Review from Ciu Sune (I Hope you don't mind, If you do let me now and I'll
take it down)
But if what is right is wrong if it isn't right to me, then is wrong right
to some people and right right to others who think it is wrong?
Err.... maybe? All I can answer is that even in the show Hiei has his own
honor code; as do many anime characters. Not to offend anyone with this,
but I need an example. Way back when there was Slavery in the US, people
thought it was right, that is was fine. Now, the majority believe it to be
wrong. But there are still people who believe it is right and that there is
nothing wrong with it. There are still countries that openly practice it.
So yes, what is right to some people can seem wrong to others. In a sense,
everyone has their own sense of what is right and wrong. We know when
something feels wrong, even if we ignore it and do it anyway. So when you
don't feel something is wrong, You would feel it was right, wouldn't you?
And of course there are gray areas, there always are. I got a few reviews
asking me about my explanation so I thought I'd post my thought process.
And for the record, I believe slavery is wrong.
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Yu Yu Fic
Day 3- Day 4
"Yeah? Well sorry doesn't cut it missy!" Said the demon as he grab her arm. But before anything else could happen, someone grabbed his wrist.
"Hey, she said she was sorry let it go." Said a a girl with black eyes and black hair. " Besides, bumping into is nothing compared to what I'd do to you."
The demon let go of the girl. "Oh yeah Kaneru? I should slap ya just for stoppin me."
"Go ahead." Kaneru said. "Go ahead and show the whole place what a drunken idiot you are."
The demon growled but sat down.
"Exactly."
"Thank you very much Miss Kaneru," Said they girl.
"No problem."
Jin and Touya had returned, and Jin's eyes were wide. "Hey," He whispered "That's the girl dat was with them people back at the caves!"
That knocked Hiei out of his short lived daze. Kaneru on the other hand, saw Jin and smiled.
"If you'll excuse me for a moment," She said to the blue haired girl as she walked over to the boys. "So, I was correct. The spirit detective was up in those caves," She said, quiet enough so no one else in the tavern could hear.
Kurama's breath caught in his chest. What now? How many others did she have with her?
"What do you want?" Yusuke asked in a dangerous tone.
"Now now, no need to get defensive now. Koenma sent me." She said in the same hushed tone.
"What?!" Yusuke next to yelled. "You're working for Koenma?!"
"Bingo!"
Everyone jumped about ten feet as Boton popped up out of no where.
"Ah! Don't DO that!" Kuwabara said.
"Yeah Boton, ya tryin ta give me a heart attack or what?" The spirit detective yelled.
"Oh Yusuke you're so silly!" She giggled. "Yusuke I'd like you to meet-"
"Why don't we sit down Boton?" Kaneru suggested, glancing around. The whole tavern was looking at the group.
"Heh, heh, yes, that might be a good Idea. This way," Boton lead then to a privet room. "Now, as I was saying before, Every one, I'd like you to meet our double agent Kaneru!"
"Double agent?" Yusuke said skeptically.
"It would be more accurate to say an under cover agent. I'm working undercover for the people after your friend here," She nodded to Kurama and he stiffened. " But I really work for Koenma."
" Yeah, So who IS after him?" Yusuke said. "And why?"
Kaneru shook her head "I don't know that yet. There is tons of different levels of superiors, I don't know who is at the top. I'm trying to work myself there."
"Kaneru is going to help you guys out here and there on your mission." Boton added.
"And what exactly is our mission, anyway?"
"That's simple Yusuke," Kaneru said. "To find out who's at the top."
"I thought that's what you were doing?" Kuwabara gave his commentary.
"It's both our missions, in case one of us fails." She said in an almost Erie tone. "I'll help you, and you'll help me. No one knows about me yet, and that's how it has to stay. In other words, this never happened, I don't know you."
"What of the others you were with earlier?" Touya spoke for the first time.
Kaneru turned her attention to him. "They moved on by orders from their superiors. I'm higher up then them, so I have wider freedom range." she explained before turning to Boton. "That reminds me, Koenma wanted me to escort that Koorime girl to the next town?"
Boton nodded "Is that a problem?"
She nodded "I have to go into base, I can't take her."
Boton turned to the boys, "What do you say guys? Mind a tagalong?"
"What?! Why can't you take her!" Yusuke said
"Yusuke, I have a job to do to you know!"
"She can come."
They all stopped and looked at Hiei.
Yusuke crossed his arms "Oh yeah? Since when do you decide-"
"She's coming," the fire demon growled, sending him a glare that silenced him.
"Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook..... I Guess we're taking her..." Yusuke gave in.
