Hi everyone!!!!!!!!! I am SOOOOOOOO surprised!!!!!! I actually received
some reviews!!!!!!! Thank you, for actually finding it in your hearts to
read and review my story. I'm not worth your complements. * starts sobbing
uncontrollably * sniff..sniff.. * takes stuffed 002 toy and starts wiping
tears on it *Oh, by the way, could you tell me what itoshii and kioshii ( I
don't know how to spell ) are? Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
Ok enough of me blabbering on and on. Here's the story!
'009' - thoughts
"009" - speaking
::: - change of scene
P.O.V - personal observation
*009* - 001's way of speaking
Chapter Two Let The Training Begin!
"Hmmm.. Lets see how this virtual training room works.." 003 said to herself while fiddling with the controls to the brand new training room on the Dolphin. She had decided that this new training room was the fastest way to get stronger. She saw a panel marked with bright, glowing letters that said "Cyborgs" Under that were two columns, one with the names of all the 00 cyborgs, and one that said "training levels" and the numbers 1 through 10.
"I think I should start off with an easy opponent" 003 said as she chose 0010 and the power level of 5. 003 walked in, and she saw 0010 on a high rock, staring down at her, and grinning maliciously. ( just like the episode when they first meet 0010 )
"Training, begin!" 003 said in a strong, clear voice. 0010 jumped off the rock and aimed an electric shock at her. She dodged, and fired back. 0010 blocked with his two forearms and charged toward her, fists at the ready. 003 moved back, then forward, left, then right, dodging his blows. 0010 suddenly shot an electric blast at her feet, sending her flying. He jumped, and when he was level with 003, aimed his gun at her heart. 003 waited for her chance, then somersaulted, bouncing off a nearby rock. 0010 plunged forward and while he was off balance, 003 shot him in the back. 0010 screamed and fell to the floor, dead.
"Training session complete!" The room illuminated itself again and 003 walked out, her breath coming in short gasps.
'that was harder than I imagined. But I still have to get stronger in order to really help my teammates'. 003 walked by the infirmary and heard Dr. Gilmore whispering to 009. She knew it was wrong to eavesdrop, but she couldn't help herself. Besides, this might tell her if 009's condition was improving or not.
"009, are you feeling alright?" Dr. Gilmore asked, in a concerned voice.
"I'm fine, just a little sore in the back. Hey, what's that? And how come its got my name on it?" 009 said, surprised.
"Oh, that? It's nothing, really." 003 heard paper shuffling around "Give that back! You have no right reading my papers!" a very distressed Dr. Gilmore said.
"Well, you have no right to write an article about me and not tell me anything...WHAT!!!!!!!! Who gave you permission to read my brainwaves!!!!!!!!! This stuff is very, VERY personal!!!! And I'd like to keep it that way!!!!!"
"Calm down, 009. These papers are for my eyes only like I told you so many times before. I won't tell anyone what I've found out.
"You swear?"
"Yes, I swear I won't tell anyone about your feelings for 003"
Well? How'd you like it? This chapter took me an hour and a half to write and it had better be worth it. Thank you for all the people who reviewed and I hope they keep reviewing! I can't believe so many great writers reviewed! And I mean every single one of you!!!!
Serene Faerie: Thank you SOOOOO much for reviewing!!! I'll try to make my chapters longer but I really don't have enough time with all my schoolwork and stuff. As for making them easier to read, my computer does some really weird stuff to my chapters as soon as I get them on fanfiction the spaces are deleted. I hope this one is better.
Wolfwood11: Thanks for reviewing!!! I really want to read your cyborg story but I can NEVER find it before my mom starts screaming at me to get offline. I'll update as fast as I can.
Sweet Dark Angel 009: ohhhh. so THAT'S what they are. I've been wondering about that. I don't want to be a bother or anything, but what does itoshii and kioshii mean? I know , bad spelling but they seem like words to use in romance stories so could you PLEASE tell me? Thank you SOOOOOOOO much for your complements. I need them right now cause my French teacher is making me feel really stupid. I really hope that my fic is going to be a success. Thank you for your support!
