Final Fantasy X another life another story
Well the anticipated 1st chapter is here ^^;;
I hope you like it and remember REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW! ! ! even if it's bad I don't mind constructive comments but pweez dun be mean ^.^ Also the Summoners name is Rikku but she is not the same Rikku from FFX I just like that name :P
~Chapter 1~ A Summoner is born
"I have done it and become a Summoner after years of work my dream has come true." Said Rikku as she walked down the steps from the chamber of the fayth.
"Congratulations Rikku" Said Laura her best friend and now guardian
"Good Job!" exclamed her brother Matthew as he ran over to her
"Now we can all go and get Sin!" cried Rikku
"You know I think you should get a few Aeons first....and the final" replied Laura as she walked over to Rikku
"heh true"
They all went outside and a unexpected party awaited her return. Surprised Rikku enjoyed her Party since it may be the last time she sees all her friends. Her hometown of Luca may never be seen by her again.
The next day
As Rikku woke up and went outside she noticed everyone was up already.
"ugh wow you guys are up early..."
"umm...if you forgot today we leave today to go to besaid to get your first Aeon..." said Matthew impatiently.
"oh ya one sec let me get my stuff" Said Rikku as she ran into her home and grabbed her knapsack (which we will call Bag) which contained a couple sets of clothes to change. Some potions and antidotes. A couple video spheres and a picture of her parents.
She walked out of her house and locked the door and headed towards the docks where her guardians had gone already.
~ Leaving home....was the hardest part of being a summoner. I may never see my friends again. It took a lot of strength just to lock my door but I knew it was too late to turn back~
Well whadya think of it so far. I thought it was ok...but I cannot tell until I get a review or two or three or more!!!
Well the anticipated 1st chapter is here ^^;;
I hope you like it and remember REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW! ! ! even if it's bad I don't mind constructive comments but pweez dun be mean ^.^ Also the Summoners name is Rikku but she is not the same Rikku from FFX I just like that name :P
~Chapter 1~ A Summoner is born
"I have done it and become a Summoner after years of work my dream has come true." Said Rikku as she walked down the steps from the chamber of the fayth.
"Congratulations Rikku" Said Laura her best friend and now guardian
"Good Job!" exclamed her brother Matthew as he ran over to her
"Now we can all go and get Sin!" cried Rikku
"You know I think you should get a few Aeons first....and the final" replied Laura as she walked over to Rikku
"heh true"
They all went outside and a unexpected party awaited her return. Surprised Rikku enjoyed her Party since it may be the last time she sees all her friends. Her hometown of Luca may never be seen by her again.
The next day
As Rikku woke up and went outside she noticed everyone was up already.
"ugh wow you guys are up early..."
"umm...if you forgot today we leave today to go to besaid to get your first Aeon..." said Matthew impatiently.
"oh ya one sec let me get my stuff" Said Rikku as she ran into her home and grabbed her knapsack (which we will call Bag) which contained a couple sets of clothes to change. Some potions and antidotes. A couple video spheres and a picture of her parents.
She walked out of her house and locked the door and headed towards the docks where her guardians had gone already.
~ Leaving home....was the hardest part of being a summoner. I may never see my friends again. It took a lot of strength just to lock my door but I knew it was too late to turn back~
Well whadya think of it so far. I thought it was ok...but I cannot tell until I get a review or two or three or more!!!