Metroid: Chozo Betrayal and Bloods Unite Chapter 6
Disclaimer: I don't own Metroid or Nintendo, but still don't copy my story without my permission.
Well, someone finally complained about my sentence structure with paragraphs (I knew it would happen eventually), but I can't find any really good places to cut off. I work on it harder this time. This chapter is really long (aren't they all?) so try and have fun. R&R and see ya. Without further a due.
Samus had been practicing her meditation with little success. By the fifth day she and the Chozo were getting to know each other quite well. Right now she was eating when she got an idea for her reward. Adam had been acting kind of strange lately. She figured it was because he was trapped in a computer. She had decided to ask if the Chozo could make Adam a body and have his consciousness transferred into it. She could ask him later. Right now she wanted sleep.
She woke up the 6th day and headed to the Training room after taking care of the usual things in the morning. She walked in and Varg was meditating. She would ask him in a little bit she decided. She sat down next to him. "So" he said "Another day in, soon to be out. Shall we start now or do you have something you wanted to say first?"
"Well, I wasn't going to ask yet, but I was wondering, is it possible to bring someone back from the dead?"
"Why would you ask such a thing?"
"Well, my computer AI, he's actually a person I knew and the Federation uploaded his mind into the computer. I was wondering if it would be possible to help him. Could you do it as my reward?"
"You wish me to bring him back to life?"
"Well, if you think about it, he's not really dead. He was injured badly and his mind was transferred into that computer. He's not really dead, just trapped."
"Hm. I think I could make him a new biological body. It would take some time, but it's not that different than making a new suit. I will try if that is your wish."
"It is." She said. She started to meditate but she was preoccupied now. She might get to see Adam again, and the real Adam, not a computer.
After a while she calmed down, forcing herself to concentrate when it happened. She drifted out of her body into somewhere else. She left her body sitting there. She explored the compound outside the confines of space. She went to where the animals were. The Etecoons were fighting over more fruit, and the mother Dachola cleaning the child.
She floated out of the compound to find a Pirate Cruiser flying over the planet. It was dispatching troops in drop ships. Then the bottom folded open, revealing a lizard-like creature with wide wings. It was easily 50 ft. tall and floated, flapping its wings with ease. It began to come toward her. It floated past her, entering the atmosphere, along with the drop ships. It was heading toward the compound.
She flew back to her body, everything passing by as a blur. She had to worn everyone. She had to.Boom! She was back in her own body again. She was breathing heavily. "Sir, there was a large pirate cruiser above the planet! Please, we have to.!"
"Whoa, whoa, whoa. Slow down. What happened?"
"I left my body I explored the area and I saw a big Pirate Cruiser of the planet. They were coming here! We have to go!"
"Are you sure?"
"Check yourself!"
"Ok" he said as he walked over to a computer. "Computer, bring up motion trackers at range of 100 mi." The screen brought up blips on its scanner, the blips of many drop ships. "Your right, but I can't leave without my equipment. If I left it I wouldn't be able to help you in any way. Your request would go unfulfilled."
"Right. I'll hold them off. You start packing up." With that she placed the gem on her left hand and spoke the word. The outlines of her suit appear around her as the suit forged itself from the light. The area in between the lines grew dark, closing in around her. It formed her Power Suit. She ran over to the air lock and stepped outside. She looked up to find at least 8 drop ships in her line of view. They dropped and landed in the ground no more than a mile away. This couldn't be a coincidence. She decided to wait for them to come to her. She then spotted something on he horizon. It was Ridley! He was coming in her direction when a drop ship came down just by him, which exploded and release at least 10 Ki-hunters, many more releasing around the area. "This isn't good" Samus muttered into her com link.
"What?" asked the Chozo.
"Ridley, the commander of the Pirate army, is here, along with a couple thousand Pirates and Ki-hunters. This isn't going to end well I we don't get out of here soon."
"Right. I'm setting things up so we can leave, but its slow going. I'll need ten minutes."
"You've got five till they get here."
"Great" he muttered. "Hold them off if you can. And good luck!"
