To: Tempest Racer
Thanks so much for reviewing the last chapter too! Here's a chapter
dedicated to you! Hope you like it.
From ZL.
Chapter 3
Written by ZL
"Cheer up girl," Suki said when she saw Kim sulking.
Kim however, ignored her and continued to watch television.
"Common Kim, you know we only sided with Brian were because we wanted to ensure your safety," Suki said trying as best as she could to cheer Kim up.
Kim still remained still. It has been only two hours since she told Brian and the rest about her plans on becoming a racer.
Suki looked at her. She knew the only way she was going to cheer her up was to let her race tonight's race.
"Alright, we're having a race tonight and I'm one of the competitors and so is Brian. I don't mind giving up my place for you," Suki said.
At first, Kim still said nothing. Then, she asked, "Where's my Ace?"
"Right where you left it," replied Suki.
Ace was Kim's Volvo C70 which she gotten from Brian. At first, it was theirs, but then Brian gave it to her when she was twenty-one.
"Good. Tell Tej I'm taking your place tonight with my Ace," Kim said with a smile.
* * *
"Hey Suki, I thought you were going to race tonight?" Brian asked surprised that Suki didn't come with her car.
"Sorry Bri. Someone's taking my place tonight," Suki said smiling at Brian.
"Who?" Brian asked looking at her confused.
"Me," a voice replied stepping out of the VolvoC70 which just arrived.
"And please close your mouth Brian, it's embarrassing," Kim said as she shut the car door.
"Whoa! Who said you could drive?" Brian asked even though he knew the answer.
"Tej and Suki," Kim said simply looking at them.
Brian looked at his friends. They both smiled.
"Well, it's about time somebody beat you so that's why I hired a professional racer," Tej said shrugging.
Brian could swear that he made up the excuse earlier during the day.
"Alright, fine, I'll allow her to drive. But if you think she'll beat me man, you got to be joking," Brian said.
"Oh? I won't be so sure about that man," Suki said winking at Brian. "Your sis is good!"
"We'll just see shall we?" Brian said cockily as he got into his car.
Kim stared at him annoyed. "He's still has that boasting habit eh?"
Both Tej and Suki nodded.
All four of the racers who were racing put their money on Tej hands.
Besides Kim's Volvo and Brian's Toyota, the other two racer's whose names were Tim and Con, both drove a Nissan.
"Common! Let's race!" Tej said and the whole crowd around there roared.
"Get ready bro. I'm better then the last time," Kim said to her brother whose car was beside her.
"I won't be so sure about that sis. I'm still as good as last time; in fact better," Brian said boasting as he gripped tightly on the wheel.
"Racers, start your engines!" Tej announced.
Flames spout out on all four cars.
"READY, GET SET, GO!" And all four cars were off with everybody screaming.
Brian was in the lead at first but Tim caught up with him. Kim was in third place while Con was last.
'Well, looks like my sis isn't as good as she thought she was," Brian thought as he changed gear.
Tim suddenly caught up with him and now they were rear to rear.
"Get out of my way O' Conner! This game is mine," Tim yelled as they steered to the left.
Kim was in third place. Not that far from the guys though. She changed gear when she steered and saw the Nissan and the Toyota ahead of her.
'Good, they're going to concentrate on each other and won't concentrate on me. Here's my chance,' Kim said and she stepped on her paddle even harder.
She managed to catch up with them and all three cars were all together.
"Bye guys," Kim said as she pushed her Nos button and it sped her up.
"No way are you going to win this game sis," Brian shouted surprised at the same time that Kim managed to catch up with them so fast.
And he too pushed his Nos button but not as fast as Tim. Tim was in second place but not for long as Brian caught up with him again.
It was a tight match; but Kim managed to be first; for awhile.
As soon as they turned, Brian managed to catch up with Kim. Tom turned badly and therefore, he went out of control.
Now it was the O' Conners left.
"Not bad sis. But now's the end; we're at the last leg," Brian said as soon as he was beside Kim.
Kim didn't reply. In fact, she stepped her paddle even harder and pressed her Nos button as well. And she drove like a wind.
She knew she was taking a risk if she did that but she still did it.
She could see the finishing line when smoke started to come out from her engine.
'No, don't die on me now Ace! Please! We're almost there," Kim preyed.
And it didn't die on her. It crossed the finishing line just when the whole thing went poof!
"Hurry; somebody, quickly get a pail of water," Tej yelled to the crowd.
