A/N:
Well well well. I've had some time to think during the last week or so, through which people kept bothering me so I couldn't write.
I even tried writing in a notebook at school, didn't work people wanted to see what I was writing. eh, now it seems I don't care really.
So, I guess I can write at school.. A few notes, as my beta informed me and as I saw re-reading those past-few chapter my characters
are a little OOC... Now, you may regard everything after 'Draco stepped out of the Leaky Cauldron' and the bit about smiling and happy as
gone. I'm starting over, and now this story will be kind of... No! it Will be VERY angsty and a little romance thrown in, and I've decided
some character-death. Harry or Draco ? you ask. Well, I haven't decided which. But I will probably kill one or both of them, mind you
after a good many chapters of course. How long will this fic be, is one question you might have also... Well, I want it to be long.
No fillers, either and I will try to keep the boring-ness down(I just made a new word up ^.^ haha). Somewhere inside of me I want to do
a fifty-chapter story, but I'll probably be lame and make it 25 or so... Nahh, fuck that It's going to be long and updated alot!
During this story I will be including lyrics from a song called 'Bringing on the Heartache' by Mariah Carey from her Charmbracelet cd (I
really think she didn't know how much of a hit she could of had if she targeted that song at angsty fanfic writers like myself).
As such, you've probably noticed it's also the title of this chapter ! anyway without further ado, just a few things:
Thanks to all of my reviewers *Glomps* I 3 you, and BIG THANKS to my Beta Rachel, Because we both know life without spell
check sucks ;) lol, Im just joking ^.^ but really thanks to you, because without you my stories would be all fudged up. And you beta'd for me when I was stuck without one -glomps- ^.^...
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This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
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Behind The Veil: Chapter Three 'Bringing on the Heartache'
Harry sat balled up in his sub-conscious thinking of his life for the past sixteen years, never being free to anywhere he wanted
living with people who hated you, never having love, being beaten. Then, when he had found someone who loved him
they where taken away. Snatched as quickly from his life just as quickly as they had came into it. The truth was now,
no one really loved him. There was no one who would understand him if he spilt out himself to them. Everyone thought of him
as a pawn to kill Voldemort, not Lord Voldemort. Just Voldemort, Tom fucking Riddle in Harry's eyes. The sick, scummy
motherfucker who had killed his parent's before he even knew they existed...
Harry was jolted from his thoughts as he remembered where he was. Getting up and using a simple Shrinking Spell to make his trunk pockted-sized, he stuffed it into his jeans and then
headed into a well-looking pub. Sitting down at an empty table near the back, a roll of parchment and a quill appeared
on it. 'Order' was all it said on it, and a list of food and drink items appeared below the text. Writing out 'Pumpkin Juice'
with the shabby quill, he was surprised when the parchment disappeared and a pitcher of pumpkin juice and two goblets
appeared taking its place.
Draco Malfoy entered from across the room, his cold eyes meeting with the familiar green ones he carefully strode
over to the table and taking a seat. `Well Draco, you've pissed your father off and moved out. Why not make friends with your
alleged enemy?' the young boy thought.
"Um... Hello," Draco said nervously.
"Well, if it isn't Draco Malfoy, spawn of Lucius Malfoy," Harry spoke icily, continuing after he noticed the other boy flinch
at his father's name.
"What can I help you with? Come to insult me and my parents again?" Harry continued.
"Look Potter... Harry, I know we haven't been the best of friends throughout school, but-" Draco stammered.
"Unless you count, your constant making fun of my friends, and my dead parents," Harry said coldy, too coldly for the golden boy.
"Sorry about that Harry, it was under my father's orders," Draco confessed solemly.
"But look, since we're still young, and Voldemort's returned to power I just wanted to ask before we both die, if we could
you know.. Try being friends, I mean we understand each other better than anyone else we know," Draco went on.
"Well Draco, since you so kindly pointed out we will both probably die soon, I guess I'm willing to 'bury the hatchet' as they say," Harry responded.
"Hehe, good. I guess we're kindred spirits, eh?" Draco asked, trying to be friendly.
"Wow, the Draco Malfoy quoting something Muggle. I'm shocked," Harry said, unintentionally sounding harsher than he meant to.
"They're not all bad, some of their things are rather nice. Especially a fiction writer who goes by the penname Findarto Sirfalas." Draco smiled.
"Who?" Harry questioned.
"Insane author writing this story about us," Draco informed Harry.
"Oh, he's positively ravishing," Harry went on.
(A/N: Sorry, had to put that in -Dumbledore twinkle in his eyes-, continue with muh story now :D !!)
"So Harry, I was thinking," Draco said nervously.
"Yes?" Harry asked.
"Well, I was thinking that.. maybe.. you know, we could decide not to be like our fathers," Draco rushed out.
"I'd have to say I agree with you Mal... Draco, of course I woudldn't want to be a Death Eater or dead, you know," Harry said.
