A sequel to the series, different and alternate versions (pairings,
situations, and such) [First Story written by me]
The Fanfic web format has completely confused me, I will try to enable it to allow the text in a more readable one, please be patient.
Good luck to my first fanfic story! Ganbarimasu! Critiques and reviews are appreciated. Thanks for reading. Not really implying anything.. but I guess the story is not very intriguing so far. But, I am working on it! The plot will thicken eventually! My previous chapter was quite strange. Please remember that I am a novice writer.
Warning: Spoiler ALERT! If you are scared of ruining the story on my behalf, I am sorry! Rated for various reasons due to mature content. Raised the Rating to R since I might add some gore and lemon in later chapters or something. I think there will be more excessive language misuse as well.
This Chapter's Rating Level is R for drama, language, excessive fluffiness/sensuality, attempted rape, and violence + gore.
Disclaimer: The characters are not owned by me but by Natsuki Takaya. Too bad for me. Oh yes, a few lines are possibly "borrowed" by me from the story.
The characters are likely NOT to act the way they do in my story. (OOC- ness?)
Pairings will be most likely Hatsuharu X Tohru and Kyo X Tohru. Fluff among the other guys of the juunishi. Who knows? If you think my spellings are a bit queer, my bad. I need more reviews, if you please. Well, I shouldn't demand them since my Fanfic is truly kind of boring. But, please do say something!
Translations of Japanese will appear at the bottom of Each Chapter now.
"~" Conversation. '~' Thoughts.
- - - - - - To the Story!
Chapter Five: Increasing Jealousy and Madness
~~~~~ Last scene from previous episode~~~~~
Giving her one last embrace for the night, Kyo gently kissed her forehead and they saw each other off at the door. Their suspicions were correct; there was a pair of eyes following the happy girl going back to her room.
~~~~ Back to story~~~~~
As the sun was rising, its beams of light glimmered into the young adolescent's room. Tohru had fell asleep with warm dreams (not wet ones!) and woke up to a fine and bright morning. The outdoor wildlife refreshed the girl to her senses and she went to do her morning chores. It clicked in her mind as she brushed her teeth that today she would participate in her first part-time job since graduation of High School. There she would earn some money to gather extra supplies for the coming new year. It would be the middle of the third year staying with the Sohmas.
After these many months she felt very secure under their supervision. Time also flew by very quickly and many memories were made and cherished. As the New Year approached, there was a growing anxiety throughout the remaining Sohmas of the Zodiac. Tension seemed to be building up from an inconspicuous source; but it had been sensed quite clearly. Trouble was arising inside the mind of one of the members of the Zodiac. Hatsuharu. He had been extremely fond of Tohru, but his chances were dropping drastically since Kyo had Tohru in her arms several times now. Jealousy if not even also envy were within the burning eyes of the poor cow. During some of the time though, Haru realized his only desires were mostly just to be intimate with Tohru. It bothered him greatly; he desired her more than loving her, which was the opposite attitude of Kyo which definitely started up conflict. Tohru would absolutely choose Kyo over him. It totally frustrated Haru. After this self-realization, he gradually began to deteriorate in tolerance and true understanding. He was turning into the adolescent which Kyo had first been like from the beginning of meeting Honda Tohru. It was most distressing and depressing. His conscience was darkening towards complete black. But what could he do?
Before long, it was New Year's Eve. Tohru had prepared a special feast since old friends had come to visit, Kisa, Hiro, Uotani and Hanajima included, plus a couple old acquaintances from High School. It was a very rowdy. Everyone had a multitude of fun, enjoyment, and entertainment. All except Haru. He remained in his room immediately after dinner. The night was too short but time flew past due to the happiness spread out through the active partying. As the guests were leaving and saying their goodbyes, Tohru excused herself for a while to go check up on Haru, she noticed his mood change. Earlier that week she had noticed it, but today was extremely malignant mood swings. She never found Haru being so pessimistic about a holiday. She pondered that it could be the chilling weather getting to the animal instincts. Reaching the door to Haru and Momiji's room, she knocked expectantly but for a very sad result. Some how, the cow had snagged some sake(1) from Shigure and was drinking it in multiple gulps. At that time, Haru turned absolutely Black with even more vicious thoughts in mind than ever before. His Black attitude always brought trouble to the surface, causing much terror and chaos. So he walked up to the door as he expected Tohru to be there, and as he did so, he grabbed her into the room, slamming the door shut after them.
