Bartok Xiaoyu
By Somic
Note to readers: Sorry for having chapter 6 up so late, but the computer went mental. So we lost a few files and chapter 6, or part 6 of Bartok Xiaoyu. Or whatever it's called for the Playstation 2. We're not sure whether or not we're going to sell this game. We probably wouldn't because it's got Rouge, Shadow the Hedgehog and Eggman in it, but some of the graphics are quite shit to be honest. Such as Blade Echidna and Claws Swipes look a bit flat, but the gameplay is good. Plus a small note for Dylan Stills and General Blade: The characters Claws Swipes and Blade Echidna are amongst the other characters: Lavax, Shadow Bite, Shadow Drinker, Blade Slasher, Gangreane, Ashers, Ragwort, Baal, Mephistrel, Pez, Diamondix, Shadow the Demon Bat, Blade Xiaoyu, Lynx Xiaoyu, Aurorai Xiaoyu, Sydney, Somic, Soniv Xeroi, Sonar, Lola, Ed, Shadow the Rabbit, Julia, Sharleen, Luniare, Nuki, Bat Echidna, Bartok Xiaoyu, Shadow Lüve, Shadow the Hedgehog, Rouge the Bat, Eggman, Conik and Solar in the videogame for playstation 2, playstation and computer: Bartok Xiaoyu. We just need to know whether you want Claws and Jin Echidna in this game. Thank you. Christopher. xxx.
The clock had struck two o'clock, and Myzt was already starting to get pissed off with everyone.
"No Myzt!" cried Lola Bunny, blocking off the door. "Lynx said we must all stay here, in case Shad_Lüv comes back. Then we wait for Lynx to return. Plus, if you do go out Bartok or one of them guys might capture you,"
"I DON'T GIVE A FUCK!" screamed Myzt.
"You know, I bet you're not even a fox cub," said Julia.
"Yeah, you're more like a rat," said Sharleen.
"YEAH, WELL AT LEAST I'M NOT A FUCKING SQUIRREL SHARLEEN!!" screamed Myzt. She leapt into the air, spun round in a neat twirl and smacked Sharleen into the wall. "No one, calls me a rat and lives," She leapt up again and dived for Lola, biting her in the neck. (This part does actually look better in the videogame; I'm just shit at descriptions)
"Get away from my friend you wolf!" screamed Julia at Myzt, grabbing a baseball bat, which just happened to be on the floor next to her. She swung it and smacked Myzt with it, sending her flying through the living room window, over the hedge and into the road.
She picked herself up. "Don't want to stay in that place with them anyway," she dusted herself down. "I can take care of myself, any time, any place, anywhere," she marched off.
Sometime later, it had got very dark, and chilly. Myzt wandered along a dusty roadway. She shivered. Then something bright shone in her direction. The blinding pale beams shone straight at her. She stood at stared, it was coming towards her. She wanted to run but something was making her stay where she was. They were coming closer and closer. She began to feel dizzy; the lights were hypnotizing her in some way. She stumbled and tripped over a large twig, falling over and rolling down...down...down...
Shad_Lüv was still in danger, he didn't think he could have gotten in so easily, and been able to trick these guys into thinking he was one of them. He stood up and began to slip away as quietly as he could, whilst the others slept soundlessly. He reached the door and was about to turn the handle, when a cage came down on top of him, sealing him inside. Bartok Xiaoyu awoke. And walked towards Shadow.
"Well, well, well. If it isn't my friend from the park this morning. Shadow Lüve. I suppose your wondering why you're in there at this precise moment. It's because when you came in through that door earlier, I knew it was you. You thought that you could sneak in without us knowing, and try to get us to be on your side. I think not. This cage is very powerful; you can never escape, not until I've destroyed the planet. No wait, I tried that last time but a blue hedgehog sent me back to my underworld,"
"Sonic,"
"Yes, and before you do anything to stop me, I've caught you. This cage is slowly draining all the energy from you, and as soon as it's done, you'll be thrown into your dungeon. But don't worry, I'm sure your friends will come and then you'll have some company. And I'll have no-one to stand in my way," Bartok Xiaoyu, crossed his arms and stood before Shad_Lüv. He grinned evilly.
