A sequel to the series, different and alternate versions (pairings,
situations, and such) [First Story written by me]
I have figured out the paragraphing system of this odd format, now the problem is now how to make spaces between the lines. After rereading my submitted chapters, I noticed MANY grammatical mistakes, so please forgive me. I will write the following chapter with more attention.
Critiques and reviews are appreciated. Thanks for reading. Not really implying anything. But I guess the story is not very intriguing so far. But, I am working on it! The plot will thicken eventually! My previous chapter was quite strange. Please remember that I am a novice writer.
Warning: Spoiler ALERT! Facts and thoughts of the people could be reflecting what the series are possibly spread throughout my fanfic. Rated for various reasons due to mature content. Raised the Rating to R since I might add some gore and lemon in later chapters or something. I think there will be more excessive language misuse as well.
This Chapter's Rating Level is R for angst/drama, language, excessive fluffiness/sensuality, and more violence + gore.
Disclaimer: The characters are not owned by me but by Natsuki Takaya. Too bad for me. Oh yes, a few lines are possibly "borrowed" by me from the story.
The characters are likely NOT to act the way they do in my story. (OOC- ness?)
Translations of Japanese will appear at the bottom of Each Chapter now.
"~" Conversation. '~' Thoughts.
- - - - - - To the Story!
Chapter Six: A Sealing Gap to Eternal Misery?
~~~~~ Last scene from previous episode~~~~~
It was a very tiresome and awkward day for them all. However, each of the few involved had discovered a new problem to the picture. What were they going to do?
~~~~ Back to story~~~~~
With much ease, which really surprised everyone, Tohru remained cheerful and considerate to everyone the day after that incident. Momiji and Shigure soon became unaffected as well. But, Kyo and Haru hurt the most. In addition, they were quite upset by the accident. Neither of the two talked to each other or even just Tohru. It remained that way for the rest of the month, which was another four weeks. Tohru started to feel restless, not being able to see the true guises of her good friends. It depressed her into a bottomless pit herself.
Momiji was the only "between" person. Shigure grew just indifferent to the situation since he wanted the adolescents to solve their own problems since they were almost adults themselves. Like a reluctant parent, he released his younger part of the family to go their own way and find a solution. From there, Momiji too became exasperated due to the taciturn atmosphere that had developed from the beginning of the New Year. Hiro and Kisa came by as often as they could to comfort their family too. It had helped, but the distressed threesome continued to worsen in health factors as well. They had not eaten much for an entire month, thus their immune systems starting to fall. Hatori almost came every night to check up on them. Even with lacking energy and nutrition, Kyo, Haru, and Tohru did not catch any diseases or illnesses.
Finally as the fifth week of silence rolled in, Momiji had had enough. He threw a fit at everyone.
"Why are we like this!?!?" he screamed at everyone during dinner soon bursting into tears, being the sentimental boy that he was. "I can't take any more! Don't hate each other, or merely ignore each other! This is not what I thought a family would be like! I thought we were a group, a team, a family! Please talk, more and more. Talk and express your feelings, I am sure you can barely contain them yourselves!"
After not speaking for a long time except a few words of yes, no, and meal's ready, she spoke aloud saying, " I would have to agree. The circumstances of silence have not solved a thing. It should be a team effort to solve it as well. Who knows? We might continue fighting each other, but we must do something other than shutting out any possible light."
"Agreed," said both Kyo and Haru in unison. For a minute, they glared at each other, but they confirmed the plan together, which a step. Shigure also nodded in agreement as well.
Thus, noise arrived into the house once again. Momiji's whining, Tohru's apologizing, and Shigure's large laughter. As if Haru turned into Yuki, Kyo would challenge him daily, but their silent relationship had disappeared. It was, of course, not the best turn of events, but it was better.
However, during a week later, as Kyo's day got bad to worse he got immensely furious. And so when Haru talked to him, it automatically provoked him. He directly punched Haru's cheek. Of course, still unable to maintain his on split personality, he turned Black.
