Metroid: Chozo Betrayal and Bloods Unite Chapter 4
Disclaimer: I don't own Metroid or Nintendo, but still don't copy my story without my permission.
OK, I hear you Greek Geek, I loved the melee combat in Three Bloods (if you haven't figured out yet, it inspired parts of this story). I was planning on taking this a bit slower, but since everyone's getting restless I'll jump ahead and update with two chapters. Happy? No? Too bad. :-) Have fun reading both chapters and I'll see ya later. And keep those reviews flowing. Also, this ones a little long.Oh well.
"All right Samus. Were here." "All right you all, STAY HERE. Don't leave or I will kill you!" The Etecoons and Dacholas flinched at this, and sat down, not looking as eager as before. "All right, time to go" she said. "Adam, transfer your AI copy to my suit." ".Done" His voice echoed in here helmet. "That was fast" "Top of the line computers do that you know" "Yeah" She punched the hatch button and the lower hatch elevator opened. She stepped out on to the desolate planet. Its atmosphere was deadly and brown, the ground dusty and lifeless. She ran from the ship to the coordinates marked on her map. The speed booster really came in handy here. It kept here from sinking in to the sands. As she neared the coordinates she saw a Chozo ruin in the distance. It was fast approaching, and was badly decayed. It was falling apart at the seams. She came up. All it was really was an area of stone, with a large stone door, flanked on either side by two large stone columns, with stone Chozo heads on them. There was an odd Chozo marking she had never read above the door. She recorded it, and began deciphering it as she went inside. She descended into the ruins. She came to a Chozo statue holding a Ball of energy in its hands. She instinctively reached out and touched it. An error report flashed on her visor. It was corrupted. There was a virus inside! Samus's suit slowed down as she heard a voice from behind her. "It's time for me to show my appreciation for your efforts Hatchling." She slowly turned to the voice. It was a Chozo hovering over the ground, wrapped in Black and Silver robes. "Was this your doing?" she managed to get out, her breathing unsteady from her suits acting up. She dropped to her knees against the suits weight. "At least you figured out that much" he said mockingly. "You have masqueraded as the Hatchling, the Savior, the Hope, for long enough. It is because of you that the Chozo's have fallen. They believed the prophecies and didn't defend themselves when the Space Pirates came. They decided to die instead of fight. They would wait for the Hatchling, the Protector. The weakling." That struck something inside her. Not once had she been called weak by someone who understood her true nature, her lineage.her accomplishments. After blowing up two planets and exterminating two species, she never thought she would here herself referred to as weak. "Samus, the virus has taken hold on most of your suits systems. I'm attempting to purge it now." Adam spoke coolly. She was possibly fighting death and he was that calm. "So Hatchling, what do you have to say for yourself after nearly killing the Chozos?" "It was their choice to follow the prophecies, not mine. I just tried to help them fight. If they didn't.It wasn't my fault." Samus said quietly. "Virus at 50%. It is weaker than originally estimated." spoke Adam "Yes, it wasn't your fault. The Chozos are almost extinct and gone and it wasn't because they wouldn't fight because of you." The Chozo said, again mockingly. He turned away. "Samus, the virus is now purged." Adam said. "Well, I might as well end this now." the Chozo said, turning just in time to see Samus and her cannon at point blank, set for a Super Missile. "It wasn't my f.!" Samus was cut off by her own fire. The Super Missile detonated at point blank, sending her flying. She rotated in mid-air with her thrusters, landing gracefully on her feet. There was a lot of smoke in the area where the Chozo was. But he was gone from her motion tracker. Then he popped up behind her. "You could have died easier but NO!" He yelled from behind and slammed her with his fist. She went flying through the air at least fifty feet. She righted herself with her boosters but by the time she was standing the Chozo was gone again. "Where?" "Right here!" Samus ducked a punch from the Chozo and whirled and fired a Plasma Beam right into the Chozo's chest. The blast knocked him back 10 ft. and his robes disintegrated, revealing a full Chozo Power Suit. "No wonder that hit hurt so bad" Samus thought. He disappeared