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Karasu bashing done by Anime Girl8!
YAY! *turns and points at Karasu* You're all mine you stupid crow! *a mallet magically appears in her hands*
Karasu- You can't hurt me. Kurama is mine! MWHAhAHAHA!
Ag- No he's not! I get to glomp him every Monday from 2-3. Then I give him to another otaku.
K- He's mine!
Ag- Mine!
Kurama- * standing off to the side* Don't I get a say in this?
K and Ag- NO! *go back to glaring*
Kurama- Fine... I'll just tend to my garden. *leaves*
*Ag charges at Karasu and swings mallet. Karasu dodges*
Ag- Gr. *light bulb* I'll slow you down. *a blade on a chain (ya know, like Kohaku's from Inuyasha/ Anubis/shuten's weapon from Ronin Warriors)
appears and Ag throws it at Karasu who gets caught.*
Karasu- WHAT?!
Ag- MWHAHAHA! Die you evil crow! *starts whacking him repeatedly with the mallet*
~6 hours later~
Ag- Take that, and that, and that...
Karasu- @_@
Yusuke- Should we stop this? I mean... she's been hitting him for 6 hours straight.
Kurama- I don't think we should ruin her fun.
Kuwabara- *he got bored of watching and started drawing* And there will be flowers over here... Yukina will have this kind of dress...(you get the idea)
Hiei- I don't understand why she doesn't use a sword to kill him.
Kurama- Hiei, she's only 16. She's not allowed to carry around a sword.
Yu- Spoke to soon. *points at Ag who has a sword and is cutting "AG was here" on Karasu's chest.*
Karasu- @_@
Ag- ^_^ *skips away happily*
Yu- YOu should have never let her beat him up. Now how will other authors use him?
Kurama- I don't mind his absence.
There you Go! ^-^ As for the rest of your review, This isn't after the Dark tournament, the tournament doesn't happen in this and probably won't because it won't fit into my story line. Maybe a sequel. ^-~. So your guess was wrong, sorry. I haven't even seen the end of the DT. :( And As I said before, It's not going to be your normal bad-guy-taunting-Kurama-character- Karasu. Can anyone guess who it is? If you guys can I'll come up with something to reward you, maybe I'll add you to the story? ::shrug::
Man this Beginning author note is long. Oh well. Here's the story!!
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Yu Yu Fic
Day 6 (yes, we skipped a couple days)
"Kaneru! You have some explaining to do!" Spoke a voice. "Atikins is dead by your hand. I would like to know why."
"I apologize Master Haiiro. I discovered that Atikins was actually working as a spy for Koenma. I took it upon myself to dispose of him before he could leak out any of your secrets." Spoke a bowed Kaneru.
Haiiro smiled, his red eyes glinting. "Interesting. I received a report that you were seen at the tavern with the Spirit Detective."
"I've been able to take Atikins place. They believe I am the insider. And I can get information from them as well. In order for me to stay in there good favor though, Sire, a few sacrifices must be made."
A smirk drew on Haiiro's thin lips. "Understood. Good work Kaneru. I shall have the fox at his full strength. Carry on."
Kaneru bowed her head before standing and leaving.
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Kurama slowly opened his eyes and were met with large blue ones. "Ah!" He cried, jumping. Hiei, who was laying beside him was also startled awake. He growled softly, seeing it was the wind master that had awoken his friend.
Jin grinned "Rise and shine you two!" He said happily, floating away. The flying demon was increasingly getting bored with their little quest. The more bored he got, the more annoying he became. Especially to Hiei.
"I would have woken up just fine on my own Jin, thank you." Kurama said more then slightly annoyed. The red head demon didn't hear him though as he was poking a snoring Kuwabara with his foot.
Touya shook his head. " You're going to get your self in trouble Jin."
The sleeping oaf grunted and rolled over. Yukina giggled.
"Thank you again for taking me to Alton." She said to Yusuke.
The boy shrugged "Not like we got anything better to do apparently."