"Perfect!" Kaneru said, clapping her hands. "Now, if you gentlemen excuse me, I have work to do." And with that she left.
" Well, I should be on my way also. I'll tell Yukina you'll be escorting her to Alton." Boton said, leaving the room.
"Great." Yusuke muttered, putting his hands behind his hands behind his head. "Hey Touya, did you get some rooms?"
The ice master nodded. "Four."
"Why only four? There are six of us." Kuwabara said, counting with his fingers.
Jin wore a wide grin as Touya spoke, "It was the last four left."
"K, so Touya and Jin, Kurama and Hiei, then Kuwabara and I get our own rooms?" Yusuke asked.
The fox blinked at his again automatic pairing with Hiei, but this time he only smiled. " Alright with you, Hiei?"
"It's fine with me fox." He answered. This caused Kurama's smile to grow a little more.
"Alright, that's settled." Yusuke said, walking from the room.
~^~
"I was sitting on a bar stool,
And I was eating a banana.
Then I started to choke
So this guy gave me the hymlic maneuver.
He ended up saving my life
So I gave him a gentlemen's groover
He said 'Gee thanks,
Me and the wife'll use this later'
I said ' That's to much in info'
He just laughed and went back to eating his hot dog.
So I finished my banana
And I payed the bartender.
But before I could go
The guy said 'Hey I'll catch ya later'
I just nodded and went out the door
Do do do do Do do do do Do do do do
Do do do do Do do do do Do do do do..." Kuwabara sang in his state of drunkenness.
A somewhat more sober Yusuke stared at him. "That's it, we're leavin him here."
"Fine with me!" Jin said happily.
Kurama sighed, shaking his head. "Well, I'm going to go to bed. Good night."
The others said their good nights and Kurama headed upstairs. Hiei had disappeared up the same stairs almost an hour before. Kurama guessed he did so in order to resist the urge to cut of Kuwabara's head.
The red head found the room Touya had gotten them and entered His friend lay on the bed, staring at the ceiling. "Hello Hiei." No answer "Hiei? Hiei!"
The demon jumped slightly "Oh, hi fox."
"Something wrong Hiei? It's not like you to be so zoned out." Kurama said, sitting beside him on the bed.
"Just thinking..." He said quietly.
"About what?"
There was a pause "None of your business baka kitsune," Hiei said as he rolled over.
"Oh," Kurama was surprised at how hurt he felt. It wasn't the first time Hiei had said that to him, but for some reason it stung this time. "Are we going to even bother fighting over who gets the bed?"
"It doesn't matter. I'll end up by you anyway," Kurama felt a blush creep onto his cheeks at his friends words and was glad the fire demon couldn't see. "When you start having your nightmares."
"Do I have them every night?" Kurama asked, face cooling. Hiei rolled back onto his back and nodded. "Sorry, I must be such a nascence to you."
Hiei tilted his head toward the fox. "I don't mind. Besides, I've been bugging you for years."
Kurama shook his head "No way Hiei. I've loved every minute of our friendship."
After that statement, a silence fell. After a few minutes, Kurama laid down beside his friend and prepared to fall asleep.
"Kurama,"
He opened his eyes to look at his friend. "Yes Hiei?"
"If...if it would help you sleep better, you could pretend I'm one of your fake animals."
Kurama smiled softly "You'd let me do that?"
He nodded. "You've done it before."
"I have?" He asked puzzled.
Hiei nodded again. "Once back when I was sick. And again the night before we came to the Makai." he said "I don't mind, if it helps you." he added.
Kurama's smile grew. He almost cautiously pulled the fire demon into his arms. "Thank you Hiei," he whispered, laying his head on the demon's chest and soon falling asleep.
Hiei wrapped his arms around Kurama protectively. "No fox, thank you." he whispered to his only friend. A thought floated through his mind before he drifted into sleep. Could this, right here and now, be what right felt like?
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YAY! My next chapie!! And... I'm 16! WEE!
Anyway, I knew I'd get a review or two wanting to know what DID happen in Jin and Touya's cave. Sorry to those who wanted it, it wasn't a lemon. If I ever get my second half have my side fic done (Which I'm a bit of writers block for) Maybe I'll write it out for the 3rd chapter of that. But it probably consisted of Jin tickle torturing Touya.
Thanks Like You Care for the idea for my Cool Aid fic! Once things settle down I'll get started on it ^-~
As always, Thanks so much to my reviewers! Unfortunately, Kuwabara is going to stay with us for another chapter or two, Cause I have something I need him for ^-~ (I'm winking alot today, arn't I?)
