This is Chichigal and here finally, is the update of Loss! You probably
wonder where the hell I've been! Well one I've been extremely busy, and
two, I just didn't know what to write. But I suddenly hit an inspiration
and I'm not saying anything.
To tell the truth I really, while I enjoy writing my stories; I tend to enjoy other people's stories more.
I'd like to thank all those who have taken the time to review my story. Please review!
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Chapter 10
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Goku looked at the green planet surrounding him in awe, while Piccolo silently looked at the place with a longing. Krillin and Bulma looked at the place with a sceptical eye. They had finally landed on the home planet of their once enemy, and while Goku and Piccolo were amazed by the prospect, Bulma and Krillin weren't quite as amazed.
"It's all green." Muttered Krillin, absently making a glance at Piccolo, then continued.
"Should have guessed it would have been green."
"What's wrong with green." Growled the very green Piccolo, narrowing his eyes at the bald man beside him.
Krillin took a step a back from the angry namek, and rubbed the back of his head, nervously.
"Nothing, Nothing!"
"I think it's great!" Chirped Goku.
Piccolo proudly smiled briefly, which quickly disappeared into a scowl at Goku's next comment.
"Who cares what the planet looks like? I just can't believe were on another planet!"
Krillin giggled almost inaudibly, but was easily heard by a certain Namek, who immediately turned to the short man who squealed and quickly hid behind his best friend, who was trying his best to push the bald man away from him.
Bulma shook her head in annoyance at the childish behaviour of the males/asexual surrounding her. Then stomped her foot to the hard ground seeking the attention she had wanted. The three froze to look at the only female in the group.
"Look, boys. I'm sorry that I've got to break up this warm fuzzy moment. But we've got to go and find Gohan, now!"
Goku eyes immediately lost the humour at watching the light banter between his two companions, and an uncharacteristic seriousness covered his face.
"Yes. You're right, let's get started."
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Gohan ducked as Vegeta took a lunge for him, and counterattacked with an upper cut to the Prince's chin. Vegeta flew to the back of the training room, but used the momentum to push himself off the ground towards the saiyan child, a fist held up to attack. Gohan immediately saw the attack coming, and lifted a hand to block the oncoming fist, but was startled by a knee into his stomach. He immediately sank to the ground onto his knees and gasped from the pain from the blow.
"Are you okay, boy?" Asked Vegeta, a slightly worried tone in his voice.
"Yes." Was Gohan's immediate response, and he quickly pushed himself off the ground and the sparring fight continued, but not for long. Siren's went off loudly echoing around the training room, and a computerized voice immediately spoke, ordering the two sparring saiyans to report to the bridge.
Both Gohan and Vegeta scowled in annoyance. But both also complied, and quietly walked to the bridge, where most likely the lizard monster was residing, awaiting their arrival.
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Frieza smiled cruelly at the two remaining saiyans, still in his allegiance. And walked in front of them casually, and took note of their fearless expression, sourly. He much preferred to see a creature shrivelling in fear at his presence.
"I have need of you stupid monkeys to accompany me to take care of some pest control. It seems we have some unwelcome visitors from Earth."
Gohan quickly fought back the gasp of surprise, and while tense he remained stoic on the outside.
Frieza stood before them frozen in place, and grinned at them in anticipation.
"Get all your things ready. Then we'll go."
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Goku remained at Piccolo's side at midair, and a slight grin tugged at his lips as he watched as his bald friend struggled to keep up with a screaming Bulma in tow.
"You ok back there!" Shouted the Earth saiyan, resisting a huge grin from appearing on his face, when his best friend shot him a sour look.
"Oh just fine!" Growled Krillin back, sarcasm evident in his voice.
"Good." Replied Goku, a grin finally breaking out on his features.
Piccolo's eyes widened as he felt the dark ki that obviously he believed belonged to that Frieza began to get closer to their position. Piccolo immediately halted, bringing everyone else to a stand by, then brought a serious expression to his face, while fear was hidden beneath it.
"Goku I believe we have a problem.
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Gohan couldn't believe his own eyes, there he was. The one man he had been dreaming of seeing since this whole ordeal started was standing in front of him on the harsh green lands of Namek, with a bunch of his friends he remembered meeting that time so long ago during the party that had turned into a kidnapping.
Joy welled up within him, at the thought that his father hadn't given up on saving him, as proof of it stood before him.
