Hi!!!!!!!!!!!! I know that you people have read this more than five
thousand times but,
i'm new at writing so can you please be nice.I understand that you may not
like my writing so it would be a big help if you could help me out.Thank
you!^_^ ,also i'd like to give credit to my friend Heysell for helping me
out alot,this poem is hers and not mine.thank you again and heres the
poem/story.
disclaimer-----i ..........(hicup).........don't...........(sobs)............own............( sighs).............I.....In.........INUYASHA! *runs away while crying on pictures of Inuyasha* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Her love for him was fading,
Along with her fury her hatered was invading,
She never thought he'd be like this,
All those lies how could she miss?
They were there all along,
It's too late now cause her pain is too strong,
She thought without him she'd fall apart,
But she was blinded not being able to see he had no heart,
Revenge was all she thought about,
For he betrayed her without a dout,
His pain was all she wanted to see,
For only his death would set her free,
His silent pulse was all she wanted to hear,
Thus she knew her freedom was near,
His blood was all she wanted to taste,
Though his life was nothing but waste,
His lifeless body was all she wanted to feel,
Maybe then her wounds would heal,
His final breath was all she wanted to smell,
Maybe then the truth he would tell,
For now all she can do is dream,
Until she gathers all her courage for the day she hears him scream.
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so what did you think?Do you know who the girl is?if so, tell me by reviewing and telling me who you think it is. Me and my friend Heysell were talking today, and she said that if they liked it that i would help her make a second part to this poem/story so the ones who would like to know what happened can find out.so if you like it review and for the ones who didn't ...............still review cause i'd like to know what you thought.Thanx. ^_^
disclaimer-----i ..........(hicup).........don't...........(sobs)............own............( sighs).............I.....In.........INUYASHA! *runs away while crying on pictures of Inuyasha* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Her love for him was fading,
Along with her fury her hatered was invading,
She never thought he'd be like this,
All those lies how could she miss?
They were there all along,
It's too late now cause her pain is too strong,
She thought without him she'd fall apart,
But she was blinded not being able to see he had no heart,
Revenge was all she thought about,
For he betrayed her without a dout,
His pain was all she wanted to see,
For only his death would set her free,
His silent pulse was all she wanted to hear,
Thus she knew her freedom was near,
His blood was all she wanted to taste,
Though his life was nothing but waste,
His lifeless body was all she wanted to feel,
Maybe then her wounds would heal,
His final breath was all she wanted to smell,
Maybe then the truth he would tell,
For now all she can do is dream,
Until she gathers all her courage for the day she hears him scream.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
so what did you think?Do you know who the girl is?if so, tell me by reviewing and telling me who you think it is. Me and my friend Heysell were talking today, and she said that if they liked it that i would help her make a second part to this poem/story so the ones who would like to know what happened can find out.so if you like it review and for the ones who didn't ...............still review cause i'd like to know what you thought.Thanx. ^_^