Tohru definitely noticed a change in the once calm and thoughtful cow. Haru looked Black, due to the strains and dark circles under his once calm eyes. "Yo!" he said as he stumbled away towards the desk in the room. "Um. Haru-kun, are you okay?" Tohru said feeling quite worried. "Does it look it?" he growled at her. Feeling a bit bad she turned away for a moment but as soon as she turned, she noticed she was on the floor being pinned by Haru on top. "What are you doi-" Tohru started. "Keep silent, bitch," Haru said so roughly and calmly. He leaned down and grasped her wrists and bound them. He then stuffed her mouth to prevent much noise. In Haru's heart he was pleading his dark side to stop. 'Stop it! You will hurt her!' White Haru yelled subconsciously. 'What the hell is your problem? You always liked her and desired her in this way, just giving you what you wished for.' 'Not through rape! Damn it! Go away!' Tohru was stunned but she also noticed Haru's mental struggle due to his actions of grasping his own head. She felt very worried about him, even more than her own well- being. She tried to work her way through the binding of the ropes along her wrists. Black Haru still conquered through all the fuss and conflicts with his other "good" self so he was able to notice. "Tsk, tsk, missie. We don't want you doing that," he said as he rebound her wrists with another rope with a tighter hold. That time, it was quite painful, which soon brought salty tears down the girl's cheek. Tohru, feeling more tension building up continued to fight and she yelled in her thoughts for Haru to stop. In another manner, she also prayed to not lose her own virginity to such a revolting man. Her sobs were not heard, thus Black Haru worked his way stripping the girl of her most precious treasure. White Haru fought his way through the turmoil as well by screaming into his mind and heart of what he was exactly doing. Black was unmoved by those futile screams. The sake really got the best of this malign personality. "Don't worry girl, this won't be bad, well that bad," said Black in an informal reassuring tone towards the tear-stained girl.
The guests had left the house already, thus Kyo decided to relax, more specifically in his mind, sleep. Then, he noticed that Tohru had not been around for a while. He began his search for her, wandering around the first floor calling her name. He was stepping up to the second story where he could barely hear muffled sobs. Having old cat instincts did not prevent his constant alert in sound. He approached the sounds, which were near or around Haru's bedroom. He walked all the way towards the entrance of the room, when he put his ear to the door. It only took a second to realize what was going on, that was when he rushed in. There, he saw Tohru lying beneath Haru being groped, both half naked. Rage and anguish engulfed the young man. If it were visible, his eyes flamed into a bonfire. The old cat lunged for and grabbed the cow off his feet and to the nearest wall. Tohru was again stunned by this abrupt action. "What the fuck are you doing to her?" Kyo yelled at him, putting much pressure on the cow's back. "What do you think, fool," he said rather tauntingly. "Surely, you would be doing the same some time later." Then again, from that comment, Kyo punched him right at the cheekbone. It began swelling, but Black Haru was still smirking. "Kill me if you must, but you cannot deny the truth." Kyo continued to rage onward by thrusting his fists into the face of the Black cow. Blood started to spill down from both the victim and pursuer; the victim did not help reduce the anger, but continued to provoke him. The cow was soon able to defend himself due to the blind rage of the cat. During that time, Tohru had quickly gotten dressed but then fainted due to the excessive stink of blood and perspiration. He rushed forward and started knocking out Kyo. 'Jeez, I am the one supposed to do the punching, not that bastard.' Kyo said as he slowly began to lose consciousness. Before he did, after receiving dozens of blows on the face and chest, a man and a little boy appeared at the door. So, she lay on the floor, while the pair of boys didn't seem to notice their entrance, but instead of being extremely worried at that moment, his anger built up and he immediately yelled, "Fucking stop it you bastards!" Momiji was already at Tohru's aid, he noticed scratch marks around her neck, but other than that she was fine. Haru was slowly gaining consciousness from his Black attitude. Both combatants had blood spilling down their faces and hands, also panting madly. Shigure then said sternly, "Like to tell me what happened?"