He quickly held back his tears of joy as the memory of Vegeta's plan came back to him, and proceeded in following in midair behind Frieza and his men. Quickly the distance between himself had his father diminished and with a quick downwards plummet the group had landed in front of the earthlings.
"So you are the fools who dare to go against me. Raditz warned me that you might follow."
"Where's my son?" Growled Goku at the girl like lizard before him.
Frieza grinned, despite the lack of respect from Goku, who he felt had been rightly named and smiled at the obvious fear in his companions.
"You mean the pathetic cry baby child of yours." Muttered the evil creature, then continued eerily.
"Well I do say this calls for a family reunion. Doesn't it Gohan?"
Sighing inaudibly, Gohan dragged his tense legs from his previous position behind Frieza; he stood proudly in plain view and gave the coldest smile he could muster,
"Hello father."
"Go . . . Gohan?"
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He couldn't believe it! It was Gohan, but . . . he couldn't help but shiver at the sight of his only son, stood there in a Saiyan uniform, with nothing but a cold smile on his young face. He quickly noted that he had indeed grown since he last saw him, and that a scar proceeded down his jaw on his once flawless face.
What had happened to the young boy he loved, who had the warmest smile, a caring nature and a love for all those who he was close to. What had Frieza turned him into?
"Been a long time, Dad" Continued the boy folding his arms across his chest.
"Gohan . . . I . . ." Goku stuttered, and was interrupted immediately from the lizard like creature.
"Gohan!" Sang Frieza gleefully, and then continued just as gleefully.
"I wouldn't mind if you take care of this pest problem for me, if you don't mind."
"Oh I don't mind, in fact it would be my pleasure." Growled the young boy, quickly taking on a fighting stance.
With a slight grin toward the other saiyan with flame shaped hair, who quickly smirked back, Gohan flew to the air, and headed towards Goku still form who was still in shock, then with a quick turn headed towards the gaping bald man.
With a swift uppercut from Gohan, the bald man flew to the air, and with a speed that almost none could see; he flew up and sent a karate chop to his neck, sending Krillin to the land of nod. Then landed on the ground at the same time as the unconscious ground, sending a bemused smirk out to the rest of the Z gang who now looked horrified.
"Who's next?"
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Goku looked at the still form of his best friend, and the shock that had once been present on his face turned to anger. This couldn't be his son, the son he was besotted to, who he had travelled on this journey to save. With a sad admission he realised he was too late to save his son. His son had died and this . . . monster had taken his place.
Gohan had to stop the wince that had been brought on at his father's angry face. His father had never been angry with him, and seeing this foreign emotion on his father's face directed towards him, brought a cold sensation through his soul. But he had no choice, besides Krillin would be okay, he had only knocked the short guy out.
"I suppose I could leave this menial task to you boy. Vegeta, you are to supervise him. I've got some dragonball's to find."
And with that final order from the white monster, Dodaria and Zarbon took to the skies, leaving Gohan and Vegeta with the Z gang.
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Vegeta took a step towards Gohan, while Goku and the others tensed for an attack from the older saiyan. But to their shock, he only proceeded in gently grasping Gohan's shoulder.
"The ugly lizards gone. We better get on with making sure he doesn't succeed in getting the dragonball's."
The cold façade immediately melted from Gohan's face and a warm smile came to his face.
"Yes, you right we have to stop Frieza before it's too late. We better get back to the ship and take the dragon ball's he already has. Without all seven he can't get his wish."
"What's going on?" Muttered Goku with a shocked expression on his face.
Happiness lighted Gohan's heart and he almost grinned at his father's confused face, and had to stop himself from jumping the guy and cry his heart out, and instead gave a warm smile.
Goku froze at the warm smile the young boy sent his direction. It was the smile he remembered that belonged to his son. It was his son.
"I'm sorry about Krillin, he'll be awake in half an hour, it's just that I had to make it believable."
"What believable?" Asked Bulma, her fear finally diminished.
"That we were on the monster's side." Growled Vegeta with growing agitation.
"Why?" Goku asked his son, staring the boy right in the eyes.
Gohan sobered up and the warm smile faded, leaving a serious look on his young face. He returned his father's look, and with small smirk he answered.
"We're going to kill Frieza."
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That's the end of chapter 10
Phew! Now bad for an hours work. Hope it's ok!