"Yeah!" Draco laughed.
`God, he looks so innocent when he laughs. The way his eyes light up and the cold grey turns into the excited blue.' Harry
thought.
Gypsy, sittin' lookin' pretty, a broken rose and laughin' eyes
"So, how did those Muggles treat you this summer, Harry?" Draco asked.
"Horrid, as usual," Harry replied, grimly.
"God Harry, I can't tell you how I've wanted to run and get you when I heard how they've treated you. I knew ever since
that day I saw you for the first time, I was in love with you. My veela blood boiled at the sight of you, and I felt so empty inside when you refused my hand," Draco thought aloud,
only realising as he saw Harry's emerald eyes go wide.
"I'm sorry.. I ... I didn't.." was all Draco could get out as he ran through the pub's door.
"Wait," Harry bellowed running after him.
`I want you to know that.. that the feeling is mutual, although I didn't know it at the time. But, Now my Alvatan blood is telling me.
Draco.. I love you..' Harry thought chasing the other boy.
(A/N: I got permission to use Alvata's for my story, and to find out more on them read the fic by 'Tinanit Enozym' on Fanfiction.net)
You're a mystery Always runnin' wild Like a child without a home
You're always searchin'
Searchin for a feelin'
But it's easy come and easy go
Oh ---- I'm sorry but it's true
You're bringin' on the heartache
Takin all the best of me
Oh can't you see
You got the best of me
Whoah can't you see
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartache
Bringin' on the heartache
Can't you see
Oh You're such a secret Misty eyed and shady Baby,
how you hold the key
Oh, you're like a candle
Your flame slowly fadin'
Burnin' out and burnin' me
Can't you see
Just tryin' to say to you
You're bringin' on the heartache
Takin all the best of me
Oh can't you see
You got the best of me
Oh can't you see
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartache
Bringin' on the heartache
Can't you see
Can't you see
No No No ------------
You got the best of me
Oh can't you see
You got the best of me
Oh can't you see
You're bringin on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
You're bringin' on the heartache -------
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So, it was alittle short I guess. Longer than others though.
Kind of a cliff huh ? Well let's just say, They won't immediately become lovers. They will however be friends, and Hermione and Ron
will have to deal or will get killed in this story (BWAHAHAH)... Also, the next chapter will be longer.
And more lyrics from another song I've yet to choose.
Thanks to everyone!!!!
- Findarto Aka Josh
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
Well well well. I've had some time to think during the last week or so, through which people kept bothering me so I couldn't write.
I even tried writing in a notebook at school, didn't work people wanted to see what I was writing. eh, now it seems I don't care really.
So, I guess I can write at school.. A few notes, as my beta informed me and as I saw re-reading those past-few chapter my characters
are a little OOC... Now, you may regard everything after 'Draco stepped out of the Leaky Cauldron' and the bit about smiling and happy as
gone. I'm starting over, and now this story will be kind of... No! it Will be VERY angsty and a little romance thrown in, and I've decided
some character-death. Harry or Draco ? you ask. Well, I haven't decided which. But I will probably kill one or both of them, mind you
after a good many chapters of course. How long will this fic be, is one question you might have also... Well, I want it to be long.
No fillers, either and I will try to keep the boring-ness down(I just made a new word up ^.^ haha). Somewhere inside of me I want to do
a fifty-chapter story, but I'll probably be lame and make it 25 or so... Nahh, fuck that It's going to be long and updated alot!
During this story I will be including lyrics from a song called 'Bringing on the Heartache' by Mariah Carey from her Charmbracelet cd (I
really think she didn't know how much of a hit she could of had if she targeted that song at angsty fanfic writers like myself).
As such, you've probably noticed it's also the title of this chapter ! anyway without further ado, just a few things:
Thanks to all of my reviewers *Glomps* I 3 you, and BIG THANKS to my Beta Rachel, Because we both know life without spell
check sucks ;) lol, Im just joking ^.^ but really thanks to you, because without you my stories would be all fudged up. And you beta'd for me when I was stuck without one -glomps- ^.^...
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Behind The Veil: Chapter Three 'Bringing on the Heartache'
Harry sat balled up in his sub-conscious thinking of his life for the past sixteen years, never being free to anywhere he wanted
living with people who hated you, never having love, being beaten. Then, when he had found someone who loved him
they where taken away. Snatched as quickly from his life just as quickly as they had came into it. The truth was now,
no one really loved him. There was no one who would understand him if he spilt out himself to them. Everyone thought of him
as a pawn to kill Voldemort, not Lord Voldemort. Just Voldemort, Tom fucking Riddle in Harry's eyes. The sick, scummy
motherfucker who had killed his parent's before he even knew they existed...