"Right." She cut the channel. She didn't need distractions now. She headed inside after tapping into the cameras of the area. She used it to keep track of where the Pirates and Ridley were. She started prepping all of the compound's things to be put in the Chozo's ship. She was almost done when she saw that Ridley was entering weapons range. She left the Chozo to his equipment and rounded the Etecoons and the Dacholas to his ship to. She put her ship into auto-pilot stealth mode and sent it into orbit. She then headed outside.
She prepped her weapons and readied a Diffusion Missile. She burst out of the hatch to find a small army of Pirates gathered on the ground about one hundred feet from the compound. Samus fired the Diffusion Missile right into the unsuspecting group of Pirates, freezing them all completely. She then activated her Plasma Stream, sweeping them with it. The Pirates quickly melted and Ridley looked down in surprise to find a large number of the ground troops to be annihilated. He also spotted Plasma shots being fired at random, knocking out some of his foot troopers. He then spotted the Hunter in armor shooting the blasts. Why was she here? She had no reason to interfere with or even know about the Phazon found on this planet. Why would she.?
A Plasma round sliced across Ridley's left wing, causing him to roar in pain. He wasn't hurt, it just surprised him. He flapped his wings, rocketing him forward toward the bounty hunter. He attempted to skewer her on his tail but she moved aside. She jumped high into the air, firing the Ice-Spreader at him. His left wing froze solid and he dropped out of the air, hitting the ground with a loud thud.
"How had she gained so much power?" He thought. She turned and fired some Missiles at the Ki-Hunters, decimating their horde. Her reaction time was a lot higher than before. She could almost see what the enemy did before they did it. She whirled then to find Ridley looming over her.
"Great" she said flatly as Ridley threw a tremendous claw rake at her. She rolled into a Morph Ball rolling away from him, unfolded, and fired a Super Missile at his back. He roared in pain and lashed out with his tail. He hit her in the face and knocked her into the compound. The outside earth fell off, revealing a metal plate. Ridley's eyes widened as he realized that she was protecting something. Maybe the Federation knew about the Phazon! No, that was impossible, but maybe she did.
Samus ran inside as she noticed the reading that the time was up and it was time to go. She ran in and got on the ship, the compound being attacked. She ran to the ship and it launched. The hatch split open as she boarded and the Etecoons and Dacholas ran over, seeing if she was hurt.
She simply responded "Let's get the heck out of here!"
"Done!" yelled Varg. The thrusters kicked in and they launched into the sky, flying straight up. They blew past the carrier and were long gone before the Pirates knew what happened. "Wow. What do you use to power this thing?" Samus asked.
"A substance I found a while ago on Tallon IV. It started showing up on Tallon VI so I figured I'd use it in the forging of Power Suits. I have enough to last a few years he said, pointing at a clear glass tube. The vial was filled with Phazon.
"Is that.Phazon?" "What? You must have a different name for it than I. I call it Vargium. I like the sound of it, don't you? It has mutagenic properties but it's not that bad if you contain it. Anyway, I figured the Pirates were after the Phazon, so I destroyed it all. It was helping the environment, not hurting it, but I had to.Oh well. Once they find out they'll be mad. It should be gone in.Now. Huh?" He checked his screen. The Phazon hadn't been destroyed. The bomb he had set never went off. "Oh well. Can't change it; to many pirates."
Samus was preoccupied. She had easily beaten the Pirates back. "I beat the Pirates easily. How did I do that?"
"Well, you used your blood. You'll have to do better than that to beat my brother though."
"Then if I master this, the Pirates will be nothing."
"Yes, though I doubt you'll be able to activate it consistently. But enough of my rambling. The Pirates are chasing us. You'll need to board the cruiser to stop them. And your ships here to. I suggest you go. Your computer friend has already loaded into your suit. Now get going!"
Samus frowned on his ordering her around, but she knew he was joking, so she left to the hatch that now connected their ships. She went on board when she heard Adam ask "So Lady, you ready to go?"
"Let's go." She sat in her chair, changing her gun arm into a gauntlet so she could use her hand to manually control the ship. She uncloaked the ship and headed for the Cruiser.
Hope you liked it. This should be a little easier to read. R&R and I'll update. Bye!