Shad_Lüv looked at his hands, they were gradually changing back to his original form, his heart slowed down, to one beat per minute. He felt very dizzy, and weak. He lay down and felt like he was dieing all over again. His life began playing itself inside his head. His mum. His dad. Him as a baby, looking cute. Then the terrible Lavax who had destroyed his home, killing his parents. A few days later a small girl found him she had long, blonde flowing fair hair, and was wearing a blue silk gown. She picked him up and had taken him home. She looked after him through winter, until her granddad had found him, and told her he'd look after him, and by next summer she could keep him, unless he found it's parents. Shad_Lüv could remember his words: "Oh, Maria. Why do you have to keep bringing wild animals back with you?" "But granddad, I found him in a burnt out village, everything had been burnt, except for him," "Look Maria, you can't keep him in here, let me look after it. You'll get it back by spring," "Promise," "Promise, cross my heart,"
"Maria," spoke Shad_Lüv, without realising Bartok could hear him. The screen in his head carried on playing. The last day of winter, and he died. Maria's granddad had taken him to a special place where he could bring him back to life. He placed him on an operation bed, and stuck wires to his heart and legs and arms, and back. He typed in a few letters and digits to a machine. Small bolts of electricity were being pumped into Shad_Lüv. Gerald Robotnik was supposed to just bring him back to life, but something went wrong with the machine, Shad_Lüv was a purple hedgehog with blue stripes, but something from the machine made his fur change from purple, to brown, to black, to grey, to white, to pink, to red, to orange, then yellow then blue then green. Gerald stopped the machine. Something had gone wrong, Shad_Lüv wasn't coming even close to life again. Gerald, put him under anaesthetic, and cut open his chest and searched for his heart. He spent five whole hours searching for it. He felt a little shock in his finger. Then a few more, then a load more, he dug a bit deeper, moved a lung to one side then found it. His heart had shrivelled up to the size of a large tomato. It was purple instead of white, like most hearts. Gerald touched it lightly, he jumped back as it gave him an electrical shock, and it wasn't beating. He put on some very padded gloves, reached in and pulled out the heart. He dumped it in the sink of cold water. Huge clouds of steam came out of the water. He removed his gloves once the water had become calm again, and the steam had gone. He pulled an electrical eel out of the aquarium beside him and placed it in with the heart. There was another puff of steam, and the eel was dead. He couldn't put this heart back inside the poor creature. Not now. But he still had to revive it, what would Maria do without her pet Hedgehog? He set to work; he took different parts of hearts from different animals, such as Cats, Dogs, Rabbits, Echidnas, etc. He worked long into the night, before he had a heart for the dying Hedgehog. He went back to where it lay. There was a chance he could bring it back to life. But, one mistake and he would lose him. He set up the anaesthetic; it began pumping air into Shad_Lüv. He placed the heart in his chest, then was just doing up his stitches. "SHIT!" he cried. The heart was too big to fit. He undid the stitches he had just done; there was one other thing he could try. But only one in a million could survive this. He stuck some electrical cables into the heart.
It began to send electrical volts into the heart, it began changing colour. White, grey, black, brown, purple, blue. Gerald removed the wires. The heart had swelled up slightly. He placed in on the creature's lungs, and then using a special machine, it connected his outer skin to his heart, so the heart was visible on his chest. Gerald stopped the machine. And took off the anaesthetic. The Hedgehog didn't move. He connected an electrical wire to its heart. A few bolts, then he removed it.
The heart began to glow, very faintly. The hedgehog's nose, twitched. Then the heart stopped glowing.
"Yes, it's working!" cried Gerald. He reached for the electrical cable again, some more bolts of electricity.
The heart was glowing again. Slightly brighter than before. The Hedgehog, began moved his fingers. Gerald added a few more volts. Then stood back. The scan was showing the heart was beating, it started slowly; beep, (forty five seconds) beep, (forty five seconds) beep. But then. (Three minutes pass) No more beats. "No!" cried Gerald. He was so close. But he'd lost him. He trailed miserably out of the lab.
Later Maria had come to see him.
"Hi!" she squealed. "Can I see my Hedgehog?" she asked.