ZL's note-Hope you like the way I described the race. I know it isn't really detailed but I really tried my best. Please review! Thanks!
Chapter 3
Written by ZL
"Cheer up girl," Suki said when she saw Kim sulking.
Kim however, ignored her and continued to watch television.
"Common Kim, you know we only sided with Brian were because we wanted to ensure your safety," Suki said trying as best as she could to cheer Kim up.
Kim still remained still. It has been only two hours since she told Brian and the rest about her plans on becoming a racer.
Suki looked at her. She knew the only way she was going to cheer her up was to let her race tonight's race.
"Alright, we're having a race tonight and I'm one of the competitors and so is Brian. I don't mind giving up my place for you," Suki said.
At first, Kim still said nothing. Then, she asked, "Where's my Ace?"
"Right where you left it," replied Suki.
Ace was Kim's Volvo C70 which she gotten from Brian. At first, it was theirs, but then Brian gave it to her when she was twenty-one.
"Good. Tell Tej I'm taking your place tonight with my Ace," Kim said with a smile.
* * *
"Hey Suki, I thought you were going to race tonight?" Brian asked surprised that Suki didn't come with her car.
"Sorry Bri. Someone's taking my place tonight," Suki said smiling at Brian.
"Who?" Brian asked looking at her confused.
"Me," a voice replied stepping out of the VolvoC70 which just arrived.
"And please close your mouth Brian, it's embarrassing," Kim said as she shut the car door.
"Whoa! Who said you could drive?" Brian asked even though he knew the answer.
"Tej and Suki," Kim said simply looking at them.
Brian looked at his friends. They both smiled.
"Well, it's about time somebody beat you so that's why I hired a professional racer," Tej said shrugging.
Brian could swear that he made up the excuse earlier during the day.
"Alright, fine, I'll allow her to drive. But if you think she'll beat me man, you got to be joking," Brian said.
"Oh? I won't be so sure about that man," Suki said winking at Brian. "Your sis is good!"
"We'll just see shall we?" Brian said cockily as he got into his car.
Kim stared at him annoyed. "He's still has that boasting habit eh?"
Both Tej and Suki nodded.
All four of the racers who were racing put their money on Tej hands.
Besides Kim's Volvo and Brian's Toyota, the other two racer's whose names were Tim and Con, both drove a Nissan.
"Common! Let's race!" Tej said and the whole crowd around there roared.
"Get ready bro. I'm better then the last time," Kim said to her brother whose car was beside her.
"I won't be so sure about that sis. I'm still as good as last time; in fact better," Brian said boasting as he gripped tightly on the wheel.
"Racers, start your engines!" Tej announced.
Flames spout out on all four cars.
"READY, GET SET, GO!" And all four cars were off with everybody screaming.
Brian was in the lead at first but Tim caught up with him. Kim was in third place while Con was last.
'Well, looks like my sis isn't as good as she thought she was," Brian thought as he changed gear.
Tim suddenly caught up with him and now they were rear to rear.
"Get out of my way O' Conner! This game is mine," Tim yelled as they steered to the left.
Kim was in third place. Not that far from the guys though. She changed gear when she steered and saw the Nissan and the Toyota ahead of her.
'Good, they're going to concentrate on each other and won't concentrate on me. Here's my chance,' Kim said and she stepped on her paddle even harder.
She managed to catch up with them and all three cars were all together.
"Bye guys," Kim said as she pushed her Nos button and it sped her up.
"No way are you going to win this game sis," Brian shouted surprised at the same time that Kim managed to catch up with them so fast.
And he too pushed his Nos button but not as fast as Tim. Tim was in second place but not for long as Brian caught up with him again.
It was a tight match; but Kim managed to be first; for awhile.
As soon as they turned, Brian managed to catch up with Kim. Tom turned badly and therefore, he went out of control.
Now it was the O' Conners left.
"Not bad sis. But now's the end; we're at the last leg," Brian said as soon as he was beside Kim.
Kim didn't reply. In fact, she stepped her paddle even harder and pressed her Nos button as well. And she drove like a wind.
She knew she was taking a risk if she did that but she still did it.
She could see the finishing line when smoke started to come out from her engine.
'No, don't die on me now Ace! Please! We're almost there," Kim preyed.
And it didn't die on her. It crossed the finishing line just when the whole thing went poof!
"Hurry; somebody, quickly get a pail of water," Tej yelled to the crowd.
ZL's note-Hope you like the way I described the race. I know it isn't really detailed but I really tried my best. Please review! Thanks!