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Chapter 5: The Train to Harry's Heaven (From Hell)
Harry found a nice compartment for all of them as he waved goodbye to Mrs. Weasly.
"Have a great time at school!" she shouted as the train started and moved away. Harry was so happy to be on the way to Hogwarts.
"Well Ron, are you ready for another fun year at Hogwarts?" Harry said with enthusiasm. "Its going to be great, I can't wait to find out who the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher is!"
"Yea, I hope it won't be another Umbridge though, I'd have to quit school if that happened again, mate." Ron said.
"Well, I can't wait to hit the books. Sometimes it's so boring just being at home over the holidays, and I need to have some knowledge fed to my brain. Its just too lazy for me, the holiday." Hermione said exasperatedly.
Harry caught sight of Hermione at a perfect moment: The sun was shining on her beautiful light brown hair, which was wavy this year, and she was looking longingly out to what looked like heaven. Harry sighed and Hermione turned to Harry. He quickly looked away just before she made eye contact with him. Harry had a bad feeling that she had noticed him looking at her, and he was a little more nervous around her than usual.
"B-Beautiful outside, huh Hermione?" He said. His mind was telling him that he had to make a move on her, but he held himself back.
She sighed "Yea, it is Harry, very beautiful. You know Harry--"
"If this is going to be a love scene, I'm gonna go do my rounds as prefect a little earlier than usual and let you two at it." Ron said disgustedly.
"RON! How dare you say that! You know, you really can be rude at times!" Hermione scolded.
"It's obvious isn't it? The sun in your hair, your eyes, Harry looking at you and sighing? Haven't you got any brains?"
"More than you!" Hermione said coolly. "I know what I'm trying to do!"
"I was-hem-coughing Ron, you know that!" Harry said, trying to avoid being caught.
Hermione scowled at Ron, "Look what you've made him do lying about it!! Can't you see that he didn't want to be caught looking at me?"
"NO! Hermione no, I was really coughing" Harry said desperately.
"Alright Harry, I'll let you go for now." Ron said in a fatherly tone, one that Harry had never heard before.
"Really Ron, you have the nerve to say that! Your not his father!" Hermione said.
"Yea, well I was trying to help him out! You wouldn't know anyway Hermione, right Harry?"
Hermione pushed Ron out and told him that they had to do prefect duties. The bickered down the corridor until Harry could no longer hear them.
Harry didn't want to start bickering with Ron, so he wouldn't bring it up around him anymore. Harry would have to be more careful around Ron, he didn't respect Harry's love for Hermione. He would have to keep it secret.
*----*
When they had returned, Hermione and Ron seemed to be resolved with their argument and were talking politely to one another. Harry saw the sun setting and was expecting to arrive at Hogwarts in about 15 minutes.
"You have the time Hermione?" Harry asked, with a slightly shaky voice. He was still a little nervous around her. But Hermione respected this and was not coy around Harry.
"Yes, I do Harry. Its going to be about 13 minutes until we arrive at Hogwarts." Hermione said, matter-of-factly. She didn't want to put any pressure or embarrassment on Harry, and was sweet to him.
Just then, the train lurched and stopped.
"What's going on?" Everyone had come out of their compartments and were asking each other what had happened.
Suddenly, some people were falling to the floor and crying. "No, NO MUM!, Don't hurt ME PLEASE!"
Harry wheeled around to be faced with 3 Dementors.
Harry, Ron and Hermione, all at once, thought a happy thought and chanted "Expecti Patronem!"
There was a silver wisp of smoke and two Patronuses lept out at the Dementors, one a cat, the other a stag. The Dementors were pushed back a little, but they resisted the Patronuses' and soon one was on top of Harry.
Everything was going dark, he could hear his dad and mom screaming, dying, perishing. He was watching Sirus die, over and over again. The Dementor lifted its hood off of his head and Harry was going to be kissed. Now he wished to die, to escape the cold, clammy feeling of sadness and lifelessness, to stop hearing the screams of his mother, to stop seeing Sirus dying, Cedric dying, and join them.
"EXPECTI PATRONEM, EXPECTI PATRONEM!!!!" Ron said pleading for one to come out of his wand.
"PLEASE, DON'T LET HARRY DIE, PLEASE!! EXPECTI PATRONEM!!" Ron had thought of one of his best memories of all time, when he had become friends with Harry, and he was so happy of this memory that he smiled while he cast the spell.
A great Owl erupted from Ron's wand and it drove the Dementor away right as he was about to kiss Harry. Ron collapsed on the floor and Hermione stood, stunned, at Ron, both for saving Harry and completing the spell. Harry was laying on the floor, crying.
"MOOOOOOOOM! Come back mom, please, come back!, Sirus, please!"
Hermione quickly ran over and gave Harry a hug, and tried to comfort him as much as she could. Harry grabbed onto her tightly, still sobbing.
"It's ok Harry, everything is gonna be alright." Hermione began to cry too, seeing her friend in pain.
Immediately, Dumbledore came in through one of the doors of the train and looked around.
"Everyone alright? Good. I am sorry students, the Dementors' cannot be controlled by the school anymore. Was anyone's soul taken, Hermione?" He said with grave concern, although he looked quite calm.
"N-No headmaster, everyones a-a-alright *sniff*" Hermione said, on the verge of beginning to cry again.
"I'm sorry, Hermione. Dementors' should have never existed on this Earth, they are the worst creatures alive. We'll recover though" and with that, Dumbledore left with a twinkle.
The train began to move again and they arrived at Hogwarts. They would soon be at the Great Hall.
To be continued. . .PLEASE REVIEW!!!! PotterFan6year. Even more action next chapter! Remember, this is a slow moving book, so don't complain for action all the time.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the amazing characters or places, sad, ain't it?