Gerald was in the middle of a coffee. "Ummm, Maria. Well, I would let you see him-"
"Her, it's a female," said Maria.
"Okay then. I would let you see her, but she's sleeping. She's just had some Dog food to eat, and she's fallen asleep. Anyway, you better get back to your room, your not supposed to be here," he said, patting her on the head.
"I'll be back tomorrow, before she falls asleep again," Maria left.
He hadn't told her what had really happened, he didn't want to see her upset. If he had said it was dead, she would never let him look after any other pet she found. Ever again!
He turned in for the night. He awoke during the night sometime. Something was bleeping. Like a scanner. Beep, (ten seconds) Beep, (another ten seconds) Beep. Gerald clambered out of bed. And rushed to the lab. He turned the key in the lock, pushed open the door and...
"Hello!"
Gerald leapt back in fright. It was the Hedgehog! Green, with blue stripes. And upon his chest, the blue heart. Glowing brightly.
"You're alive!" cried Gerald.
"Yeah, pretty much," said the Hedgehog. "So, what's your name?"
"Robotnik, Gerald Robotnik," said Gerald. "And your name?"
"Shadow," said the Hedgehog.
"Oh," said Gerald. "Shadow Robotnik?"
The Hedgehog nodded.
"Well, my grand-daughter, Maria. Wishes to call you Love heart,"
"Love Heart Shadow Robotnik," said the Hedgehog. It mumbled a few words under its breath.
"How about, Shadow Lüve?" asked Gerald.
"Okay," said the Hedgehog. "Shadow Love it is. Shortened to Shad_Lüv?"
Gerald nodded.
The image blurred out. And someone else was calling;
"Shadow, Shadow, Shadow," Shad_Lüv was waking up from a sleep, or a coma or something. But the voice had changed to a soft, cooing voice. Calling for someone else. "Conik, Conik!" it cried.
Shad_Lüv slowly began to move his fingers.
"Conik! Hurry, he's coming to,"
Shad_Lüv opened his eyes, very slowly, and looked around. He was in a dark place, with some lanterns giving out some glimpses of light. He began to get to his feet when he saw a rabbit. A green rabbit in a pink skirt and top, it had a yellow muzzle and purple eyes. Instead of having ears like most bunnies and rabbits, this one had ears like an Aisha*. He leapt back and stood on someone or something's foot. He spun round to see a dragon like Spyro, except it didn't have wings and it had different feet. And it was a kind of dark green mixed with light brown, to make some kind of colour in between. It had sharp fangs, and had emerald green eyes. This one too, had Aisha ears.
"W-W-Where am I?" cried Shad_Lüv.
The rabbit began to walk towards him. "You're in a dungeon, this is where Bartok has sent you too,"
"Who are you?" asked Shad_Lüv.
"Oh, excuse my manners," said the bunny. "My name is Solar. I'm an Intergalactic Bunny. I was sent on a mission to get information on Bartok Xiaoyu. Only he destroyed any contact from me to planet Venus, which is where I come from. I've been here for quite some time now. But we're getting somewhere, we've nearly got contact to the outer world of this planet," she spotted Shad_Lüv looking at the Dragon.
"Oh, this is Conik," she said. "He's my best friend. He's very talented, would you like to show me one of his tricks?"
"Ummm, sure," said Shad_Lüv.
She turned to Conik. "Conik. Roll up,"
The Dragon rolled into a ball. He looked a little like Sonic, when he curls into a ball.
"Now, cling to the ceiling," she said.
Conik, bounced up and down where he was, then bounced against a few of the walls, before hitting the ceiling, his back spikes dug into the ceiling. He stretched out his body, so he was lying with his back flat against the ceiling. He stayed there for ten minutes, before dropping down back to the ground.
"Ta Daaaaa!" he said, bowing gracefully in front of Shad_Lüv.
"Wonderful," said Shad_Lüv, not that impressed. "Now if you'll excuse me, I need to escape from here," he walked towards the barred window.
"Don't!" cried Solar as she and Conik dived in front of him.
"Hey!" growled Shad_Lüv.
"You can't. You mustn't!" squealed Solar.
"Why not?" asked Shad_Lüv.
