*squees in delight* OMG OMG!!!! I feel so loved!!! Guess who reviewed MY
story!!! Guess!!!!! Chiki-dono!!!! *falls over* She's one of my favorite
fan fic authors and she reviewed my story!!!! *jumps around excitedly* And
to top it off, another one of my fav authors, charismatic angel, also
reviewed my story! Now I feel like I have to do a good job, because if two
really good authors are reading my story, I cannot let them down, because
they have not let me down. On and a new note, when I'm talking *...* are
actions, not thoughts, but in the story they're thoughts. I hope I don't
confuse people.
Wow, so now I'm like, all excited and stuff.
In other news, my best friend, who was the one who got me into Kenshin in the first place, read what I had of the story so far, and he kept making weird comments. Like his first one really threw me off. "What reality is this?" An alternate one, duh! *giggles* and then he asks: "One where Tomoe doesn't die and Enishi isn't bitter?" I wanted to hit him, cause Tomoe does die, and Enishi will be bitter, you'll see!!! He also made comments about their clothes, what little I did describe of them. I think he was weirded out cause I dressed Kenshin like him. *evil grin* I couldn't help it, my best friend is a pretty long haired boy too. I can see Kenshin dressing the same way.
Yea, I'm talking too much, you guys must want to get to the smut already, huh? It's PG-13 smut, so no lemons, just mass amounts of lime. You were warned. If your mama don't want you readin it, then don't, aight? Cause I don't want your mama blaming me for your corruption, thats what your friends are for.
I'm not Watsuki-sama, so I don't own Kenshin.... *sniffles*
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"Oro...."
"Mou...."
*I am very drunk* They both thought at the same time.
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The Price Of Love
Chapter Three: I Think I Love You
One fleeting drunken moment led to another and soon Kenshin and Kaoru had forgotten Sano and Misao, and had left for Kenshin's house. They barely talked, mostly because their mouths were busy discovering each other.
The night became one huge blur to them both, the only things standing out were when Kaoru had pulled Kenshin's ponytail out of it's binding with what seemed like desperation, when Kenshin had shoved Kaoru against the wall while stripping her hurriedly, and when Kaoru had screamed her desire for him to release inside of her. And that was just the first time.
They eventually lost count and fell asleep in each other's arms, exhausted.
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Kaoru stirred in the bed, snuggling closer to her husband's warm frame, inhaling deeply the strong scent of ginger and forestry that permeated from his skin. Her eyes then shot wide open and she jerked away from the man next to her, waking him as well.
It was not her husband Enishi. *He doesn't smell like ginger* She looked down at the man she was with and his amethyst eyes gazed back up at her, his deep red hair spilling over the pillow. *Oh no...I did it. I really did it. I can't believe..... Mou!!*
Kenshin racked his brain, trying to recall the night before. Then finally he remembered meeting the slightly mussed angel in front of him. Proud he was at that moment, because he even remembered her name. "Kaoru, what is it? Did you have a bad dream?" His hand went up and reached to push her hair behind her ear, giving him a clear veiw of her face. Using his thumb he stroked her cheek, trying to soothe her. He sat up, pushing his hair back out of his face, and moved himself closer to Kaoru. Black strands had fallen back over her shoulder, cascading down her front, covering his veiw of her bare chest. Both of his hands reached over to her, gathering all of her hair to sweep it back behind her so he could gaze upon her form without obstruction.
With every touch from Kenshin, Kaoru melted just a little more. She relaxed, and started to remember most of the night before. Then as he moved her hair, small tears began to fall from her eyes, and Kaoru moved to cross her arms over her chest, trying to hide from him. She couldn't believe that she had done this. She barely knew the man who's naked body was pressing against hers. His head moved to rest against hers, and she could hear him cooing softly in her ear. One of his hands moved to rub small circles into her back, while the other reached over to tilt her head towards him, so he could kiss away the tears that were steadily falling.
"Shhh," Kenshin whispered. "I'm sorry, I'm so sorry, that I am. I should have been more gentle, I should have waited until we were both sober, that I should have. Please don't cry, it hurts to see you cry. Angels shouldn't have to cry, that they shouldn't." Kenshin kept rubbing her back, while he let her sob into his shoulder. Against his bare skin he could feel her cold tears, and he could finally hear her gasping for air as her body shook softly. "We'll start over, that we will. Everything will be fine. In case you can't remember, I'm Kenshin. We're in my house." He sighed and started telling her about himself in an effort to calm her. He explained how his parents died when he was little, and how he worked with his adoptive father at a pottery shop, how his adoptive father insisted Kenshin call him Shishou and how Shishou actually made the pottery they sold. Kenshin told her stories of how if she ever met Shishou Hiko, he would tell her of Kenshin's childhood bedwetting habits and how Kenshin was an idiot, and more stories of how Shishou had taught him a old form of kendo that had been passed down to Shishou a long time ago. Then came the stories of Sano and how Sano insisted on coming over and eating everything Kenshin had in the house, how Sano was always gambling and looking for fights, and how Sano had a weird realtionship with Megumi, where Megumi would hit Sano everytime she felt he deserved it.