Kurama glanced over at Hiei who was staring at Yukina. He felt a pang of...jealousy? No, why would he be jealous?
"So why are you going to Alton anyway?" Yusuke asked, laughing as Jin finally woke Kuwabara up and he was screaming like a banshee.
"Actually," Yukina giggled. "I'm looking for my brother."
Hiei's eyes widened and he looked at the ground.
"Are you alright Hiei?" Kurama asked. The demon was being weird even for him.
"I'm fine fox." He answered, standing and walking to the other side of camp.
"Your brother huh? What's he look like?"
"I... don't really know. I've never met him before."
"So you're looking for a brother you've never met?" Kuwabara scratched his head.
"That's what she said dimwit."
"Shut up Urameshi!"
"Hiei," Kurama asked, following his friend. "What's wrong?"
"None of your business Kurama." He said with his back to him. Kurama frowned, gabbing his shoulder and turning him around.
"You're wrong Hiei. It is my business. You're my friend and my family, remember? If something is bothering you or something is wrong it is my business." He said sternly. "Come on Hiei, you always talk to me."
"Not about everything fox," He whispered, eyes on the ground.
The red head squatted and lifted up the demons chin, forcing him to look at him. "What's wrong Hiei? Tell me, please. Maybe I can help somehow."
"I doubt it," Hiei said, trying to pull away, but Kurama wouldn't let him.
"Try me Hiei."
"Don't worry Yukina!" Kuwabara said loudly, puffing out his chest. "We'll Help you find him!"
"I.... I'm a forbidden child Kurama." Hiei said quietly.
"What?"
"I'm the forbidden child of the Koorime. A Koorime had twins with a fire demon. one was a full Koorime, and the other was me. A forbidden child. They threw me from their land and left me to fend for myself. I'm unwanted Kurama." Hiei explained.
"You oaf! We have a job to do already!" Yusuke said. But Kuwabara was parading around the camp site idiotically. He was just now passing behind Hiei and Kurama.
"I'm the brother she's looking for." Hiei finished.
Kuwabara halted and his eyes bugged out "YOUR YUKINA'S BROTHER?!"
The fire demon whirled around, ready to chop his head off when he heard a small gasp.
"Hiei?" Yukina asked.
He turned and locked fearful eyes with her. Then, in a blur, he was gone.
"Hiei! Hiei wait! Don't leave!" Kurama yelled, standing. He shoved Kuwabara out of the way and ran into the forest after him.
"Kurama! Don't go running off by your self!" Yusuke yelled, running after him.
"Oops," Kuwabara said dully.
"Well, that was interesting." Touya said softly. Jin nodded, wide eyed.
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AN: This chapter is so short it's not even funny I know. And I know it took for eve to get out but I've hit a bump of writers block plus I've been really busy. 10th grade stinks. But anyway, sorry. I'll try to make the next one longer, it hopefully should be. ok, I'll go get started with that, while you send in you're reviews ^-^ or flames depending on how mad you are at me x.x. But thanks for reading anyway!
::Waves hi to Ciu Sune's Muse:: Hey, muses are pretty cool, maybe I should get one, it might help keep me on track. What do you guys think?
Gratitude too:
Lonely Wanderer - Yay! More hugs!
Tatoosh- ^-^
Baka Gothic Kitsune- wh00t! ? thats a new one. cools. And Pleasepleaseplease add to you ficcy! Pretty pretty please?
BlackFire4-Tankies! Glad you like it! ^-^
Mr. Me - Wow... My fic might really change your mind about Hiei/Kurama pairing? Wow... I feel honor or something! I guess I btter make it good then, huh?
Like you care- I Hope you keep danceing after this one is so short...
Ciu Sune - ::is hoping she won't have to dodge pointy objects:: I like your muse btw!
momo- takes for the attack info! I can use all I can get ^-^ keep it comin!
Anime Girl8 - YAY! Karasu gots beat up!
Enchanting Yopu - ^-^ Hope shit looks up for you Yopu!