"Believe me, I know what will happen if you escape. Nuki would still be here with us now if he hadn't tried to escape," she began to cry.
"Gee, I'm sorry," said Shad_Lüv. "whose Nuki?"
"He was my fiancé. We went to many different planets together. Saturn, Uranus, and we were to be wed on Pluto, where he came from. We were sent here to rescue Conik, who was sent on the mission to retrieve vital evidence that Bartok Xiaoyu had no right to be here and he should still be in the underworld. Only he got captured, so Nuki and I were sent here to retrieve him. We rescued him before the operation was complete,"
"The operation was to remove my brain and memory and everything I knew and be placed into the brain of Bartok Xiaoyu, so he would become smarter and return to Venus to destroy everyone else,"
"So we got him just in time, but we were then thrown in here. Nuki decided to break us outta here. So he tried he got out, and as he was running to the great wall that surrounds here, he was shot in the back by a guard. They took him to a sacrificing place, and they tied him up, made him stand on this platform, then the guard counted to three. One. Two. Three. The floor beneath him opened, and he dropped. The rope around his neck. And he just hung there. He was hung. That's what happens when you try to escape. It's terrible, because every other prisoner has to watch it too," she started crying again.
Aurorai lay down on the double bed, surrounded by lightly dimmed candles; she stretched herself out as Jin came in. He lay down beside her. Sniffing her sweet smelling hair. She smelled of Summer flowers, which had just blossomed. He lightly kissed her forehead. Their bedroom door was locked shut. No one was going to disturb them, not now, possibly not ever. He reached over and stroked the side of her face. She breathed so softly. He slowly began to move downwards, kissing her pale, white cheeks. And then her lips, white as snow. He began to unzip her fluffy, white, winter fleece. And then her bra, which he was able to undo from the front. This was also white. He dumped her top clothes on the floor beside the bed, on the silver carpet. He kissed her neck all over thoroughly. Then kissed the small patch of skin in between her boobs. Her boobs were white as the first settled snow on the mountains. And her nipples were a very pale whitish pink. He started to lick her nipples, very lightly at first, then around her nipples. He sucked the nipples very lightly, and then sucked a bit harder on her boobs. Aurorai began to feel slightly damp. She started to moan as Jin reached her long white trousers. He unzipped them and pulled them down. Then kissed her on her lips, whilst slipping his hands behind her, down her white pants. He moved down again and slipped off her knickers. He kissed around her pussy, then started to lick it, then he lifted her up slightly, so his nose was closer to her pussy, and kissed around her vagina, then slowly licking them. He heard her moan with pleasure as he moved his tongue in. Licking her walls, he could taste her juices; she began to moan even louder, he stretched his tongue into her vagina as far as it would go, and then pulled it back out. Aurorai moaned for a few more moments after he was finished, she leaned over to him, and laid him down where she had been. She stroked his long quills. She placed both her palms on his face and pulled him into a deep, passionate kiss. She took off his long black jacket, and stroked his manly chest. She kissed his shoulders, and his entire chest, and then slowly unzipped his jeans, then his gym shorts, and then the final move and removed his boxer shorts. She kissed his penis, and then licked it all over, then placed it in her mouth, she licked it all over again, and then sucked slowly, giving him plenty of pleasure. Then a bit faster, making him moan louder, then faster, she was dying to taste his sweet nectar fill her mouth. Eventually Jin couldn't hold it and released his seed into her mouth, she licked his penis clean then stroked it with her pussy, she widened her legs and placed herself onto him, he sat up and pulled her close to him, he began to lick her fine nipples again. She wrapped her arms around his neck, and he placed his hands on her waist to enable her to glide up and down. She started off slowly, and then picked up the pace. She slid up and down faster, and faster, and faster. Then landed on him one last time. They lay down in each other's arms. Still joined together. She gave him another one of her deep passionate kisses, and then fell asleep in his arms. Snoozing soundlessly. But, happily.
Hope to get some reviews for this, my own written sexual scene, this time I didn't copy General Blade. Although I think Colonel Blade sounds a lot better, It has, I dunno, it just makes it sound more important, so it makes you want to read his fanfics. General Blade just sounds SHIT!
