Metroid: Chozo Betrayal and Bloods Unite Chapter 12
Disclaimer: I don't own Metroid or Nintendo, but still don't copy my story without my permission.
First, ReaderZero, thanks for the review. The combat was not simply cut and paste. And Dither Bikky has read my story and review (check the reviews) and he approved. He never said anything about me copying or anything. Just to appease you, I will say he greatly inspired my story, but everything besides the idea is purely mine. And any combat begins to look the same when a hundred or so people have done it before you. Can you tell I'm having a great day? Good. Ok, next, I'm working on formatting the first few chapters, but its going slow (I'm either working slowly or am too lazy to start. Take a wild guess which one. Yes, I'm very lazy). So, here's the next chapter. Enjoy. And if ReaderZero has anything to say, as long as you have a reason, go for it. I really hate mindless flames though. Thanks all. Again, enjoy.
Samus stepped out of her ship. She had docked with the research station that the distress signal in the SR388 system was coming from. The rest of the team followed her. "My name's Gordon Quick. I'll be your commanding officer for this mission" crackled in a voice through her helmet. It had a strong southern accent.
"Great" Samus muttered. The Federation definitely wouldn't turn her loose in this station to capture an SA-X. Samus followed the team down the station's twisty hallways. It was odd. This station's setup was more like a maze than anything else. It almost seemed like they didn't want something to get out. Samus's mapping system was working perfectly, which made Samus feel much better in this maze of hallways, doors, hatches, and rooms.
She walked along with the team for a while. It was made up of about 10 people in suits carrying machine guns, 5 with flame throwers, about 10 scientists and medics with various gear to sedate the SA-X, and one man, Gordon Quick, in an exo-suit with a chain gun under the right arm and some kind of harpoon launcher under the left. The suit wasn't very mobile and it would be no match for the SA-X. Samus would let them figure it out though. She wasn't in a very caring mood.
The station was dead. Not a soul to be found. There weren't even corpses to be found. There was a lone life-sign on the scanners. It was faint, and wasn't human. Samus continued on with the group, nearing the slow-moving life sign. All of a sudden an explosion ripped through a chunk of the station. It was close. "Captain" shouted one of the marines at Quick, "What the heck is going on?!"
"Let's find out!" he shouted back. The team moved forward to a hatch, which a marine opened, only to get hit with a sizzling ball of plasma, which easily melted through his weak body armor. He screamed in agony with his last breath. As he fell away he revealed the SA-X, standing in the center of a large room filled with large tubes containing.Metroids! Samus was in shock. One container was broken, with the Metroid no where to be found. The troops opened fire on the SA-X who casually walked forward, the bullets and flames bouncing off its red-orange armor; a perfect mimicry of Samus's old suit. Even with the Omega Suit, Samus just stood in back, watching the marines fire in vain. One marine dropped; another; one hit by the Ice Beam, frozen from the stomach down, was in horrible agony.
Quick fired his harpoon, piercing the SA-X's apparently weak armor, and a green liquid, presumably blood, flowed from the wound. The captain grinned, throwing the SA-X to the side hitting it against a tube. It shrieked, but not in pain; in joy. It grabbed the rope holding the Harpoon and pulled it hard enough to rip Quick forward. It caught his head with and outstretched hand, the rest of the exo-suit floating on by. It joined the wreckage on the far wall. The SA-X turned its right hand into a kind spike, and pierced the captain's chest, who shrieked in agony. His skin grew white, and he shriveled into a husk. His bio-energy was drained.
As he dissipated into dust, the other marines yelled and fled, only to be cut off by the SA-X. They were all being slaughtered by the SA-X, all in turn being drained. Samus stood in horror. Her brain had stopped processing input. She stared on in terror until the last marine died in agony. Then the SA-X turned to her. They met eyes (though they couldn't tell because of their visors), and Samus snapped out of her trance.
She looked on the destruction with horror as the SA-X folded its mandible back to its arm-cannon form. She felt a horrible anger well up inside her. She couldn't concentrate. All she wanted to do was destroy this SA-X. She rushed it and gave the SA-X a left hook, sending it flying into a tube with a Metroid inside. The tube shattered from the impact, releasing the Metroid. It floated out of the way, paying no mind to either Samus or the SA-X. The SA-X fired energy blasts and Samus dodged in behind a tube, and Samus fired some energy blasts and the SA-X dodged in behind a tube. This continued for almost a full 5 minutes when Samus was about to launch a Super Missile, and then an explosion came from the left side of the room.
The wall was completely destroyed. A large, lizard-like creature emerged. It was at least 50 ft. tall and had a wingspan to match. It breathed fire into the room, cutting the room in half, separating Samus and the SA-X. It then reached for the SA-X with an apparatus on its left hand, which folded out into a cage of sorts. It captured the SA-X, which was now in the cage surrounded by some kind of energy field. The SA-X hit the field with a fist to no avail. It then shot it, having just as much effect. Then broke into its X form. The form was blue, but now had a nucleus in the center. It looked almost like a Metroid. It tried to drift through the field but just hit and stopped. It then touched the field, the field weakening slightly. The lizard creature scooped up a Metroid with the SA-X then folded down the cage, which was now glowing with a cold blue light. The creature flapped its wings and flew out the hole in the wall, leaving Samus there, but she used her scan visor before it managed to get away. She didn't quite recognize it. "Scan visor entry: Meta-Ridley II"
Well, how did ya like it? So, there is chapter 12. A little short, but you'll like the next chapter even more. Hope you enjoyed. Read and review. By the way, from now on I plan on updating every other day minimum, and I'll have the early chapters fixed soon. Other than that, I've got nothing left to say. R&R. See ya!