and his voice came from nowhere in particular. It kept moving. "You, the Hatchling, want to resist the Raptor's grip? The one who doesn't even know how to use your own blood and soul, expects to beat me? Once you are dead and I stop the Space Pirates, the Chozo will call me a hero." "They will kill you and call you a traitor!" "Ha!" He materialized beside her and smashed his gun-arm into her helmet. She flew to the side, scraping the ground and settling to a stop. She back-flipped into the air and righted herself, charging the Plasma-Stream at the same time. The Chozo was gone again. "What was going on?" she thought. "He wasn't that fast, yet she couldn't keep up at all. He was disappearing and reappearing like a ghost. What was his trick? How could he.Ahh!" She had been running and he had materialized in front of her. She jumped over the punch he threw but he whirled and led her with a Fusion Missile. As she touched the ground it hit her, but it didn't hit very well, and most of the ice dissipated into the air around her. Although, this was enough for her Metroid part to slow her down a bit, just enough for the Chozo to catch her easily. The Chozo rushed her, shattering the Ice with a swift backhand, again sending Samus flying. She corrected her decent this time whirled to catch the Chozo off guard. She jumped back and fired a Diffusion Missile. The Chozo was frozen with that direct hit, with a look of pure anger on his face. He could only stare as Samus paused for a second, then laid three Power Bombs in a cluster, unfolded, and kicked them at the Chozo, resembling the way the SA-X had done so. There was a deafening blast of noise and a blinding flash of light. Samus opened her eyes to find a Chozo, hunched over in a damaged Power Suit, looking very angry. "So, you wish for me to kill you now?" He asked in a cold voice. "Well, I was finding this most entertaining, but if you want me to end this so be it. Good bye brave Hatchling. This is your GRAVE!" He activated his speed booster and began running like a blur around Samus. "What's the deal" she thought. "When I use the speed booster I can't even keep up with my speed, but he can control it perfectly. How can he." Her thoughts were cut off by a full-auto blast from the Chozo's cannon. All she could do was stand and take the hits. She didn't have a chance anymore. "Energy levels dropping rapidly", Spoke Adam in a very scratchy voice. "50% and dropping, Samus, recommend fleeing. Do you agree?" "I would if I could", she barely managed to get out before getting slammed by another 50 blasts by the Chozo. "Samus, use the Morph Ball, Boost straight in 10 seconds, fold out, and fire a Diffusion Missile at your original location. Then flee. 3.2.1.GO!" She folded into the Morph Ball immediately and Boosted inches past the Chozo, folded out, whirled, and fired. There was a large explosion of cold, and the Chozo tripped, his foot frozen in ice. "How did you.?" the Chozo started, but Samus was already Speed Boosting away. She heard an explosion and heard her warning lights going off. "Fleeing?! The great one is fleeing?! This is unexpected." he finished in a whisper. "Samus, duck and then Super Jump forward in 3. 3.2.1.NOW!" She ducked, the Chozo sailing past her, and then she ignited her Super Jump boosters. She flew forward, glanced back at the Chozo, and checked her energy indicator on him. It read at 67%. She had hurt him only mildly. She sailed in between pillars of rock, with a large chasm coming into view. "WHAT?! GET BACK HERE OR I'LL." the Chozo's voice faded into the distance. "Samus, your energy is dropping fast. To get over the chasm you'll have to reroute energy to your boosters. All systems are necessary except.life support. Afterwards, you'll have two minutes of good air with which to return to the ship. That's an order, Lady. Come back alive." Adam said with concern. "He had just helped so much." She thought. "I wouldn't be alive now if he hadn't.now's not the time. I've got to get back alive!" Suddenly her energy marker ticked down to 10%. "Drop life-support" She said after gulping deeply. The Chozo was far behind now. No worries. She activated her Speed Booster, rocketing in the direction of her ship. "Your almost there. Systems will be ready when you get back" Adam spoke. Things were getting fuzzy. She was now breathing bad air. She couldn't go on.Her ship appeared on the other side of the hill she just went over. The elevator- like under hatch opened and Samus stumbled in, pressed the up button, tore of her helmet, and fell unconscious, the curses of a Chozo echoing in the distance.
