Shiny Inuyasha
Disclaimer: ::sighs:: I don't own Inuyasha. I would love to. But no I am not so lucky. Nor stealthy enough to steal it.. ^_^;;;
NEW ADITION!: ok I decided to re up load this kuz I decided that my REALY BAD summery scared a lot of people off. So yea new summery and giving it another shot! (if you did not see it before it is down there ::points down::)
END NEW ADITION:
Well this is my first Inuyasha fic! ^_^ I hope you all like it!! or at least one person likes it... ^_^ any way! I am making this R this chapter has the most cussing that will be in any chapter. Oh and the name has little to do with Inuyasha shining.. I just could not come up with a name, so I just named the file on my comp this and decided to keep it!! ^_^;;;;....
((my notes in story))
"spoken"
'thought'
This is an Inu/Kag fic so yea there! Maybe a Mir/San
Summery: Inuyasha has issues. Kagome issues, Kikyo issues, time issues, pet rock issues, test issues.. wait!! PET ROCK ISSUES?!! O_o (not off the wall comedy)
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Chapter1: Ooooo shiny!!
It was starting to get late in this very common day the birds chirped in the trees, the water babbled softly in the rivers and of course Inuyasha was yelling.
"NO WAY IN HELL!!" Inuyasha spun around to glare at Kagome as he stopped walking down the path to Kaede's village.
Kagome sighed as the others stopped as well 'he always reacts like this when I tell him I have to go home!' she thought then narrowed her eyes. "I. HAVE. FINALS! INUYASHA!!!" she hissed as she put her hands on her hips. "I HAVE to go back and pass my tests or I will have to REPEAT THE GRADE!!"
"NO" Inuyasha growled "WHAT YOU HAVE TO DO IS FIND THE SHARDS!!!" his eyes narrowed
Her eye twitched 'yea only a shard detector.' "I will have most of the summer to look for shards!!" She said through gritted teeth "I will be back in ONLY a WEEK!!!"
Inuyasha growled at her "A WEEK THAT YOU SHOULD BE LOOKING FOR SHARDS NOT TAKING SOME DAMNED TESTS!"
Kagome huffed "I am leaving tomorrow and that is IT!"
Shippo narrowed his eyes at Inuyasha 'he should be nicer!' Inuyasha snorted "FEH! WE WILL-"
Inuyasha was cut off by an angry kit "JERK!" Shippo yelled as he tried to kick Inuyasha in the side of his leg. Shippo blinked as he hit something hard that rested inside Inuyasha's pants instead of Inuyasha's leg. ((No, no not that you pervs!))
Inuyasha's eyes snapped down to Shippo "WHY YOU LITTLE BRAT!" he growled as he picked Shippo up by the back of his neck and hit him in the head, just hard enough to hurt with out causing real damage, well long term damage any way, Inuyasha then chunked him to the side. "You could have damaged it!" Inuyasha mumbled as he took the object from a hidden pocket in his pants and spun around so that his back was to the group.
"Are you ok!" Kagome yelled as she ran over to check on Shippo.
Shippo's eyes looked like twin spirals as he mumbled "the stars looks yummy enough to drink"
Kagome's eye twitched as Sango and Miroku looked at each other.
Sango shook her head as she mumbled "he is going to get it"
Miroku nodded looking far too sympathetic as he replied "for sure" and side stepped closer to Sango.
Kagome's eyes snapped over to Inuyasha. 'Why that basterd!' she thought angry
Inuyasha crouched on the ground, his back to the group looking at some thing in his hands while mumbling to him self "it seems to be ok." ((Sounds like he got a hold of the Ring))
Kagome's eye twitched "Inuyasha... There is NO reason to hit Shippo like that! He is only a kid!" she blinked at his back "Inuyasha..."
Inuyasha continued to look at the object in his hand.
Her eyes narrowed "INUYASHA!!"
His head snapped back to look at her "WHAT!?"
She smiled, a vein throbbing on her head "Inuyasha."
His eyes widened slightly 'oh shit.'
"SIT BOY!!" Inuyasha promptly dug an Inuyasha shaped hole in the ground.. the hard way. While the object in his hand rolled off to the side.
Inuyasha jumped up as the spell faded and yelled "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR WENCH!!?" he crossed his arms and grumbled mentally 'There are going to be thousands of these inu-holes if SHE gets her way!'
Kagome however was paying him little mind and was currently looking past him as she watched the object stop rolling. 'What is that?' she thought as she walked towards it.
Inuyasha blinked 'she is ignoring me..' His eye twitched. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LOOKING AT!!"
Kagome walked over and picked up the object. She held it between two of her fingers and watched it glitter in the light. 'It looks like a stone of some kind' the stone was about half the size of her palm and reflected different colors depending on how the light hit it.
