Shiny Inuyasha
Disclaimer: opens mouth blinks..... closes mouth..... walks off mumbling "oh why bother"
HI! Chapter 4! Yay!!! Lalala! ::dancing:: um ^_^;;; yea hi.... Um on to the chapter....... ::side steps off::
REVIEWS!!!
Lei Xang: lol, I loved the blooper ^^ Oh, and the whole Inuyasha fighting with himself is fun ^^ Hmm, I should make a one-shot like that sometime, that's be something. Me, writing humour, bah, you'll be the cause of it all T_T... ^_^ Updates soon!
ME: O_O I feel so..... influential! ^_^!! Thanx! I am glad you like it
Weirdo's Rule: ME LIKE!
ME: ME GLAD!! ^_^
Inu-chan's girl407: It's me again. Another great story to read. Can't wait for the next one.Ja ne
ME: ^_^ thanx! And I am sorry I have been taking so long..... v_v;;
I-Like-Sesshomaru: lol 'i need mental help' *YUP!!* lol i love that ending on the side! and the story of corse! plz update!
ME: LOL ^_^ yea I just HAD to add that!! I am glad you liked it!!
Shae (samuelharris.5.@verizon.net): This chapter is so cute sweet and adorable.Especially when Inuyasha licked her wound.Dogs really do that.I just find it so cute when dogs do that.I luv it.I also love your story please contiue.
ME: ^_^ yea Inuyasha is just a big puppy at heart!! That is probably why he is such a loved character!
kait (kittykhatkait@hotmail.com): this is a realy good story please keep writing
ME: THANX! I will finish this story!! ::looks diternened:: even if I stop for a little while I WILL keep posting. Hopefully to get to my goal of a chapter a week..... v_v;;;
kogafan (kittykhatkait@hotmail.com): your story is very interesting I cant wait to see what happens please write more.
Me: O_O TWINS!!! Yet SO different! ^_^ these two, assuming I remember right and that is iffy, actually came BEFORE I posted last O_O I was SO surprised for them to just go POOF! ^_^
rachel (dragontamer589@sbcglobal.net): this is a good story! try making the chapters a little longer, if you want. oh yeah: pet rock...?
o_0 okay...poor inu-san...
ME: yea I am going to get to the rock soon as well as chapter 5 is the longest one so far I think..... I am not done with it yet and it is already like 7 pages in word (not including intros and conclusions) this one is like 4 at best......... 4 pages seems to be my average... so in other words I will try! ^_^
I-Like-Sesshomaru: lol i love your story so far. Voices lol. Plz update soon ^_^
~Fish
ME: thanx! I know that is about all I ever say. The voice gets odder two...... looks at ch5 O_o I hope you keep liking it!!
END REVIWS!!
((my notes in story))
"spoken"
'thought'
*one's OTHER voice in head* (like when arguing with one's self)
********** flash back marks
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Chapter 4: A Dog in a Bad Mood
Kagome landed on the other side of the well and looked up at the roof over her head. 'Why have I not put a ladder in here again?' she sighed "SOUTA!!! GRANDPA!! MOM!!" she clicked her tongue "RANDOM PERSON PASSING BY!!!!??" she sighed again "great...."
Souta, who, very luckily, was near by when she shouted, looked down the well "oh! Your back!"
Kagome smiled "alright! You heard me! Could you get a later or some thing with my hand hurt I kinda can't climb out like normal!"
Souta nodded "ok be right back" he stopped and leaned back over the edge of the well "your not too badly hurt are you?!"
Kagome smiled up at him "oh it is ok don't worry!"
Souta nodded "right!"
It did not take long for him to get a later and for Kagome to make her way in to the house where her mother promptly decided that they were going to the doctor to get her hand looked at. ((don't you hate when authors copout on things like this?))
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Kagome, her mother and Souta walked in to the examination room the doctor right behind them. The doctor motioned to the papered examination table. ((you know those tables right? with the roll of paper attached?)) "Please have a seat Miss Kagome"
Kagome plopped down and looked over to the doctor who carefully unbandaged her arm.
