I know what your thinking. YAY! She updated really fast! Don't get your
hopes to high, this one is really short. Don't worry, The next one should
be out soon. I don't think there will be more then 6 more chapters of this
fic, so we're nearing the climax people! WEE!
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Yu Yu Fic
Day 12
Falling, falling, falling. It seemed like he would fall forever. He couldn't tell if the blackness around him was death or from his eyes being closed. Surly he would hit the ground soon, and then it would all be over...
"Hiei! Hiei boy! Wake up!" Called a voice, tired from many, many years of use. "Wake up boy!"
Sleepy red eyes opened, looking at the old man. "Waz going on, Dokae?" The small fire demon murmured. Dokae was the white haired leader of the bandits that had take the red eyed demon in.
"We're under attack. You gotta get out of here."
More awake now, the boy stood. "No. I'll stay and fight."
"No. You are not experienced enough to take these fighters. You need to get out of here."
"No! I won't run away!" The boy said.
Before the old man could argue, an ugly green lizard type demon came through the bushes. "Well, well, well, what are you hiding from us Dokae?"
The old man stood in front of the boy. "Leave! Now!" Dokae commanded.
"Yeah, like that's going to happen." The demon said, approaching him. Fratato was suddenly thrown back through the bushes by a sphere of energy as white as Dokae's hair.
The old man turned and drew a circle in the air, making a portal. "Go! Live!" Dokae said, picking the small fire demon up and throwing him through.
Red eye's widened. He knew this part. This is where the fear and panic came. Only the second time he had felt those emotions in his life. But soon it would be ok. The feelings would vanish once he met...
"Hiei? Hiei! Are you alright?" A smooth voice, littered with worry called for the red eyes to open.
"Kit..sune?" He asked groggily.
Kurama smiled "Yes, it's me Hiei. How are you feeling?"
The fire demon groaned softly, sitting up. "What happened?"
The red head bit his lip. "You passed out, from loss of blood I guess. This time... it was you having a nightmare Hiei."
Hiei stared at the fox for a moment. Kurama was the one that made those feelings leave. Yet, the thought of anything happening to him caused those feelings. He finally realized Kurama was staring at him also. "What?"
"Thanks... for taking the back blow for me," He said softly. The demon only shrugged. "It's not nothing Hiei," Kurama said, reading the shrug. "You let yourself get hurt for me!"
"I'm fine, baka kitsune. Like I said before."
"That's why you passed out, right?"
Hiei shrugged again and reached back, ripping the bandage off. There was nothing but light scar. "See? I'm fine."
Kurama blinked for a moment "You were still hurt last night. And you were injured protecting me. Hiei, I shouldn't have had so much trouble in that battle. No matter how long it's been since I've fought. Something's wrong, I was holding back somehow."
"That's simple fox." Hiei said. Kurama looked at him puzzled. "You don't want to fight. You've never wanted to fight."
Green eyes widened slightly before lowering. "But I have to fight." He said softly.
"That doesn't change the fact that you don't want to fight." He said.
Kurama looked up at him, determination in his eyes. "Will you help me, Hiei? Help me unlock whatever I'm holding back?"
Red eyes locked with green and Hiei nodded. "Thanks, my friend." Kurama said softly.
"Hey Hiei. Ya finally woke up, huh?" Yusuke greeted.
The demon just nodded. "Where are we going now?"
"No idea. The damn communication device isn't working so I can't get a hold of Koenma." The spirit detective said.
"Exactly why he sent me!" A blue haired ferry girl popped out of no where.
"AH! Geez Botan! You ARE trying to give me a heart attack!" Yusuke exclaimed.
"Nonsense Yusuke." Botan said cheerfully. "Koenma told me to tell you to just hang out here until he get in contact with Kuneru and then he'll contact you!"
"So till then, we're just sitting here waiting for those idiots to find us huh? Wonderful." Yusuke said, crossing his arms.
"I'm just telling you what he told me Yusuke. Don't shoot the messenger!" With that she flew off.
"Great, just great. Aren't Jin and Touya back yet?!"
"Where did they go, Yusuke?" Kurama asked, slightly amused.
"To get some food and fire wood."
"They probably won't be back for a while." Hiei said, putting on his now clean shirt.
Kurama blinked, watching him.
"Geez, I'm stuck in the Makai with two couples," Yusuke grumbled soft enough so no one could hear.
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"Yeah, It's short but I want to skip a few days and so I want to start a new chapter. I also have a complaint. WHAT DOES FF.NET MEAN YOU CAN'T USE THE CHAPTER SYSTEM FOR AUTHOR NOTES?! Sometimes You have a message for your readers with out having a chapter done! That is so stupid! P ok, that's enough of my rant.