Please check out the rest of my stories, I'm actually updating them all pretty soon.
And please don't forget to review!
From Chichigal
To tell the truth I really, while I enjoy writing my stories; I tend to enjoy other people's stories more.
I'd like to thank all those who have taken the time to review my story. Please review!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 10
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Goku looked at the green planet surrounding him in awe, while Piccolo silently looked at the place with a longing. Krillin and Bulma looked at the place with a sceptical eye. They had finally landed on the home planet of their once enemy, and while Goku and Piccolo were amazed by the prospect, Bulma and Krillin weren't quite as amazed.
"It's all green." Muttered Krillin, absently making a glance at Piccolo, then continued.
"Should have guessed it would have been green."
"What's wrong with green." Growled the very green Piccolo, narrowing his eyes at the bald man beside him.
Krillin took a step a back from the angry namek, and rubbed the back of his head, nervously.
"Nothing, Nothing!"
"I think it's great!" Chirped Goku.
Piccolo proudly smiled briefly, which quickly disappeared into a scowl at Goku's next comment.
"Who cares what the planet looks like? I just can't believe were on another planet!"
Krillin giggled almost inaudibly, but was easily heard by a certain Namek, who immediately turned to the short man who squealed and quickly hid behind his best friend, who was trying his best to push the bald man away from him.
Bulma shook her head in annoyance at the childish behaviour of the males/asexual surrounding her. Then stomped her foot to the hard ground seeking the attention she had wanted. The three froze to look at the only female in the group.
"Look, boys. I'm sorry that I've got to break up this warm fuzzy moment. But we've got to go and find Gohan, now!"
Goku eyes immediately lost the humour at watching the light banter between his two companions, and an uncharacteristic seriousness covered his face.
"Yes. You're right, let's get started."
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Gohan ducked as Vegeta took a lunge for him, and counterattacked with an upper cut to the Prince's chin. Vegeta flew to the back of the training room, but used the momentum to push himself off the ground towards the saiyan child, a fist held up to attack. Gohan immediately saw the attack coming, and lifted a hand to block the oncoming fist, but was startled by a knee into his stomach. He immediately sank to the ground onto his knees and gasped from the pain from the blow.
"Are you okay, boy?" Asked Vegeta, a slightly worried tone in his voice.
"Yes." Was Gohan's immediate response, and he quickly pushed himself off the ground and the sparring fight continued, but not for long. Siren's went off loudly echoing around the training room, and a computerized voice immediately spoke, ordering the two sparring saiyans to report to the bridge.
Both Gohan and Vegeta scowled in annoyance. But both also complied, and quietly walked to the bridge, where most likely the lizard monster was residing, awaiting their arrival.
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Frieza smiled cruelly at the two remaining saiyans, still in his allegiance. And walked in front of them casually, and took note of their fearless expression, sourly. He much preferred to see a creature shrivelling in fear at his presence.
"I have need of you stupid monkeys to accompany me to take care of some pest control. It seems we have some unwelcome visitors from Earth."
Gohan quickly fought back the gasp of surprise, and while tense he remained stoic on the outside.
Frieza stood before them frozen in place, and grinned at them in anticipation.
"Get all your things ready. Then we'll go."
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Goku remained at Piccolo's side at midair, and a slight grin tugged at his lips as he watched as his bald friend struggled to keep up with a screaming Bulma in tow.
"You ok back there!" Shouted the Earth saiyan, resisting a huge grin from appearing on his face, when his best friend shot him a sour look.
"Oh just fine!" Growled Krillin back, sarcasm evident in his voice.
"Good." Replied Goku, a grin finally breaking out on his features.
Piccolo's eyes widened as he felt the dark ki that obviously he believed belonged to that Frieza began to get closer to their position. Piccolo immediately halted, bringing everyone else to a stand by, then brought a serious expression to his face, while fear was hidden beneath it.
"Goku I believe we have a problem.
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Gohan couldn't believe his own eyes, there he was. The one man he had been dreaming of seeing since this whole ordeal started was standing in front of him on the harsh green lands of Namek, with a bunch of his friends he remembered meeting that time so long ago during the party that had turned into a kidnapping.
Joy welled up within him, at the thought that his father hadn't given up on saving him, as proof of it stood before him.
