A/N: I'm going to post all of the reviews before I start the next chapter....
Glittering Pegasus
Ha, so you're a Buffy fan too, I presume? Once More With Feeling is my absolute fave episode ever :-D
Nice start, this is funny and intruiging.
total vaughn lover()
this has got to be the most creative thing i've read, next to Vaughns' Jen fic about the chat room friend that turns out to be Vaughn! keep up the good work! and if you can, please come and review my fics!
thanks, Kris
Kell-ay()
That was hilarious
Fair Cate
Okay okay! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Sorry - i needed to get that out of my system!
I really love this fanfic - it is really clever and really well written.
You juts need to be very careful to make it clear when people are singing and when the are nt. Also, it might be easier to follow if more of the lines rhymed.
All in all, i really great fic!
Cate
Shirley Parker
LOL
Usually I don´t review so much , but I had to do it . Priceless . Vaughn´s line and Spy!daddy´s line ( about LLauren ) was so funny
Thank you sooo much to all the people that reviewed. I'd especially like to thank Fair Cate for suggesting that I make it easier to tell if there singing or not. Now on with the show!
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Chapter 2: Savior
*Vaughn and Sydney were on a plane heading to London, England. They were both sitting by each other. Sydney was looking out the window and Vaughn was reading some type of novel*
Vaughn: *Puts down book and stands up. Starts singing low and fast. It's a Pop type of tune* 'If my life is hanging by a thread will you be my savior?' Sydney: *Looks at Vaughn weirdly and starts singing fast but high* 'Help me patch up the rough spots'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'And talk with me later'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'I know we've been through a lot'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'But I'm still counting on you to save my butt'
*Both go over to the back of the plane and lean against the wall with their
backs*
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'It's just me and you'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'Saving the world'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'It's just me and you'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'Defying the odds'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'Through thick and thin'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'I'll always be there for you'
*Sydney sits down on ground. Vaughn remains standing. Sydney looks up at him*
Vaughn: *Singing without Sydney*
(Vaughn's part)
'I know I haven't seen you for two years,
But it feels like I've been with you the whole time,
You're my lover no matter what,
So c'mon lets dive on in,
Into this world full of action and adventure.'
*Vaughn sits down and Sydney stands up. Vaughn looks up at Sydney*
Sydney: *Sydney singing without Vaughn*
(Sydney's part)
'Lets just run away from all of this,
All of the lies and mysteries,
Can't take it much longer,
I wanna scream and shout!'
*Vaughn gets up. They both go back to there seats and stand by them*
Vaughn: *Starts singing again* 'It's just me and you'
Sydney: *Starts singing again too* 'Saving the world'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'It's just me and you'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'Defying the odds'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'Through thick and thin'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'I'll always be there for you'
*Both sit down and sigh loudly*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Jack is pacing around at headquarters. Carrie and Marshall are over at a
computer. Weiss is off somewhere. Dixon walks up to Jack*
Jack: *Frowns* "Has Sydney and Vaughn made it to London yet?"
Dixon: *Worried look* "No, they haven't"
Jack: "Well, when are they?"
Dixon: "Why are you doubting Sydney's abilities as an agent? She is the spy we have. Don't worry."
Jack: "I know"
*Dixon walks off shaking his head. Jack walks over to a chair and sits
down*
Jack: *Starts to see a slow, depressing song lowly*
(Jack's song....)
'I've never had the sun on my face,
It's always been hiding from me,
The coldness overcomes me,
But I've gotten used to it,
Still there's a part of me,
That wants to feel the light.
I used to love my lover,
But that was long ago,
Marriage is nothing but hell,
She betrayed me,
And I'll never forget that.'
*Jack walks away. Now Dixon is the one that is worrying*
Dixon: *Starts singing moderately and low.*
(Dixon's song....)
'Sydney and Vaughn are my two best agents,
I can't afford to lose them now,
If something happens to them,
I'll never forgive myself.'
*Marshall is looking at Carrie who is literally crying. He has a very
worried look on his face*
Marshall: *Starts to sing fast and jumbled. You can barely tell what he's singing*
(Marshall's song....)
'Carrie are you alright?
Your face doesn't look right,
It's to pale and light.'
*Carrie gives him an annoyed look*
Carrie: *Starts to sing very fast and high. You can tell she's in pain*
(Carrie's song....)
'I think I'm going to have my baby,
Oh, gosh, it hurts so bad,
Wait, I want to get married,
Before it comes out.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Sydney and Vaughn are outside of the warehouse. Both look kind of nervous*
Sydney: "This is mountaineer. Marshall, can you hear me?"
Weiss: *Back at headquarters* "Carrie went into labor. Marshall is at the hospital"
Vaughn: *Smiling* "That's great"
Sydney: "So... are there any guards posted anywhere inside or outside of the warehouse?"
