OK, here's one I wrote with me as a hamster. Now at the beginning I may
sound a little conceited, but I wanted you to get a taste of what the story
was about. I will type as much as I can, and I only have 20 minutes. So on
with the story!
Jaysi Odessy
Prologue:
Her beautiful jade-green eyes focused on the ball. Nothing could distract her; not even the constant thump of Shannon's as she searched for her science notes. A flowing red ribbon
tied the hamster's silky tan fur into a high ponytail. A pink ribbon with a beautiful hibiscus attached to it was careful tied to her neck. She was a sight to see, the early morning sunlight bouncing off her shimmering white face and belly fur. Penny watched her older sister, sighing as she touched her own sloppy tan ponytail, which she had hurriedly and carelessly done herself. She continued to gaze at her sister with growing admiration. Would she ever be as athletic and attractive as Jaysi? Only time would tell.
Jaysi's Odessy #1- Meeting Dakota
I finally sat down. Exhausted from my morning workouts, I went to take a sip of water. I stood up with determination. Today was the day that I was going to explore the world outdoors. My sister, Penny, shifted impatiently inside her own cage on the other side of the room.
"C'mon, Jays, hurry up," she hissed. "We're gonna miss them!"
"I'm coming," I replied, quickly lifting my cage door up Penny scampered over to me.
"Ready?" I asked. She nodded eagerly.
We jumped out the window and onto one of the willow's long, sloping branches. Penny and I laughed out loud as we slid down the vine-limbs. Once on the ground we headed over to my best friend Chihiro's house.
We found the pretty black-and-white ham-ham fixing a pair of ribbons, which happened to be yellow today, into her well-groomed fur.
"Hamha, Chichi!" I called. She looked up.
"Like, hey Jaysi. What's up, Penny? What are you guys doing here?"
"We're exploring the neighborhood. Wanna come?"
"Sure," she nodded.
As we headed down the sidewalk, Penny said, "I wanna see Peppy."
"Do you know where his house is?" Chihiro inquired.
"Well, not really," Penny admitted. I bit my lip. "I wanna se Peppy!" she insisted.
I sighed. "Let's go ask her for directions," I said, motioning to a mahogany-colored hamster near the bushes. Chichi and Penny nodded their agreement.
"Excuse me?" I approached her.
She turned to face me, orange eyes amused. She was short, almost Penny's size, so I figured she was about Penny's age. But something about her made her seem wise beyond her years.
"Excuse me, would you happen to know where to find a Peppy Henderson?"
She eyed us suspiciously. "Maybe. What are your names?"
"Oh, Flare, cut 'em some slack. They just want to know where to find their friend." The ham that appeared out of the bushes was considerably taller than Flare, with dancing blue eyes and a mischievous smile. Her spotted ears twitched. She grinned at us as she brushed a strand of long black hair out of her eyes. "So what brings you hams to this part of the neighborhood? I haven't seen you around before."
"Like, hey, my name's Chihiro, and that's Jaysi and Penny. They're sisters."
"We're just exploring," I informed her.
The mahogany ham nodded. "I'm Flare and this is my friend Citrine."
Suddenly Citrine's eyes lit up. "Hey! Y'know, we could use some help. Y'see, we've been trying to find a way into this heap of tires," she pointed to a pile of rubble, But when we did, the door was too high to reach."
"Did ya try ham lift?" Penny asked.
"Yep. Two hams just aren't enough. Especially since Flare is such a shorty," She added teasingly.
"Hey! That's not funny!"
"So will you help us?" Citrine asked, all seriousness again.
"Yeah!" We chorused.
"All right. You hams ready?" asked Flare. We nodded. "Okay, HAMLIFT!"
Chihiro was base, then Citrine, me, and Flare. Penny was on top since she was lightest.
"This will, like, totally mess up my ribbons," Chihiro complained.
"Well, DO something, Pen!" Citrine urged.
"U-uh, umm... Open...Sesame?"
The doors swung open. We cheered. "Yay, you did it, Pen-WHOA!" We all fell in a heap at the base.
"What are you doing at my hideout?" a guy hams voice demanded.