Disclaimer: I don't own Metroid or Nintendo, but still don't copy my story without my permission.
OK, I hear you Greek Geek, I loved the melee combat in Three Bloods (if you haven't figured out yet, it inspired parts of this story). I was planning on taking this a bit slower, but since everyone's getting restless I'll jump ahead and update with two chapters. Happy? No? Too bad. :-) Have fun reading both chapters and I'll see ya later. And keep those reviews flowing. Also, this ones a little long.Oh well.
"All right Samus. Were here." "All right you all, STAY HERE. Don't leave or I will kill you!" The Etecoons and Dacholas flinched at this, and sat down, not looking as eager as before. "All right, time to go" she said. "Adam, transfer your AI copy to my suit." ".Done" His voice echoed in here helmet. "That was fast" "Top of the line computers do that you know" "Yeah" She punched the hatch button and the lower hatch elevator opened. She stepped out on to the desolate planet. Its atmosphere was deadly and brown, the ground dusty and lifeless. She ran from the ship to the coordinates marked on her map. The speed booster really came in handy here. It kept here from sinking in to the sands. As she neared the coordinates she saw a Chozo ruin in the distance. It was fast approaching, and was badly decayed. It was falling apart at the seams. She came up. All it was really was an area of stone, with a large stone door, flanked on either side by two large stone columns, with stone Chozo heads on them. There was an odd Chozo marking she had never read above the door. She recorded it, and began deciphering it as she went inside. She descended into the ruins. She came to a Chozo statue holding a Ball of energy in its hands. She instinctively reached out and touched it. An error report flashed on her visor. It was corrupted. There was a virus inside! Samus's suit slowed down as she heard a voice from behind her. "It's time for me to show my appreciation for your efforts Hatchling." She slowly turned to the voice. It was a Chozo hovering over the ground, wrapped in Black and Silver robes. "Was this your doing?" she managed to get out, her breathing unsteady from her suits acting up. She dropped to her knees against the suits weight. "At least you figured out that much" he said mockingly. "You have masqueraded as the Hatchling, the Savior, the Hope, for long enough. It is because of you that the Chozo's have fallen. They believed the prophecies and didn't defend themselves when the Space Pirates came. They decided to die instead of fight. They would wait for the Hatchling, the Protector. The weakling." That struck something inside her. Not once had she been called weak by someone who understood her true nature, her lineage.her accomplishments. After blowing up two planets and exterminating two species, she never thought she would here herself referred to as weak. "Samus, the virus has taken hold on most of your suits systems. I'm attempting to purge it now." Adam spoke coolly. She was possibly fighting death and he was that calm. "So Hatchling, what do you have to say for yourself after nearly killing the Chozos?" "It was their choice to follow the prophecies, not mine. I just tried to help them fight. If they didn't.It wasn't my fault." Samus said quietly. "Virus at 50%. It is weaker than originally estimated." spoke Adam "Yes, it wasn't your fault. The Chozos are almost extinct and gone and it wasn't because they wouldn't fight because of you." The Chozo said, again mockingly. He turned away. "Samus, the virus is now purged." Adam said. "Well, I might as well end this now." the Chozo said, turning just in time to see Samus and her cannon at point blank, set for a Super Missile. "It wasn't my f.!" Samus was cut off by her own fire. The Super Missile detonated at point blank, sending her flying. She rotated in mid-air with her thrusters, landing gracefully on her feet. There was a lot of smoke in the area where the Chozo was. But he was gone from her motion tracker. Then he popped up behind her. "You could have died easier but NO!" He yelled from behind and slammed her with his fist. She went flying through the air at least fifty feet. She righted herself with her boosters but by the time she was standing the Chozo was gone again. "Where?" "Right here!" Samus ducked a punch from the Chozo and whirled and fired a Plasma Beam right into the Chozo's chest. The blast knocked him back 10 ft. and his robes disintegrated, revealing a full Chozo Power Suit. "No wonder that hit hurt so bad" Samus thought. He disappeared and his voice came from