Disclaimer: ok I don't own FY or any of its characters! No matter how much
I wish I did, I DON'T!!!
Oki um since there was A LOT of questions from my editors (Lyra + Lydia) I will explain a few things about the characters:
Oh, Ispreno, thanx for reviewing! It made me wanna start writing right away but I had tests to study for, projects and papers to do, and lessons to take. x.x it's been a hard week but I should have enough time to get this chapter finished, edited, and posted by Friday night.. I hope. -- Well considering it's Saturday night now, call it a hunch, but I don't think I'll get it up in time. And now considering it's now Friday night (2 weeks past the original due date)...LEAVE ME ALONE!! MY GRADMOTHER PASSED AWAY!!
Also, please do not yell at me if I screw the characters up, I've only seen the first 10 eps., plus eps. 32 + 33, ...Nuriko *cries* yeah those were the first eps. I saw on TV isn't my luck just grand? But I do know the basic story and I know the basic personalities of the characters (the main 14 seishi & 2 priestesses) 'cept Ashitare and Miboshi don't know too much about them.oh well just dun yell at me for it! It's not my fault! I'm dirt poor!
Oh also um the statues..ok the girl is in a semi-kneeling position (sitting on her left leg while the right one is sort of draped over the side of the pedestal that her statue is on) her arms are at pulled slightly behind her and her head is sticking out in front just a tad, her face angled so she's looking up at the other statue
The guy is in a standing position, his arms slightly pulled behind him, and his head angled down, looking at the girl.
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The Immortal Battle
Chapter 1
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Just as the Temple's caretaker finished telling the story behind the two statues, an astonished look spread across the girl's face. The girl was about 15 summers with medium-length brown hair and bright green eyes. Behind her stood 6 men and a boy.
The girl opened her mouth to say something, but stopped when she saw the glowing girl, who looked exactly like the statue to her left, except the girl was smiling and standing, instead of in a crouching position, snarling. "Who are you?" the brunet asked the glowing girl.
"Miaka, who are you talking to?" one young man asked her. "That girl" Miaka replied. "What girl, Miaka?" the young man questioned. "That girl, right there!" Miaka pointed to a darker part of the entrance hall. "Don't you see her, Tamahome?" "There's no one there."
Miaka pouted and looked back at the girl who was smiling and motioning for Miaka to follow her. And with that, the girl took off running down the hall and out the door.
For reasons unknown, Miaka took off after her, her legs seeming to move on their own. Miaka raced after the girl, through the courtyard, down the stairs, and through a forest. The girl stopped abruptly in a field and sat down on a rock, waiting for Miaka to catch her breath. "Who are you?" Miaka questioned once again
The girl merely smiled in response, as an unknown wind played with her golden strands.
"Why is it that only I can see you?" Miaka tried once again. The girl seemed to think for a second before opening her mouth and speaking words that were inaudible to Miaka.
Miaka was beginning to lose her patience before the girl looked down at the ground, her eyes scanning the ground, searching for something, unknown. A look of delight crossed the girl's face as her eyes came upon an over-grown tree stump.
The girl jumped up and ran over to it and began to look back and forth between Miaka and the stump. (a/n: "I love this game!" XD sorry.had to.oh right back to the story)
"I'm sorry..I..I...I don't know how to explain this to you..." the girl began, finally speaking aloud.
Miaka looked at her. "So you can speak! Now will you answer my question?"
"I.I do not have much time to explain this.. My name is Anzyllie..you are the only one who seems to be able to see me is because.well you're the only one who answered my call."
"What call?"
"I'll try to explain later! Right now I need you to listen...I need your help!" The girl, Anzyllie said with a look of distress. "There is a key, a crystal, that is inside this stump..I need you to find it and pull it out for me.can you? Will you?" Anzyllie asked, a begging expression taking over her face.
"I'll try." Miaka answered as she walked over to the stump. She glanced at it and began digging in the stump. She became so wrapped up in what she was doing that she missed the smile spreading over the girl's face.
~*~*~*~*~ Back at the temple ~*~*~*~*~
"Wow! It must have been one amazing sculptor to make statues that are so realistic, so life-like." Chichiri commented.
"Indeed" agreed Chiriko, who was currently admiring the details of the female statue's face. He placed a hand on the statues cheek and quickly pulled his hand away, as if he had been shocked.
The caretaker looked at the boy. "are you alright?" he asked.
"I'm fine"
"what happened?"
"the statue..it's...warm.."
And with that a drop of water fell from the statue's eye.
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Yeah ok.I know short chapter..I would write more but that's all I could get. So.yeah.
Oh! Please review!! Unless you wanna flame me for it's all-over crappy-ish- ness..