"What the fuck do you think you are doing to me, you lame-ass bastard," Haru panted outwardly with a bit of struggle since his face there started to swell a bit. Then, he thought he caught Kyo off guard; thus, he thrust his fist forward at Kyo's chest. Kyo, surprised by Haru's greater strength from the last fight, took the entire blow. It knocked a lot of wind out of the poor orange kitty. Kyo then coughed, some blood spurted out of his mouth landing in splashes on the wooden floor. His chest hurt like fiery Hell. But, he still kept his grip and he got into his fighting mode again.
"So you do want a piece of me you cow-shit?" he said provokingly. "Come and get a taste of death if you dare." By command, at the last word Kyo uttered, Black Haru charged forward kicking and punching wildly, but with deadly aim. Already kind of wounded and knocked "out", he lost many reflexes causing him to catch some of the thrusts beaten down on him. After just five minutes, Kyo's face and clothing was covered in bloodstains, while Haru in similar condition.
Provoking him forward for more, Kyo asked cockily, "Is that it? Surely, you aren't finished yet?" "Shut up you son of a bitch," Black yelled out, resuming their fight immediately afterwards. Tohru, along with Shigure and Momiji had gone out to do some shopping and they were approaching home. Shigure could sense, more precisely hear and smell a fight had been stirred. 'God damn it, why'd they have to fight again?' Shigure thought to himself as he kindly pushed Tohru and Momiji faster into the house. "Hurry in you two, but stay in the living room or kitchen for a while."
Momiji also, being a previous zodiac member could sense some tension. But, he remained to stay with Tohru. While, Shigure ran up towards the bedroom, he cursed silently for the dumb idiots to be fighting again. He thought to himself, 'Will Kyo ever learn that Yuki is no longer here and so there should be no more fighting?' Within a few more seconds, he reached the door and opened.
He saw two figures intertwined in deep combat; blood had been sitting around and drying for what looked like an hour. "Fucking stop it, you fools!" Shigure yelled at the top of his lungs. With that single phrase, the boys were snapped back into defensive mode. Tohru heard a yell, but it was unclear since she and Momiji were watching some anime (a bit old, but hey some adolescents around that age still like it!).
Back upstairs, Shigure listened to Kyo and Haru's cries of jealousy. But, the main point was that they were both in love with Tohru. He subconsciously sighed and thought it was the case. Secretly, Shigure grew very fond of her himself, he also noticed it in Hatori's eyes and every male of the junishii. Tohru brought an unexpected love and care from the outside world to everyone of the Zodiac; it was relished by everyone. But, Shigure knew the effects would grow into something more desirable which would then cause dispute. He then thought what a terrible mess it would end up to be. Tohru would accept both, but it would be an impossible lasting relationship. Two loves were not allowed in the laws of nature; it was a known taboo. More importantly, it would just cause more conflict. What was Shigure to do about this mix-up? In addition to this huge dilemma, Yuki would be returning for a month's vacation. 'Great news for my residency, more repairs will be needed.' Shigure thought to himself.
Feeling finally too annoyed by their arguments, Shigure interrupted Haru and Kyo's debate. "Hey! You two better not continue to wreck my beautiful house! It is quite precious to me as to the others. I know it will be hard to resist fighting each other, but the house needs to be well maintained; you will shatter it if you continue," Shigure said practically referring to Tohru, but he just had to put it in analogy form being a novelist and all. Then, as Shigure left the room, Haru and Kyo shook hands rather reluctantly but Kyo stated, " Shigure is probably right for a change. We should not ruin her life over our stupid fight; let her decide upon us, there will be Yuki as one of her options, too." Haru had long ago changed to White after the fight, thus he simply nodded in agreement. From there, the two "rivals" for love stood at a ceasefire relationship and waited for Yuki's arrival where they would have to further continue to prevent their venting anger over Tohru.
.To Be Continued.
Author's Note: Well, if that was not a bit weird. I would be worried for you. I don't know exactly what I have planned for Kyo, Haru, Yuki, and Tohru, but let's just say you and I are in for a surprise from my storytelling. Thanks for reading, now get more "love" by reviewing my piece!
