A/N: I'm going to post all of the reviews before I start the next chapter....
Fair Cate
MUCH EASIER!! You gotta love constructive criticism!! Hehe!! It was so much more clear now and the story flows much better because of it.
Yet again... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA! Sorry, I just couldnt help myself!
I'd love to see what songs you come up with if you decide to write about Carrie's labour. Also, I would LOVE to see Jack do a song & dance number.
Great story!! I really can't wait to read more!
Cate
oOspuffy4everOo
well its okay but you copied off the Buffy the Vampire Slayer musical episode called "Once More With Feeling" you should watch it sometime.
I was kinda disappointed that only two people reviewed. Oh, well. On with the show....
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*14 hours later*
*Carrie and Marshall are at the hospital. Carrie had her baby about an hour
ago. They're trying to think of a name for the baby*
Carrie: *Singing by herself. Song is fast and her voice is low*
(Carrie's part)
'I can't believe I had a girl,
The name should be... I don't know,
Maybe Lucy or Cindy,
Or in between one of those.'
Marshall: *Singing by himself. Sings a little higher than Carrie*
(Marshall's part)
'I hope she becomes a genius just like me,
And you I can't forget,
One day she'll make gadgets for the CIA,
And I'll be proud you can bet.'
Carrie: *Singing by herself*
(Carries part)
'I want her to have a normal life,
Not be some inventor for the CIA,
She'll never know of what we do,
Got it?'
Marshall: *Stops singing* "Whatever you say. And I think Cindy is a great name!"
Carrie: *Stops singing* "Cindy it is!"
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*A girl with a guard uniform on is standing outside a building. She starts
to sing*
'I'll be the one to save those spies,
When I walk in Sark will drop like a fly,
It's time to get into danger mode,
Cause wither they're good or bad,
They're gonna get some help from me.
I'm the savior of all the saviors,
The saint of all the saints,
I'll help you it's to my benefit,
So ring me up,
And I'll ring you back!
Not part of the Covenant,
Nor the CIA,
I do what I please,
And with much glee,
I'm just a rogue guardian,
Saving life's if I want to.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Sydney opened her eyes. She was in a room with cement walls, one door and no windows. She was chained to a wall by her arms and was sitting up on a hard bed. Sydney looks around for Vaughn and sees him sleeping on the other
side of the room*
Sydney: "Vaughn? Wake up!"
Vaughn: *Opens his eyes and looks at Sydney* "Sydney! Are you ok?"
Sydney: "Yeah, I'm fine. Are you?"
Vaughn: "Yes."
*Door opens and a guard comes in. He takes Vaughn and leaves. Sydney is now
alone*
Sydney: *Starts to sing. Her voice is high and the song is fast*
(Sydney's song)
'I've been standing on solid ground
For a long, long time
But every now and then it seems to crumble
Beneath my feet
Lately it's been doing that
And now I can't get it under control
Can someone help me get back on my feet?
Help me get my life back.
Cause my life is spinning upside down
And I cant seem to get control
Can anyone help me?
I don't care if its
Friend or foe
My life is spinning upside down
Can you help me turn it around?
All these feelings and emotions
And choices and deeds
Are piling up in front of me
Can you help me do the math?
Or just get me sain again
Please, please help me
Get my life back.
I've searched the world for an answer
Looked a million times
And still nothing comes to mind
So im begging anyone that can help
Tell me how to make my life simpler
And help me get back on my feet.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Back at the CIA. Jack is freaking out because Sydney got captured. Weiss
is at a computer. And Dixon is trying to calm Jack down*
Jack: *Frowning* "Where is Sydney?"
Dixon: "We believe that Sark and Lauren captured them"
Jack: "We were supposed to be capturing them. Not the other way around"
Dixon: "I know"
*Weiss walks to them and stands there*
Weiss: Sir, Marshall can't be here until tomorrow"
Dixon: *Rubs his temples* "Ok"
Jack: "That is not ok"
*Weiss walks away. He goes over to his desk and sits down. Marshall
suddenly bursts into headquarters. Weiss gets up and walks over to him*
Weiss: "I thought you couldn't be here until tomorrow"
Marshall: "Carrie said I could go"
*Jack and Dixon walk over to them*
Dixon: "Sydney and Vaughn got captured"
Marshall: "Ok, I'll get on it right away"
Jack: "You better"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Irina is in a hotel in Russia. She picks up her cell phone and dials a
number quickly*
Irina: "Mr. Sark"
Sark: *On phone* Yes, Irina"
Irina: "Where is my daughter?"
Sark: "I don't know. Why do you care?"