"Thump-p!" I spun around and found myself staring strait into the face of a handsome spotted hamster.
Jaysi Odessy
Prologue:
Her beautiful jade-green eyes focused on the ball. Nothing could distract her; not even the constant thump of Shannon's as she searched for her science notes. A flowing red ribbon
tied the hamster's silky tan fur into a high ponytail. A pink ribbon with a beautiful hibiscus attached to it was careful tied to her neck. She was a sight to see, the early morning sunlight bouncing off her shimmering white face and belly fur. Penny watched her older sister, sighing as she touched her own sloppy tan ponytail, which she had hurriedly and carelessly done herself. She continued to gaze at her sister with growing admiration. Would she ever be as athletic and attractive as Jaysi? Only time would tell.
Jaysi's Odessy #1- Meeting Dakota
I finally sat down. Exhausted from my morning workouts, I went to take a sip of water. I stood up with determination. Today was the day that I was going to explore the world outdoors. My sister, Penny, shifted impatiently inside her own cage on the other side of the room.
"C'mon, Jays, hurry up," she hissed. "We're gonna miss them!"
"I'm coming," I replied, quickly lifting my cage door up Penny scampered over to me.
"Ready?" I asked. She nodded eagerly.
We jumped out the window and onto one of the willow's long, sloping branches. Penny and I laughed out loud as we slid down the vine-limbs. Once on the ground we headed over to my best friend Chihiro's house.
We found the pretty black-and-white ham-ham fixing a pair of ribbons, which happened to be yellow today, into her well-groomed fur.
"Hamha, Chichi!" I called. She looked up.
"Like, hey Jaysi. What's up, Penny? What are you guys doing here?"
"We're exploring the neighborhood. Wanna come?"
"Sure," she nodded.
As we headed down the sidewalk, Penny said, "I wanna see Peppy."
"Do you know where his house is?" Chihiro inquired.
"Well, not really," Penny admitted. I bit my lip. "I wanna se Peppy!" she insisted.
I sighed. "Let's go ask her for directions," I said, motioning to a mahogany-colored hamster near the bushes. Chichi and Penny nodded their agreement.
"Excuse me?" I approached her.
She turned to face me, orange eyes amused. She was short, almost Penny's size, so I figured she was about Penny's age. But something about her made her seem wise beyond her years.
"Excuse me, would you happen to know where to find a Peppy Henderson?"
She eyed us suspiciously. "Maybe. What are your names?"
"Oh, Flare, cut 'em some slack. They just want to know where to find their friend." The ham that appeared out of the bushes was considerably taller than Flare, with dancing blue eyes and a mischievous smile. Her spotted ears twitched. She grinned at us as she brushed a strand of long black hair out of her eyes. "So what brings you hams to this part of the neighborhood? I haven't seen you around before."
"Like, hey, my name's Chihiro, and that's Jaysi and Penny. They're sisters."
"We're just exploring," I informed her.
The mahogany ham nodded. "I'm Flare and this is my friend Citrine."
Suddenly Citrine's eyes lit up. "Hey! Y'know, we could use some help. Y'see, we've been trying to find a way into this heap of tires," she pointed to a pile of rubble, But when we did, the door was too high to reach."
"Did ya try ham lift?" Penny asked.
"Yep. Two hams just aren't enough. Especially since Flare is such a shorty," She added teasingly.
"Hey! That's not funny!"
"So will you help us?" Citrine asked, all seriousness again.
"Yeah!" We chorused.
"All right. You hams ready?" asked Flare. We nodded. "Okay, HAMLIFT!"
Chihiro was base, then Citrine, me, and Flare. Penny was on top since she was lightest.
"This will, like, totally mess up my ribbons," Chihiro complained.
"Well, DO something, Pen!" Citrine urged.
"U-uh, umm... Open...Sesame?"
The doors swung open. We cheered. "Yay, you did it, Pen-WHOA!" We all fell in a heap at the base.
"What are you doing at my hideout?" a guy hams voice demanded.
"Thump-p!" I spun around and found myself staring strait into the face of a handsome spotted hamster.