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is cause I write these at night and well you could say I become quite dumb
LOL and I wouldn't realize if I spelt cheese wrong EX: cgese (see what
happens when I am drowsy lol (what an excuse) well I hope you enjoy chapter
5.
Final Fantasy Another Life Another Story
Chapter 5- Enter the Guado
On the boat
~ I was still depressed about my brother being dead but "he" was always there for me...~
"Rikku istead of going to Djosé let's all go to Guadosalaam and see what it is like...maybe Maester Seymore would be there !" offered Taner
"sure..." replied the young summoner
~ I could tell I sounded so enthusiastic...not! But really I always did want to meet Seymore. Also being a Maester gives me more reason to meet him since he is all so popular now what I didn't know about was his dark past which would show his true colors soon enough ~
~ We reached Guadosalaam and we went to Maester Seymore's Manor ~
"Taner.....this was a good idea..." said Rikku
"I knew you would like it....but sadly I don't think Seymore is here" replied Taner
"He kinda scares me" said Laura
"Shhhh!" said Rikku
~ We all eventually met Maester Seymore. He seemed too nice...but we didn't care cause after meeting him we left to go to the farplane where maybe I shouldn't have gone cause...~
"sniff....Matthew.....sniff....mom.....dad" Rikku Cried
~ Then Taner came and...hugged me I was now blushing imagining and crying at the same time ~
"it's okay Rikku...." Taner said as he was comforting Rikku
~ We all went back to our ship but I wish I stayed longer.... ~
"Heh with my father dead no one can stop me from what I want most out of life.....to control Sin to have power lots of it tons of it!!" said a mysterious person
On the Ship
~ Everyone went to bed and for once me too.... I was tired really tired and that night I had a strange dream ~
Rikku: So Seymore killed his father and is after me why?
???: I heard it was because you seemed to be connected with your aeons and he wants the power you share with them .
Rikku: I don't understand...
???: Lord Jyscal didn't either.....
~ It was such a odd dream but did it mean something? I told no one cause I knew people would think I was weird and anti-yevon so I kept my mouth shut. Once we arrived at Djose I went and received Ixion my favorite Aeon the Aeon of lightning the Aeon of power the aeon of life~
"Next you must perform the summoning at Macalania" said Laura
"yup" is all Rikku could say
~I read romance books about people making out at Macalania guess what popped into my mind of course I had no clue if he even considered me a friend. Once we arrived at Macalania we stopped at the site where all make outs happen guess what....I never made out with him....I was devastated but not sad cause he may not look at me that way...~
~Taner's POV~
~ I love her.........but how do I tell her that.....she probably would think I am desperate and treat me badly. I would be so embarassed... but what do I do? Should I tell her.....ok once we reach Zanarkand I tell her! That works out well...or what if....?~
Well what did you think of Chapter 5? I hope you liked it I made it longer since my review said that so I must obay lol! Well chapter 6 will be coming soon!!!
Final Fantasy Another Life Another Story
Chapter 5- Enter the Guado
On the boat
~ I was still depressed about my brother being dead but "he" was always there for me...~
"Rikku istead of going to Djosé let's all go to Guadosalaam and see what it is like...maybe Maester Seymore would be there !" offered Taner
"sure..." replied the young summoner
~ I could tell I sounded so enthusiastic...not! But really I always did want to meet Seymore. Also being a Maester gives me more reason to meet him since he is all so popular now what I didn't know about was his dark past which would show his true colors soon enough ~
~ We reached Guadosalaam and we went to Maester Seymore's Manor ~
"Taner.....this was a good idea..." said Rikku
"I knew you would like it....but sadly I don't think Seymore is here" replied Taner
"He kinda scares me" said Laura
"Shhhh!" said Rikku
~ We all eventually met Maester Seymore. He seemed too nice...but we didn't care cause after meeting him we left to go to the farplane where maybe I shouldn't have gone cause...~
"sniff....Matthew.....sniff....mom.....dad" Rikku Cried
~ Then Taner came and...hugged me I was now blushing imagining and crying at the same time ~
"it's okay Rikku...." Taner said as he was comforting Rikku
~ We all went back to our ship but I wish I stayed longer.... ~
"Heh with my father dead no one can stop me from what I want most out of life.....to control Sin to have power lots of it tons of it!!" said a mysterious person
On the Ship
~ Everyone went to bed and for once me too.... I was tired really tired and that night I had a strange dream ~
Rikku: So Seymore killed his father and is after me why?
???: I heard it was because you seemed to be connected with your aeons and he wants the power you share with them .
Rikku: I don't understand...
???: Lord Jyscal didn't either.....
~ It was such a odd dream but did it mean something? I told no one cause I knew people would think I was weird and anti-yevon so I kept my mouth shut. Once we arrived at Djose I went and received Ixion my favorite Aeon the Aeon of lightning the Aeon of power the aeon of life~
"Next you must perform the summoning at Macalania" said Laura
"yup" is all Rikku could say
~I read romance books about people making out at Macalania guess what popped into my mind of course I had no clue if he even considered me a friend. Once we arrived at Macalania we stopped at the site where all make outs happen guess what....I never made out with him....I was devastated but not sad cause he may not look at me that way...~
~Taner's POV~
~ I love her.........but how do I tell her that.....she probably would think I am desperate and treat me badly. I would be so embarassed... but what do I do? Should I tell her.....ok once we reach Zanarkand I tell her! That works out well...or what if....?~
Well what did you think of Chapter 5? I hope you liked it I made it longer since my review said that so I must obay lol! Well chapter 6 will be coming soon!!!