Irina: "Because she is my daughter and I want her to be safe"
Sark: Well....
Irina: I swear if you know where she is....
Sark: I don't. Now goodbye"
*Irina hangs up and walks out her room*
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*About an hour later Vaughn is thrown back into the room. For some reason
he has no cuts. Just one bruise on his cheek*
Sydney: "Are you ok?"
Vaughn: "They didn't hurt me. All they did was ask me questions"
Sydney: "Strange...."
Vaughn: "It's ok. We'll be fine"
Sydney: "I hope so"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Back at headquarters. Jack is pacing around nervously. Weiss is watching
Marshall try to find the location of Sydney and Vaughn. And Dixon is
walking over to them*
Dixon: "How is it going?"
Marshall: "I can find there location. Someone might have taken their trackers off"
Weiss: "That's not good"
Dixon: *Sighing* "Keep trying"
*Jack walks over to his desk and sits down. His phone starts to ring and he
answers it*
Jack: "Hello"
Irina: "Hello, Jack"
Jack: "Irina. What do you want?"
Irina: "I want to know where the hell Sydney is"
Jack: "She got captured on a mission"
Irina: "By who?"
Jack: "We believe it's Sark and Lauren"
Irina: "Ok, thank you. Bye"
Jack: "Bye"
*He hangs up the phone wondering why Irina wanted to know*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Vaughn is now by himself. Sydney was taken away a few minutes ago*
Vaughn: *Singing. Song is slow and his voice is low*
(Vaughn's part)
'It's uncommon for me to not love someone,
But I've never found,
That one true soul,
To carry me through,
The rough and the tough,
Help me when I'm weak,
Until I found you.
You're my hope when everything becomes dark,
My light in the rain,
Oh, how I was lost,
Till I found you,
You brought out the best in me,
And these three words are for you,
I love you.
Never seemed to stand on solid ground,
I was never really strong,
My world was collapsing,
Right in front of my eyes,
I was melting into nothing,
Until I found you.
And now you're slipping through my grasp,
How can this be true?
You were there and gone in a flash,
Now I have to find someone else,
Just like you.'
~~~~~~~~~~~
TBC....
A/N~ Sorry. Some of the songs didn't rhyme that well. Lots of songs this time! And I'm glad Irina is in it now. Maybe I'll bring Sloane or Katrina in. Please review!
Fair Cate
MUCH EASIER!! You gotta love constructive criticism!! Hehe!! It was so much more clear now and the story flows much better because of it.
Yet again... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA! Sorry, I just couldnt help myself!
I'd love to see what songs you come up with if you decide to write about Carrie's labour. Also, I would LOVE to see Jack do a song & dance number.
Great story!! I really can't wait to read more!
Cate
oOspuffy4everOo
well its okay but you copied off the Buffy the Vampire Slayer musical episode called "Once More With Feeling" you should watch it sometime.
I was kinda disappointed that only two people reviewed. Oh, well. On with the show....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*14 hours later*
*Carrie and Marshall are at the hospital. Carrie had her baby about an hour
ago. They're trying to think of a name for the baby*
Carrie: *Singing by herself. Song is fast and her voice is low*
(Carrie's part)
'I can't believe I had a girl,
The name should be... I don't know,
Maybe Lucy or Cindy,
Or in between one of those.'
Marshall: *Singing by himself. Sings a little higher than Carrie*
(Marshall's part)
'I hope she becomes a genius just like me,
And you I can't forget,
One day she'll make gadgets for the CIA,
And I'll be proud you can bet.'
Carrie: *Singing by herself*
(Carries part)
'I want her to have a normal life,
Not be some inventor for the CIA,
She'll never know of what we do,
Got it?'
Marshall: *Stops singing* "Whatever you say. And I think Cindy is a great name!"
Carrie: *Stops singing* "Cindy it is!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*A girl with a guard uniform on is standing outside a building. She starts
to sing*
'I'll be the one to save those spies,
When I walk in Sark will drop like a fly,
It's time to get into danger mode,
Cause wither they're good or bad,
They're gonna get some help from me.
I'm the savior of all the saviors,
The saint of all the saints,
I'll help you it's to my benefit,
So ring me up,
And I'll ring you back!
Not part of the Covenant,
Nor the CIA,
I do what I please,
And with much glee,
I'm just a rogue guardian,
Saving life's if I want to.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Sydney opened her eyes. She was in a room with cement walls, one door and no windows. She was chained to a wall by her arms and was sitting up on a hard bed. Sydney looks around for Vaughn and sees him sleeping on the other
side of the room*
Sydney: "Vaughn? Wake up!"
