Runaway in Walmart
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Hmm... I needed an idea, and I got one. Heres the result...
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It was a sunny day, but noone knew that cause everyone was inside
WALMART!! Walmart was everyones favorite store, and it was having a sale,
making everyone twice as happy to go there. Outside Walmart a dead bush
rolled by. It was quiet.
Ivan rolled his kart around up and down the aisles, making a quick scan of
the store. He would probably make a second trip, and probably a third too,
and maybe a forth, just to be sure, cause Walmart was Ivans favorite store
too.
In his pocket was a little Jupiter Djinn. Ivan didn't know it, but that
little djinn was planning his revenge on Ivan for not letting him walk
around without a leash. Ivan just walked along the aisles of Walmart, his
big chibi eyes catching every detail.
Just then Ivan turned the corner, and standing there was SHEBA!! Now Ivan
didn't know it Sheba knew it or not, but he had a crush on her, and for
some random reason did not want her to see him. Jupiter Djinn (I will call
him Jupi) had a plan, to get revenge on Ivan, to embarrass him in front of
Sheba...
Ivan choked, and turned back around the corner running as fast as someone
can in a crowded store, and went on with shopping. Jupi scowled. He had
missed his chance...
In the Hot Wheels aisle, (the one place girls fear to tread- in this story
anyways) Ivan stopped and pulled off his bright blue scarf. That was a
close one, too close for Ivan, and he decided he would only do three trips
around Walmart, and do five the next day.
Meanwhile Sheba looked back when she heard someone choking, (Ivan) and
noone was there. She made a weird anime surprised face and went back to
looking at the cereal boxes. But she glanced back to the spot... she was
SUSPICIOUS!! But noone was there, so she picked up a box of fruit loops and
went on shopping, going towards McDonalds (in Walmart ^-^).
Jupi searched around Ivans pocket in hopes of finding what he needed, an
elastic, so his plan would work... Once Ivan got to McDonalds... that's where
he was headed for sure, cause once Ivan passed the evil BARBIE AISLE (the
one place boys fear to tread) he always went to McDonalds. And once he got
there...
Jupi gave one of those bad guy laughs, lightning flashed, a lady screamed,
people ran in circles, evil horror movie music played, and Ivan rolled his
chibi eyes.
He hit his pocket. Jupi stopped.
In McDonalds, Ivan ordered fries, a plain McChicken, and a medium pepsi
(cause he didn't like coke). He sat down at an empty table and let Jupi out
of his pocket.
"You be good now." he said. "Or you be leashed for the rest of your
life!!"
He didn't mean it. Jupi stuck his tongue out at Ivan.
Sheba walked in McDonalds. Ivan was too busy reading the jokes in the
Coffee Break paper to notice. Jupi grinned evilly, and rethought his plan.
It WAS TIME!!
Ivans order came a second later, and he started munching on his fries,
which were to hot, but he still didn't notice... (sigh) Jupi grabbed a fork.
He put the elastic on it, and fit one small fry on his homemade slingshot,
and aimed.
Sheba stood at the ordering counter, and walked over to the pop dispensing
machine. Just where Jupi wanted her.
Some random person reading this screamed "NO SHEBA! DON'T GO THERE!"
Jupi pulled back on the elastic, and let it rip!! (the elastic, okay?) The
fry flew over to Sheba, and hit the coke button on the pop machine. The
speed of the fry also turned the pop machine right in the angle so that it
faced Sheba.
A girl screamed, (Sheba, duh) and Ivan looked up from his comics. He saw
Sheba standing in a storm of spraying coke, and everyone turned to look
too.
Jupi laughed an evil bad guy laugh, lightning flashed, people ran in
circles, evil horror movie music played, and Ivan rolled his chibi eyes. He
ran over to the screaming Sheba, and braced himself against the evil
tasting coke. He waded in to the sea of sugarness, and turned off the pop
machine. Sheba was soaked, and Ivan was a little wet. Jupi was still
laughing, and some random person reading this flicked Jupi and Jupi went
flying over to Ivan and Sheba, his elastic on his neck.
"So it was YOU!!" Ivan yelled. Jupi grinned nervously and backed off.
Ivan jumped at him, but missed, and landed in a lake of coke. Jupi sped
off running as fast as his little legs could carry him, and was gone.
Ivan stood back up and looked at Sheba, and his big amethyst chibi eyes
grew bigger. He blushed.
"Sorry about that..." He said. Sheba was silent for a second, then burst
out laughing.
"Sorry, that was so... funny!!" She said while still laughing. Ivan couldn't
help but laugh too, so the two of them were laughing, and Ivan forgot the
random reason he didn't want to talk to Sheba.
"Lets go get us some Djinn!" He said smiling.
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Okay folks that's a wrap. First chapter, and if I get reviews I will put
up a second!! Tell me how it was, kay?
S'all for now! Plz read and review!
