Green and Auburn Eyes
Hey! Hope you liked the cliffey! Well, I think I might be leaving
another! What do you think??? Well, it's this or you don't get an update
for a while, but my editor has been nagging me about it so here it is! Bet
you have been wondering who my editor is, haven't you??? Well, her name
is, Ausaka!
Ausaka: Hello! I'm the one who is making her type this so you can all thank me in your reviews! Hehehehe *pulls out whip* GET TO WORK! Silver: Ok, Ok I'm sry! Ausaka: Just because I edit dosn't mean I like it! Silver: Yea! By the way! I have been thinking about it and I have decided to give the best reviewer a special bonus! I don't want you to put in all positive things because I need to learn more so I can make my fic better, so I'll be wanting a bit of good and bad! I want it long but not over bearing. Don't put untruthful praise in there, I don't want lies. It will boost my already high ego!(Ausaka: *rolls eyes*) Lol! If you win you will get it e-mailed to you before everybody else! Every chapter for the next 5 digest and then I will be looking back at all the reviews and decide which one reviews the best! That means at 10 chapters there will be a new winner (or it could be the same) and 15, then 20, 25, 30 and so on and so forth! I hope you like this contest!!!! Yep and if you want it sooner than you just have to e-mail me and you can even tell me if I'm messing it up!!!!! Yea I would be writing good reviews just for this! Well, I have been looking back at the reviews and have found the winner till the 10th chapter! It will be... ***Kokami**** Ausaka: Ya! More to edit!
Not only has she reviewed on nearly every chapter, but they have constructive criticism and ideas in them! She tells me what she wants in my fic and gives me ideas! She has been the best reviewer so far! So keep up the good work!
Kokami, when you review at the bottom of this chapter please leave me your e-mail address. That is if you want to. You don't have to, and I will understand if you don't. Any e mail will work! And thank you for being such a great reviewer!!! Ausaka: Yah, yah, yah, just get on with it already! Well now on to the story!
Last time: The exchange students had been lead back to the common room by Kento. They had all been introduced to each other and to the Hp gang. Then Kagome went up to bed. Kagome had a dream about a masked figure and his minion. The 'Lord' had been telling off his servant for trying to take out Dumbledore, and of course had been unsuccessful. Last we had seen, Kagome had woken to a masked figure on her bed with a knife to her neck. Her miko senses told that the figure was demon!
***More Knives***
Kagome sat there looking at the figure in horror as she felt the blood drip down her neck. The figure was crouching on her bed with the knife that was threatening her life in one hand and the other was holding a finger to his shadowed lips. It was hard to make out what he looked like.
Kagome, took a deep breath in, trying to calm her self down. The demon smirked down at her. Fear began to grip her in its icy hands, but she fought it down. Now was no time to panic.
"So you will be my first victim! One of the exchange students and then maybe one of your friends. That girl with the long hair would do." He whispered just loud enough for her to hear, with a sick grin and a small gesture to the bed next to Kagome, in which Sango slept peacefully.
"You won't get your hands on my friend!" Kagome said with a deadly calm voice, yet her eyes radiated raw power.
Her life was one thing, but one of her friends an innocent... that was something that she could not take. All it would take would be a little bit of power and then he would be dead. All it would take would be one scream and Sango would be up and ready to protect the other girls. All it would take would be Kagome. All that was needed was her anger for her friends. That was all.
His eyes widened in fear, realizing that he was not dealing with a defenseless girl that had first been sitting in the bed afraid for only her own life, but one who was ready to do any thing to save her friends. She grabbed his hands in a deadly grip and let loose.
There was a flash of brilliant purple and blue light a screech of pain and the sound of ash hitting the floor.
Kagome sat up and looked at the pile of ash that had been her would be assaulter. Sango was up and had a knife out on instant. The other girls were fiddling with there drapes, stumbling in there hurry to see what was happening. There were a few screams from Lavenders bed and a few to the left of it. Sango put away the knife and starred at the pile of ash and then to Kagome, back to the ash and then finally rested on Kagome. By this time the other girls had gotten out of there beds and were looking at Kagome worriedly.
