Hello again! And I have to
say I am sooooo happy because I got loads of reviews and that made me smile
^__^ (even more than max does) yeah so you all put a smile on my face because I
have exams and so reviews are the only thing that will cheer me up. Plus I am
ill! How great is that!
No one answered my question about yaoi! The only person who answered was tala!
tala: (looks chuffed) see I rock!
Robert: what is this rock you talk of?
Yeah so please answer the question when you review (please review again) hehe, and so:
In no order, I thank the loyal ones:
Miekkie: thankyou, and you came on the fierce website! That was a surprise ^__^
Tala: yeah don't' worry there are no kai/rei pairings at all! AFI kick some ass! Woooo! Rock on dude!
Robert: that is so uncouth, get a hold of yourself (looks in disgust at dudems who is jumping around listening to AFI)
Nicky, or beygirl Nicky: hehe, thanks for letting me use your character aswell, and you really put a big smile on my face when I saw that message on the fierce website! And everyone go read Nicky's fanfic- its cool!
Adreill: you have to finish reading it! Hehe
Priestess Juanita: merci boucoup (thanks very much in French- dunno why I'm using French!)
jcm1o1: woohoo you didn't think it was junk! Awesome, and yeah like I said I hate Mariah.
Crazy rei luva: thankyou so much for the help with the character and she will be in chapter 4! And you rock!
Robert: why won't someone tell me what this rock is?
All: o_O (facefault)
Mystical elf: can't wait to read your fic too, you have to post it up soon, and thanks for reviewing!
Lil miss me: thanks for thinking it was good, keep reading!
SilverHopeForever: cheers glad you liked it!
Sailor Lain: hehe yeah I tried to make kai a bit perverted, but he will be back to his normal self in the chapters to come!
And soza and Sam: my best mates! Cheers for reading!
If I forgot to mention you and you reviewed, you can personally come and kick
my ass, and I'm sorry if I have, but ff.net isn't working properly and I have
to rely on the emails I got!
There was a change in plan
with the chapters as you will see:
disclaimer: yeah yeah yeah
I don't own beyblade.
read on to chapter 3!
Chapter 3- Kudos to Pain
Faith leaned back onto the soft pillow. She had been watching TV now for four hours straight. Tala had called earlier saying the rave had been cancelled and would be next week. Callum had gone over to do whatever guys do at kai and rei's house. Her aunt Jude had gone to her usual Thursday night bingo, leaving Faith alone. Faith glanced over to the kitchen table where her aunt had left her a $20 note so she could get herself some dinner (A/n: how much does her dinner cost?!)
A slight rumbling noise emerged from her stomach and Faith groaned realising she was hungry. After pulling on her leather jacket, Faith walked down the road, navigating her way along the now dark street. Her aunt had told her there was a nearby fast food place in town. As Faith reached the main high road, which only had a few shops left open, she saw the fast food joint, called 'Kudos'
The bell rang as Faith stepped inside the small brightly lit room.
Two girls sat behind the counter reading magazines but apart from them the place was empty. One girl was a curvy blonde, she had deep blue eyes that were set into a perfect heart shaped face. The other girl wore an apron and had short mousy brown hair and angular features.
"Can I help you?" the blonde asked in a flat tone.
"Yeah, can I have a hamburger and fries?"
The blonde turned away from Faith to put in the order, when the other girl looked up in interest.
"Hi, haven't seen you around before, are you new?" she asked.
"Yeah, I'm here for the summer" Faith answered.
"Maybe we could hang out or something?" she offered
Faith was caught in amazement, someone wanted to be her friend. Maybe Callum had been right and this summer wouldn't be so bad after all.
"Yeah sure" Faith replied.
"I'm Noleé, what's your name?"
"Faith"
The blonde interrupted their conversation, before Noleé could continue, "Here you go" she said, handing Faith the paper bag, her expression full of distaste. Faith turned to exit but stopped when she heard the blonde one.
"Can I say something" Faith didn't reply and the blonde went on, all the while Noleé trying to hush her.
"I think you're pathetic. That tongue thing is disgusting and the next time you like want to dye your hair, you should try reading the instructions. I'm sure your mum can afford to send you to a professional."
"COURTNEY!" Noleé spurted, guiltily looking at Faith, but Faith was already walking out of the door.
Faith was usually on automatic, she usually just shut her brain off before the nasty comment could hurt her. But this time is had got through and she walked until she reached the end of the nearby dock, and stood in the dark, not hungry any longer. Faith couldn't stop hurting, normally she wouldn't have cried, but this time, maybe it was the bringing up of her mother, but she let out choked sobs and the tears began to roll down her flushed cheek for the first time in a long time. She didn't even know this Courtney with her perfect curves and pouty red lips. It wasn't fair! She finally thought she could fit in for once, and not be the outcast. She thought they were different for that split second when Noleé had befriended her. It was like she had a permanent kick-me sign on her back, where people could just walk all over her, not just back at home at Coville High, but everywhere, wherever she went in the world. Normally in the movies that Faith had seen, after something bad happened to the 'good girl' some hero would come to comfort the victim but in reality there was no one. Faith buried her hands in her lap, tugging her knees closer towards herself, her pride completely shattered into millions of tears.
As the sobs became less and Faith recollected herself she heard the rustle of leaves somewhere behind her. Shivering she turned around in the darkness. She could feel the presence of someone or something, sending a chill up her spine. As her eyes adjusted, she saw a familiar pair of cold eyes from afar. As she blinked to check that her eyes were not deceiving her, the next second whoever had been there was now gone and she was once again left alone in the pitch darkness, with the smooth sounds of only the ripple of the water.
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That's chapter 3 up! Please Read and Review! NO FLAMES! And remember any ideas will be welcome and also please say if you want some Yaoi or not, cos there will be pairings in later chapters.