He frowned and after examining it he said "well you seem to have been lucky it is not as bad as it could have been but you will have to not use it for at lest a couple of weeks to give it time to heal. Now how in the world did you do this? It almost looks like an animal attack. If so we may have to do some tests to make sure it did not transmit any disease to you"
Kagome's mind reeled and she started to panic 'what am I supposed to tell him? a dog demon named Inuyasha accidentally did it?.....!!!' and then inspiration struck, as it usually does in a time of need, she smiled and said coolly "well you see my dog was in a bad mood, as usual, and he accidentally cut me with his claws" she tried her best not to brake out laughing. Souta, however, did not have so much self control.
There mother smiled 'now normally I would not condone lying but... well I suppose he IS a dog..... Besides the doctor would not believe the truth any way'
The doctor blinked at the young boy laughing his head off "well as long as your dog is up on all his shots it should be fine then. Though I would consider getting rid of a dog that would do this..."
Kagome frowned "he is usually very protective this is the first time he has done any thing like this" she blinked 'well other than the first time we met but that does not really count..... not really.....'
The doctor sighed "well it is by your judgment but remember once a dog has attacked you it is liable to do it again. My cousin had a dog that "accidentally" hurt him once... the next time it almost killed him. He still has the scars." He looked distant for a moment "just, be careful."
After the doctor finished cleaning and rebandaging her arm he sighed "well I will expect you back in a few days so I can check on the healing." They walked out to the reception desk and Kagome's mother paid the bill as the doctor looked over to Kagome "remember what I said about this dog of yours, if he shows ANY sign he may hurt you again you should put him down. As much as you may love your dog and think it loves you they are not worth a human life."
Kagome nodded ".... Right" she blinked 'what?'
Kagome's mom turned towards Kagome "we should get home and get you some thing to eat"
Kagome nodded and mumbled "right" as they headed out the door 'man listening to the doctor talk like that you would think he was racist against demons or some thing...... but that is silly after all he WAS just talking about a normal dog and all.'
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They headed home making a quick stop to pick up some plastic forks to make it easier for her to eat. ((you know the kind you get at an American restaurant. ;-p))
After a warm dinner and a nice warm long bath Kagome sat on her bed leaning against the wall. 'Inuyasha.... '
************ ((start flash back))
"YEA! YOU ARE MY SHARD DETECTOR! WHAT ELSE CAN YOU DO! YOU USELESS BITCH!!" he growled at her.
"USELESS!!?? I CAN FIGHT TOO YOU KNOW!!"
"FEH!! YEA RIGHT!! IF YOU CALL YOUR BADLY AIMED ARROWS FIGHTING!!!"
************ ((end))
She sighed as she rubbed her temples. 'why does he refuse to admit I am a needed part of our shard hunting team?' she ran her finger over the bandage on her arm
************ ((start))
"DAMN STRAIGHT!! YOU USELESS, UGLY, FUCKING BITCH!!" ((Inuyasha))
"YOU STUPID HALF-BREED!!!" ((Kagome))
"DO WHAT EVER YOU WANT!! GO BACK AND NEVER RETURN!! IT IS NOT LIKE I REALY NEED YOU ANY WAY!! I CAN FIND THE DAMN SHARDS ON MY OWN!!!"
"WELL THEN BOY!" She raised the arm that still held the stone up ready to through it. "GO FETCH!!" but just be for she was able to he dashed forward.
************ ((end))
She bowed her head "why.... I shouldn't" she sighed 'I can't believe I called him that.... maybe I should apologize' her eyes drifted down to her arm 'I can under stand him being mad even pissed.... But..... this....'
************ ((start))
Inuyasha jumped up, the spell having warn off, and yelled at her "I said you are an annoying bitch!!"
************ ((end))
Kagome scowled 'he didn't even seem sorry!' she sighed 'all he had to say is "I am sorry" or even "are you ok?" but no!' she shook her head 'do you truly care so little about me?'
