Disclaimer: All characters are owned by Universal Studios, except for
Eleanor/Elly, which is mine. No money has been made, and will not be made
from this fiction.
Author Note: this is the long awaited sequel to 'Love starts with a Yellow Skyline'. Please, for your own benefit read that fiction first, otherwise, you'll be so confused!
Feedback: Yes Please!!
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Sins and Sin City - Chapter One - Woman's Touch
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Elly let out a nervous laugh. Chapel? Marriage? Leon? All these words and mental pictures swirled around in her pretty head.
"You....we-but-I...." Elly tried to speak, but with so many different thoughts, she didn't know what exactly it was she wanted to say. They had only been going out for 5 months. Without a doubt, it was the best 5 months of her life, but marriage? That was such a strong commitment.
Leon furrowed his brows.
"You don't wanna -"
"Leon!" Vince cut him off.
"What?!" Leon snapped back.
"Are we going to sleep out here, or go check in?" Leon sighed and grabbed the bags from the trunk. They headed into the lobby, and got 3 rooms. Mia and Vince got a room with a double bed, as did Leon and Elly, and they booked a room with two double beds for Letty and Jesse, when they came back. They headed up to their rooms, which were all next to each other, on the 6th floor.
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Vince was having a hard time with the key-card lock on the door. After 4 attempts, he decided to just knock the door down.
"Vince, no!" Mia scorned. She took the key-card, inserted it, and the red light turned green, with a soft
'Bing!' noise, and the release mechanism on the lock. She turned the knob, and gently pushed the door open.
"Woman's touch." She smiled, grabbing a bag and heading inside.
"Woman's touch!" Vince mocked, he too grabbed a bag, and shut the door.
"Man, it smells rusty in here!" Vince sniffed, the folded his arms and leaned against the bathroom door frame. He turned slightly, and reached out his arm to turn the light on. Nothing.
"And the light don't work."
Mia flopped down on one side of the bed, her slightly exposed back itching from the horrible hotel duvet. She turned over, and started scanning through a brochure.
"Vince, aren't you happy with anything in here?" she said sarcastically. He smirked, pushed himself off the doorframe, licked his lips, and made his way to the edge of their bed. Climbing up slowly onto the bed, on all fours, he lowered his head down and kissed Mia's exposed stomach.
"There's one thing I ain't complaining about..."
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Leon managed to open the door the first time with the key-card. Elly walked inside first, dumping the bag at the bottom of the bed, then headed into the bathroom to check out the freebies.
"Wow! Shampoo and conditioner!" she exclaimed, lifting the small bottles up with wide eyes. Leon shut the door, dumped the bag, and laughed at her remark. It was warm in their room, so he opened the large window as far as it would go. He leaned on the windowsill with his hands, and leaned further out to see the beautiful flashing neon signs around him. This was a beautiful city. Elly clicked off the bathroom light, and went up behind Leon and snaked her arms round his warm torso. She nuzzled into his neck. He smiled and turned round, meeting her passionate soft lips. Elly pulled back.
"Leon, I love you." She said.
"I love you too, babe." He said before picking up where they left off, moments earlier. She responded eagerly, and he pulled her closer to him, grabbing her ass. She threw her hips forward, and felt his arousal through both their jeans. She pulled away quickly.
"Leon..." she began, looking down at his chest.
"What's wrong?" he asked, full of concern. She looked up into his incredible sparkling green eyes.
"Leon, I love you so much, but I'm not ready for marriage." She said slowly, trying not to tangle her words and hurt him. He seemed unphased about his comment, but then he furrowed his eyebrows.
"Oh. Okay, I see." He said, scratching the back of his neck, taking a few steps back. "So, what you're saying is that you want to end this relationship?" he asked. Looking at the floor, still scratching the back of his neck.
"What?! Leon, I never said anything like that! It's just that marriage is such a big step to take. It's a lot of commitment."
"Commitment? A lot of commitment? What, so you're not totally committed to this relationship?" his voice was getting louder and louder, his hands flying everywhere, exaggerating his words.