Thankies too:
Tatoosh
Lonely Wanderer - Yay! More hugs!
BlackFire4
Ciu Sune- Yay! Point objects down! ^-^
Like you care- Hope you're feeling better! Anime Girl8- lol, I'm not planning on having Karasu in this fic, But tell ya what, Send me a review w/ you beating him up and I'll post it in an A.N. ! KoorimeHiei- Any luck on e-mailing that episode? DragonBlade
Thanks for reading! ~Kioko
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Yu Yu Fic
Day 3- Day 4
"Yeah? Well sorry doesn't cut it missy!" Said the demon as he grab her arm. But before anything else could happen, someone grabbed his wrist.
"Hey, she said she was sorry let it go." Said a a girl with black eyes and black hair. " Besides, bumping into is nothing compared to what I'd do to you."
The demon let go of the girl. "Oh yeah Kaneru? I should slap ya just for stoppin me."
"Go ahead." Kaneru said. "Go ahead and show the whole place what a drunken idiot you are."
The demon growled but sat down.
"Exactly."
"Thank you very much Miss Kaneru," Said they girl.
"No problem."
Jin and Touya had returned, and Jin's eyes were wide. "Hey," He whispered "That's the girl dat was with them people back at the caves!"
That knocked Hiei out of his short lived daze. Kaneru on the other hand, saw Jin and smiled.
"If you'll excuse me for a moment," She said to the blue haired girl as she walked over to the boys. "So, I was correct. The spirit detective was up in those caves," She said, quiet enough so no one else in the tavern could hear.
Kurama's breath caught in his chest. What now? How many others did she have with her?
"What do you want?" Yusuke asked in a dangerous tone.
"Now now, no need to get defensive now. Koenma sent me." She said in the same hushed tone.
"What?!" Yusuke next to yelled. "You're working for Koenma?!"
"Bingo!"
Everyone jumped about ten feet as Boton popped up out of no where.
"Ah! Don't DO that!" Kuwabara said.
"Yeah Boton, ya tryin ta give me a heart attack or what?" The spirit detective yelled.
"Oh Yusuke you're so silly!" She giggled. "Yusuke I'd like you to meet-"
"Why don't we sit down Boton?" Kaneru suggested, glancing around. The whole tavern was looking at the group.
"Heh, heh, yes, that might be a good Idea. This way," Boton lead then to a privet room. "Now, as I was saying before, Every one, I'd like you to meet our double agent Kaneru!"
"Double agent?" Yusuke said skeptically.
"It would be more accurate to say an under cover agent. I'm working undercover for the people after your friend here," She nodded to Kurama and he stiffened. " But I really work for Koenma."
" Yeah, So who IS after him?" Yusuke said. "And why?"
Kaneru shook her head "I don't know that yet. There is tons of different levels of superiors, I don't know who is at the top. I'm trying to work myself there."
"Kaneru is going to help you guys out here and there on your mission." Boton added.
"And what exactly is our mission, anyway?"
"That's simple Yusuke," Kaneru said. "To find out who's at the top."
"I thought that's what you were doing?" Kuwabara gave his commentary.
"It's both our missions, in case one of us fails." She said in an almost Erie tone. "I'll help you, and you'll help me. No one knows about me yet, and that's how it has to stay. In other words, this never happened, I don't know you."
"What of the others you were with earlier?" Touya spoke for the first time.
Kaneru turned her attention to him. "They moved on by orders from their superiors. I'm higher up then them, so I have wider freedom range." she explained before turning to Boton. "That reminds me, Koenma wanted me to escort that Koorime girl to the next town?"
Boton nodded "Is that a problem?"
She nodded "I have to go into base, I can't take her."
Boton turned to the boys, "What do you say guys? Mind a tagalong?"
"What?! Why can't you take her!" Yusuke said
"Yusuke, I have a job to do to you know!"
"She can come."
They all stopped and looked at Hiei.
Yusuke crossed his arms "Oh yeah? Since when do you decide-"
"She's coming," the fire demon growled, sending him a glare that silenced him.
"Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook..... I Guess we're taking her..." Yusuke gave in.
"Perfect!" Kaneru said, clapping her hands. "Now, if you gentlemen excuse me, I have work to do." And with that she left.
" Well, I should be on my way also. I'll tell Yukina you'll be escorting her to Alton." Boton said, leaving the room.
"Great." Yusuke muttered, putting his hands behind his hands behind his head. "Hey Touya, did you get some rooms?"
The ice master nodded. "Four."
"Why only four? There are six of us." Kuwabara said, counting with his fingers.