Inuyasha's eyes widened as he saw what she had in her hand. 'My pet rock!!' he thought franticly.
Sango's eyes narrowed as she yelled "PERVERT!" and slammed Miroku in the head with her boomerang causing him to fall to the ground with a strangely content look..
Kagome turned swiftly towards them then rolled her eyes 'they are at it AGAIN' she thought chuckling.
Inuyasha growled "GIVE ME THAT!" as he took advantage of Kagome being distracted and snatched his stone back. He then looked at it flipping it over in his hands 'good it is fine' he thought then hissed "you could have hurt it! You stupid wench!"
Miroku twitched on the ground mumbling some thing that sounded like; how unfair.
Kagome glared at Inuyasha "sit boy" she said coldly as he made yet another "inu-hole" the small stone was sent blasting off again. ((couldn't resist!!)) She picked up the stone and walked over to where Sango was standing and Miroku was in the process of getting back on his feet. She held her right hand out towards them, the stone sitting in her palm as she moved her hand and the colors danced on the stone. "Really nice isn't it?" she asked not taking her eyes off it.
Shippo, who had finally managed to regain sanity, jumped up on Sango's shoulder "Ooooo shiny!" he chirped happily.
Inuyasha jumped up and yelled "THAT'S MINE GIVE IT BACK!!" he took a few steps forward but, not wanting to be "sat" again, kept his distance with his arms crossed. 'Please don't ask what it is..' he thought watching them carefully.
Kagome looked over at him "it is very nice Inuyasha. What is it?"
Inuyasha mentally cursed 'shit! Couldn't she just give it back?!' he narrowed his eyes at her and growled out "just give it back you FUCKING BITCH!"
Kagome just stared at him a moment. "ME? I miss A LOT of school to find these shards and all you do is yell when I HAVE TO GO BACK FOR TESTS!!! YOU'RE. A. BASTERD. INUYASHA!!"
Inuyasha bared his teeth "FEH!! FINDING SHARDS IS TEN TIMES MORE IMPORTANT THAN THAT FUCKING SCHOOL THING!!" .'what ever it is'
"I am not saying finding the shards is not important!! I am saying SCHOOL IS TOO!!" She huffed and thought 'stupid, dense, inu!!'
"HOW DO YOU EXPECT US TO GET SHARDS WITH OUT A DETECTER!!"
She blinked "so I am JUST A SHARD DETECTOR TO YOU!!!"
"YEA! YOU ARE MY SHARD DETECTOR! WHAT ELSE CAN YOU DO! YOU USELESS BITCH!!" he growled at her.
"USELESS!!?? I CAN FIGHT TOO YOU KNOW!!"
"FEH!! YEA RIGHT!! IF YOU CALL YOUR BADLY AIMED ARROWS FIGHTING!!!"
"OH YEA!!" She leaned forward looking absolutely pissed.
"DAMN STRAIGHT!! YOU USELESS, BUTT UGLY, FUCKING BITCH!!"
"YOU STUPID HALF-BREED!!!"
he twitched slightly, so slightly in fact, that no one noticed "DO WHAT EVER YOU WANT!! GO BACK AND NEVER RETERN!! IT IS NOT LIKE I REALY NEED YOU ANY WAY!! I CAN FIND THE DAMN SHARDS ON MY OWN!!!"
"WELL THEN BOY!" She raised the arm that still held the stone up ready to through it. "GO FETCH!!" but just be for she was able to he dashed forward.
He yelled "FUCKING BITCH!!" as he quickly snatched it from her and ran through the forest going as fast as he could, trying desperately to get out of sitting range.
But Kagome did not sit him, she did not even try to. She simply stood there staring at her hand.
Sango shook her head "man.. Those two really went at each other hard this time" Shippo frowned and yelled "you're SO going to get it when you get back!!"
Miroku nodded looking, for once, like he was not thinking any thing perverted.
Sango looked at Kagome's back "Kagome-chan why did you not sit him?"
Kagome just stared at the direction Inuyasha went for a moment then turned to them her right hand dripping blood from the deep gash in it.
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Well there is the first chapter.. yea, yea I know ooc for all but well if you think about it ALL fan fiction IS out of character! So yea...
Tell me do you mind the in story notes? Should I stop putting them? Or do you not care? Am I writing clear enough? If not tell me and I will try to fix it.. I am currently my own proof reader so yea...
Sorry about any misspellings/wrong word I am not a very good speller and well I can only hope that Microsoft Word knows what I mean.. O_o;;;
REVIEW!!!
Tell me do you like this length of chapter? Longer? Shorter? Though this seemed like the place to stop. Hell even tell me if it just plain sucks! If you flame tell me what you don't like k? thanx!!