Godrina-of-the-Cyborgs: ^_^ back to you for reviewing
GoldAngel2: I can't believe a great writer such as yourself is reviewing my cyborg fic! THANK YOU and THANK YOU and THANK YOU again! I read your sunset into darkness story. It was soooooooo good!
'009' - thoughts
"009" - speaking
::: - change of scene
P.O.V - personal observation
*009* - 001's way of speaking
Chapter Two Let The Training Begin!
"Hmmm.. Lets see how this virtual training room works.." 003 said to herself while fiddling with the controls to the brand new training room on the Dolphin. She had decided that this new training room was the fastest way to get stronger. She saw a panel marked with bright, glowing letters that said "Cyborgs" Under that were two columns, one with the names of all the 00 cyborgs, and one that said "training levels" and the numbers 1 through 10.
"I think I should start off with an easy opponent" 003 said as she chose 0010 and the power level of 5. 003 walked in, and she saw 0010 on a high rock, staring down at her, and grinning maliciously. ( just like the episode when they first meet 0010 )
"Training, begin!" 003 said in a strong, clear voice. 0010 jumped off the rock and aimed an electric shock at her. She dodged, and fired back. 0010 blocked with his two forearms and charged toward her, fists at the ready. 003 moved back, then forward, left, then right, dodging his blows. 0010 suddenly shot an electric blast at her feet, sending her flying. He jumped, and when he was level with 003, aimed his gun at her heart. 003 waited for her chance, then somersaulted, bouncing off a nearby rock. 0010 plunged forward and while he was off balance, 003 shot him in the back. 0010 screamed and fell to the floor, dead.
"Training session complete!" The room illuminated itself again and 003 walked out, her breath coming in short gasps.
'that was harder than I imagined. But I still have to get stronger in order to really help my teammates'. 003 walked by the infirmary and heard Dr. Gilmore whispering to 009. She knew it was wrong to eavesdrop, but she couldn't help herself. Besides, this might tell her if 009's condition was improving or not.
"009, are you feeling alright?" Dr. Gilmore asked, in a concerned voice.
"I'm fine, just a little sore in the back. Hey, what's that? And how come its got my name on it?" 009 said, surprised.
"Oh, that? It's nothing, really." 003 heard paper shuffling around "Give that back! You have no right reading my papers!" a very distressed Dr. Gilmore said.
"Well, you have no right to write an article about me and not tell me anything...WHAT!!!!!!!! Who gave you permission to read my brainwaves!!!!!!!!! This stuff is very, VERY personal!!!! And I'd like to keep it that way!!!!!"
"Calm down, 009. These papers are for my eyes only like I told you so many times before. I won't tell anyone what I've found out.
"You swear?"
"Yes, I swear I won't tell anyone about your feelings for 003"
Well? How'd you like it? This chapter took me an hour and a half to write and it had better be worth it. Thank you for all the people who reviewed and I hope they keep reviewing! I can't believe so many great writers reviewed! And I mean every single one of you!!!!
Serene Faerie: Thank you SOOOOO much for reviewing!!! I'll try to make my chapters longer but I really don't have enough time with all my schoolwork and stuff. As for making them easier to read, my computer does some really weird stuff to my chapters as soon as I get them on fanfiction the spaces are deleted. I hope this one is better.
Wolfwood11: Thanks for reviewing!!! I really want to read your cyborg story but I can NEVER find it before my mom starts screaming at me to get offline. I'll update as fast as I can.
Sweet Dark Angel 009: ohhhh. so THAT'S what they are. I've been wondering about that. I don't want to be a bother or anything, but what does itoshii and kioshii mean? I know , bad spelling but they seem like words to use in romance stories so could you PLEASE tell me? Thank you SOOOOOOOO much for your complements. I need them right now cause my French teacher is making me feel really stupid. I really hope that my fic is going to be a success. Thank you for your support!
Godrina-of-the-Cyborgs: ^_^ back to you for reviewing
GoldAngel2: I can't believe a great writer such as yourself is reviewing my cyborg fic! THANK YOU and THANK YOU and THANK YOU again! I read your sunset into darkness story. It was soooooooo good!