Tohru had awakened from being moved closer to her room by Momiji's help, but she just broke loose from his hold and ran back to the mess. "Oh my god, we have to rush them to the hospital or something!" she exclaimed, seeming like she was never really hurt. Shigure instructed Momiji to call Hatori and Tohru to get some water and cloth, as well as ice. The two swiftly followed orders as they had been instructed. Thus again, the two looked at the older Sohma. His face calmed a bit, but he spoke still with sincerity. "Well, dou shimashita ka? (2) Care to share?" By that time White Haru finally reappeared. "I'll explain." "Yeah you better, I still fucking confused and furious," Kyo said, provoking him onward.
It had only lasted a few minutes but the story shocked audience and by that time Tohru and Momiji were arriving; the audience couldn't speak a word. "Gomene,(3) I had to smash the ice which took a while," Tohru said with a small smile forming. "Well, let's not see this accident again, futaritomo,(4)" Shigure said turning his back on them. "I will wait for Hatori at the front." Immediately after, both Momiji and Tohru scrambled to the sides of the wounded. Tohru to Kyo, and Momiji to Haru. While wiping off the drying blood, none of the people spoke to each other. It was as though everyone was clued in about the incident and was too embarrassed to say a word. But, Tohru decided she had to save the day. "Well, as soon as we got you two fixed up, who gets to shower first?" The three guys simply pointed towards the girl, who blushed and smiled. "Thank you."
Suddenly after that last comment, Hatori arrived at the scene. He rushed to all the injured and hurriedly added some bandages. Then, he swiftly rushed out since there were many emergencies on this New Year's Day. It was a very tiresome and awkward day for them all. However, each of the few involved had discovered a new problem to the picture. What were they going to do?
sake (SAH-Kay) - Japanese wine/alcohol
dou shimashita ka (Dou She Ma Sheta Kah) - what happened?
gomene (Go Men Ne) - "Sorry", informally
futaritomo (FuTaRi Tomo) - Literally meaning, "you two friends" but here is used in context of "you two"
Note From Fanfic Writer: Yes, I know. LAME. I have no idea of how to write these "lovey-dovey scenes" or what not. I don't want to copy people's technique, so I am off to try on my own. Forgive the naivety and "sadness." Well, this was my first attempt of writing a rape; I think it was a very bad one but, yes. Thanks for reading, please review, too! I think if I get enough comments of how terrible it was (which by all means I thought it was too. don't know why I am submitting it.), I will turn the story upside down and make it a Tragedy. Well, it was already very tragic. Enough of my ramblings, ne?
The Fanfic web format has completely confused me, I will try to enable it to allow the text in a more readable one, please be patient.
Good luck to my first fanfic story! Ganbarimasu! Critiques and reviews are appreciated. Thanks for reading. Not really implying anything.. but I guess the story is not very intriguing so far. But, I am working on it! The plot will thicken eventually! My previous chapter was quite strange. Please remember that I am a novice writer.
Warning: Spoiler ALERT! If you are scared of ruining the story on my behalf, I am sorry! Rated for various reasons due to mature content. Raised the Rating to R since I might add some gore and lemon in later chapters or something. I think there will be more excessive language misuse as well.
This Chapter's Rating Level is R for drama, language, excessive fluffiness/sensuality, attempted rape, and violence + gore.
Disclaimer: The characters are not owned by me but by Natsuki Takaya. Too bad for me. Oh yes, a few lines are possibly "borrowed" by me from the story.
The characters are likely NOT to act the way they do in my story. (OOC- ness?)
Pairings will be most likely Hatsuharu X Tohru and Kyo X Tohru. Fluff among the other guys of the juunishi. Who knows? If you think my spellings are a bit queer, my bad. I need more reviews, if you please. Well, I shouldn't demand them since my Fanfic is truly kind of boring. But, please do say something!
Translations of Japanese will appear at the bottom of Each Chapter now.
"~" Conversation. '~' Thoughts.
- - - - - - To the Story!
Chapter Five: Increasing Jealousy and Madness
~~~~~ Last scene from previous episode~~~~~
Giving her one last embrace for the night, Kyo gently kissed her forehead and they saw each other off at the door. Their suspicions were correct; there was a pair of eyes following the happy girl going back to her room.
~~~~ Back to story~~~~~
As the sun was rising, its beams of light glimmered into the young adolescent's room. Tohru had fell asleep with warm dreams (not wet ones!) and woke up to a fine and bright morning. The outdoor wildlife refreshed the girl to her senses and she went to do her morning chores. It clicked in her mind as she brushed her teeth that today she would participate in her first part-time job since graduation of High School. There she would earn some money to gather extra supplies for the coming new year. It would be the middle of the third year staying with the Sohmas.