I will try to respond to any reviews I have in the next chapter. I want at least one before I post again!! Please! Even if it is "you suck"
Disclaimer: ::sighs:: I don't own Inuyasha. I would love to. But no I am not so lucky. Nor stealthy enough to steal it.. ^_^;;;
NEW ADITION!: ok I decided to re up load this kuz I decided that my REALY BAD summery scared a lot of people off. So yea new summery and giving it another shot! (if you did not see it before it is down there ::points down::)
END NEW ADITION:
Well this is my first Inuyasha fic! ^_^ I hope you all like it!! or at least one person likes it... ^_^ any way! I am making this R this chapter has the most cussing that will be in any chapter. Oh and the name has little to do with Inuyasha shining.. I just could not come up with a name, so I just named the file on my comp this and decided to keep it!! ^_^;;;;....
((my notes in story))
"spoken"
'thought'
This is an Inu/Kag fic so yea there! Maybe a Mir/San
Summery: Inuyasha has issues. Kagome issues, Kikyo issues, time issues, pet rock issues, test issues.. wait!! PET ROCK ISSUES?!! O_o (not off the wall comedy)
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Chapter1: Ooooo shiny!!
It was starting to get late in this very common day the birds chirped in the trees, the water babbled softly in the rivers and of course Inuyasha was yelling.
"NO WAY IN HELL!!" Inuyasha spun around to glare at Kagome as he stopped walking down the path to Kaede's village.
Kagome sighed as the others stopped as well 'he always reacts like this when I tell him I have to go home!' she thought then narrowed her eyes. "I. HAVE. FINALS! INUYASHA!!!" she hissed as she put her hands on her hips. "I HAVE to go back and pass my tests or I will have to REPEAT THE GRADE!!"
"NO" Inuyasha growled "WHAT YOU HAVE TO DO IS FIND THE SHARDS!!!" his eyes narrowed
Her eye twitched 'yea only a shard detector.' "I will have most of the summer to look for shards!!" She said through gritted teeth "I will be back in ONLY a WEEK!!!"
Inuyasha growled at her "A WEEK THAT YOU SHOULD BE LOOKING FOR SHARDS NOT TAKING SOME DAMNED TESTS!"
Kagome huffed "I am leaving tomorrow and that is IT!"
Shippo narrowed his eyes at Inuyasha 'he should be nicer!' Inuyasha snorted "FEH! WE WILL-"
Inuyasha was cut off by an angry kit "JERK!" Shippo yelled as he tried to kick Inuyasha in the side of his leg. Shippo blinked as he hit something hard that rested inside Inuyasha's pants instead of Inuyasha's leg. ((No, no not that you pervs!))
Inuyasha's eyes snapped down to Shippo "WHY YOU LITTLE BRAT!" he growled as he picked Shippo up by the back of his neck and hit him in the head, just hard enough to hurt with out causing real damage, well long term damage any way, Inuyasha then chunked him to the side. "You could have damaged it!" Inuyasha mumbled as he took the object from a hidden pocket in his pants and spun around so that his back was to the group.
"Are you ok!" Kagome yelled as she ran over to check on Shippo.
Shippo's eyes looked like twin spirals as he mumbled "the stars looks yummy enough to drink"
Kagome's eye twitched as Sango and Miroku looked at each other.
Sango shook her head as she mumbled "he is going to get it"
Miroku nodded looking far too sympathetic as he replied "for sure" and side stepped closer to Sango.
Kagome's eyes snapped over to Inuyasha. 'Why that basterd!' she thought angry
Inuyasha crouched on the ground, his back to the group looking at some thing in his hands while mumbling to him self "it seems to be ok." ((Sounds like he got a hold of the Ring))
Kagome's eye twitched "Inuyasha... There is NO reason to hit Shippo like that! He is only a kid!" she blinked at his back "Inuyasha..."
Inuyasha continued to look at the object in his hand.
Her eyes narrowed "INUYASHA!!"
His head snapped back to look at her "WHAT!?"
She smiled, a vein throbbing on her head "Inuyasha."
His eyes widened slightly 'oh shit.'
"SIT BOY!!" Inuyasha promptly dug an Inuyasha shaped hole in the ground.. the hard way. While the object in his hand rolled off to the side.
Inuyasha jumped up as the spell faded and yelled "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR WENCH!!?" he crossed his arms and grumbled mentally 'There are going to be thousands of these inu-holes if SHE gets her way!'
Kagome however was paying him little mind and was currently looking past him as she watched the object stop rolling. 'What is that?' she thought as she walked towards it.
Inuyasha blinked 'she is ignoring me..' His eye twitched. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LOOKING AT!!"
Kagome walked over and picked up the object. She held it between two of her fingers and watched it glitter in the light. 'It looks like a stone of some kind' the stone was about half the size of her palm and reflected different colors depending on how the light hit it.