"Why do you keep putting words in my mouth?! Of course I'm committed - I wouldn't be in this relationship if I was totally committed, would I?" Elly replied, her voice as equally loud, yet more pissed off.
"Yeah, well if you're so committed," he said in a very sarcastic tone, "why can't we get married?!"
"Why? Why? Because you're acting like a fuckin' drama queen over this. I don't want to get married to you right now...DEAL WITH IT!" she yelled.
"DEAL WITH IT? OH, I'LL FUCKING DEAL WITH IT!!" Leon yelled back, and threw open their hotel room door, with such force that it hit the wall, leaving a mark. He turned around in the doorway, shooting Elly a scowl, before grabbing the doorway handle, and slamming it hard as he could. The handle on the inside of the room came off from the force. Elly was left standing by the bed, completely stunned. She threw herself on her back, grabbed the pillow next to her head, covered her face, and screamed as loud as she could.
This is how she awoke the next morning, after a restless night.
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Leon stormed down the hallway, pressing the button for the lift. Surprisingly the metal doors opened immediately. Pressing the 'G' button for Ground floor, makes the doors close instantly. On the ride down, he immediately replays what he said, what Elly said, what they said.
'Shit.' He hung his head in his hands, and rubbed his forehead. The lift stopped at the 1st floor. Someone got in. He realised it was a woman, because he could smell perfume. It was really horrible cheap perfume, though. He looked up. A blonde, obviously bleached, with a red tight knee length dress had entered. She too pressed the 'G' floor to go down one floor.
"Lazy I guess, huh?" she smiled.
"I guess." He gave a friendly chuckle.
"Where you heading sweetie?" she asked, moving to stand next to him.
"A bar..I guess..you?"
"A bar, I guess." She smiled, and he smiled back. The lift door opens, and he heads out first.
"Coming?" he asks with a nod and a smile.
"Absolutely." Her red stiletto heels click against the floor of the lobby, as they head out into the Vegas night-life.
Author Note: this is the long awaited sequel to 'Love starts with a Yellow Skyline'. Please, for your own benefit read that fiction first, otherwise, you'll be so confused!
Feedback: Yes Please!!
~~**~~**
Sins and Sin City - Chapter One - Woman's Touch
~~**~~**
Elly let out a nervous laugh. Chapel? Marriage? Leon? All these words and mental pictures swirled around in her pretty head.
"You....we-but-I...." Elly tried to speak, but with so many different thoughts, she didn't know what exactly it was she wanted to say. They had only been going out for 5 months. Without a doubt, it was the best 5 months of her life, but marriage? That was such a strong commitment.
Leon furrowed his brows.
"You don't wanna -"
"Leon!" Vince cut him off.
"What?!" Leon snapped back.
"Are we going to sleep out here, or go check in?" Leon sighed and grabbed the bags from the trunk. They headed into the lobby, and got 3 rooms. Mia and Vince got a room with a double bed, as did Leon and Elly, and they booked a room with two double beds for Letty and Jesse, when they came back. They headed up to their rooms, which were all next to each other, on the 6th floor.
~~**~~**
Vince was having a hard time with the key-card lock on the door. After 4 attempts, he decided to just knock the door down.
"Vince, no!" Mia scorned. She took the key-card, inserted it, and the red light turned green, with a soft
'Bing!' noise, and the release mechanism on the lock. She turned the knob, and gently pushed the door open.
"Woman's touch." She smiled, grabbing a bag and heading inside.
"Woman's touch!" Vince mocked, he too grabbed a bag, and shut the door.
"Man, it smells rusty in here!" Vince sniffed, the folded his arms and leaned against the bathroom door frame. He turned slightly, and reached out his arm to turn the light on. Nothing.
"And the light don't work."
Mia flopped down on one side of the bed, her slightly exposed back itching from the horrible hotel duvet. She turned over, and started scanning through a brochure.