---
Hmm... I needed an idea, and I got one. Heres the result...
---
It was a sunny day, but noone knew that cause everyone was inside
WALMART!! Walmart was everyones favorite store, and it was having a sale,
making everyone twice as happy to go there. Outside Walmart a dead bush
rolled by. It was quiet.
Ivan rolled his kart around up and down the aisles, making a quick scan of
the store. He would probably make a second trip, and probably a third too,
and maybe a forth, just to be sure, cause Walmart was Ivans favorite store
too.
In his pocket was a little Jupiter Djinn. Ivan didn't know it, but that
little djinn was planning his revenge on Ivan for not letting him walk
around without a leash. Ivan just walked along the aisles of Walmart, his
big chibi eyes catching every detail.
Just then Ivan turned the corner, and standing there was SHEBA!! Now Ivan
didn't know it Sheba knew it or not, but he had a crush on her, and for
some random reason did not want her to see him. Jupiter Djinn (I will call
him Jupi) had a plan, to get revenge on Ivan, to embarrass him in front of
Sheba...
Ivan choked, and turned back around the corner running as fast as someone
can in a crowded store, and went on with shopping. Jupi scowled. He had
missed his chance...
In the Hot Wheels aisle, (the one place girls fear to tread- in this story
anyways) Ivan stopped and pulled off his bright blue scarf. That was a
close one, too close for Ivan, and he decided he would only do three trips
around Walmart, and do five the next day.
Meanwhile Sheba looked back when she heard someone choking, (Ivan) and
noone was there. She made a weird anime surprised face and went back to
looking at the cereal boxes. But she glanced back to the spot... she was
SUSPICIOUS!! But noone was there, so she picked up a box of fruit loops and
went on shopping, going towards McDonalds (in Walmart ^-^).
Jupi searched around Ivans pocket in hopes of finding what he needed, an
elastic, so his plan would work... Once Ivan got to McDonalds... that's where
he was headed for sure, cause once Ivan passed the evil BARBIE AISLE (the
one place boys fear to tread) he always went to McDonalds. And once he got
there...
Jupi gave one of those bad guy laughs, lightning flashed, a lady screamed,
people ran in circles, evil horror movie music played, and Ivan rolled his
chibi eyes.
He hit his pocket. Jupi stopped.
In McDonalds, Ivan ordered fries, a plain McChicken, and a medium pepsi
(cause he didn't like coke). He sat down at an empty table and let Jupi out
of his pocket.
"You be good now." he said. "Or you be leashed for the rest of your
life!!"
He didn't mean it. Jupi stuck his tongue out at Ivan.
Sheba walked in McDonalds. Ivan was too busy reading the jokes in the
Coffee Break paper to notice. Jupi grinned evilly, and rethought his plan.
It WAS TIME!!
Ivans order came a second later, and he started munching on his fries,
which were to hot, but he still didn't notice... (sigh) Jupi grabbed a fork.
He put the elastic on it, and fit one small fry on his homemade slingshot,
and aimed.
Sheba stood at the ordering counter, and walked over to the pop dispensing
machine. Just where Jupi wanted her.
Some random person reading this screamed "NO SHEBA! DON'T GO THERE!"
Jupi pulled back on the elastic, and let it rip!! (the elastic, okay?) The
fry flew over to Sheba, and hit the coke button on the pop machine. The
speed of the fry also turned the pop machine right in the angle so that it
faced Sheba.
A girl screamed, (Sheba, duh) and Ivan looked up from his comics. He saw
Sheba standing in a storm of spraying coke, and everyone turned to look
too.
Jupi laughed an evil bad guy laugh, lightning flashed, people ran in
circles, evil horror movie music played, and Ivan rolled his chibi eyes. He
ran over to the screaming Sheba, and braced himself against the evil
tasting coke. He waded in to the sea of sugarness, and turned off the pop
machine. Sheba was soaked, and Ivan was a little wet. Jupi was still
laughing, and some random person reading this flicked Jupi and Jupi went
flying over to Ivan and Sheba, his elastic on his neck.
"So it was YOU!!" Ivan yelled. Jupi grinned nervously and backed off.
Ivan jumped at him, but missed, and landed in a lake of coke. Jupi sped
off running as fast as his little legs could carry him, and was gone.
Ivan stood back up and looked at Sheba, and his big amethyst chibi eyes
grew bigger. He blushed.
"Sorry about that..." He said. Sheba was silent for a second, then burst
out laughing.
"Sorry, that was so... funny!!" She said while still laughing. Ivan couldn't
help but laugh too, so the two of them were laughing, and Ivan forgot the
random reason he didn't want to talk to Sheba.
"Lets go get us some Djinn!" He said smiling.
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Okay folks that's a wrap. First chapter, and if I get reviews I will put
up a second!! Tell me how it was, kay?
S'all for now! Plz read and review!