Tankies for reading!!!
Special thanks to:
The New Girl - TY TNG!!
Hieica- No! Please not the pickle! ::cowers and dodges cucumbers:: Well, I guess your threat worked cause I updated! ^-^
Animegirl8-lol Um... sorry, I doubt Kurama will end up in a dress in this fic, but that's an Idea for my second chapter of Cool-aid and Ice Masters Don't Mix....
Ciu Sune - My Idea for all your extra pain inflicting devices: Write a fanfic with Reisho being the bad guy and have the gang but them to use! I'd read it!! As for Kaneru, Dats part of the plot! I can't tell you! U'll have to read and find out!! But do you have any ideas on what Kaneru's sister could have supposedly done to land herself a 600yr prison sentence? I was thinking she stole Koenma's cookie but I don't think that'd work...::has had to many gummy bears:: Any way, Only the extra special and extra cool ppls got thanked twice! ^-^ wow, your lil review response thingy was really long 0.o
Amethyst Bubble-Hi! Thanks for reading! Maybe I'll bring the kid back so Hiei can beat him up, how bout that? and thanks for the compliments ^-^ they're appreciated.
kantomon- ^-^ thanks for your wonderful comments! Feel free to e-mail me, I love to get them, but good luck on weaseling info about the plot out of me ^-~ and actually, Hieica was throwing cucumbers at me,,, I'll try to add more JT if I can find good spots. The side fic is about them, but it's on hold right now. I just don't want to go to far off subject with them. I hope you keep reading and sending me you thoughts!!
Majesty Morrigan- Thanks for reading Maj! I know your not to into guy/guy stuff, and if your talking about cussing in this fic, it's just cause it fits the charie and the time.
mars explorer- Thanks! I hope this fic lives up to the personal title you've given it! And thanks for the attack name! ^-^
Baka Gothic Kitsune- YAY! I get special VIP Viewings!! lol I haven't gotten a chance to finish reading it yet, but I'll E-mail you my comments. No, I've never noticed that about Kurama b4. but now that I think about it, that is true, he almost always gets injured on the stomach!
TheWriter1000-The review you sent in was for the side fic, but you said you were reading this one to so I added you to this thank you note, since Sid Fic is going to take awhile. thanks for reading!
~Kioko
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Yu Yu Fic
Day 12
Falling, falling, falling. It seemed like he would fall forever. He couldn't tell if the blackness around him was death or from his eyes being closed. Surly he would hit the ground soon, and then it would all be over...
"Hiei! Hiei boy! Wake up!" Called a voice, tired from many, many years of use. "Wake up boy!"
Sleepy red eyes opened, looking at the old man. "Waz going on, Dokae?" The small fire demon murmured. Dokae was the white haired leader of the bandits that had take the red eyed demon in.
"We're under attack. You gotta get out of here."
More awake now, the boy stood. "No. I'll stay and fight."
"No. You are not experienced enough to take these fighters. You need to get out of here."
"No! I won't run away!" The boy said.
Before the old man could argue, an ugly green lizard type demon came through the bushes. "Well, well, well, what are you hiding from us Dokae?"
The old man stood in front of the boy. "Leave! Now!" Dokae commanded.
"Yeah, like that's going to happen." The demon said, approaching him. Fratato was suddenly thrown back through the bushes by a sphere of energy as white as Dokae's hair.
The old man turned and drew a circle in the air, making a portal. "Go! Live!" Dokae said, picking the small fire demon up and throwing him through.
Red eye's widened. He knew this part. This is where the fear and panic came. Only the second time he had felt those emotions in his life. But soon it would be ok. The feelings would vanish once he met...
"Hiei? Hiei! Are you alright?" A smooth voice, littered with worry called for the red eyes to open.
"Kit..sune?" He asked groggily.
Kurama smiled "Yes, it's me Hiei. How are you feeling?"
The fire demon groaned softly, sitting up. "What happened?"
The red head bit his lip. "You passed out, from loss of blood I guess. This time... it was you having a nightmare Hiei."
Hiei stared at the fox for a moment. Kurama was the one that made those feelings leave. Yet, the thought of anything happening to him caused those feelings. He finally realized Kurama was staring at him also. "What?"
"Thanks... for taking the back blow for me," He said softly. The demon only shrugged. "It's not nothing Hiei," Kurama said, reading the shrug. "You let yourself get hurt for me!"
"I'm fine, baka kitsune. Like I said before."