Weiss: "No, not showing any"
Vaughn: "Can we proceed?"
Weiss: "Yes. Go on in"
*Sydney and Vaughn look around for an entrance. They spot a door at the
back and see if it's unlocked. It opens easily*
Sydney: *Whispering* "This feels like a trap"
Vaughn: *Whispering* "I know. Just be careful"
*They both walk silently. Sydney glances around and sees nothing. Vaughn
does the same*
Sydney: *Whispering* You go look over there. I'll look over here"
Vaughn: *Whispering* "Ok"
*Vaughn and Sydney both split up. After a few minutes they still haven't found Sark or Lauren. Suddenly Vaughn hears a soft scream. Sark, Lauren and Sydney come out from behind some boxes. Sark is holding a knife to Sydney's
neck*
Lauren: "Darling please take the earpiece out of your ear or Sydney gets hurt"
Vaughn: *Takes earpiece out and smashes it with his foot* "Let Sydney go"
Sark: *Smiling* "Now why would we do that?"
Lauren: "Really Vaughn. I thought you were smarter than that"
Sark: *Pulls the knife closer to Sydney's neck* Now if you would please come with us" Vaughn: "Why would I do that?"
Lauren: *Frowns* "If you want Sydney to live you will"
*Sark takes out a needle and pokes Sydney's arm. Sydney falls to the ground
a few seconds later and lays there motionless*
Vaughn: *Grits his teeth* "Fine. I'll come with you"
Sark: "Use this"
*Sark throws Vaughn a needle. Vaughn cautiously injects himself and falls
to the ground a few seconds later. Lauren and Sark kiss each other
passionately*
Lauren: *Starts singing low and slow*
(Lauren's part)
'We finally got 'em,
I'm so glad,
He gave up so easily,
Just like I planned,
Vaughn just can't stand,
To see his girlfriend suffer.'
Sark: *Starts singing slow and low too*
(Sark's part)
'Getting Sydney was a snap,
She gave up easily,
Like she was some scared cat,
I thought she was better than that.'
*Sark and Lauren drag Sydney and Vaughn's bodies out of the warehouse and
throw them in the back of a van. They drive away laughing evilly.
TBC.....
A/N: Did ya like it? I personally like Sark and Lauren's songs the best. Was it easier to tell when they were singing? So many questions so little space. Lol. Well, I'll write more soon!
Glittering Pegasus
Ha, so you're a Buffy fan too, I presume? Once More With Feeling is my absolute fave episode ever :-D
Nice start, this is funny and intruiging.
total vaughn lover()
this has got to be the most creative thing i've read, next to Vaughns' Jen fic about the chat room friend that turns out to be Vaughn! keep up the good work! and if you can, please come and review my fics!
thanks, Kris
Kell-ay()
That was hilarious
Fair Cate
Okay okay! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Sorry - i needed to get that out of my system!
I really love this fanfic - it is really clever and really well written.
You juts need to be very careful to make it clear when people are singing and when the are nt. Also, it might be easier to follow if more of the lines rhymed.
All in all, i really great fic!
Cate
Shirley Parker
LOL
Usually I don´t review so much , but I had to do it . Priceless . Vaughn´s line and Spy!daddy´s line ( about LLauren ) was so funny
Thank you sooo much to all the people that reviewed. I'd especially like to thank Fair Cate for suggesting that I make it easier to tell if there singing or not. Now on with the show!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 2: Savior
*Vaughn and Sydney were on a plane heading to London, England. They were both sitting by each other. Sydney was looking out the window and Vaughn was reading some type of novel*
Vaughn: *Puts down book and stands up. Starts singing low and fast. It's a Pop type of tune* 'If my life is hanging by a thread will you be my savior?' Sydney: *Looks at Vaughn weirdly and starts singing fast but high* 'Help me patch up the rough spots'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'And talk with me later'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'I know we've been through a lot'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'But I'm still counting on you to save my butt'
*Both go over to the back of the plane and lean against the wall with their
backs*
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'It's just me and you'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'Saving the world'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'It's just me and you'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'Defying the odds'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'Through thick and thin'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'I'll always be there for you'
*Sydney sits down on ground. Vaughn remains standing. Sydney looks up at him*
Vaughn: *Singing without Sydney*
(Vaughn's part)
'I know I haven't seen you for two years,
But it feels like I've been with you the whole time,
You're my lover no matter what,
So c'mon lets dive on in,
Into this world full of action and adventure.'
*Vaughn sits down and Sydney stands up. Vaughn looks up at Sydney*
Sydney: *Sydney singing without Vaughn*
(Sydney's part)
'Lets just run away from all of this,
All of the lies and mysteries,
Can't take it much longer,
I wanna scream and shout!'