I have figured out the paragraphing system of this odd format, now the problem is now how to make spaces between the lines. After rereading my submitted chapters, I noticed MANY grammatical mistakes, so please forgive me. I will write the following chapter with more attention.
Critiques and reviews are appreciated. Thanks for reading. Not really implying anything. But I guess the story is not very intriguing so far. But, I am working on it! The plot will thicken eventually! My previous chapter was quite strange. Please remember that I am a novice writer.
Warning: Spoiler ALERT! Facts and thoughts of the people could be reflecting what the series are possibly spread throughout my fanfic. Rated for various reasons due to mature content. Raised the Rating to R since I might add some gore and lemon in later chapters or something. I think there will be more excessive language misuse as well.
This Chapter's Rating Level is R for angst/drama, language, excessive fluffiness/sensuality, and more violence + gore.
Disclaimer: The characters are not owned by me but by Natsuki Takaya. Too bad for me. Oh yes, a few lines are possibly "borrowed" by me from the story.
The characters are likely NOT to act the way they do in my story. (OOC- ness?)
Translations of Japanese will appear at the bottom of Each Chapter now.
"~" Conversation. '~' Thoughts.
- - - - - - To the Story!
Chapter Six: A Sealing Gap to Eternal Misery?
~~~~~ Last scene from previous episode~~~~~
It was a very tiresome and awkward day for them all. However, each of the few involved had discovered a new problem to the picture. What were they going to do?
~~~~ Back to story~~~~~
With much ease, which really surprised everyone, Tohru remained cheerful and considerate to everyone the day after that incident. Momiji and Shigure soon became unaffected as well. But, Kyo and Haru hurt the most. In addition, they were quite upset by the accident. Neither of the two talked to each other or even just Tohru. It remained that way for the rest of the month, which was another four weeks. Tohru started to feel restless, not being able to see the true guises of her good friends. It depressed her into a bottomless pit herself.
Momiji was the only "between" person. Shigure grew just indifferent to the situation since he wanted the adolescents to solve their own problems since they were almost adults themselves. Like a reluctant parent, he released his younger part of the family to go their own way and find a solution. From there, Momiji too became exasperated due to the taciturn atmosphere that had developed from the beginning of the New Year. Hiro and Kisa came by as often as they could to comfort their family too. It had helped, but the distressed threesome continued to worsen in health factors as well. They had not eaten much for an entire month, thus their immune systems starting to fall. Hatori almost came every night to check up on them. Even with lacking energy and nutrition, Kyo, Haru, and Tohru did not catch any diseases or illnesses.
Finally as the fifth week of silence rolled in, Momiji had had enough. He threw a fit at everyone.
"Why are we like this!?!?" he screamed at everyone during dinner soon bursting into tears, being the sentimental boy that he was. "I can't take any more! Don't hate each other, or merely ignore each other! This is not what I thought a family would be like! I thought we were a group, a team, a family! Please talk, more and more. Talk and express your feelings, I am sure you can barely contain them yourselves!"
After not speaking for a long time except a few words of yes, no, and meal's ready, she spoke aloud saying, " I would have to agree. The circumstances of silence have not solved a thing. It should be a team effort to solve it as well. Who knows? We might continue fighting each other, but we must do something other than shutting out any possible light."
"Agreed," said both Kyo and Haru in unison. For a minute, they glared at each other, but they confirmed the plan together, which a step. Shigure also nodded in agreement as well.
Thus, noise arrived into the house once again. Momiji's whining, Tohru's apologizing, and Shigure's large laughter. As if Haru turned into Yuki, Kyo would challenge him daily, but their silent relationship had disappeared. It was, of course, not the best turn of events, but it was better.
However, during a week later, as Kyo's day got bad to worse he got immensely furious. And so when Haru talked to him, it automatically provoked him. He directly punched Haru's cheek. Of course, still unable to maintain his on split personality, he turned Black.