He quickly held back his tears of joy as the memory of Vegeta's plan came back to him, and proceeded in following in midair behind Frieza and his men. Quickly the distance between himself had his father diminished and with a quick downwards plummet the group had landed in front of the earthlings.
"So you are the fools who dare to go against me. Raditz warned me that you might follow."
"Where's my son?" Growled Goku at the girl like lizard before him.
Frieza grinned, despite the lack of respect from Goku, who he felt had been rightly named and smiled at the obvious fear in his companions.
"You mean the pathetic cry baby child of yours." Muttered the evil creature, then continued eerily.
"Well I do say this calls for a family reunion. Doesn't it Gohan?"
Sighing inaudibly, Gohan dragged his tense legs from his previous position behind Frieza; he stood proudly in plain view and gave the coldest smile he could muster,
"Hello father."
"Go . . . Gohan?"
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He couldn't believe it! It was Gohan, but . . . he couldn't help but shiver at the sight of his only son, stood there in a Saiyan uniform, with nothing but a cold smile on his young face. He quickly noted that he had indeed grown since he last saw him, and that a scar proceeded down his jaw on his once flawless face.
What had happened to the young boy he loved, who had the warmest smile, a caring nature and a love for all those who he was close to. What had Frieza turned him into?
"Been a long time, Dad" Continued the boy folding his arms across his chest.
"Gohan . . . I . . ." Goku stuttered, and was interrupted immediately from the lizard like creature.
"Gohan!" Sang Frieza gleefully, and then continued just as gleefully.
"I wouldn't mind if you take care of this pest problem for me, if you don't mind."
"Oh I don't mind, in fact it would be my pleasure." Growled the young boy, quickly taking on a fighting stance.
With a slight grin toward the other saiyan with flame shaped hair, who quickly smirked back, Gohan flew to the air, and headed towards Goku still form who was still in shock, then with a quick turn headed towards the gaping bald man.
With a swift uppercut from Gohan, the bald man flew to the air, and with a speed that almost none could see; he flew up and sent a karate chop to his neck, sending Krillin to the land of nod. Then landed on the ground at the same time as the unconscious ground, sending a bemused smirk out to the rest of the Z gang who now looked horrified.
"Who's next?"
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Goku looked at the still form of his best friend, and the shock that had once been present on his face turned to anger. This couldn't be his son, the son he was besotted to, who he had travelled on this journey to save. With a sad admission he realised he was too late to save his son. His son had died and this . . . monster had taken his place.
Gohan had to stop the wince that had been brought on at his father's angry face. His father had never been angry with him, and seeing this foreign emotion on his father's face directed towards him, brought a cold sensation through his soul. But he had no choice, besides Krillin would be okay, he had only knocked the short guy out.
"I suppose I could leave this menial task to you boy. Vegeta, you are to supervise him. I've got some dragonball's to find."
And with that final order from the white monster, Dodaria and Zarbon took to the skies, leaving Gohan and Vegeta with the Z gang.
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Vegeta took a step towards Gohan, while Goku and the others tensed for an attack from the older saiyan. But to their shock, he only proceeded in gently grasping Gohan's shoulder.
"The ugly lizards gone. We better get on with making sure he doesn't succeed in getting the dragonball's."
The cold façade immediately melted from Gohan's face and a warm smile came to his face.
"Yes, you right we have to stop Frieza before it's too late. We better get back to the ship and take the dragon ball's he already has. Without all seven he can't get his wish."
"What's going on?" Muttered Goku with a shocked expression on his face.
Happiness lighted Gohan's heart and he almost grinned at his father's confused face, and had to stop himself from jumping the guy and cry his heart out, and instead gave a warm smile.
Goku froze at the warm smile the young boy sent his direction. It was the smile he remembered that belonged to his son. It was his son.
"I'm sorry about Krillin, he'll be awake in half an hour, it's just that I had to make it believable."
"What believable?" Asked Bulma, her fear finally diminished.
"That we were on the monster's side." Growled Vegeta with growing agitation.
"Why?" Goku asked his son, staring the boy right in the eyes.
Gohan sobered up and the warm smile faded, leaving a serious look on his young face. He returned his father's look, and with small smirk he answered.
"We're going to kill Frieza."
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's the end of chapter 10
Phew! Now bad for an hours work. Hope it's ok!
Please check out the rest of my stories, I'm actually updating them all pretty soon.
And please don't forget to review!
From Chichigal