"Vince, aren't you happy with anything in here?" she said sarcastically. He smirked, pushed himself off the doorframe, licked his lips, and made his way to the edge of their bed. Climbing up slowly onto the bed, on all fours, he lowered his head down and kissed Mia's exposed stomach.
"There's one thing I ain't complaining about..."
~~**~~**
Leon managed to open the door the first time with the key-card. Elly walked inside first, dumping the bag at the bottom of the bed, then headed into the bathroom to check out the freebies.
"Wow! Shampoo and conditioner!" she exclaimed, lifting the small bottles up with wide eyes. Leon shut the door, dumped the bag, and laughed at her remark. It was warm in their room, so he opened the large window as far as it would go. He leaned on the windowsill with his hands, and leaned further out to see the beautiful flashing neon signs around him. This was a beautiful city. Elly clicked off the bathroom light, and went up behind Leon and snaked her arms round his warm torso. She nuzzled into his neck. He smiled and turned round, meeting her passionate soft lips. Elly pulled back.
"Leon, I love you." She said.
"I love you too, babe." He said before picking up where they left off, moments earlier. She responded eagerly, and he pulled her closer to him, grabbing her ass. She threw her hips forward, and felt his arousal through both their jeans. She pulled away quickly.
"Leon..." she began, looking down at his chest.
"What's wrong?" he asked, full of concern. She looked up into his incredible sparkling green eyes.
"Leon, I love you so much, but I'm not ready for marriage." She said slowly, trying not to tangle her words and hurt him. He seemed unphased about his comment, but then he furrowed his eyebrows.
"Oh. Okay, I see." He said, scratching the back of his neck, taking a few steps back. "So, what you're saying is that you want to end this relationship?" he asked. Looking at the floor, still scratching the back of his neck.
"What?! Leon, I never said anything like that! It's just that marriage is such a big step to take. It's a lot of commitment."
"Commitment? A lot of commitment? What, so you're not totally committed to this relationship?" his voice was getting louder and louder, his hands flying everywhere, exaggerating his words.
"Why do you keep putting words in my mouth?! Of course I'm committed - I wouldn't be in this relationship if I was totally committed, would I?" Elly replied, her voice as equally loud, yet more pissed off.
"Yeah, well if you're so committed," he said in a very sarcastic tone, "why can't we get married?!"
"Why? Why? Because you're acting like a fuckin' drama queen over this. I don't want to get married to you right now...DEAL WITH IT!" she yelled.
"DEAL WITH IT? OH, I'LL FUCKING DEAL WITH IT!!" Leon yelled back, and threw open their hotel room door, with such force that it hit the wall, leaving a mark. He turned around in the doorway, shooting Elly a scowl, before grabbing the doorway handle, and slamming it hard as he could. The handle on the inside of the room came off from the force. Elly was left standing by the bed, completely stunned. She threw herself on her back, grabbed the pillow next to her head, covered her face, and screamed as loud as she could.
This is how she awoke the next morning, after a restless night.
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Leon stormed down the hallway, pressing the button for the lift. Surprisingly the metal doors opened immediately. Pressing the 'G' button for Ground floor, makes the doors close instantly. On the ride down, he immediately replays what he said, what Elly said, what they said.
'Shit.' He hung his head in his hands, and rubbed his forehead. The lift stopped at the 1st floor. Someone got in. He realised it was a woman, because he could smell perfume. It was really horrible cheap perfume, though. He looked up. A blonde, obviously bleached, with a red tight knee length dress had entered. She too pressed the 'G' floor to go down one floor.
"Lazy I guess, huh?" she smiled.
"I guess." He gave a friendly chuckle.
"Where you heading sweetie?" she asked, moving to stand next to him.
"A bar..I guess..you?"
"A bar, I guess." She smiled, and he smiled back. The lift door opens, and he heads out first.
"Coming?" he asks with a nod and a smile.
"Absolutely." Her red stiletto heels click against the floor of the lobby, as they head out into the Vegas night-life.