"Kagome! Are you all right?" Kagome week nod she continued with a look of guilt and foreboding donning her face "Kagome... Oh god! This was a bad idea from the start! Inu Yasha was right! We shouldn't have come here! We are only bringing trouble with us! We shouldn't have been so selfish! We shoo..."
She was interrupted by Kagome who sharply said, "Sango, it wasn't the us! It came here for another reason!" Kagome noted the looks of horror and confusion that was on the girls faces around then so she switched to Japanese. "They were planing on killing random students! The Shekon Non Tama had nothing to do with it! I had put up a barrier so that no demons could sense it, or anything else for that matter! We were just the ones who were going to be killed first! It was all to start terror among the students! Tourists if you would! If any thing it's a good thing we came other wise the demon would have killed some innocent girl. We were just lucky that we were the ones chosen and not some one who didn't know how to protect them self!" Kagome pulled her friend into a tight hug. "Not every thing that follows you is bad Its not our fault. You have never done anything to hurt any innocent or had any thing to do with it. Sango, quite blaming your self. Kohaku's death wasn't your fault. He loved you. It was Naraku. Not you."
"Kagome... I... just don't want to lose any one else. I have lost so much already and when I saw the pile of ash... at first I thought that it was you! I thought I had lost you! I never knew that you could do that!" Sango sobbed on her friend's shoulder in her own language.
"Neither did I. It was rather scary actually. Suddenly there was so much power, and all I had to do was ask it and it was there. Like a friend that would never forsake me, but could burn me if I got to close. Could freeze me where I stood if I abused it. Like a wave of water that would drowned me when it was trying to only clean me. Out of control! And it wanted me to take that power and use it to defined my self and those I care for most." Kagome would have gone on mere if there hadn't been a knock on the door and a sudden entrance of someone unexpected.
An: I think I'm getting better at cliffeys! What do YOU think! I know that you all enjoy a good cliff hanger so I think I'll leave it here... or should I? Well, I think as a thank you to Kokami I'll keep going, but not much longer... Ausaka: You do I'll kill you! Silver: Your not ver=ry convencing. Ausaka: *pulls out knife* Silver: Ok!!! *looks nervous* Hehehe I'll keep going!!! Ausaka: Good *puts away knife* On with the show!
Professor MaGonagall came in, nostrils flaring, lips pursed in very thin line and eyes darting from the girls backing away from Kagome and Sango in fear to the pile of ash and then to the girls, still in a tight embrace.
"What is the meaning of this? Really! I thought that you two would be a positive influence to Gryffindor, but it appears I was wrong! Causing mayhem at this time of night! Really!" She roared in anger and disappointment.
"Professor, we need to explain this ah.... insodent to you in private. I fear that the information needed to be disclosed to you would scare some of the students and might be a threat to school safety. May we please continue this discussion if your office?" Kagome asked with a quite politeness, as if she was just asking for help on a class room problem, not an issue of school safety. Her voice was quite enough for the rest of the girls not to be able to hear.
"Follow me then" Professor MaGonagall said as she lead them out of the dormitory, past all the staring students and out the protread door.
Once they were a ways from the Dormitory Professor MaGonagall said in a stern voice, "If it is that serious then we will need to see the headmaster though this is likely a schema to get more time to make up an excuse for your dismal behavior." The stern Professor said with a vicious stare.
Kagome and Sango exchanged glances as they followed her. They had no ides what was going to happen with the headmaster. He seemed nice but experience told both of them that just because they seemed nice didn't mean that they really were.
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Kurama had been peacefully sleeping after he had studied all his books for the 5th time. His senses flared as a very fast demon whizzed into the room. Kurama bolted up and looked to where the demon was. He was standing over Harry, a knife being brought down about to slash his neck.
An: Well that's in! I hope you enjoyed! Not as much of a cliff hanger as I hoped but I have to go and do a report on this Maya Lin girl. Well, I'll be seeing you later! Oh and Kokami, don't forget to leave your e-mail address in the review. And pov's are points of views and Ill be having more action later! Ausaka: I'm going to kill you! You know I hate cliffies! Silver: To bad! Bye! Bye everyone! Ausaka: Bye bye!