"I'm knee-deep in wtf-ish-ness right now."
~AnZayel.
Oki um since there was A LOT of questions from my editors (Lyra + Lydia) I will explain a few things about the characters:
Oh, Ispreno, thanx for reviewing! It made me wanna start writing right away but I had tests to study for, projects and papers to do, and lessons to take. x.x it's been a hard week but I should have enough time to get this chapter finished, edited, and posted by Friday night.. I hope. -- Well considering it's Saturday night now, call it a hunch, but I don't think I'll get it up in time. And now considering it's now Friday night (2 weeks past the original due date)...LEAVE ME ALONE!! MY GRADMOTHER PASSED AWAY!!
Also, please do not yell at me if I screw the characters up, I've only seen the first 10 eps., plus eps. 32 + 33, ...Nuriko *cries* yeah those were the first eps. I saw on TV isn't my luck just grand? But I do know the basic story and I know the basic personalities of the characters (the main 14 seishi & 2 priestesses) 'cept Ashitare and Miboshi don't know too much about them.oh well just dun yell at me for it! It's not my fault! I'm dirt poor!
Oh also um the statues..ok the girl is in a semi-kneeling position (sitting on her left leg while the right one is sort of draped over the side of the pedestal that her statue is on) her arms are at pulled slightly behind her and her head is sticking out in front just a tad, her face angled so she's looking up at the other statue
The guy is in a standing position, his arms slightly pulled behind him, and his head angled down, looking at the girl.
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The Immortal Battle
Chapter 1
-------------------------
Just as the Temple's caretaker finished telling the story behind the two statues, an astonished look spread across the girl's face. The girl was about 15 summers with medium-length brown hair and bright green eyes. Behind her stood 6 men and a boy.
The girl opened her mouth to say something, but stopped when she saw the glowing girl, who looked exactly like the statue to her left, except the girl was smiling and standing, instead of in a crouching position, snarling. "Who are you?" the brunet asked the glowing girl.
"Miaka, who are you talking to?" one young man asked her. "That girl" Miaka replied. "What girl, Miaka?" the young man questioned. "That girl, right there!" Miaka pointed to a darker part of the entrance hall. "Don't you see her, Tamahome?" "There's no one there."
Miaka pouted and looked back at the girl who was smiling and motioning for Miaka to follow her. And with that, the girl took off running down the hall and out the door.
For reasons unknown, Miaka took off after her, her legs seeming to move on their own. Miaka raced after the girl, through the courtyard, down the stairs, and through a forest. The girl stopped abruptly in a field and sat down on a rock, waiting for Miaka to catch her breath. "Who are you?" Miaka questioned once again
The girl merely smiled in response, as an unknown wind played with her golden strands.
"Why is it that only I can see you?" Miaka tried once again. The girl seemed to think for a second before opening her mouth and speaking words that were inaudible to Miaka.
Miaka was beginning to lose her patience before the girl looked down at the ground, her eyes scanning the ground, searching for something, unknown. A look of delight crossed the girl's face as her eyes came upon an over-grown tree stump.
The girl jumped up and ran over to it and began to look back and forth between Miaka and the stump. (a/n: "I love this game!" XD sorry.had to.oh right back to the story)
"I'm sorry..I..I...I don't know how to explain this to you..." the girl began, finally speaking aloud.
Miaka looked at her. "So you can speak! Now will you answer my question?"
"I.I do not have much time to explain this.. My name is Anzyllie..you are the only one who seems to be able to see me is because.well you're the only one who answered my call."
"What call?"
"I'll try to explain later! Right now I need you to listen...I need your help!" The girl, Anzyllie said with a look of distress. "There is a key, a crystal, that is inside this stump..I need you to find it and pull it out for me.can you? Will you?" Anzyllie asked, a begging expression taking over her face.
"I'll try." Miaka answered as she walked over to the stump. She glanced at it and began digging in the stump. She became so wrapped up in what she was doing that she missed the smile spreading over the girl's face.
~*~*~*~*~ Back at the temple ~*~*~*~*~
"Wow! It must have been one amazing sculptor to make statues that are so realistic, so life-like." Chichiri commented.
"Indeed" agreed Chiriko, who was currently admiring the details of the female statue's face. He placed a hand on the statues cheek and quickly pulled his hand away, as if he had been shocked.
The caretaker looked at the boy. "are you alright?" he asked.
"I'm fine"
"what happened?"
"the statue..it's...warm.."
And with that a drop of water fell from the statue's eye.
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Yeah ok.I know short chapter..I would write more but that's all I could get. So.yeah.
Oh! Please review!! Unless you wanna flame me for it's all-over crappy-ish- ness..
"I'm knee-deep in wtf-ish-ness right now."
~AnZayel.