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Van woke up again. He found himself dead. What is a word he thought absentmindedly. It was almost as if he ated poison again. "Oh well", he shouted to Zeke in his mind. Zeke didn't hear and stirred in his soup.
Fiona ate it. She ate it. She liked eating it. She did eat it. What she ate she didn't know. I think it was oatmeal," she thought while going to the zoo. Van too bumped into her and said "EXCUSE ME U EAT EGG OK?", while she just walked. She walked, walked, and walked into a tree.
Van helped her up. "Do I know you", he shouted at her for hurting herself. She never used to do this before, so Fiona drove Van home. "Look you can drive", questioned Van. He was like a wooden puppet. So Van......
Fiona didn't realize as she pulled into the garage that she had a garage. Look the door is open Fiona replied to Van as if he had eaten more oatmeal. Fiona went inside. I take you to dinner Van. Van nodded. He went to sleep as Fiona dragged him into the car.
The car walked fastly. It was almost as if it was a ladybug. Fiona was here. Van was here. Fiona took this as the perfect time. She poisoned the oatmeal. But buried it where Van had swam in the dust. It was a something it. Was.
When Van woke up he ran out of the car. Fiona ran too. She grab Van. Van drag by Fiona into car. Fiona drag Van out. "Look Van I made your favorite food", she said to him. "I'm a him", Van asked. Fiona shrugged and nodded.
"Here have oatmeal to make you less stupid", Fiona said sweetly. She was not sweet. She didn't say it sweetly. She couldn't, after all that mosquitos had done to her arm. Van said, "I can't help it it I can't help", Van shouted mainicallyishlly.
Fiona fed his oatmeal and burped him. Van fell asleep. When he woke up he died. Fiona stood on Van and was the king of the world. Van died. He never ate oatmeal again.......