Disclaimer: I don't own Metroid or Nintendo, but still don't copy my story without my permission.
Well, someone finally complained about my sentence structure with paragraphs (I knew it would happen eventually), but I can't find any really good places to cut off. I work on it harder this time. This chapter is really long (aren't they all?) so try and have fun. R&R and see ya. Without further a due.
Samus had been practicing her meditation with little success. By the fifth day she and the Chozo were getting to know each other quite well. Right now she was eating when she got an idea for her reward. Adam had been acting kind of strange lately. She figured it was because he was trapped in a computer. She had decided to ask if the Chozo could make Adam a body and have his consciousness transferred into it. She could ask him later. Right now she wanted sleep.
She woke up the 6th day and headed to the Training room after taking care of the usual things in the morning. She walked in and Varg was meditating. She would ask him in a little bit she decided. She sat down next to him. "So" he said "Another day in, soon to be out. Shall we start now or do you have something you wanted to say first?"
"Well, I wasn't going to ask yet, but I was wondering, is it possible to bring someone back from the dead?"
"Why would you ask such a thing?"
"Well, my computer AI, he's actually a person I knew and the Federation uploaded his mind into the computer. I was wondering if it would be possible to help him. Could you do it as my reward?"
"You wish me to bring him back to life?"
"Well, if you think about it, he's not really dead. He was injured badly and his mind was transferred into that computer. He's not really dead, just trapped."
"Hm. I think I could make him a new biological body. It would take some time, but it's not that different than making a new suit. I will try if that is your wish."
"It is." She said. She started to meditate but she was preoccupied now. She might get to see Adam again, and the real Adam, not a computer.
After a while she calmed down, forcing herself to concentrate when it happened. She drifted out of her body into somewhere else. She left her body sitting there. She explored the compound outside the confines of space. She went to where the animals were. The Etecoons were fighting over more fruit, and the mother Dachola cleaning the child.
She floated out of the compound to find a Pirate Cruiser flying over the planet. It was dispatching troops in drop ships. Then the bottom folded open, revealing a lizard-like creature with wide wings. It was easily 50 ft. tall and floated, flapping its wings with ease. It began to come toward her. It floated past her, entering the atmosphere, along with the drop ships. It was heading toward the compound.
She flew back to her body, everything passing by as a blur. She had to worn everyone. She had to.Boom! She was back in her own body again. She was breathing heavily. "Sir, there was a large pirate cruiser above the planet! Please, we have to.!"
"Whoa, whoa, whoa. Slow down. What happened?"
"I left my body I explored the area and I saw a big Pirate Cruiser of the planet. They were coming here! We have to go!"
"Are you sure?"
"Check yourself!"
"Ok" he said as he walked over to a computer. "Computer, bring up motion trackers at range of 100 mi." The screen brought up blips on its scanner, the blips of many drop ships. "Your right, but I can't leave without my equipment. If I left it I wouldn't be able to help you in any way. Your request would go unfulfilled."
"Right. I'll hold them off. You start packing up." With that she placed the gem on her left hand and spoke the word. The outlines of her suit appear around her as the suit forged itself from the light. The area in between the lines grew dark, closing in around her. It formed her Power Suit. She ran over to the air lock and stepped outside. She looked up to find at least 8 drop ships in her line of view. They dropped and landed in the ground no more than a mile away. This couldn't be a coincidence. She decided to wait for them to come to her. She then spotted something on he horizon. It was Ridley! He was coming in her direction when a drop ship came down just by him, which exploded and release at least 10 Ki-hunters, many more releasing around the area. "This isn't good" Samus muttered into her com link.
"What?" asked the Chozo.
"Ridley, the commander of the Pirate army, is here, along with a couple thousand Pirates and Ki-hunters. This isn't going to end well I we don't get out of here soon."
"Right. I'm setting things up so we can leave, but its slow going. I'll need ten minutes."
"You've got five till they get here."
"Great" he muttered. "Hold them off if you can. And good luck!"