Ausaka: Hello! I'm the one who is making her type this so you can all thank me in your reviews! Hehehehe *pulls out whip* GET TO WORK! Silver: Ok, Ok I'm sry! Ausaka: Just because I edit dosn't mean I like it! Silver: Yea! By the way! I have been thinking about it and I have decided to give the best reviewer a special bonus! I don't want you to put in all positive things because I need to learn more so I can make my fic better, so I'll be wanting a bit of good and bad! I want it long but not over bearing. Don't put untruthful praise in there, I don't want lies. It will boost my already high ego!(Ausaka: *rolls eyes*) Lol! If you win you will get it e-mailed to you before everybody else! Every chapter for the next 5 digest and then I will be looking back at all the reviews and decide which one reviews the best! That means at 10 chapters there will be a new winner (or it could be the same) and 15, then 20, 25, 30 and so on and so forth! I hope you like this contest!!!! Yep and if you want it sooner than you just have to e-mail me and you can even tell me if I'm messing it up!!!!! Yea I would be writing good reviews just for this! Well, I have been looking back at the reviews and have found the winner till the 10th chapter! It will be... ***Kokami**** Ausaka: Ya! More to edit!
Not only has she reviewed on nearly every chapter, but they have constructive criticism and ideas in them! She tells me what she wants in my fic and gives me ideas! She has been the best reviewer so far! So keep up the good work!
Kokami, when you review at the bottom of this chapter please leave me your e-mail address. That is if you want to. You don't have to, and I will understand if you don't. Any e mail will work! And thank you for being such a great reviewer!!! Ausaka: Yah, yah, yah, just get on with it already! Well now on to the story!
Last time: The exchange students had been lead back to the common room by Kento. They had all been introduced to each other and to the Hp gang. Then Kagome went up to bed. Kagome had a dream about a masked figure and his minion. The 'Lord' had been telling off his servant for trying to take out Dumbledore, and of course had been unsuccessful. Last we had seen, Kagome had woken to a masked figure on her bed with a knife to her neck. Her miko senses told that the figure was demon!
***More Knives***
Kagome sat there looking at the figure in horror as she felt the blood drip down her neck. The figure was crouching on her bed with the knife that was threatening her life in one hand and the other was holding a finger to his shadowed lips. It was hard to make out what he looked like.
Kagome, took a deep breath in, trying to calm her self down. The demon smirked down at her. Fear began to grip her in its icy hands, but she fought it down. Now was no time to panic.
"So you will be my first victim! One of the exchange students and then maybe one of your friends. That girl with the long hair would do." He whispered just loud enough for her to hear, with a sick grin and a small gesture to the bed next to Kagome, in which Sango slept peacefully.
"You won't get your hands on my friend!" Kagome said with a deadly calm voice, yet her eyes radiated raw power.
Her life was one thing, but one of her friends an innocent... that was something that she could not take. All it would take would be a little bit of power and then he would be dead. All it would take would be one scream and Sango would be up and ready to protect the other girls. All it would take would be Kagome. All that was needed was her anger for her friends. That was all.
His eyes widened in fear, realizing that he was not dealing with a defenseless girl that had first been sitting in the bed afraid for only her own life, but one who was ready to do any thing to save her friends. She grabbed his hands in a deadly grip and let loose.
There was a flash of brilliant purple and blue light a screech of pain and the sound of ash hitting the floor.
Kagome sat up and looked at the pile of ash that had been her would be assaulter. Sango was up and had a knife out on instant. The other girls were fiddling with there drapes, stumbling in there hurry to see what was happening. There were a few screams from Lavenders bed and a few to the left of it. Sango put away the knife and starred at the pile of ash and then to Kagome, back to the ash and then finally rested on Kagome. By this time the other girls had gotten out of there beds and were looking at Kagome worriedly.