Inuyasha's eyes widened as he saw what she had in her hand. 'My pet rock!!' he thought franticly.
Sango's eyes narrowed as she yelled "PERVERT!" and slammed Miroku in the head with her boomerang causing him to fall to the ground with a strangely content look..
Kagome turned swiftly towards them then rolled her eyes 'they are at it AGAIN' she thought chuckling.
Inuyasha growled "GIVE ME THAT!" as he took advantage of Kagome being distracted and snatched his stone back. He then looked at it flipping it over in his hands 'good it is fine' he thought then hissed "you could have hurt it! You stupid wench!"
Miroku twitched on the ground mumbling some thing that sounded like; how unfair.
Kagome glared at Inuyasha "sit boy" she said coldly as he made yet another "inu-hole" the small stone was sent blasting off again. ((couldn't resist!!)) She picked up the stone and walked over to where Sango was standing and Miroku was in the process of getting back on his feet. She held her right hand out towards them, the stone sitting in her palm as she moved her hand and the colors danced on the stone. "Really nice isn't it?" she asked not taking her eyes off it.
Shippo, who had finally managed to regain sanity, jumped up on Sango's shoulder "Ooooo shiny!" he chirped happily.
Inuyasha jumped up and yelled "THAT'S MINE GIVE IT BACK!!" he took a few steps forward but, not wanting to be "sat" again, kept his distance with his arms crossed. 'Please don't ask what it is..' he thought watching them carefully.
Kagome looked over at him "it is very nice Inuyasha. What is it?"
Inuyasha mentally cursed 'shit! Couldn't she just give it back?!' he narrowed his eyes at her and growled out "just give it back you FUCKING BITCH!"
Kagome just stared at him a moment. "ME? I miss A LOT of school to find these shards and all you do is yell when I HAVE TO GO BACK FOR TESTS!!! YOU'RE. A. BASTERD. INUYASHA!!"
Inuyasha bared his teeth "FEH!! FINDING SHARDS IS TEN TIMES MORE IMPORTANT THAN THAT FUCKING SCHOOL THING!!" .'what ever it is'
"I am not saying finding the shards is not important!! I am saying SCHOOL IS TOO!!" She huffed and thought 'stupid, dense, inu!!'
"HOW DO YOU EXPECT US TO GET SHARDS WITH OUT A DETECTER!!"
She blinked "so I am JUST A SHARD DETECTOR TO YOU!!!"
"YEA! YOU ARE MY SHARD DETECTOR! WHAT ELSE CAN YOU DO! YOU USELESS BITCH!!" he growled at her.
"USELESS!!?? I CAN FIGHT TOO YOU KNOW!!"
"FEH!! YEA RIGHT!! IF YOU CALL YOUR BADLY AIMED ARROWS FIGHTING!!!"
"OH YEA!!" She leaned forward looking absolutely pissed.
"DAMN STRAIGHT!! YOU USELESS, BUTT UGLY, FUCKING BITCH!!"
"YOU STUPID HALF-BREED!!!"
he twitched slightly, so slightly in fact, that no one noticed "DO WHAT EVER YOU WANT!! GO BACK AND NEVER RETERN!! IT IS NOT LIKE I REALY NEED YOU ANY WAY!! I CAN FIND THE DAMN SHARDS ON MY OWN!!!"
"WELL THEN BOY!" She raised the arm that still held the stone up ready to through it. "GO FETCH!!" but just be for she was able to he dashed forward.
He yelled "FUCKING BITCH!!" as he quickly snatched it from her and ran through the forest going as fast as he could, trying desperately to get out of sitting range.
But Kagome did not sit him, she did not even try to. She simply stood there staring at her hand.
Sango shook her head "man.. Those two really went at each other hard this time" Shippo frowned and yelled "you're SO going to get it when you get back!!"
Miroku nodded looking, for once, like he was not thinking any thing perverted.
Sango looked at Kagome's back "Kagome-chan why did you not sit him?"
Kagome just stared at the direction Inuyasha went for a moment then turned to them her right hand dripping blood from the deep gash in it.
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Well there is the first chapter.. yea, yea I know ooc for all but well if you think about it ALL fan fiction IS out of character! So yea...
Tell me do you mind the in story notes? Should I stop putting them? Or do you not care? Am I writing clear enough? If not tell me and I will try to fix it.. I am currently my own proof reader so yea...
Sorry about any misspellings/wrong word I am not a very good speller and well I can only hope that Microsoft Word knows what I mean.. O_o;;;
REVIEW!!!
Tell me do you like this length of chapter? Longer? Shorter? Though this seemed like the place to stop. Hell even tell me if it just plain sucks! If you flame tell me what you don't like k? thanx!!
I will try to respond to any reviews I have in the next chapter. I want at least one before I post again!! Please! Even if it is "you suck"