Chapter 5: The Train to Harry's Heaven (From Hell)
Harry found a nice compartment for all of them as he waved goodbye to Mrs. Weasly.
"Have a great time at school!" she shouted as the train started and moved away. Harry was so happy to be on the way to Hogwarts.
"Well Ron, are you ready for another fun year at Hogwarts?" Harry said with enthusiasm. "Its going to be great, I can't wait to find out who the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher is!"
"Yea, I hope it won't be another Umbridge though, I'd have to quit school if that happened again, mate." Ron said.
"Well, I can't wait to hit the books. Sometimes it's so boring just being at home over the holidays, and I need to have some knowledge fed to my brain. Its just too lazy for me, the holiday." Hermione said exasperatedly.
Harry caught sight of Hermione at a perfect moment: The sun was shining on her beautiful light brown hair, which was wavy this year, and she was looking longingly out to what looked like heaven. Harry sighed and Hermione turned to Harry. He quickly looked away just before she made eye contact with him. Harry had a bad feeling that she had noticed him looking at her, and he was a little more nervous around her than usual.
"B-Beautiful outside, huh Hermione?" He said. His mind was telling him that he had to make a move on her, but he held himself back.
She sighed "Yea, it is Harry, very beautiful. You know Harry--"
"If this is going to be a love scene, I'm gonna go do my rounds as prefect a little earlier than usual and let you two at it." Ron said disgustedly.
"RON! How dare you say that! You know, you really can be rude at times!" Hermione scolded.
"It's obvious isn't it? The sun in your hair, your eyes, Harry looking at you and sighing? Haven't you got any brains?"
"More than you!" Hermione said coolly. "I know what I'm trying to do!"
"I was-hem-coughing Ron, you know that!" Harry said, trying to avoid being caught.
Hermione scowled at Ron, "Look what you've made him do lying about it!! Can't you see that he didn't want to be caught looking at me?"
"NO! Hermione no, I was really coughing" Harry said desperately.
"Alright Harry, I'll let you go for now." Ron said in a fatherly tone, one that Harry had never heard before.
"Really Ron, you have the nerve to say that! Your not his father!" Hermione said.
"Yea, well I was trying to help him out! You wouldn't know anyway Hermione, right Harry?"
Hermione pushed Ron out and told him that they had to do prefect duties. The bickered down the corridor until Harry could no longer hear them.
Harry didn't want to start bickering with Ron, so he wouldn't bring it up around him anymore. Harry would have to be more careful around Ron, he didn't respect Harry's love for Hermione. He would have to keep it secret.
*----*
When they had returned, Hermione and Ron seemed to be resolved with their argument and were talking politely to one another. Harry saw the sun setting and was expecting to arrive at Hogwarts in about 15 minutes.
"You have the time Hermione?" Harry asked, with a slightly shaky voice. He was still a little nervous around her. But Hermione respected this and was not coy around Harry.
"Yes, I do Harry. Its going to be about 13 minutes until we arrive at Hogwarts." Hermione said, matter-of-factly. She didn't want to put any pressure or embarrassment on Harry, and was sweet to him.
Just then, the train lurched and stopped.
"What's going on?" Everyone had come out of their compartments and were asking each other what had happened.
Suddenly, some people were falling to the floor and crying. "No, NO MUM!, Don't hurt ME PLEASE!"
Harry wheeled around to be faced with 3 Dementors.
Harry, Ron and Hermione, all at once, thought a happy thought and chanted "Expecti Patronem!"
There was a silver wisp of smoke and two Patronuses lept out at the Dementors, one a cat, the other a stag. The Dementors were pushed back a little, but they resisted the Patronuses' and soon one was on top of Harry.
Everything was going dark, he could hear his dad and mom screaming, dying, perishing. He was watching Sirus die, over and over again. The Dementor lifted its hood off of his head and Harry was going to be kissed. Now he wished to die, to escape the cold, clammy feeling of sadness and lifelessness, to stop hearing the screams of his mother, to stop seeing Sirus dying, Cedric dying, and join them.
"EXPECTI PATRONEM, EXPECTI PATRONEM!!!!" Ron said pleading for one to come out of his wand.
"PLEASE, DON'T LET HARRY DIE, PLEASE!! EXPECTI PATRONEM!!" Ron had thought of one of his best memories of all time, when he had become friends with Harry, and he was so happy of this memory that he smiled while he cast the spell.
A great Owl erupted from Ron's wand and it drove the Dementor away right as he was about to kiss Harry. Ron collapsed on the floor and Hermione stood, stunned, at Ron, both for saving Harry and completing the spell. Harry was laying on the floor, crying.
"MOOOOOOOOM! Come back mom, please, come back!, Sirus, please!"
Hermione quickly ran over and gave Harry a hug, and tried to comfort him as much as she could. Harry grabbed onto her tightly, still sobbing.
"It's ok Harry, everything is gonna be alright." Hermione began to cry too, seeing her friend in pain.
Immediately, Dumbledore came in through one of the doors of the train and looked around.
"Everyone alright? Good. I am sorry students, the Dementors' cannot be controlled by the school anymore. Was anyone's soul taken, Hermione?" He said with grave concern, although he looked quite calm.
"N-No headmaster, everyones a-a-alright *sniff*" Hermione said, on the verge of beginning to cry again.
"I'm sorry, Hermione. Dementors' should have never existed on this Earth, they are the worst creatures alive. We'll recover though" and with that, Dumbledore left with a twinkle.
The train began to move again and they arrived at Hogwarts. They would soon be at the Great Hall.
To be continued. . .PLEASE REVIEW!!!! PotterFan6year. Even more action next chapter! Remember, this is a slow moving book, so don't complain for action all the time.