*Check out to see what an Aisha is. And Draiks and Shoyrus and Scorchios. And whatever else I've mentioned.
By Somic
Note to readers: Sorry for having chapter 6 up so late, but the computer went mental. So we lost a few files and chapter 6, or part 6 of Bartok Xiaoyu. Or whatever it's called for the Playstation 2. We're not sure whether or not we're going to sell this game. We probably wouldn't because it's got Rouge, Shadow the Hedgehog and Eggman in it, but some of the graphics are quite shit to be honest. Such as Blade Echidna and Claws Swipes look a bit flat, but the gameplay is good. Plus a small note for Dylan Stills and General Blade: The characters Claws Swipes and Blade Echidna are amongst the other characters: Lavax, Shadow Bite, Shadow Drinker, Blade Slasher, Gangreane, Ashers, Ragwort, Baal, Mephistrel, Pez, Diamondix, Shadow the Demon Bat, Blade Xiaoyu, Lynx Xiaoyu, Aurorai Xiaoyu, Sydney, Somic, Soniv Xeroi, Sonar, Lola, Ed, Shadow the Rabbit, Julia, Sharleen, Luniare, Nuki, Bat Echidna, Bartok Xiaoyu, Shadow Lüve, Shadow the Hedgehog, Rouge the Bat, Eggman, Conik and Solar in the videogame for playstation 2, playstation and computer: Bartok Xiaoyu. We just need to know whether you want Claws and Jin Echidna in this game. Thank you. Christopher. xxx.
The clock had struck two o'clock, and Myzt was already starting to get pissed off with everyone.
"No Myzt!" cried Lola Bunny, blocking off the door. "Lynx said we must all stay here, in case Shad_Lüv comes back. Then we wait for Lynx to return. Plus, if you do go out Bartok or one of them guys might capture you,"
"I DON'T GIVE A FUCK!" screamed Myzt.
"You know, I bet you're not even a fox cub," said Julia.
"Yeah, you're more like a rat," said Sharleen.
"YEAH, WELL AT LEAST I'M NOT A FUCKING SQUIRREL SHARLEEN!!" screamed Myzt. She leapt into the air, spun round in a neat twirl and smacked Sharleen into the wall. "No one, calls me a rat and lives," She leapt up again and dived for Lola, biting her in the neck. (This part does actually look better in the videogame; I'm just shit at descriptions)
"Get away from my friend you wolf!" screamed Julia at Myzt, grabbing a baseball bat, which just happened to be on the floor next to her. She swung it and smacked Myzt with it, sending her flying through the living room window, over the hedge and into the road.
She picked herself up. "Don't want to stay in that place with them anyway," she dusted herself down. "I can take care of myself, any time, any place, anywhere," she marched off.
Sometime later, it had got very dark, and chilly. Myzt wandered along a dusty roadway. She shivered. Then something bright shone in her direction. The blinding pale beams shone straight at her. She stood at stared, it was coming towards her. She wanted to run but something was making her stay where she was. They were coming closer and closer. She began to feel dizzy; the lights were hypnotizing her in some way. She stumbled and tripped over a large twig, falling over and rolling down...down...down...
Shad_Lüv was still in danger, he didn't think he could have gotten in so easily, and been able to trick these guys into thinking he was one of them. He stood up and began to slip away as quietly as he could, whilst the others slept soundlessly. He reached the door and was about to turn the handle, when a cage came down on top of him, sealing him inside. Bartok Xiaoyu awoke. And walked towards Shadow.
"Well, well, well. If it isn't my friend from the park this morning. Shadow Lüve. I suppose your wondering why you're in there at this precise moment. It's because when you came in through that door earlier, I knew it was you. You thought that you could sneak in without us knowing, and try to get us to be on your side. I think not. This cage is very powerful; you can never escape, not until I've destroyed the planet. No wait, I tried that last time but a blue hedgehog sent me back to my underworld,"
"Sonic,"
"Yes, and before you do anything to stop me, I've caught you. This cage is slowly draining all the energy from you, and as soon as it's done, you'll be thrown into your dungeon. But don't worry, I'm sure your friends will come and then you'll have some company. And I'll have no-one to stand in my way," Bartok Xiaoyu, crossed his arms and stood before Shad_Lüv. He grinned evilly.