After these many months she felt very secure under their supervision. Time also flew by very quickly and many memories were made and cherished. As the New Year approached, there was a growing anxiety throughout the remaining Sohmas of the Zodiac. Tension seemed to be building up from an inconspicuous source; but it had been sensed quite clearly. Trouble was arising inside the mind of one of the members of the Zodiac. Hatsuharu. He had been extremely fond of Tohru, but his chances were dropping drastically since Kyo had Tohru in her arms several times now. Jealousy if not even also envy were within the burning eyes of the poor cow. During some of the time though, Haru realized his only desires were mostly just to be intimate with Tohru. It bothered him greatly; he desired her more than loving her, which was the opposite attitude of Kyo which definitely started up conflict. Tohru would absolutely choose Kyo over him. It totally frustrated Haru. After this self-realization, he gradually began to deteriorate in tolerance and true understanding. He was turning into the adolescent which Kyo had first been like from the beginning of meeting Honda Tohru. It was most distressing and depressing. His conscience was darkening towards complete black. But what could he do?
Before long, it was New Year's Eve. Tohru had prepared a special feast since old friends had come to visit, Kisa, Hiro, Uotani and Hanajima included, plus a couple old acquaintances from High School. It was a very rowdy. Everyone had a multitude of fun, enjoyment, and entertainment. All except Haru. He remained in his room immediately after dinner. The night was too short but time flew past due to the happiness spread out through the active partying. As the guests were leaving and saying their goodbyes, Tohru excused herself for a while to go check up on Haru, she noticed his mood change. Earlier that week she had noticed it, but today was extremely malignant mood swings. She never found Haru being so pessimistic about a holiday. She pondered that it could be the chilling weather getting to the animal instincts. Reaching the door to Haru and Momiji's room, she knocked expectantly but for a very sad result. Some how, the cow had snagged some sake(1) from Shigure and was drinking it in multiple gulps. At that time, Haru turned absolutely Black with even more vicious thoughts in mind than ever before. His Black attitude always brought trouble to the surface, causing much terror and chaos. So he walked up to the door as he expected Tohru to be there, and as he did so, he grabbed her into the room, slamming the door shut after them.
Tohru definitely noticed a change in the once calm and thoughtful cow. Haru looked Black, due to the strains and dark circles under his once calm eyes. "Yo!" he said as he stumbled away towards the desk in the room. "Um. Haru-kun, are you okay?" Tohru said feeling quite worried. "Does it look it?" he growled at her. Feeling a bit bad she turned away for a moment but as soon as she turned, she noticed she was on the floor being pinned by Haru on top. "What are you doi-" Tohru started. "Keep silent, bitch," Haru said so roughly and calmly. He leaned down and grasped her wrists and bound them. He then stuffed her mouth to prevent much noise. In Haru's heart he was pleading his dark side to stop. 'Stop it! You will hurt her!' White Haru yelled subconsciously. 'What the hell is your problem? You always liked her and desired her in this way, just giving you what you wished for.' 'Not through rape! Damn it! Go away!' Tohru was stunned but she also noticed Haru's mental struggle due to his actions of grasping his own head. She felt very worried about him, even more than her own well- being. She tried to work her way through the binding of the ropes along her wrists. Black Haru still conquered through all the fuss and conflicts with his other "good" self so he was able to notice. "Tsk, tsk, missie. We don't want you doing that," he said as he rebound her wrists with another rope with a tighter hold. That time, it was quite painful, which soon brought salty tears down the girl's cheek. Tohru, feeling more tension building up continued to fight and she yelled in her thoughts for Haru to stop. In another manner, she also prayed to not lose her own virginity to such a revolting man. Her sobs were not heard, thus Black Haru worked his way stripping the girl of her most precious treasure. White Haru fought his way through the turmoil as well by screaming into his mind and heart of what he was exactly doing. Black was unmoved by those futile screams. The sake really got the best of this malign personality. "Don't worry girl, this won't be bad, well that bad," said Black in an informal reassuring tone towards the tear-stained girl.
