AN: Okay, going for chapter number 5 with only thirty minutes remaining!
Can she do it? Is she really capable of writing four chapters in one
day?......... we shall soon see......... ~hEyKyRa13
Review Responses:
IceSpikeXBlackRose: *sigh* for the last time...*inhales deeply* IT'S NOT JAY, GOT IT!!!
Miko of the inocent: *gulp* yes, yes, I promise it'll have a happy ending... and by the way, I never realized I had my stuff filtered in the first place. Thank you!
Rekouri Sentusu: Well I can't just TELL you what's going on! But I will say that a lot of the answers will come in the last few chapters. In all, there are only two more chapters after this one, and the last one is much longer than the others, so I'm sure you'll be satisfied.
Sayori-chan: Hmmm, does he deserve the pain he's getting... I wish I could even give you a hint, you know I do, but I musn't... Like I told Rekouri Sentusu, you'll probably find out in the next two chapters.
Akaro: Well, I don't want to give anything away, so I won't agree to whether or not he kills Kagome (^-^' I'll just leave that one up to your imaginations to figure out!) but I will say that just about everything will be explained in some form or other by the end.
ssp51201: *grin* I'm glad you're enjoying it. I honestly didn't think it would end up getting this popular, but you peoples must be nuts or something for actually liking it. Anyway, the plight of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is nothing new, they go through it throughout the entire series... I just happen to take a different spin on... let's just say a common theme...
*added note* and as for the above note... RILEY, DON'T YOU DARE SAY A WORD!!!!!!
An Unrelished Fate
Chapter 5
Confessions at the well
You idiot.
Slowly, Kagome kneeled in front of the well and leaned forward, resting her chin on the ancient wooden wall. Her eyes drifted around in the darkness below, wondering if she could see the bottom, and knowing it wouldn't matter if she could. Nothing could bring him back. He was gone forever.
With a sigh, Kagome shifted her position, lying her cheek on the cold wood, ignoring the flight of the tears across all the corners of her face.
"Good job, Kagome," she scolded, sobbing. "Look at how weak you are. Crying like this. You should be ashamed of yourself."
With a choked laughter, she smirked. "Heck, anybody in their right mind would be laughing at you, right now. Laughing at how stupid and weak you look, and how pathetic you really are."
"Why in the world did you ever think he even cared about you in the first place? He hated you. He called you wench every opportunity he got; he thought you were lazy and selfish for wanting to go home when there were still jewel shards to be found; he hated always having to save you because you were too weak to take care of yourself. You were always in his way, you idiot. How could you even imagine it was ever anything different?"
Frustrated with herself, the tears came harder as her voice rose. "He never loved you! He's always loved Kikyo! You stupid little idiot. All you'd ever do is sit there and imagine he'd sweep you up in his arms and say, 'Kagome, I love you,' but it was all just a joke!"
Suddenly drained, Kagome sank into silence again; a silence that was ruptured only by her occasional sobs. Curling herself into a ball, she hugged her legs to her chest and leaned her temple against the wall, staring at the ground.
"Great job, Kagome. Falling in love with someone who would never love you in return. Great job."
Kagome sniffled, squeezing her eyes shut.
You idiot.
*** AN: Yes, Yes, I know, this chapter was short, but there was only so much I could have Kagome say about herself before I started repeating things, right? Anyway, I'm gonna pause and get dressed for work and see if I can't bust out another chapter before I leave. Maybe I'll even get in a chapter after work?......... Wow, I can't believe how close to the end I'm getting on this. I think there's really only about three or four chapter's left. If I'm still in this writing mood tomorrow, I'll definitely have it all done then!
IceSpikeXBlackRose: *sigh* for the last time...*inhales deeply* IT'S NOT JAY, GOT IT!!!
Miko of the inocent: *gulp* yes, yes, I promise it'll have a happy ending... and by the way, I never realized I had my stuff filtered in the first place. Thank you!
Rekouri Sentusu: Well I can't just TELL you what's going on! But I will say that a lot of the answers will come in the last few chapters. In all, there are only two more chapters after this one, and the last one is much longer than the others, so I'm sure you'll be satisfied.
Sayori-chan: Hmmm, does he deserve the pain he's getting... I wish I could even give you a hint, you know I do, but I musn't... Like I told Rekouri Sentusu, you'll probably find out in the next two chapters.
Akaro: Well, I don't want to give anything away, so I won't agree to whether or not he kills Kagome (^-^' I'll just leave that one up to your imaginations to figure out!) but I will say that just about everything will be explained in some form or other by the end.
ssp51201: *grin* I'm glad you're enjoying it. I honestly didn't think it would end up getting this popular, but you peoples must be nuts or something for actually liking it. Anyway, the plight of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is nothing new, they go through it throughout the entire series... I just happen to take a different spin on... let's just say a common theme...
*added note* and as for the above note... RILEY, DON'T YOU DARE SAY A WORD!!!!!!
An Unrelished Fate
Chapter 5
Confessions at the well
You idiot.
Slowly, Kagome kneeled in front of the well and leaned forward, resting her chin on the ancient wooden wall. Her eyes drifted around in the darkness below, wondering if she could see the bottom, and knowing it wouldn't matter if she could. Nothing could bring him back. He was gone forever.
With a sigh, Kagome shifted her position, lying her cheek on the cold wood, ignoring the flight of the tears across all the corners of her face.
"Good job, Kagome," she scolded, sobbing. "Look at how weak you are. Crying like this. You should be ashamed of yourself."
With a choked laughter, she smirked. "Heck, anybody in their right mind would be laughing at you, right now. Laughing at how stupid and weak you look, and how pathetic you really are."
"Why in the world did you ever think he even cared about you in the first place? He hated you. He called you wench every opportunity he got; he thought you were lazy and selfish for wanting to go home when there were still jewel shards to be found; he hated always having to save you because you were too weak to take care of yourself. You were always in his way, you idiot. How could you even imagine it was ever anything different?"
Frustrated with herself, the tears came harder as her voice rose. "He never loved you! He's always loved Kikyo! You stupid little idiot. All you'd ever do is sit there and imagine he'd sweep you up in his arms and say, 'Kagome, I love you,' but it was all just a joke!"
Suddenly drained, Kagome sank into silence again; a silence that was ruptured only by her occasional sobs. Curling herself into a ball, she hugged her legs to her chest and leaned her temple against the wall, staring at the ground.
"Great job, Kagome. Falling in love with someone who would never love you in return. Great job."
Kagome sniffled, squeezing her eyes shut.
You idiot.
*** AN: Yes, Yes, I know, this chapter was short, but there was only so much I could have Kagome say about herself before I started repeating things, right? Anyway, I'm gonna pause and get dressed for work and see if I can't bust out another chapter before I leave. Maybe I'll even get in a chapter after work?......... Wow, I can't believe how close to the end I'm getting on this. I think there's really only about three or four chapter's left. If I'm still in this writing mood tomorrow, I'll definitely have it all done then!