Vaughn: *Opens his eyes and looks at Sydney* "Sydney! Are you ok?"
Sydney: "Yeah, I'm fine. Are you?"
Vaughn: "Yes."
*Door opens and a guard comes in. He takes Vaughn and leaves. Sydney is now
alone*
Sydney: *Starts to sing. Her voice is high and the song is fast*
(Sydney's song)
'I've been standing on solid ground
For a long, long time
But every now and then it seems to crumble
Beneath my feet
Lately it's been doing that
And now I can't get it under control
Can someone help me get back on my feet?
Help me get my life back.
Cause my life is spinning upside down
And I cant seem to get control
Can anyone help me?
I don't care if its
Friend or foe
My life is spinning upside down
Can you help me turn it around?
All these feelings and emotions
And choices and deeds
Are piling up in front of me
Can you help me do the math?
Or just get me sain again
Please, please help me
Get my life back.
I've searched the world for an answer
Looked a million times
And still nothing comes to mind
So im begging anyone that can help
Tell me how to make my life simpler
And help me get back on my feet.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Back at the CIA. Jack is freaking out because Sydney got captured. Weiss
is at a computer. And Dixon is trying to calm Jack down*
Jack: *Frowning* "Where is Sydney?"
Dixon: "We believe that Sark and Lauren captured them"
Jack: "We were supposed to be capturing them. Not the other way around"
Dixon: "I know"
*Weiss walks to them and stands there*
Weiss: Sir, Marshall can't be here until tomorrow"
Dixon: *Rubs his temples* "Ok"
Jack: "That is not ok"
*Weiss walks away. He goes over to his desk and sits down. Marshall
suddenly bursts into headquarters. Weiss gets up and walks over to him*
Weiss: "I thought you couldn't be here until tomorrow"
Marshall: "Carrie said I could go"
*Jack and Dixon walk over to them*
Dixon: "Sydney and Vaughn got captured"
Marshall: "Ok, I'll get on it right away"
Jack: "You better"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Irina is in a hotel in Russia. She picks up her cell phone and dials a
number quickly*
Irina: "Mr. Sark"
Sark: *On phone* Yes, Irina"
Irina: "Where is my daughter?"
Sark: "I don't know. Why do you care?"
Irina: "Because she is my daughter and I want her to be safe"
Sark: Well....
Irina: I swear if you know where she is....
Sark: I don't. Now goodbye"
*Irina hangs up and walks out her room*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*About an hour later Vaughn is thrown back into the room. For some reason
he has no cuts. Just one bruise on his cheek*
Sydney: "Are you ok?"
Vaughn: "They didn't hurt me. All they did was ask me questions"
Sydney: "Strange...."
Vaughn: "It's ok. We'll be fine"
Sydney: "I hope so"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Back at headquarters. Jack is pacing around nervously. Weiss is watching
Marshall try to find the location of Sydney and Vaughn. And Dixon is
walking over to them*
Dixon: "How is it going?"
Marshall: "I can find there location. Someone might have taken their trackers off"
Weiss: "That's not good"
Dixon: *Sighing* "Keep trying"
*Jack walks over to his desk and sits down. His phone starts to ring and he
answers it*
Jack: "Hello"
Irina: "Hello, Jack"
Jack: "Irina. What do you want?"
Irina: "I want to know where the hell Sydney is"
Jack: "She got captured on a mission"
Irina: "By who?"
Jack: "We believe it's Sark and Lauren"
Irina: "Ok, thank you. Bye"
Jack: "Bye"
*He hangs up the phone wondering why Irina wanted to know*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Vaughn is now by himself. Sydney was taken away a few minutes ago*
Vaughn: *Singing. Song is slow and his voice is low*
(Vaughn's part)
'It's uncommon for me to not love someone,
But I've never found,
That one true soul,
To carry me through,
The rough and the tough,
Help me when I'm weak,
Until I found you.
You're my hope when everything becomes dark,
My light in the rain,
Oh, how I was lost,
Till I found you,
You brought out the best in me,
And these three words are for you,
I love you.
Never seemed to stand on solid ground,
I was never really strong,
My world was collapsing,
Right in front of my eyes,
I was melting into nothing,
Until I found you.
And now you're slipping through my grasp,
How can this be true?
You were there and gone in a flash,
Now I have to find someone else,
Just like you.'
~~~~~~~~~~~
TBC....
A/N~ Sorry. Some of the songs didn't rhyme that well. Lots of songs this time! And I'm glad Irina is in it now. Maybe I'll bring Sloane or Katrina in. Please review!