*Vaughn gets up. They both go back to there seats and stand by them*
Vaughn: *Starts singing again* 'It's just me and you'
Sydney: *Starts singing again too* 'Saving the world'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'It's just me and you'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'Defying the odds'
Vaughn: *Keeps singing* 'Through thick and thin'
Sydney: *Keeps singing* 'I'll always be there for you'
*Both sit down and sigh loudly*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Jack is pacing around at headquarters. Carrie and Marshall are over at a
computer. Weiss is off somewhere. Dixon walks up to Jack*
Jack: *Frowns* "Has Sydney and Vaughn made it to London yet?"
Dixon: *Worried look* "No, they haven't"
Jack: "Well, when are they?"
Dixon: "Why are you doubting Sydney's abilities as an agent? She is the spy we have. Don't worry."
Jack: "I know"
*Dixon walks off shaking his head. Jack walks over to a chair and sits
down*
Jack: *Starts to see a slow, depressing song lowly*
(Jack's song....)
'I've never had the sun on my face,
It's always been hiding from me,
The coldness overcomes me,
But I've gotten used to it,
Still there's a part of me,
That wants to feel the light.
I used to love my lover,
But that was long ago,
Marriage is nothing but hell,
She betrayed me,
And I'll never forget that.'
*Jack walks away. Now Dixon is the one that is worrying*
Dixon: *Starts singing moderately and low.*
(Dixon's song....)
'Sydney and Vaughn are my two best agents,
I can't afford to lose them now,
If something happens to them,
I'll never forgive myself.'
*Marshall is looking at Carrie who is literally crying. He has a very
worried look on his face*
Marshall: *Starts to sing fast and jumbled. You can barely tell what he's singing*
(Marshall's song....)
'Carrie are you alright?
Your face doesn't look right,
It's to pale and light.'
*Carrie gives him an annoyed look*
Carrie: *Starts to sing very fast and high. You can tell she's in pain*
(Carrie's song....)
'I think I'm going to have my baby,
Oh, gosh, it hurts so bad,
Wait, I want to get married,
Before it comes out.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Sydney and Vaughn are outside of the warehouse. Both look kind of nervous*
Sydney: "This is mountaineer. Marshall, can you hear me?"
Weiss: *Back at headquarters* "Carrie went into labor. Marshall is at the hospital"
Vaughn: *Smiling* "That's great"
Sydney: "So... are there any guards posted anywhere inside or outside of the warehouse?"
Weiss: "No, not showing any"
Vaughn: "Can we proceed?"
Weiss: "Yes. Go on in"
*Sydney and Vaughn look around for an entrance. They spot a door at the
back and see if it's unlocked. It opens easily*
Sydney: *Whispering* "This feels like a trap"
Vaughn: *Whispering* "I know. Just be careful"
*They both walk silently. Sydney glances around and sees nothing. Vaughn
does the same*
Sydney: *Whispering* You go look over there. I'll look over here"
Vaughn: *Whispering* "Ok"
*Vaughn and Sydney both split up. After a few minutes they still haven't found Sark or Lauren. Suddenly Vaughn hears a soft scream. Sark, Lauren and Sydney come out from behind some boxes. Sark is holding a knife to Sydney's
neck*
Lauren: "Darling please take the earpiece out of your ear or Sydney gets hurt"
Vaughn: *Takes earpiece out and smashes it with his foot* "Let Sydney go"
Sark: *Smiling* "Now why would we do that?"
Lauren: "Really Vaughn. I thought you were smarter than that"
Sark: *Pulls the knife closer to Sydney's neck* Now if you would please come with us" Vaughn: "Why would I do that?"
Lauren: *Frowns* "If you want Sydney to live you will"
*Sark takes out a needle and pokes Sydney's arm. Sydney falls to the ground
a few seconds later and lays there motionless*
Vaughn: *Grits his teeth* "Fine. I'll come with you"
Sark: "Use this"
*Sark throws Vaughn a needle. Vaughn cautiously injects himself and falls
to the ground a few seconds later. Lauren and Sark kiss each other
passionately*
Lauren: *Starts singing low and slow*
(Lauren's part)
'We finally got 'em,
I'm so glad,
He gave up so easily,
Just like I planned,
Vaughn just can't stand,
To see his girlfriend suffer.'
Sark: *Starts singing slow and low too*
(Sark's part)
'Getting Sydney was a snap,
She gave up easily,
Like she was some scared cat,
I thought she was better than that.'
*Sark and Lauren drag Sydney and Vaughn's bodies out of the warehouse and
throw them in the back of a van. They drive away laughing evilly.
TBC.....
A/N: Did ya like it? I personally like Sark and Lauren's songs the best. Was it easier to tell when they were singing? So many questions so little space. Lol. Well, I'll write more soon!