~Kioko
YAY! *turns and points at Karasu* You're all mine you stupid crow! *a mallet magically appears in her hands*
Karasu- You can't hurt me. Kurama is mine! MWHAhAHAHA!
Ag- No he's not! I get to glomp him every Monday from 2-3. Then I give him to another otaku.
K- He's mine!
Ag- Mine!
Kurama- * standing off to the side* Don't I get a say in this?
K and Ag- NO! *go back to glaring*
Kurama- Fine... I'll just tend to my garden. *leaves*
*Ag charges at Karasu and swings mallet. Karasu dodges*
Ag- Gr. *light bulb* I'll slow you down. *a blade on a chain (ya know, like Kohaku's from Inuyasha/ Anubis/shuten's weapon from Ronin Warriors)
appears and Ag throws it at Karasu who gets caught.*
Karasu- WHAT?!
Ag- MWHAHAHA! Die you evil crow! *starts whacking him repeatedly with the mallet*
~6 hours later~
Ag- Take that, and that, and that...
Karasu- @_@
Yusuke- Should we stop this? I mean... she's been hitting him for 6 hours straight.
Kurama- I don't think we should ruin her fun.
Kuwabara- *he got bored of watching and started drawing* And there will be flowers over here... Yukina will have this kind of dress...(you get the idea)
Hiei- I don't understand why she doesn't use a sword to kill him.
Kurama- Hiei, she's only 16. She's not allowed to carry around a sword.
Yu- Spoke to soon. *points at Ag who has a sword and is cutting "AG was here" on Karasu's chest.*
Karasu- @_@
Ag- ^_^ *skips away happily*
Yu- YOu should have never let her beat him up. Now how will other authors use him?
Kurama- I don't mind his absence.
There you Go! ^-^ As for the rest of your review, This isn't after the Dark tournament, the tournament doesn't happen in this and probably won't because it won't fit into my story line. Maybe a sequel. ^-~. So your guess was wrong, sorry. I haven't even seen the end of the DT. :( And As I said before, It's not going to be your normal bad-guy-taunting-Kurama-character- Karasu. Can anyone guess who it is? If you guys can I'll come up with something to reward you, maybe I'll add you to the story? ::shrug::
Man this Beginning author note is long. Oh well. Here's the story!!
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Yu Yu Fic
Day 6 (yes, we skipped a couple days)
"Kaneru! You have some explaining to do!" Spoke a voice. "Atikins is dead by your hand. I would like to know why."
"I apologize Master Haiiro. I discovered that Atikins was actually working as a spy for Koenma. I took it upon myself to dispose of him before he could leak out any of your secrets." Spoke a bowed Kaneru.
Haiiro smiled, his red eyes glinting. "Interesting. I received a report that you were seen at the tavern with the Spirit Detective."
"I've been able to take Atikins place. They believe I am the insider. And I can get information from them as well. In order for me to stay in there good favor though, Sire, a few sacrifices must be made."
A smirk drew on Haiiro's thin lips. "Understood. Good work Kaneru. I shall have the fox at his full strength. Carry on."
Kaneru bowed her head before standing and leaving.
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Kurama slowly opened his eyes and were met with large blue ones. "Ah!" He cried, jumping. Hiei, who was laying beside him was also startled awake. He growled softly, seeing it was the wind master that had awoken his friend.
Jin grinned "Rise and shine you two!" He said happily, floating away. The flying demon was increasingly getting bored with their little quest. The more bored he got, the more annoying he became. Especially to Hiei.
"I would have woken up just fine on my own Jin, thank you." Kurama said more then slightly annoyed. The red head demon didn't hear him though as he was poking a snoring Kuwabara with his foot.
Touya shook his head. " You're going to get your self in trouble Jin."
The sleeping oaf grunted and rolled over. Yukina giggled.
"Thank you again for taking me to Alton." She said to Yusuke.
The boy shrugged "Not like we got anything better to do apparently."