************ ((start))
Inuyasha's claws sliced through the air over Kagome's head as she fell to the ground. Inuyasha grinned evilly "hand over the jewel!!" ((you know what happened right after that centipede demon was killed))
************ ((end))
Kagome slipped down in to a laying position on her bed 'what if that doctor was right about him? What if he will attack me again? Maybe this was only the beginning.' She looked over at her clock. 'It is getting late I should go to sleep' she reached over and turned off the lights. 'No. Inuyasha may steal the jewel and use it for himself but he would not kill me for it......... would he?' with that last thought she drifted off in to a fitful sleep filled with angry Inuyashas.
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Meanwhile years and years prior a certain set of golden eyes stared down towards the bottom of the well while white ears drooped rather indignantly. "Kagome........." and wrapped around one hand the bandage.
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End chapter 4!!
Yea well that was very Kagome oriented with the name one would think other wise..... If you are wondering why the flash backs are there well it has been awhile since I last posted and so I figured this would be the best way to do it. I don't really like this chapter and I am not all that sure why....... Oh well. As always suggestions are always welcome! If you don't understand some thing tell me so I can try to fix it.. Shesh another short chapter...... sorry on to work on the next one
This would have been up sooner but I just could not post it till it was passable. I do not want to post crap. But half way decent is ok....... If that is the best I can get it.... v_v;; and I kinda gave up on getting it to where I am happy with it..... if you have a way I can make it better than let me know and I will try to revise it while writing the next chapters too.
It might be a while till my next post after this I am not sure where I am going...... well I have an idea but I just don't know how to get there ^_^;;;
By the way if any one is reading this those demons I mentioned last time are NOT I repeat NOT going to be all powerful NONE of the main characters are going to fall in love with them NOR are they perfect!! ((if you are now confused you HAVE to read Complete Perfection by Khepri!!! her summery: Look out all you hott InuYasha guys! All Mary-Sues are revealed in a collection of one-shots. Better take notes to know what to avoid.))
Disclaimer: opens mouth blinks..... closes mouth..... walks off mumbling "oh why bother"
HI! Chapter 4! Yay!!! Lalala! ::dancing:: um ^_^;;; yea hi.... Um on to the chapter....... ::side steps off::
REVIEWS!!!
Lei Xang: lol, I loved the blooper ^^ Oh, and the whole Inuyasha fighting with himself is fun ^^ Hmm, I should make a one-shot like that sometime, that's be something. Me, writing humour, bah, you'll be the cause of it all T_T... ^_^ Updates soon!
ME: O_O I feel so..... influential! ^_^!! Thanx! I am glad you like it
Weirdo's Rule: ME LIKE!
ME: ME GLAD!! ^_^
Inu-chan's girl407: It's me again. Another great story to read. Can't wait for the next one.Ja ne
ME: ^_^ thanx! And I am sorry I have been taking so long..... v_v;;
I-Like-Sesshomaru: lol 'i need mental help' *YUP!!* lol i love that ending on the side! and the story of corse! plz update!
ME: LOL ^_^ yea I just HAD to add that!! I am glad you liked it!!
Shae (samuelharris.5.@verizon.net): This chapter is so cute sweet and adorable.Especially when Inuyasha licked her wound.Dogs really do that.I just find it so cute when dogs do that.I luv it.I also love your story please contiue.
ME: ^_^ yea Inuyasha is just a big puppy at heart!! That is probably why he is such a loved character!
kait (kittykhatkait@hotmail.com): this is a realy good story please keep writing
ME: THANX! I will finish this story!! ::looks diternened:: even if I stop for a little while I WILL keep posting. Hopefully to get to my goal of a chapter a week..... v_v;;;
kogafan (kittykhatkait@hotmail.com): your story is very interesting I cant wait to see what happens please write more.