Shad_Lüv looked at his hands, they were gradually changing back to his original form, his heart slowed down, to one beat per minute. He felt very dizzy, and weak. He lay down and felt like he was dieing all over again. His life began playing itself inside his head. His mum. His dad. Him as a baby, looking cute. Then the terrible Lavax who had destroyed his home, killing his parents. A few days later a small girl found him she had long, blonde flowing fair hair, and was wearing a blue silk gown. She picked him up and had taken him home. She looked after him through winter, until her granddad had found him, and told her he'd look after him, and by next summer she could keep him, unless he found it's parents. Shad_Lüv could remember his words: "Oh, Maria. Why do you have to keep bringing wild animals back with you?" "But granddad, I found him in a burnt out village, everything had been burnt, except for him," "Look Maria, you can't keep him in here, let me look after it. You'll get it back by spring," "Promise," "Promise, cross my heart,"
"Maria," spoke Shad_Lüv, without realising Bartok could hear him. The screen in his head carried on playing. The last day of winter, and he died. Maria's granddad had taken him to a special place where he could bring him back to life. He placed him on an operation bed, and stuck wires to his heart and legs and arms, and back. He typed in a few letters and digits to a machine. Small bolts of electricity were being pumped into Shad_Lüv. Gerald Robotnik was supposed to just bring him back to life, but something went wrong with the machine, Shad_Lüv was a purple hedgehog with blue stripes, but something from the machine made his fur change from purple, to brown, to black, to grey, to white, to pink, to red, to orange, then yellow then blue then green. Gerald stopped the machine. Something had gone wrong, Shad_Lüv wasn't coming even close to life again. Gerald, put him under anaesthetic, and cut open his chest and searched for his heart. He spent five whole hours searching for it. He felt a little shock in his finger. Then a few more, then a load more, he dug a bit deeper, moved a lung to one side then found it. His heart had shrivelled up to the size of a large tomato. It was purple instead of white, like most hearts. Gerald touched it lightly, he jumped back as it gave him an electrical shock, and it wasn't beating. He put on some very padded gloves, reached in and pulled out the heart. He dumped it in the sink of cold water. Huge clouds of steam came out of the water. He removed his gloves once the water had become calm again, and the steam had gone. He pulled an electrical eel out of the aquarium beside him and placed it in with the heart. There was another puff of steam, and the eel was dead. He couldn't put this heart back inside the poor creature. Not now. But he still had to revive it, what would Maria do without her pet Hedgehog? He set to work; he took different parts of hearts from different animals, such as Cats, Dogs, Rabbits, Echidnas, etc. He worked long into the night, before he had a heart for the dying Hedgehog. He went back to where it lay. There was a chance he could bring it back to life. But, one mistake and he would lose him. He set up the anaesthetic; it began pumping air into Shad_Lüv. He placed the heart in his chest, then was just doing up his stitches. "SHIT!" he cried. The heart was too big to fit. He undid the stitches he had just done; there was one other thing he could try. But only one in a million could survive this. He stuck some electrical cables into the heart.
It began to send electrical volts into the heart, it began changing colour. White, grey, black, brown, purple, blue. Gerald removed the wires. The heart had swelled up slightly. He placed in on the creature's lungs, and then using a special machine, it connected his outer skin to his heart, so the heart was visible on his chest. Gerald stopped the machine. And took off the anaesthetic. The Hedgehog didn't move. He connected an electrical wire to its heart. A few bolts, then he removed it.
The heart began to glow, very faintly. The hedgehog's nose, twitched. Then the heart stopped glowing.
"Yes, it's working!" cried Gerald. He reached for the electrical cable again, some more bolts of electricity.
The heart was glowing again. Slightly brighter than before. The Hedgehog, began moved his fingers. Gerald added a few more volts. Then stood back. The scan was showing the heart was beating, it started slowly; beep, (forty five seconds) beep, (forty five seconds) beep. But then. (Three minutes pass) No more beats. "No!" cried Gerald. He was so close. But he'd lost him. He trailed miserably out of the lab.
Later Maria had come to see him.
"Hi!" she squealed. "Can I see my Hedgehog?" she asked.