Kurama glanced over at Hiei who was staring at Yukina. He felt a pang of...jealousy? No, why would he be jealous?
"So why are you going to Alton anyway?" Yusuke asked, laughing as Jin finally woke Kuwabara up and he was screaming like a banshee.
"Actually," Yukina giggled. "I'm looking for my brother."
Hiei's eyes widened and he looked at the ground.
"Are you alright Hiei?" Kurama asked. The demon was being weird even for him.
"I'm fine fox." He answered, standing and walking to the other side of camp.
"Your brother huh? What's he look like?"
"I... don't really know. I've never met him before."
"So you're looking for a brother you've never met?" Kuwabara scratched his head.
"That's what she said dimwit."
"Shut up Urameshi!"
"Hiei," Kurama asked, following his friend. "What's wrong?"
"None of your business Kurama." He said with his back to him. Kurama frowned, gabbing his shoulder and turning him around.
"You're wrong Hiei. It is my business. You're my friend and my family, remember? If something is bothering you or something is wrong it is my business." He said sternly. "Come on Hiei, you always talk to me."
"Not about everything fox," He whispered, eyes on the ground.
The red head squatted and lifted up the demons chin, forcing him to look at him. "What's wrong Hiei? Tell me, please. Maybe I can help somehow."
"I doubt it," Hiei said, trying to pull away, but Kurama wouldn't let him.
"Try me Hiei."
"Don't worry Yukina!" Kuwabara said loudly, puffing out his chest. "We'll Help you find him!"
"I.... I'm a forbidden child Kurama." Hiei said quietly.
"What?"
"I'm the forbidden child of the Koorime. A Koorime had twins with a fire demon. one was a full Koorime, and the other was me. A forbidden child. They threw me from their land and left me to fend for myself. I'm unwanted Kurama." Hiei explained.
"You oaf! We have a job to do already!" Yusuke said. But Kuwabara was parading around the camp site idiotically. He was just now passing behind Hiei and Kurama.
"I'm the brother she's looking for." Hiei finished.
Kuwabara halted and his eyes bugged out "YOUR YUKINA'S BROTHER?!"
The fire demon whirled around, ready to chop his head off when he heard a small gasp.
"Hiei?" Yukina asked.
He turned and locked fearful eyes with her. Then, in a blur, he was gone.
"Hiei! Hiei wait! Don't leave!" Kurama yelled, standing. He shoved Kuwabara out of the way and ran into the forest after him.
"Kurama! Don't go running off by your self!" Yusuke yelled, running after him.
"Oops," Kuwabara said dully.
"Well, that was interesting." Touya said softly. Jin nodded, wide eyed.
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AN: This chapter is so short it's not even funny I know. And I know it took for eve to get out but I've hit a bump of writers block plus I've been really busy. 10th grade stinks. But anyway, sorry. I'll try to make the next one longer, it hopefully should be. ok, I'll go get started with that, while you send in you're reviews ^-^ or flames depending on how mad you are at me x.x. But thanks for reading anyway!
::Waves hi to Ciu Sune's Muse:: Hey, muses are pretty cool, maybe I should get one, it might help keep me on track. What do you guys think?
Gratitude too:
Lonely Wanderer - Yay! More hugs!
Tatoosh- ^-^
Baka Gothic Kitsune- wh00t! ? thats a new one. cools. And Pleasepleaseplease add to you ficcy! Pretty pretty please?
BlackFire4-Tankies! Glad you like it! ^-^
Mr. Me - Wow... My fic might really change your mind about Hiei/Kurama pairing? Wow... I feel honor or something! I guess I btter make it good then, huh?
Like you care- I Hope you keep danceing after this one is so short...
Ciu Sune - ::is hoping she won't have to dodge pointy objects:: I like your muse btw!
momo- takes for the attack info! I can use all I can get ^-^ keep it comin!
Anime Girl8 - YAY! Karasu gots beat up!
Enchanting Yopu - ^-^ Hope shit looks up for you Yopu!
~Kioko