nowhere in particular. It kept moving. "You, the Hatchling, want to resist the Raptor's grip? The one who doesn't even know how to use your own blood and soul, expects to beat me? Once you are dead and I stop the Space Pirates, the Chozo will call me a hero." "They will kill you and call you a traitor!" "Ha!" He materialized beside her and smashed his gun-arm into her helmet. She flew to the side, scraping the ground and settling to a stop. She back-flipped into the air and righted herself, charging the Plasma-Stream at the same time. The Chozo was gone again. "What was going on?" she thought. "He wasn't that fast, yet she couldn't keep up at all. He was disappearing and reappearing like a ghost. What was his trick? How could he.Ahh!" She had been running and he had materialized in front of her. She jumped over the punch he threw but he whirled and led her with a Fusion Missile. As she touched the ground it hit her, but it didn't hit very well, and most of the ice dissipated into the air around her. Although, this was enough for her Metroid part to slow her down a bit, just enough for the Chozo to catch her easily. The Chozo rushed her, shattering the Ice with a swift backhand, again sending Samus flying. She corrected her decent this time whirled to catch the Chozo off guard. She jumped back and fired a Diffusion Missile. The Chozo was frozen with that direct hit, with a look of pure anger on his face. He could only stare as Samus paused for a second, then laid three Power Bombs in a cluster, unfolded, and kicked them at the Chozo, resembling the way the SA-X had done so. There was a deafening blast of noise and a blinding flash of light. Samus opened her eyes to find a Chozo, hunched over in a damaged Power Suit, looking very angry. "So, you wish for me to kill you now?" He asked in a cold voice. "Well, I was finding this most entertaining, but if you want me to end this so be it. Good bye brave Hatchling. This is your GRAVE!" He activated his speed booster and began running like a blur around Samus. "What's the deal" she thought. "When I use the speed booster I can't even keep up with my speed, but he can control it perfectly. How can he." Her thoughts were cut off by a full-auto blast from the Chozo's cannon. All she could do was stand and take the hits. She didn't have a chance anymore. "Energy levels dropping rapidly", Spoke Adam in a very scratchy voice. "50% and dropping, Samus, recommend fleeing. Do you agree?" "I would if I could", she barely managed to get out before getting slammed by another 50 blasts by the Chozo. "Samus, use the Morph Ball, Boost straight in 10 seconds, fold out, and fire a Diffusion Missile at your original location. Then flee. 3.2.1.GO!" She folded into the Morph Ball immediately and Boosted inches past the Chozo, folded out, whirled, and fired. There was a large explosion of cold, and the Chozo tripped, his foot frozen in ice. "How did you.?" the Chozo started, but Samus was already Speed Boosting away. She heard an explosion and heard her warning lights going off. "Fleeing?! The great one is fleeing?! This is unexpected." he finished in a whisper. "Samus, duck and then Super Jump forward in 3. 3.2.1.NOW!" She ducked, the Chozo sailing past her, and then she ignited her Super Jump boosters. She flew forward, glanced back at the Chozo, and checked her energy indicator on him. It read at 67%. She had hurt him only mildly. She sailed in between pillars of rock, with a large chasm coming into view. "WHAT?! GET BACK HERE OR I'LL." the Chozo's voice faded into the distance. "Samus, your energy is dropping fast. To get over the chasm you'll have to reroute energy to your boosters. All systems are necessary except.life support. Afterwards, you'll have two minutes of good air with which to return to the ship. That's an order, Lady. Come back alive." Adam said with concern. "He had just helped so much." She thought. "I wouldn't be alive now if he hadn't.now's not the time. I've got to get back alive!" Suddenly her energy marker ticked down to 10%. "Drop life-support" She said after gulping deeply. The Chozo was far behind now. No worries. She activated her Speed Booster, rocketing in the direction of her ship. "Your almost there. Systems will be ready when you get back" Adam spoke. Things were getting fuzzy. She was now breathing bad air. She couldn't go on.Her ship appeared on the other side of the hill she just went over. The elevator- like under hatch opened and Samus stumbled in, pressed the up button, tore of her helmet, and fell unconscious, the curses of a Chozo echoing in the distance.