Me: O_O TWINS!!! Yet SO different! ^_^ these two, assuming I remember right and that is iffy, actually came BEFORE I posted last O_O I was SO surprised for them to just go POOF! ^_^
rachel (dragontamer589@sbcglobal.net): this is a good story! try making the chapters a little longer, if you want. oh yeah: pet rock...?
o_0 okay...poor inu-san...
ME: yea I am going to get to the rock soon as well as chapter 5 is the longest one so far I think..... I am not done with it yet and it is already like 7 pages in word (not including intros and conclusions) this one is like 4 at best......... 4 pages seems to be my average... so in other words I will try! ^_^
I-Like-Sesshomaru: lol i love your story so far. Voices lol. Plz update soon ^_^
~Fish
ME: thanx! I know that is about all I ever say. The voice gets odder two...... looks at ch5 O_o I hope you keep liking it!!
END REVIWS!!
((my notes in story))
"spoken"
'thought'
*one's OTHER voice in head* (like when arguing with one's self)
********** flash back marks
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 4: A Dog in a Bad Mood
Kagome landed on the other side of the well and looked up at the roof over her head. 'Why have I not put a ladder in here again?' she sighed "SOUTA!!! GRANDPA!! MOM!!" she clicked her tongue "RANDOM PERSON PASSING BY!!!!??" she sighed again "great...."
Souta, who, very luckily, was near by when she shouted, looked down the well "oh! Your back!"
Kagome smiled "alright! You heard me! Could you get a later or some thing with my hand hurt I kinda can't climb out like normal!"
Souta nodded "ok be right back" he stopped and leaned back over the edge of the well "your not too badly hurt are you?!"
Kagome smiled up at him "oh it is ok don't worry!"
Souta nodded "right!"
It did not take long for him to get a later and for Kagome to make her way in to the house where her mother promptly decided that they were going to the doctor to get her hand looked at. ((don't you hate when authors copout on things like this?))
----------------------------------
Kagome, her mother and Souta walked in to the examination room the doctor right behind them. The doctor motioned to the papered examination table. ((you know those tables right? with the roll of paper attached?)) "Please have a seat Miss Kagome"
Kagome plopped down and looked over to the doctor who carefully unbandaged her arm.
He frowned and after examining it he said "well you seem to have been lucky it is not as bad as it could have been but you will have to not use it for at lest a couple of weeks to give it time to heal. Now how in the world did you do this? It almost looks like an animal attack. If so we may have to do some tests to make sure it did not transmit any disease to you"
Kagome's mind reeled and she started to panic 'what am I supposed to tell him? a dog demon named Inuyasha accidentally did it?.....!!!' and then inspiration struck, as it usually does in a time of need, she smiled and said coolly "well you see my dog was in a bad mood, as usual, and he accidentally cut me with his claws" she tried her best not to brake out laughing. Souta, however, did not have so much self control.
There mother smiled 'now normally I would not condone lying but... well I suppose he IS a dog..... Besides the doctor would not believe the truth any way'
The doctor blinked at the young boy laughing his head off "well as long as your dog is up on all his shots it should be fine then. Though I would consider getting rid of a dog that would do this..."
Kagome frowned "he is usually very protective this is the first time he has done any thing like this" she blinked 'well other than the first time we met but that does not really count..... not really.....'
The doctor sighed "well it is by your judgment but remember once a dog has attacked you it is liable to do it again. My cousin had a dog that "accidentally" hurt him once... the next time it almost killed him. He still has the scars." He looked distant for a moment "just, be careful."
After the doctor finished cleaning and rebandaging her arm he sighed "well I will expect you back in a few days so I can check on the healing." They walked out to the reception desk and Kagome's mother paid the bill as the doctor looked over to Kagome "remember what I said about this dog of yours, if he shows ANY sign he may hurt you again you should put him down. As much as you may love your dog and think it loves you they are not worth a human life."
Kagome nodded ".... Right" she blinked 'what?'
Kagome's mom turned towards Kagome "we should get home and get you some thing to eat"
Kagome nodded and mumbled "right" as they headed out the door 'man listening to the doctor talk like that you would think he was racist against demons or some thing...... but that is silly after all he WAS just talking about a normal dog and all.'