Kaoru listened to Kenshin talking, telling her embarassing things, funny things, anything. The tears stopped falling and Kaoru had resigned herself to listening intently to everything Kenshin had to say, her arms snaking around him to hold him closer. Kenshin had leaned back, propping himself up on the pillows, taking Kaoru with him so her head rested on his chest. His fingers played with her hair as he talked, and he smiled when he she reached up to pull one of his own crimson strands down to her so she could toy with it.
"Tell me about you now," he purred down at her. "I want to hear everything."
So she started talking, her own story of how her mother died when she was very young and her father had taught her the family kendo style in hopes that Kaoru would run the school when he was gone. She talked about her adoptive brother Yahiko and how when they were both younger they used to argue and fight all the time. Sighing softly, she recounted for Kenshin how her father had died, and how she now ran the dojo with her little brother. She left out how she was married to a wonderful man who gave her everything, and she felt bad for doing so. Part of her wanted to tell Kenshin everything, wanted him to know her completely. But instead she told him how she was just here on a short vacation, staying with her friend Misao. However she did tell Kenshin how Misao was pining over her grandfather's assistant, Aoshi, and how Misao practically threw herself at him everytime he was around.
"Do you feel better now?" Kenshin asked her as he traced her lips softly with his fingertips. In response Kaoru moaned softly, letting the tip of her tongue run across one of his trailing fingers. Desire for the man lying under her had peaked again, and all she could think of was how much she wanted him. Without any warning she licked a line across his chest, flicking her tongue over one of his nipples, and for her efforts she was rewarded with a moan from him and visual proof that her attentions were producing the desired effect.
Kenshin growled low in his throat and in one swift movement had flipped Kaoru over in the bed, so he was now the one on top. Dipping his head down, he delivered kisses to her neck and down to her chest. Red hair fell down around the couple as Kaoru moved her hands over Kenshin's back and around to his chest, touching everything she could.
Their movements were slow and torturous, hands skimming down here, lips and tongue moving lavishly there. Even when Kenshin entered her, it was languid and gentle. The night before they had been hurried and rough, desire buring through them, but now the time was taken to discover every hidden part of each other. After what seemed forever, they reached their climax as one, crying out to the other as pleasure washed over them, leaving them breathless.
Kenshin rolled off of Kaoru and snuggled close to her, breathing deeply of her jasmine scent. The fluttering of her eyes showed Kenshin that she was close to drifting to sleep.
He ran his hands down over her body one more time and softly whispered as he was drifting off, "I think I love you..."
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Woo, so there's your Sprite!! lemony-lime goodness. I tried to make it as tame as possible, but still have it as steamy as possible.
I really hoped you liked this chapter!!! Please review more!!!!
*squishings*
Isis
Wow, so now I'm like, all excited and stuff.
In other news, my best friend, who was the one who got me into Kenshin in the first place, read what I had of the story so far, and he kept making weird comments. Like his first one really threw me off. "What reality is this?" An alternate one, duh! *giggles* and then he asks: "One where Tomoe doesn't die and Enishi isn't bitter?" I wanted to hit him, cause Tomoe does die, and Enishi will be bitter, you'll see!!! He also made comments about their clothes, what little I did describe of them. I think he was weirded out cause I dressed Kenshin like him. *evil grin* I couldn't help it, my best friend is a pretty long haired boy too. I can see Kenshin dressing the same way.
Yea, I'm talking too much, you guys must want to get to the smut already, huh? It's PG-13 smut, so no lemons, just mass amounts of lime. You were warned. If your mama don't want you readin it, then don't, aight? Cause I don't want your mama blaming me for your corruption, thats what your friends are for.
I'm not Watsuki-sama, so I don't own Kenshin.... *sniffles*
------------------------------------------------
"Oro...."
"Mou...."
*I am very drunk* They both thought at the same time.
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The Price Of Love
Chapter Three: I Think I Love You
One fleeting drunken moment led to another and soon Kenshin and Kaoru had forgotten Sano and Misao, and had left for Kenshin's house. They barely talked, mostly because their mouths were busy discovering each other.
The night became one huge blur to them both, the only things standing out were when Kaoru had pulled Kenshin's ponytail out of it's binding with what seemed like desperation, when Kenshin had shoved Kaoru against the wall while stripping her hurriedly, and when Kaoru had screamed her desire for him to release inside of her. And that was just the first time.
They eventually lost count and fell asleep in each other's arms, exhausted.
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Kaoru stirred in the bed, snuggling closer to her husband's warm frame, inhaling deeply the strong scent of ginger and forestry that permeated from his skin. Her eyes then shot wide open and she jerked away from the man next to her, waking him as well.