Gerald was in the middle of a coffee. "Ummm, Maria. Well, I would let you see him-"
"Her, it's a female," said Maria.
"Okay then. I would let you see her, but she's sleeping. She's just had some Dog food to eat, and she's fallen asleep. Anyway, you better get back to your room, your not supposed to be here," he said, patting her on the head.
"I'll be back tomorrow, before she falls asleep again," Maria left.
He hadn't told her what had really happened, he didn't want to see her upset. If he had said it was dead, she would never let him look after any other pet she found. Ever again!
He turned in for the night. He awoke during the night sometime. Something was bleeping. Like a scanner. Beep, (ten seconds) Beep, (another ten seconds) Beep. Gerald clambered out of bed. And rushed to the lab. He turned the key in the lock, pushed open the door and...
"Hello!"
Gerald leapt back in fright. It was the Hedgehog! Green, with blue stripes. And upon his chest, the blue heart. Glowing brightly.
"You're alive!" cried Gerald.
"Yeah, pretty much," said the Hedgehog. "So, what's your name?"
"Robotnik, Gerald Robotnik," said Gerald. "And your name?"
"Shadow," said the Hedgehog.
"Oh," said Gerald. "Shadow Robotnik?"
The Hedgehog nodded.
"Well, my grand-daughter, Maria. Wishes to call you Love heart,"
"Love Heart Shadow Robotnik," said the Hedgehog. It mumbled a few words under its breath.
"How about, Shadow Lüve?" asked Gerald.
"Okay," said the Hedgehog. "Shadow Love it is. Shortened to Shad_Lüv?"
Gerald nodded.
The image blurred out. And someone else was calling;
"Shadow, Shadow, Shadow," Shad_Lüv was waking up from a sleep, or a coma or something. But the voice had changed to a soft, cooing voice. Calling for someone else. "Conik, Conik!" it cried.
Shad_Lüv slowly began to move his fingers.
"Conik! Hurry, he's coming to,"
Shad_Lüv opened his eyes, very slowly, and looked around. He was in a dark place, with some lanterns giving out some glimpses of light. He began to get to his feet when he saw a rabbit. A green rabbit in a pink skirt and top, it had a yellow muzzle and purple eyes. Instead of having ears like most bunnies and rabbits, this one had ears like an Aisha*. He leapt back and stood on someone or something's foot. He spun round to see a dragon like Spyro, except it didn't have wings and it had different feet. And it was a kind of dark green mixed with light brown, to make some kind of colour in between. It had sharp fangs, and had emerald green eyes. This one too, had Aisha ears.
"W-W-Where am I?" cried Shad_Lüv.
The rabbit began to walk towards him. "You're in a dungeon, this is where Bartok has sent you too,"
"Who are you?" asked Shad_Lüv.
"Oh, excuse my manners," said the bunny. "My name is Solar. I'm an Intergalactic Bunny. I was sent on a mission to get information on Bartok Xiaoyu. Only he destroyed any contact from me to planet Venus, which is where I come from. I've been here for quite some time now. But we're getting somewhere, we've nearly got contact to the outer world of this planet," she spotted Shad_Lüv looking at the Dragon.
"Oh, this is Conik," she said. "He's my best friend. He's very talented, would you like to show me one of his tricks?"
"Ummm, sure," said Shad_Lüv.
She turned to Conik. "Conik. Roll up,"
The Dragon rolled into a ball. He looked a little like Sonic, when he curls into a ball.
"Now, cling to the ceiling," she said.
Conik, bounced up and down where he was, then bounced against a few of the walls, before hitting the ceiling, his back spikes dug into the ceiling. He stretched out his body, so he was lying with his back flat against the ceiling. He stayed there for ten minutes, before dropping down back to the ground.
"Ta Daaaaa!" he said, bowing gracefully in front of Shad_Lüv.
"Wonderful," said Shad_Lüv, not that impressed. "Now if you'll excuse me, I need to escape from here," he walked towards the barred window.
"Don't!" cried Solar as she and Conik dived in front of him.
"Hey!" growled Shad_Lüv.
"You can't. You mustn't!" squealed Solar.
"Why not?" asked Shad_Lüv.