"Right." She cut the channel. She didn't need distractions now. She headed inside after tapping into the cameras of the area. She used it to keep track of where the Pirates and Ridley were. She started prepping all of the compound's things to be put in the Chozo's ship. She was almost done when she saw that Ridley was entering weapons range. She left the Chozo to his equipment and rounded the Etecoons and the Dacholas to his ship to. She put her ship into auto-pilot stealth mode and sent it into orbit. She then headed outside.
She prepped her weapons and readied a Diffusion Missile. She burst out of the hatch to find a small army of Pirates gathered on the ground about one hundred feet from the compound. Samus fired the Diffusion Missile right into the unsuspecting group of Pirates, freezing them all completely. She then activated her Plasma Stream, sweeping them with it. The Pirates quickly melted and Ridley looked down in surprise to find a large number of the ground troops to be annihilated. He also spotted Plasma shots being fired at random, knocking out some of his foot troopers. He then spotted the Hunter in armor shooting the blasts. Why was she here? She had no reason to interfere with or even know about the Phazon found on this planet. Why would she.?
A Plasma round sliced across Ridley's left wing, causing him to roar in pain. He wasn't hurt, it just surprised him. He flapped his wings, rocketing him forward toward the bounty hunter. He attempted to skewer her on his tail but she moved aside. She jumped high into the air, firing the Ice-Spreader at him. His left wing froze solid and he dropped out of the air, hitting the ground with a loud thud.
"How had she gained so much power?" He thought. She turned and fired some Missiles at the Ki-Hunters, decimating their horde. Her reaction time was a lot higher than before. She could almost see what the enemy did before they did it. She whirled then to find Ridley looming over her.
"Great" she said flatly as Ridley threw a tremendous claw rake at her. She rolled into a Morph Ball rolling away from him, unfolded, and fired a Super Missile at his back. He roared in pain and lashed out with his tail. He hit her in the face and knocked her into the compound. The outside earth fell off, revealing a metal plate. Ridley's eyes widened as he realized that she was protecting something. Maybe the Federation knew about the Phazon! No, that was impossible, but maybe she did.
Samus ran inside as she noticed the reading that the time was up and it was time to go. She ran in and got on the ship, the compound being attacked. She ran to the ship and it launched. The hatch split open as she boarded and the Etecoons and Dacholas ran over, seeing if she was hurt.
She simply responded "Let's get the heck out of here!"
"Done!" yelled Varg. The thrusters kicked in and they launched into the sky, flying straight up. They blew past the carrier and were long gone before the Pirates knew what happened. "Wow. What do you use to power this thing?" Samus asked.
"A substance I found a while ago on Tallon IV. It started showing up on Tallon VI so I figured I'd use it in the forging of Power Suits. I have enough to last a few years he said, pointing at a clear glass tube. The vial was filled with Phazon.
"Is that.Phazon?" "What? You must have a different name for it than I. I call it Vargium. I like the sound of it, don't you? It has mutagenic properties but it's not that bad if you contain it. Anyway, I figured the Pirates were after the Phazon, so I destroyed it all. It was helping the environment, not hurting it, but I had to.Oh well. Once they find out they'll be mad. It should be gone in.Now. Huh?" He checked his screen. The Phazon hadn't been destroyed. The bomb he had set never went off. "Oh well. Can't change it; to many pirates."
Samus was preoccupied. She had easily beaten the Pirates back. "I beat the Pirates easily. How did I do that?"
"Well, you used your blood. You'll have to do better than that to beat my brother though."
"Then if I master this, the Pirates will be nothing."
"Yes, though I doubt you'll be able to activate it consistently. But enough of my rambling. The Pirates are chasing us. You'll need to board the cruiser to stop them. And your ships here to. I suggest you go. Your computer friend has already loaded into your suit. Now get going!"
Samus frowned on his ordering her around, but she knew he was joking, so she left to the hatch that now connected their ships. She went on board when she heard Adam ask "So Lady, you ready to go?"
"Let's go." She sat in her chair, changing her gun arm into a gauntlet so she could use her hand to manually control the ship. She uncloaked the ship and headed for the Cruiser.
Hope you liked it. This should be a little easier to read. R&R and I'll update. Bye!