Harry was jolted from his thoughts as he remembered where he was. Getting up and using a simple Shrinking Spell to make his trunk pockted-sized, he stuffed it into his jeans and then
headed into a well-looking pub. Sitting down at an empty table near the back, a roll of parchment and a quill appeared
on it. 'Order' was all it said on it, and a list of food and drink items appeared below the text. Writing out 'Pumpkin Juice'
with the shabby quill, he was surprised when the parchment disappeared and a pitcher of pumpkin juice and two goblets
appeared taking its place.
Draco Malfoy entered from across the room, his cold eyes meeting with the familiar green ones he carefully strode
over to the table and taking a seat. `Well Draco, you've pissed your father off and moved out. Why not make friends with your
alleged enemy?' the young boy thought.
"Um... Hello," Draco said nervously.
"Well, if it isn't Draco Malfoy, spawn of Lucius Malfoy," Harry spoke icily, continuing after he noticed the other boy flinch
at his father's name.
"What can I help you with? Come to insult me and my parents again?" Harry continued.
"Look Potter... Harry, I know we haven't been the best of friends throughout school, but-" Draco stammered.
"Unless you count, your constant making fun of my friends, and my dead parents," Harry said coldy, too coldly for the golden boy.
"Sorry about that Harry, it was under my father's orders," Draco confessed solemly.
"But look, since we're still young, and Voldemort's returned to power I just wanted to ask before we both die, if we could
you know.. Try being friends, I mean we understand each other better than anyone else we know," Draco went on.
"Well Draco, since you so kindly pointed out we will both probably die soon, I guess I'm willing to 'bury the hatchet' as they say," Harry responded.
"Hehe, good. I guess we're kindred spirits, eh?" Draco asked, trying to be friendly.
"Wow, the Draco Malfoy quoting something Muggle. I'm shocked," Harry said, unintentionally sounding harsher than he meant to.
"They're not all bad, some of their things are rather nice. Especially a fiction writer who goes by the penname Findarto Sirfalas." Draco smiled.
"Who?" Harry questioned.
"Insane author writing this story about us," Draco informed Harry.
"Oh, he's positively ravishing," Harry went on.
(A/N: Sorry, had to put that in -Dumbledore twinkle in his eyes-, continue with muh story now :D !!)
"So Harry, I was thinking," Draco said nervously.
"Yes?" Harry asked.
"Well, I was thinking that.. maybe.. you know, we could decide not to be like our fathers," Draco rushed out.
"I'd have to say I agree with you Mal... Draco, of course I woudldn't want to be a Death Eater or dead, you know," Harry said.
"Yeah!" Draco laughed.
`God, he looks so innocent when he laughs. The way his eyes light up and the cold grey turns into the excited blue.' Harry
thought.
Gypsy, sittin' lookin' pretty, a broken rose and laughin' eyes
"So, how did those Muggles treat you this summer, Harry?" Draco asked.
"Horrid, as usual," Harry replied, grimly.
"God Harry, I can't tell you how I've wanted to run and get you when I heard how they've treated you. I knew ever since
that day I saw you for the first time, I was in love with you. My veela blood boiled at the sight of you, and I felt so empty inside when you refused my hand," Draco thought aloud,
only realising as he saw Harry's emerald eyes go wide.
"I'm sorry.. I ... I didn't.." was all Draco could get out as he ran through the pub's door.
"Wait," Harry bellowed running after him.
`I want you to know that.. that the feeling is mutual, although I didn't know it at the time. But, Now my Alvatan blood is telling me.
Draco.. I love you..' Harry thought chasing the other boy.
(A/N: I got permission to use Alvata's for my story, and to find out more on them read the fic by 'Tinanit Enozym' on Fanfiction.net)
You're a mystery Always runnin' wild Like a child without a home
You're always searchin'
Searchin for a feelin'
But it's easy come and easy go
Oh ---- I'm sorry but it's true
You're bringin' on the heartache
Takin all the best of me
Oh can't you see
You got the best of me
Whoah can't you see
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartache
Bringin' on the heartache
Can't you see
Oh You're such a secret Misty eyed and shady Baby,
how you hold the key
Oh, you're like a candle
Your flame slowly fadin'
Burnin' out and burnin' me
Can't you see
Just tryin' to say to you
You're bringin' on the heartache
Takin all the best of me
Oh can't you see
You got the best of me
Oh can't you see
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartache
Bringin' on the heartache
Can't you see
Can't you see
No No No ------------
You got the best of me
Oh can't you see
You got the best of me
Oh can't you see
You're bringin on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
You're bringin' on the heartache -------
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So, it was alittle short I guess. Longer than others though.
Kind of a cliff huh ? Well let's just say, They won't immediately become lovers. They will however be friends, and Hermione and Ron
will have to deal or will get killed in this story (BWAHAHAH)... Also, the next chapter will be longer.
And more lyrics from another song I've yet to choose.
Thanks to everyone!!!!
- Findarto Aka Josh
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