"That's why you passed out, right?"
Hiei shrugged again and reached back, ripping the bandage off. There was nothing but light scar. "See? I'm fine."
Kurama blinked for a moment "You were still hurt last night. And you were injured protecting me. Hiei, I shouldn't have had so much trouble in that battle. No matter how long it's been since I've fought. Something's wrong, I was holding back somehow."
"That's simple fox." Hiei said. Kurama looked at him puzzled. "You don't want to fight. You've never wanted to fight."
Green eyes widened slightly before lowering. "But I have to fight." He said softly.
"That doesn't change the fact that you don't want to fight." He said.
Kurama looked up at him, determination in his eyes. "Will you help me, Hiei? Help me unlock whatever I'm holding back?"
Red eyes locked with green and Hiei nodded. "Thanks, my friend." Kurama said softly.
"Hey Hiei. Ya finally woke up, huh?" Yusuke greeted.
The demon just nodded. "Where are we going now?"
"No idea. The damn communication device isn't working so I can't get a hold of Koenma." The spirit detective said.
"Exactly why he sent me!" A blue haired ferry girl popped out of no where.
"AH! Geez Botan! You ARE trying to give me a heart attack!" Yusuke exclaimed.
"Nonsense Yusuke." Botan said cheerfully. "Koenma told me to tell you to just hang out here until he get in contact with Kuneru and then he'll contact you!"
"So till then, we're just sitting here waiting for those idiots to find us huh? Wonderful." Yusuke said, crossing his arms.
"I'm just telling you what he told me Yusuke. Don't shoot the messenger!" With that she flew off.
"Great, just great. Aren't Jin and Touya back yet?!"
"Where did they go, Yusuke?" Kurama asked, slightly amused.
"To get some food and fire wood."
"They probably won't be back for a while." Hiei said, putting on his now clean shirt.
Kurama blinked, watching him.
"Geez, I'm stuck in the Makai with two couples," Yusuke grumbled soft enough so no one could hear.
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"Yeah, It's short but I want to skip a few days and so I want to start a new chapter. I also have a complaint. WHAT DOES FF.NET MEAN YOU CAN'T USE THE CHAPTER SYSTEM FOR AUTHOR NOTES?! Sometimes You have a message for your readers with out having a chapter done! That is so stupid! P ok, that's enough of my rant.
Tankies for reading!!!
Special thanks to:
The New Girl - TY TNG!!
Hieica- No! Please not the pickle! ::cowers and dodges cucumbers:: Well, I guess your threat worked cause I updated! ^-^
Animegirl8-lol Um... sorry, I doubt Kurama will end up in a dress in this fic, but that's an Idea for my second chapter of Cool-aid and Ice Masters Don't Mix....
Ciu Sune - My Idea for all your extra pain inflicting devices: Write a fanfic with Reisho being the bad guy and have the gang but them to use! I'd read it!! As for Kaneru, Dats part of the plot! I can't tell you! U'll have to read and find out!! But do you have any ideas on what Kaneru's sister could have supposedly done to land herself a 600yr prison sentence? I was thinking she stole Koenma's cookie but I don't think that'd work...::has had to many gummy bears:: Any way, Only the extra special and extra cool ppls got thanked twice! ^-^ wow, your lil review response thingy was really long 0.o
Amethyst Bubble-Hi! Thanks for reading! Maybe I'll bring the kid back so Hiei can beat him up, how bout that? and thanks for the compliments ^-^ they're appreciated.
kantomon- ^-^ thanks for your wonderful comments! Feel free to e-mail me, I love to get them, but good luck on weaseling info about the plot out of me ^-~ and actually, Hieica was throwing cucumbers at me,,, I'll try to add more JT if I can find good spots. The side fic is about them, but it's on hold right now. I just don't want to go to far off subject with them. I hope you keep reading and sending me you thoughts!!
Majesty Morrigan- Thanks for reading Maj! I know your not to into guy/guy stuff, and if your talking about cussing in this fic, it's just cause it fits the charie and the time.
mars explorer- Thanks! I hope this fic lives up to the personal title you've given it! And thanks for the attack name! ^-^
Baka Gothic Kitsune- YAY! I get special VIP Viewings!! lol I haven't gotten a chance to finish reading it yet, but I'll E-mail you my comments. No, I've never noticed that about Kurama b4. but now that I think about it, that is true, he almost always gets injured on the stomach!
TheWriter1000-The review you sent in was for the side fic, but you said you were reading this one to so I added you to this thank you note, since Sid Fic is going to take awhile. thanks for reading!
~Kioko