"Kagome! Are you all right?" Kagome week nod she continued with a look of guilt and foreboding donning her face "Kagome... Oh god! This was a bad idea from the start! Inu Yasha was right! We shouldn't have come here! We are only bringing trouble with us! We shouldn't have been so selfish! We shoo..."
She was interrupted by Kagome who sharply said, "Sango, it wasn't the us! It came here for another reason!" Kagome noted the looks of horror and confusion that was on the girls faces around then so she switched to Japanese. "They were planing on killing random students! The Shekon Non Tama had nothing to do with it! I had put up a barrier so that no demons could sense it, or anything else for that matter! We were just the ones who were going to be killed first! It was all to start terror among the students! Tourists if you would! If any thing it's a good thing we came other wise the demon would have killed some innocent girl. We were just lucky that we were the ones chosen and not some one who didn't know how to protect them self!" Kagome pulled her friend into a tight hug. "Not every thing that follows you is bad Its not our fault. You have never done anything to hurt any innocent or had any thing to do with it. Sango, quite blaming your self. Kohaku's death wasn't your fault. He loved you. It was Naraku. Not you."
"Kagome... I... just don't want to lose any one else. I have lost so much already and when I saw the pile of ash... at first I thought that it was you! I thought I had lost you! I never knew that you could do that!" Sango sobbed on her friend's shoulder in her own language.
"Neither did I. It was rather scary actually. Suddenly there was so much power, and all I had to do was ask it and it was there. Like a friend that would never forsake me, but could burn me if I got to close. Could freeze me where I stood if I abused it. Like a wave of water that would drowned me when it was trying to only clean me. Out of control! And it wanted me to take that power and use it to defined my self and those I care for most." Kagome would have gone on mere if there hadn't been a knock on the door and a sudden entrance of someone unexpected.
An: I think I'm getting better at cliffeys! What do YOU think! I know that you all enjoy a good cliff hanger so I think I'll leave it here... or should I? Well, I think as a thank you to Kokami I'll keep going, but not much longer... Ausaka: You do I'll kill you! Silver: Your not ver=ry convencing. Ausaka: *pulls out knife* Silver: Ok!!! *looks nervous* Hehehe I'll keep going!!! Ausaka: Good *puts away knife* On with the show!
Professor MaGonagall came in, nostrils flaring, lips pursed in very thin line and eyes darting from the girls backing away from Kagome and Sango in fear to the pile of ash and then to the girls, still in a tight embrace.
"What is the meaning of this? Really! I thought that you two would be a positive influence to Gryffindor, but it appears I was wrong! Causing mayhem at this time of night! Really!" She roared in anger and disappointment.
"Professor, we need to explain this ah.... insodent to you in private. I fear that the information needed to be disclosed to you would scare some of the students and might be a threat to school safety. May we please continue this discussion if your office?" Kagome asked with a quite politeness, as if she was just asking for help on a class room problem, not an issue of school safety. Her voice was quite enough for the rest of the girls not to be able to hear.
"Follow me then" Professor MaGonagall said as she lead them out of the dormitory, past all the staring students and out the protread door.
Once they were a ways from the Dormitory Professor MaGonagall said in a stern voice, "If it is that serious then we will need to see the headmaster though this is likely a schema to get more time to make up an excuse for your dismal behavior." The stern Professor said with a vicious stare.
Kagome and Sango exchanged glances as they followed her. They had no ides what was going to happen with the headmaster. He seemed nice but experience told both of them that just because they seemed nice didn't mean that they really were.
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Kurama had been peacefully sleeping after he had studied all his books for the 5th time. His senses flared as a very fast demon whizzed into the room. Kurama bolted up and looked to where the demon was. He was standing over Harry, a knife being brought down about to slash his neck.
An: Well that's in! I hope you enjoyed! Not as much of a cliff hanger as I hoped but I have to go and do a report on this Maya Lin girl. Well, I'll be seeing you later! Oh and Kokami, don't forget to leave your e-mail address in the review. And pov's are points of views and Ill be having more action later! Ausaka: I'm going to kill you! You know I hate cliffies! Silver: To bad! Bye! Bye everyone! Ausaka: Bye bye!