"Believe me, I know what will happen if you escape. Nuki would still be here with us now if he hadn't tried to escape," she began to cry.
"Gee, I'm sorry," said Shad_Lüv. "whose Nuki?"
"He was my fiancé. We went to many different planets together. Saturn, Uranus, and we were to be wed on Pluto, where he came from. We were sent here to rescue Conik, who was sent on the mission to retrieve vital evidence that Bartok Xiaoyu had no right to be here and he should still be in the underworld. Only he got captured, so Nuki and I were sent here to retrieve him. We rescued him before the operation was complete,"
"The operation was to remove my brain and memory and everything I knew and be placed into the brain of Bartok Xiaoyu, so he would become smarter and return to Venus to destroy everyone else,"
"So we got him just in time, but we were then thrown in here. Nuki decided to break us outta here. So he tried he got out, and as he was running to the great wall that surrounds here, he was shot in the back by a guard. They took him to a sacrificing place, and they tied him up, made him stand on this platform, then the guard counted to three. One. Two. Three. The floor beneath him opened, and he dropped. The rope around his neck. And he just hung there. He was hung. That's what happens when you try to escape. It's terrible, because every other prisoner has to watch it too," she started crying again.
Aurorai lay down on the double bed, surrounded by lightly dimmed candles; she stretched herself out as Jin came in. He lay down beside her. Sniffing her sweet smelling hair. She smelled of Summer flowers, which had just blossomed. He lightly kissed her forehead. Their bedroom door was locked shut. No one was going to disturb them, not now, possibly not ever. He reached over and stroked the side of her face. She breathed so softly. He slowly began to move downwards, kissing her pale, white cheeks. And then her lips, white as snow. He began to unzip her fluffy, white, winter fleece. And then her bra, which he was able to undo from the front. This was also white. He dumped her top clothes on the floor beside the bed, on the silver carpet. He kissed her neck all over thoroughly. Then kissed the small patch of skin in between her boobs. Her boobs were white as the first settled snow on the mountains. And her nipples were a very pale whitish pink. He started to lick her nipples, very lightly at first, then around her nipples. He sucked the nipples very lightly, and then sucked a bit harder on her boobs. Aurorai began to feel slightly damp. She started to moan as Jin reached her long white trousers. He unzipped them and pulled them down. Then kissed her on her lips, whilst slipping his hands behind her, down her white pants. He moved down again and slipped off her knickers. He kissed around her pussy, then started to lick it, then he lifted her up slightly, so his nose was closer to her pussy, and kissed around her vagina, then slowly licking them. He heard her moan with pleasure as he moved his tongue in. Licking her walls, he could taste her juices; she began to moan even louder, he stretched his tongue into her vagina as far as it would go, and then pulled it back out. Aurorai moaned for a few more moments after he was finished, she leaned over to him, and laid him down where she had been. She stroked his long quills. She placed both her palms on his face and pulled him into a deep, passionate kiss. She took off his long black jacket, and stroked his manly chest. She kissed his shoulders, and his entire chest, and then slowly unzipped his jeans, then his gym shorts, and then the final move and removed his boxer shorts. She kissed his penis, and then licked it all over, then placed it in her mouth, she licked it all over again, and then sucked slowly, giving him plenty of pleasure. Then a bit faster, making him moan louder, then faster, she was dying to taste his sweet nectar fill her mouth. Eventually Jin couldn't hold it and released his seed into her mouth, she licked his penis clean then stroked it with her pussy, she widened her legs and placed herself onto him, he sat up and pulled her close to him, he began to lick her fine nipples again. She wrapped her arms around his neck, and he placed his hands on her waist to enable her to glide up and down. She started off slowly, and then picked up the pace. She slid up and down faster, and faster, and faster. Then landed on him one last time. They lay down in each other's arms. Still joined together. She gave him another one of her deep passionate kisses, and then fell asleep in his arms. Snoozing soundlessly. But, happily.
Hope to get some reviews for this, my own written sexual scene, this time I didn't copy General Blade. Although I think Colonel Blade sounds a lot better, It has, I dunno, it just makes it sound more important, so it makes you want to read his fanfics. General Blade just sounds SHIT!
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