Hello! I was bored and didn't feel like doing my homework so I wrote this.
This is my First Petshop of Horrors fanfic so please review and tell me if
you like it or not. It is called Betrayal.
Disclamier: I will never ever own Petshop of Horrors or any pets from
there. O.O
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It was raining... raining heavily. It was at 11 p.m. in Chinatown and it was dark outside. The streets were empty and no one was to be seen except a dark figure entering a Pet shop.
"Ring. Ring."
"Oh? A customer? At this time?" Said Count D as he was checking clock.
"Hello. Are you Count D.?" Said the mysterious figure as he was trying to dry himself from the rain.
"Yes. How can I help you?" Said D. sweeping the floor from the mess he had made.
"I have heard of this place before. People have said you can give the perfect pet to anyone who comes here. Well, I need one. I need a special pet that can meet my desires. Are you willing to do that for me?"
"Why, yes sir. I can do that. We have some new pets in stock. I hope that they are to your liking. Please follow me and we will find the perfect pet for you."
Count D and the unknown person walked into a hallway with little light. The walls would in some sort of designs.
"We are almost there." "Ah, here is the room." Said Count D. opening a door.
The dark man laid eyes on the most beautiful thing he has ever laid eyes on. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. In the room was a mermaid and a dragon like creature with wings. The creature had fins like a mermaid, scales like a dragon, and had a beautiful horn on it's forehead. It had many beautiful jewelries on and it's hair was flowing down. It had a really beautiful gown on with designs. It started to purr.
"Wow." Said the man. "Is that a pet? Well, I would like that whether or not it isn't. How much is it? I'll pay anything for it."
"Hm... well, this is one of a kind. So I'll guess I'll give it to you for free. But be warned. You must follow three simple rules. Rule number one: Give it meat. No vegetables, no fruits, no nothing. Just meat. Rule number two: keep it in water 24/7 in a big tank. Make sure the temperature is not too cold or not too hot. Rule number three: Love it and it will love you back." Said Count D. "If you don't follow any of these rules, consequences will happen. If you agree you will follow these rules, sign this form saying we are not responsible for any injuries or any deaths."
The dark figure signed the form. He gave it to D.
"Thanks! Please wait while I get your new pet out."
"Oh, and by the way, my name is Cody."
"Oh okay Cody ^_^"
Cody got his pet and named it Jasmine. He took it home and that's when everything started to happen.
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And that's the end of chapter one. What do you think? Should I continue? Please Review now! I hope the next chapter is better than this one. ^_^
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It was raining... raining heavily. It was at 11 p.m. in Chinatown and it was dark outside. The streets were empty and no one was to be seen except a dark figure entering a Pet shop.
"Ring. Ring."
"Oh? A customer? At this time?" Said Count D as he was checking clock.
"Hello. Are you Count D.?" Said the mysterious figure as he was trying to dry himself from the rain.
"Yes. How can I help you?" Said D. sweeping the floor from the mess he had made.
"I have heard of this place before. People have said you can give the perfect pet to anyone who comes here. Well, I need one. I need a special pet that can meet my desires. Are you willing to do that for me?"
"Why, yes sir. I can do that. We have some new pets in stock. I hope that they are to your liking. Please follow me and we will find the perfect pet for you."
Count D and the unknown person walked into a hallway with little light. The walls would in some sort of designs.
"We are almost there." "Ah, here is the room." Said Count D. opening a door.
The dark man laid eyes on the most beautiful thing he has ever laid eyes on. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. In the room was a mermaid and a dragon like creature with wings. The creature had fins like a mermaid, scales like a dragon, and had a beautiful horn on it's forehead. It had many beautiful jewelries on and it's hair was flowing down. It had a really beautiful gown on with designs. It started to purr.
"Wow." Said the man. "Is that a pet? Well, I would like that whether or not it isn't. How much is it? I'll pay anything for it."
"Hm... well, this is one of a kind. So I'll guess I'll give it to you for free. But be warned. You must follow three simple rules. Rule number one: Give it meat. No vegetables, no fruits, no nothing. Just meat. Rule number two: keep it in water 24/7 in a big tank. Make sure the temperature is not too cold or not too hot. Rule number three: Love it and it will love you back." Said Count D. "If you don't follow any of these rules, consequences will happen. If you agree you will follow these rules, sign this form saying we are not responsible for any injuries or any deaths."
The dark figure signed the form. He gave it to D.
"Thanks! Please wait while I get your new pet out."
"Oh, and by the way, my name is Cody."
"Oh okay Cody ^_^"
Cody got his pet and named it Jasmine. He took it home and that's when everything started to happen.
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And that's the end of chapter one. What do you think? Should I continue? Please Review now! I hope the next chapter is better than this one. ^_^