Disclaimer: I don't own Metroid or Nintendo, but still don't copy my story without my permission.
First, ReaderZero, thanks for the review. The combat was not simply cut and paste. And Dither Bikky has read my story and review (check the reviews) and he approved. He never said anything about me copying or anything. Just to appease you, I will say he greatly inspired my story, but everything besides the idea is purely mine. And any combat begins to look the same when a hundred or so people have done it before you. Can you tell I'm having a great day? Good. Ok, next, I'm working on formatting the first few chapters, but its going slow (I'm either working slowly or am too lazy to start. Take a wild guess which one. Yes, I'm very lazy). So, here's the next chapter. Enjoy. And if ReaderZero has anything to say, as long as you have a reason, go for it. I really hate mindless flames though. Thanks all. Again, enjoy.
Samus stepped out of her ship. She had docked with the research station that the distress signal in the SR388 system was coming from. The rest of the team followed her. "My name's Gordon Quick. I'll be your commanding officer for this mission" crackled in a voice through her helmet. It had a strong southern accent.
"Great" Samus muttered. The Federation definitely wouldn't turn her loose in this station to capture an SA-X. Samus followed the team down the station's twisty hallways. It was odd. This station's setup was more like a maze than anything else. It almost seemed like they didn't want something to get out. Samus's mapping system was working perfectly, which made Samus feel much better in this maze of hallways, doors, hatches, and rooms.
She walked along with the team for a while. It was made up of about 10 people in suits carrying machine guns, 5 with flame throwers, about 10 scientists and medics with various gear to sedate the SA-X, and one man, Gordon Quick, in an exo-suit with a chain gun under the right arm and some kind of harpoon launcher under the left. The suit wasn't very mobile and it would be no match for the SA-X. Samus would let them figure it out though. She wasn't in a very caring mood.
The station was dead. Not a soul to be found. There weren't even corpses to be found. There was a lone life-sign on the scanners. It was faint, and wasn't human. Samus continued on with the group, nearing the slow-moving life sign. All of a sudden an explosion ripped through a chunk of the station. It was close. "Captain" shouted one of the marines at Quick, "What the heck is going on?!"
"Let's find out!" he shouted back. The team moved forward to a hatch, which a marine opened, only to get hit with a sizzling ball of plasma, which easily melted through his weak body armor. He screamed in agony with his last breath. As he fell away he revealed the SA-X, standing in the center of a large room filled with large tubes containing.Metroids! Samus was in shock. One container was broken, with the Metroid no where to be found. The troops opened fire on the SA-X who casually walked forward, the bullets and flames bouncing off its red-orange armor; a perfect mimicry of Samus's old suit. Even with the Omega Suit, Samus just stood in back, watching the marines fire in vain. One marine dropped; another; one hit by the Ice Beam, frozen from the stomach down, was in horrible agony.
Quick fired his harpoon, piercing the SA-X's apparently weak armor, and a green liquid, presumably blood, flowed from the wound. The captain grinned, throwing the SA-X to the side hitting it against a tube. It shrieked, but not in pain; in joy. It grabbed the rope holding the Harpoon and pulled it hard enough to rip Quick forward. It caught his head with and outstretched hand, the rest of the exo-suit floating on by. It joined the wreckage on the far wall. The SA-X turned its right hand into a kind spike, and pierced the captain's chest, who shrieked in agony. His skin grew white, and he shriveled into a husk. His bio-energy was drained.
As he dissipated into dust, the other marines yelled and fled, only to be cut off by the SA-X. They were all being slaughtered by the SA-X, all in turn being drained. Samus stood in horror. Her brain had stopped processing input. She stared on in terror until the last marine died in agony. Then the SA-X turned to her. They met eyes (though they couldn't tell because of their visors), and Samus snapped out of her trance.
She looked on the destruction with horror as the SA-X folded its mandible back to its arm-cannon form. She felt a horrible anger well up inside her. She couldn't concentrate. All she wanted to do was destroy this SA-X. She rushed it and gave the SA-X a left hook, sending it flying into a tube with a Metroid inside. The tube shattered from the impact, releasing the Metroid. It floated out of the way, paying no mind to either Samus or the SA-X. The SA-X fired energy blasts and Samus dodged in behind a tube, and Samus fired some energy blasts and the SA-X dodged in behind a tube. This continued for almost a full 5 minutes when Samus was about to launch a Super Missile, and then an explosion came from the left side of the room.
The wall was completely destroyed. A large, lizard-like creature emerged. It was at least 50 ft. tall and had a wingspan to match. It breathed fire into the room, cutting the room in half, separating Samus and the SA-X. It then reached for the SA-X with an apparatus on its left hand, which folded out into a cage of sorts. It captured the SA-X, which was now in the cage surrounded by some kind of energy field. The SA-X hit the field with a fist to no avail. It then shot it, having just as much effect. Then broke into its X form. The form was blue, but now had a nucleus in the center. It looked almost like a Metroid. It tried to drift through the field but just hit and stopped. It then touched the field, the field weakening slightly. The lizard creature scooped up a Metroid with the SA-X then folded down the cage, which was now glowing with a cold blue light. The creature flapped its wings and flew out the hole in the wall, leaving Samus there, but she used her scan visor before it managed to get away. She didn't quite recognize it. "Scan visor entry: Meta-Ridley II"
Well, how did ya like it? So, there is chapter 12. A little short, but you'll like the next chapter even more. Hope you enjoyed. Read and review. By the way, from now on I plan on updating every other day minimum, and I'll have the early chapters fixed soon. Other than that, I've got nothing left to say. R&R. See ya!