"What the fuck do you think you are doing to me, you lame-ass bastard," Haru panted outwardly with a bit of struggle since his face there started to swell a bit. Then, he thought he caught Kyo off guard; thus, he thrust his fist forward at Kyo's chest. Kyo, surprised by Haru's greater strength from the last fight, took the entire blow. It knocked a lot of wind out of the poor orange kitty. Kyo then coughed, some blood spurted out of his mouth landing in splashes on the wooden floor. His chest hurt like fiery Hell. But, he still kept his grip and he got into his fighting mode again.
"So you do want a piece of me you cow-shit?" he said provokingly. "Come and get a taste of death if you dare." By command, at the last word Kyo uttered, Black Haru charged forward kicking and punching wildly, but with deadly aim. Already kind of wounded and knocked "out", he lost many reflexes causing him to catch some of the thrusts beaten down on him. After just five minutes, Kyo's face and clothing was covered in bloodstains, while Haru in similar condition.
Provoking him forward for more, Kyo asked cockily, "Is that it? Surely, you aren't finished yet?" "Shut up you son of a bitch," Black yelled out, resuming their fight immediately afterwards. Tohru, along with Shigure and Momiji had gone out to do some shopping and they were approaching home. Shigure could sense, more precisely hear and smell a fight had been stirred. 'God damn it, why'd they have to fight again?' Shigure thought to himself as he kindly pushed Tohru and Momiji faster into the house. "Hurry in you two, but stay in the living room or kitchen for a while."
Momiji also, being a previous zodiac member could sense some tension. But, he remained to stay with Tohru. While, Shigure ran up towards the bedroom, he cursed silently for the dumb idiots to be fighting again. He thought to himself, 'Will Kyo ever learn that Yuki is no longer here and so there should be no more fighting?' Within a few more seconds, he reached the door and opened.
He saw two figures intertwined in deep combat; blood had been sitting around and drying for what looked like an hour. "Fucking stop it, you fools!" Shigure yelled at the top of his lungs. With that single phrase, the boys were snapped back into defensive mode. Tohru heard a yell, but it was unclear since she and Momiji were watching some anime (a bit old, but hey some adolescents around that age still like it!).
Back upstairs, Shigure listened to Kyo and Haru's cries of jealousy. But, the main point was that they were both in love with Tohru. He subconsciously sighed and thought it was the case. Secretly, Shigure grew very fond of her himself, he also noticed it in Hatori's eyes and every male of the junishii. Tohru brought an unexpected love and care from the outside world to everyone of the Zodiac; it was relished by everyone. But, Shigure knew the effects would grow into something more desirable which would then cause dispute. He then thought what a terrible mess it would end up to be. Tohru would accept both, but it would be an impossible lasting relationship. Two loves were not allowed in the laws of nature; it was a known taboo. More importantly, it would just cause more conflict. What was Shigure to do about this mix-up? In addition to this huge dilemma, Yuki would be returning for a month's vacation. 'Great news for my residency, more repairs will be needed.' Shigure thought to himself.
Feeling finally too annoyed by their arguments, Shigure interrupted Haru and Kyo's debate. "Hey! You two better not continue to wreck my beautiful house! It is quite precious to me as to the others. I know it will be hard to resist fighting each other, but the house needs to be well maintained; you will shatter it if you continue," Shigure said practically referring to Tohru, but he just had to put it in analogy form being a novelist and all. Then, as Shigure left the room, Haru and Kyo shook hands rather reluctantly but Kyo stated, " Shigure is probably right for a change. We should not ruin her life over our stupid fight; let her decide upon us, there will be Yuki as one of her options, too." Haru had long ago changed to White after the fight, thus he simply nodded in agreement. From there, the two "rivals" for love stood at a ceasefire relationship and waited for Yuki's arrival where they would have to further continue to prevent their venting anger over Tohru.
.To Be Continued.
Author's Note: Well, if that was not a bit weird. I would be worried for you. I don't know exactly what I have planned for Kyo, Haru, Yuki, and Tohru, but let's just say you and I are in for a surprise from my storytelling. Thanks for reading, now get more "love" by reviewing my piece!