The guests had left the house already, thus Kyo decided to relax, more specifically in his mind, sleep. Then, he noticed that Tohru had not been around for a while. He began his search for her, wandering around the first floor calling her name. He was stepping up to the second story where he could barely hear muffled sobs. Having old cat instincts did not prevent his constant alert in sound. He approached the sounds, which were near or around Haru's bedroom. He walked all the way towards the entrance of the room, when he put his ear to the door. It only took a second to realize what was going on, that was when he rushed in. There, he saw Tohru lying beneath Haru being groped, both half naked. Rage and anguish engulfed the young man. If it were visible, his eyes flamed into a bonfire. The old cat lunged for and grabbed the cow off his feet and to the nearest wall. Tohru was again stunned by this abrupt action. "What the fuck are you doing to her?" Kyo yelled at him, putting much pressure on the cow's back. "What do you think, fool," he said rather tauntingly. "Surely, you would be doing the same some time later." Then again, from that comment, Kyo punched him right at the cheekbone. It began swelling, but Black Haru was still smirking. "Kill me if you must, but you cannot deny the truth." Kyo continued to rage onward by thrusting his fists into the face of the Black cow. Blood started to spill down from both the victim and pursuer; the victim did not help reduce the anger, but continued to provoke him. The cow was soon able to defend himself due to the blind rage of the cat. During that time, Tohru had quickly gotten dressed but then fainted due to the excessive stink of blood and perspiration. He rushed forward and started knocking out Kyo. 'Jeez, I am the one supposed to do the punching, not that bastard.' Kyo said as he slowly began to lose consciousness. Before he did, after receiving dozens of blows on the face and chest, a man and a little boy appeared at the door. So, she lay on the floor, while the pair of boys didn't seem to notice their entrance, but instead of being extremely worried at that moment, his anger built up and he immediately yelled, "Fucking stop it you bastards!" Momiji was already at Tohru's aid, he noticed scratch marks around her neck, but other than that she was fine. Haru was slowly gaining consciousness from his Black attitude. Both combatants had blood spilling down their faces and hands, also panting madly. Shigure then said sternly, "Like to tell me what happened?"
Tohru had awakened from being moved closer to her room by Momiji's help, but she just broke loose from his hold and ran back to the mess. "Oh my god, we have to rush them to the hospital or something!" she exclaimed, seeming like she was never really hurt. Shigure instructed Momiji to call Hatori and Tohru to get some water and cloth, as well as ice. The two swiftly followed orders as they had been instructed. Thus again, the two looked at the older Sohma. His face calmed a bit, but he spoke still with sincerity. "Well, dou shimashita ka? (2) Care to share?" By that time White Haru finally reappeared. "I'll explain." "Yeah you better, I still fucking confused and furious," Kyo said, provoking him onward.
It had only lasted a few minutes but the story shocked audience and by that time Tohru and Momiji were arriving; the audience couldn't speak a word. "Gomene,(3) I had to smash the ice which took a while," Tohru said with a small smile forming. "Well, let's not see this accident again, futaritomo,(4)" Shigure said turning his back on them. "I will wait for Hatori at the front." Immediately after, both Momiji and Tohru scrambled to the sides of the wounded. Tohru to Kyo, and Momiji to Haru. While wiping off the drying blood, none of the people spoke to each other. It was as though everyone was clued in about the incident and was too embarrassed to say a word. But, Tohru decided she had to save the day. "Well, as soon as we got you two fixed up, who gets to shower first?" The three guys simply pointed towards the girl, who blushed and smiled. "Thank you."
Suddenly after that last comment, Hatori arrived at the scene. He rushed to all the injured and hurriedly added some bandages. Then, he swiftly rushed out since there were many emergencies on this New Year's Day. It was a very tiresome and awkward day for them all. However, each of the few involved had discovered a new problem to the picture. What were they going to do?
sake (SAH-Kay) - Japanese wine/alcohol
dou shimashita ka (Dou She Ma Sheta Kah) - what happened?
gomene (Go Men Ne) - "Sorry", informally
futaritomo (FuTaRi Tomo) - Literally meaning, "you two friends" but here is used in context of "you two"
Note From Fanfic Writer: Yes, I know. LAME. I have no idea of how to write these "lovey-dovey scenes" or what not. I don't want to copy people's technique, so I am off to try on my own. Forgive the naivety and "sadness." Well, this was my first attempt of writing a rape; I think it was a very bad one but, yes. Thanks for reading, please review, too! I think if I get enough comments of how terrible it was (which by all means I thought it was too. don't know why I am submitting it.), I will turn the story upside down and make it a Tragedy. Well, it was already very tragic. Enough of my ramblings, ne?