Jin wore a wide grin as Touya spoke, "It was the last four left."
"K, so Touya and Jin, Kurama and Hiei, then Kuwabara and I get our own rooms?" Yusuke asked.
The fox blinked at his again automatic pairing with Hiei, but this time he only smiled. " Alright with you, Hiei?"
"It's fine with me fox." He answered. This caused Kurama's smile to grow a little more.
"Alright, that's settled." Yusuke said, walking from the room.
~^~
"I was sitting on a bar stool,
And I was eating a banana.
Then I started to choke
So this guy gave me the hymlic maneuver.
He ended up saving my life
So I gave him a gentlemen's groover
He said 'Gee thanks,
Me and the wife'll use this later'
I said ' That's to much in info'
He just laughed and went back to eating his hot dog.
So I finished my banana
And I payed the bartender.
But before I could go
The guy said 'Hey I'll catch ya later'
I just nodded and went out the door
Do do do do Do do do do Do do do do
Do do do do Do do do do Do do do do..." Kuwabara sang in his state of drunkenness.
A somewhat more sober Yusuke stared at him. "That's it, we're leavin him here."
"Fine with me!" Jin said happily.
Kurama sighed, shaking his head. "Well, I'm going to go to bed. Good night."
The others said their good nights and Kurama headed upstairs. Hiei had disappeared up the same stairs almost an hour before. Kurama guessed he did so in order to resist the urge to cut of Kuwabara's head.
The red head found the room Touya had gotten them and entered His friend lay on the bed, staring at the ceiling. "Hello Hiei." No answer "Hiei? Hiei!"
The demon jumped slightly "Oh, hi fox."
"Something wrong Hiei? It's not like you to be so zoned out." Kurama said, sitting beside him on the bed.
"Just thinking..." He said quietly.
"About what?"
There was a pause "None of your business baka kitsune," Hiei said as he rolled over.
"Oh," Kurama was surprised at how hurt he felt. It wasn't the first time Hiei had said that to him, but for some reason it stung this time. "Are we going to even bother fighting over who gets the bed?"
"It doesn't matter. I'll end up by you anyway," Kurama felt a blush creep onto his cheeks at his friends words and was glad the fire demon couldn't see. "When you start having your nightmares."
"Do I have them every night?" Kurama asked, face cooling. Hiei rolled back onto his back and nodded. "Sorry, I must be such a nascence to you."
Hiei tilted his head toward the fox. "I don't mind. Besides, I've been bugging you for years."
Kurama shook his head "No way Hiei. I've loved every minute of our friendship."
After that statement, a silence fell. After a few minutes, Kurama laid down beside his friend and prepared to fall asleep.
"Kurama,"
He opened his eyes to look at his friend. "Yes Hiei?"
"If...if it would help you sleep better, you could pretend I'm one of your fake animals."
Kurama smiled softly "You'd let me do that?"
He nodded. "You've done it before."
"I have?" He asked puzzled.
Hiei nodded again. "Once back when I was sick. And again the night before we came to the Makai." he said "I don't mind, if it helps you." he added.
Kurama's smile grew. He almost cautiously pulled the fire demon into his arms. "Thank you Hiei," he whispered, laying his head on the demon's chest and soon falling asleep.
Hiei wrapped his arms around Kurama protectively. "No fox, thank you." he whispered to his only friend. A thought floated through his mind before he drifted into sleep. Could this, right here and now, be what right felt like?
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YAY! My next chapie!! And... I'm 16! WEE!
Anyway, I knew I'd get a review or two wanting to know what DID happen in Jin and Touya's cave. Sorry to those who wanted it, it wasn't a lemon. If I ever get my second half have my side fic done (Which I'm a bit of writers block for) Maybe I'll write it out for the 3rd chapter of that. But it probably consisted of Jin tickle torturing Touya.
Thanks Like You Care for the idea for my Cool Aid fic! Once things settle down I'll get started on it ^-~
As always, Thanks so much to my reviewers! Unfortunately, Kuwabara is going to stay with us for another chapter or two, Cause I have something I need him for ^-~ (I'm winking alot today, arn't I?)
Thankies too:
Tatoosh
Lonely Wanderer - Yay! More hugs!
BlackFire4
Ciu Sune- Yay! Point objects down! ^-^
Like you care- Hope you're feeling better! Anime Girl8- lol, I'm not planning on having Karasu in this fic, But tell ya what, Send me a review w/ you beating him up and I'll post it in an A.N. ! KoorimeHiei- Any luck on e-mailing that episode? DragonBlade
Thanks for reading! ~Kioko