who ran into me.
"Hey I'm sorry, guy." The man smiles nervously and helps me 'straighten myself up'.
And as I watch him do so.... I look at him carefully......
...He looks so... familiar....
I notice he's looking at me now, blinking...
"Uhmmm..." He stares... struck dumb, like me.
Perhaps I look familiar to him as well? ...Or maybe he's wondering why I'm staring...
"Did you just come from that building?" I ask... being the first reasonable question I could ask that had popped into my mind.
"Who Fred's?" He points with his thumb to the building behind him, still looking at me... "Yeah."
..I nod some...
"You're... Gene Starwind- aren't you?" I ask.. putting my head down some... But looking at him all the while.
He smiles widely.
"Yep. That's me." He says proudly.
I remember him now........ Somewhat...
And I almost jump when he puts his hands on my shoulders.
"You look awfully familiar!" He says, looking at me closely..... and I almost blush when he brings his face so close to my own.....
"My name is-"
"Ap ap ap!" He puts his finger on my lips... and I know I am going to melt soon...
"Don't tell me... I can figure it out." He then swings me about, slinging his arms onto my shoulder.
"How about I take you out for a drink?... An if I figure out your name.... You pay!" He suggests... laughing as he does so.
..I sweatdrop...
"Then if you guess right.. I'll just lie.. " I mumble some but he holds me closer, playfully.
"Aw that's no fun." He grins as I look to him.
....So I let him drag me to wherever he will....
But I can't seem to shake off the feeling that he already knows who I am...
To Be Continued...
Good? I hope so.. Bad? I hope not!
Either way, please review! I just hope if you didn't like it- what you have to say is constructive.
But.. this story is going to go somewhere! It's up to you how far/fast. :) ;)