It was not her husband Enishi. *He doesn't smell like ginger* She looked down at the man she was with and his amethyst eyes gazed back up at her, his deep red hair spilling over the pillow. *Oh no...I did it. I really did it. I can't believe..... Mou!!*
Kenshin racked his brain, trying to recall the night before. Then finally he remembered meeting the slightly mussed angel in front of him. Proud he was at that moment, because he even remembered her name. "Kaoru, what is it? Did you have a bad dream?" His hand went up and reached to push her hair behind her ear, giving him a clear veiw of her face. Using his thumb he stroked her cheek, trying to soothe her. He sat up, pushing his hair back out of his face, and moved himself closer to Kaoru. Black strands had fallen back over her shoulder, cascading down her front, covering his veiw of her bare chest. Both of his hands reached over to her, gathering all of her hair to sweep it back behind her so he could gaze upon her form without obstruction.
With every touch from Kenshin, Kaoru melted just a little more. She relaxed, and started to remember most of the night before. Then as he moved her hair, small tears began to fall from her eyes, and Kaoru moved to cross her arms over her chest, trying to hide from him. She couldn't believe that she had done this. She barely knew the man who's naked body was pressing against hers. His head moved to rest against hers, and she could hear him cooing softly in her ear. One of his hands moved to rub small circles into her back, while the other reached over to tilt her head towards him, so he could kiss away the tears that were steadily falling.
"Shhh," Kenshin whispered. "I'm sorry, I'm so sorry, that I am. I should have been more gentle, I should have waited until we were both sober, that I should have. Please don't cry, it hurts to see you cry. Angels shouldn't have to cry, that they shouldn't." Kenshin kept rubbing her back, while he let her sob into his shoulder. Against his bare skin he could feel her cold tears, and he could finally hear her gasping for air as her body shook softly. "We'll start over, that we will. Everything will be fine. In case you can't remember, I'm Kenshin. We're in my house." He sighed and started telling her about himself in an effort to calm her. He explained how his parents died when he was little, and how he worked with his adoptive father at a pottery shop, how his adoptive father insisted Kenshin call him Shishou and how Shishou actually made the pottery they sold. Kenshin told her stories of how if she ever met Shishou Hiko, he would tell her of Kenshin's childhood bedwetting habits and how Kenshin was an idiot, and more stories of how Shishou had taught him a old form of kendo that had been passed down to Shishou a long time ago. Then came the stories of Sano and how Sano insisted on coming over and eating everything Kenshin had in the house, how Sano was always gambling and looking for fights, and how Sano had a weird realtionship with Megumi, where Megumi would hit Sano everytime she felt he deserved it.
Kaoru listened to Kenshin talking, telling her embarassing things, funny things, anything. The tears stopped falling and Kaoru had resigned herself to listening intently to everything Kenshin had to say, her arms snaking around him to hold him closer. Kenshin had leaned back, propping himself up on the pillows, taking Kaoru with him so her head rested on his chest. His fingers played with her hair as he talked, and he smiled when he she reached up to pull one of his own crimson strands down to her so she could toy with it.
"Tell me about you now," he purred down at her. "I want to hear everything."
So she started talking, her own story of how her mother died when she was very young and her father had taught her the family kendo style in hopes that Kaoru would run the school when he was gone. She talked about her adoptive brother Yahiko and how when they were both younger they used to argue and fight all the time. Sighing softly, she recounted for Kenshin how her father had died, and how she now ran the dojo with her little brother. She left out how she was married to a wonderful man who gave her everything, and she felt bad for doing so. Part of her wanted to tell Kenshin everything, wanted him to know her completely. But instead she told him how she was just here on a short vacation, staying with her friend Misao. However she did tell Kenshin how Misao was pining over her grandfather's assistant, Aoshi, and how Misao practically threw herself at him everytime he was around.
"Do you feel better now?" Kenshin asked her as he traced her lips softly with his fingertips. In response Kaoru moaned softly, letting the tip of her tongue run across one of his trailing fingers. Desire for the man lying under her had peaked again, and all she could think of was how much she wanted him. Without any warning she licked a line across his chest, flicking her tongue over one of his nipples, and for her efforts she was rewarded with a moan from him and visual proof that her attentions were producing the desired effect.
Kenshin growled low in his throat and in one swift movement had flipped Kaoru over in the bed, so he was now the one on top. Dipping his head down, he delivered kisses to her neck and down to her chest. Red hair fell down around the couple as Kaoru moved her hands over Kenshin's back and around to his chest, touching everything she could.
Their movements were slow and torturous, hands skimming down here, lips and tongue moving lavishly there. Even when Kenshin entered her, it was languid and gentle. The night before they had been hurried and rough, desire buring through them, but now the time was taken to discover every hidden part of each other. After what seemed forever, they reached their climax as one, crying out to the other as pleasure washed over them, leaving them breathless.
Kenshin rolled off of Kaoru and snuggled close to her, breathing deeply of her jasmine scent. The fluttering of her eyes showed Kenshin that she was close to drifting to sleep.
He ran his hands down over her body one more time and softly whispered as he was drifting off, "I think I love you..."
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Woo, so there's your Sprite!! lemony-lime goodness. I tried to make it as tame as possible, but still have it as steamy as possible.
I really hoped you liked this chapter!!! Please review more!!!!
*squishings*
Isis