----------------------------------
They headed home making a quick stop to pick up some plastic forks to make it easier for her to eat. ((you know the kind you get at an American restaurant. ;-p))
After a warm dinner and a nice warm long bath Kagome sat on her bed leaning against the wall. 'Inuyasha.... '
************ ((start flash back))
"YEA! YOU ARE MY SHARD DETECTOR! WHAT ELSE CAN YOU DO! YOU USELESS BITCH!!" he growled at her.
"USELESS!!?? I CAN FIGHT TOO YOU KNOW!!"
"FEH!! YEA RIGHT!! IF YOU CALL YOUR BADLY AIMED ARROWS FIGHTING!!!"
************ ((end))
She sighed as she rubbed her temples. 'why does he refuse to admit I am a needed part of our shard hunting team?' she ran her finger over the bandage on her arm
************ ((start))
"DAMN STRAIGHT!! YOU USELESS, UGLY, FUCKING BITCH!!" ((Inuyasha))
"YOU STUPID HALF-BREED!!!" ((Kagome))
"DO WHAT EVER YOU WANT!! GO BACK AND NEVER RETURN!! IT IS NOT LIKE I REALY NEED YOU ANY WAY!! I CAN FIND THE DAMN SHARDS ON MY OWN!!!"
"WELL THEN BOY!" She raised the arm that still held the stone up ready to through it. "GO FETCH!!" but just be for she was able to he dashed forward.
************ ((end))
She bowed her head "why.... I shouldn't" she sighed 'I can't believe I called him that.... maybe I should apologize' her eyes drifted down to her arm 'I can under stand him being mad even pissed.... But..... this....'
************ ((start))
Inuyasha jumped up, the spell having warn off, and yelled at her "I said you are an annoying bitch!!"
************ ((end))
Kagome scowled 'he didn't even seem sorry!' she sighed 'all he had to say is "I am sorry" or even "are you ok?" but no!' she shook her head 'do you truly care so little about me?'
************ ((start))
Inuyasha's claws sliced through the air over Kagome's head as she fell to the ground. Inuyasha grinned evilly "hand over the jewel!!" ((you know what happened right after that centipede demon was killed))
************ ((end))
Kagome slipped down in to a laying position on her bed 'what if that doctor was right about him? What if he will attack me again? Maybe this was only the beginning.' She looked over at her clock. 'It is getting late I should go to sleep' she reached over and turned off the lights. 'No. Inuyasha may steal the jewel and use it for himself but he would not kill me for it......... would he?' with that last thought she drifted off in to a fitful sleep filled with angry Inuyashas.
----------------------------------
Meanwhile years and years prior a certain set of golden eyes stared down towards the bottom of the well while white ears drooped rather indignantly. "Kagome........." and wrapped around one hand the bandage.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
End chapter 4!!
Yea well that was very Kagome oriented with the name one would think other wise..... If you are wondering why the flash backs are there well it has been awhile since I last posted and so I figured this would be the best way to do it. I don't really like this chapter and I am not all that sure why....... Oh well. As always suggestions are always welcome! If you don't understand some thing tell me so I can try to fix it.. Shesh another short chapter...... sorry on to work on the next one
This would have been up sooner but I just could not post it till it was passable. I do not want to post crap. But half way decent is ok....... If that is the best I can get it.... v_v;; and I kinda gave up on getting it to where I am happy with it..... if you have a way I can make it better than let me know and I will try to revise it while writing the next chapters too.
It might be a while till my next post after this I am not sure where I am going...... well I have an idea but I just don't know how to get there ^_^;;;
By the way if any one is reading this those demons I mentioned last time are NOT I repeat NOT going to be all powerful NONE of the main characters are going to fall in love with them NOR are they perfect!! ((if you are now confused you HAVE to read Complete Perfection by Khepri!!! her summery: Look out all you hott InuYasha guys! All Mary-Sues are revealed in a collection of one-shots. Better take notes to know what to avoid.))