Lost in the World
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This is chapter two. You will find out more about my guy. And yes I know I have spelling error. I will have to delete the storie and correct all the error I see.
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Chapter 2 : Hope Has Come
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(Ricky POV)
I was running away from the castle. I don't know why, but I felt strange when I saw that guy, even if I didn't see his face. I had a strange feeling like I knew him, but why am I running away if there's maybe hope to finally know who I am. Well, I kinda freaked out, he doesn't seem passive.
I looked up at the bright blue sky and I sighed irritated before saying "Is there no hope for me to ever find out my real identity"
At my right I heard an explosion. I looked toward it and ran up to see what could have caused it.
(End of POV)
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Tiff, Tuff, Kirby and Meta Knight was looking for Ricky. They were getting even more worried as time passed, exept for Meta Knight who kept his cool. Sometime the others almost lost hope of ever finding him, but they persevered.
A bright light came out of no where and explosed next to them on the contact of the ground. They covered their eyes from the smoke. When the smoke dissipated, they could see a small crater at the place where the light explosed. They looked around and saw the shadow of a monster near them. The monster looked like a over grown black cat that stood on it's back legs. It was olding in one of its huge paw a sword.
Dedede and Escargoon appeared from behind the monster in the white limousine. Dedede normal laught could be heard. They glared at him, escargoon and the monster.
"Now it is time for my revange. Destroy Kirby " Dedede yelled at the monster.
The monster charged at Kirby who dodged it's sword when it was about to make contact with him. The monster growled at him and tried slashing kirby again and again. Getting irritated, the monster opened the palm of his other paw and the same bright light was forming itself. He pointed his paw to kirby and the light immediately shot of and knocked kirby to the nearest tree. Kirby got back up in time, cuz a few more blast nearly hit him. The monster charged again, but failed to hit kirby.
"Suck up it's sword" Tiff yelled to her friend. Obediently, he tried sucking the sword, but the monster was holding it tightly. Meta Knight knocked the sword out of the monster paw with his own sword, allowing Kirby to finally suck it up. Jumping in the air, a green hat with a yellow pompom came on top of kirby head and hitting him in the face. After that, he made a yellow sword appear. Kirby charged at the monster, who made a other sword appear, and they started to fight. Kirby was mostly defending himself as the monster wildly tried to hit him.
In the shadow under a tree was a figure who looked at the fight. He looked at it terrify. The dark shadow was none other then Ricky. He looked at the monster slashing kirby and was scared for his new friend. He got down from the tree and got closer to the battle. But no one saw him yet.
Kirby was starting to get tired and backed away from the monster. He jumped in the air and his sword glowed before releasing the sword beem attack. The monster exploded and Dedede left furious with Kirby new victory. Kirby went back to his friends, he wasn't sword Kirby anymore.
"cool" a voice said.
They all turned to look and saw Ricky standing there, gaping. Meta Knight eyes widened before he wispered "Eric"
THE END
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Well, here it is, I hope you enjoyed it. IT took me some time and I didn't find anytime to work on my first storie. Maybe I will stop, but I might update the first one during the March Break. I will try to update more often my storie, but I don't garantee that I will manage to do that. I know there was a lot of mystake in my first chapter. I corrected my chapter, but their might still be some erroer. Their might be a lot here too, but I don't know. I also drew a pic of my character Ricky when he was in the space ship in my first chapter, just take out the space.
http://www. angelfire. com/anime5/alucard01/Colored_Unconcious_Eric.GIF
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This is chapter two. You will find out more about my guy. And yes I know I have spelling error. I will have to delete the storie and correct all the error I see.
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Chapter 2 : Hope Has Come
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(Ricky POV)
I was running away from the castle. I don't know why, but I felt strange when I saw that guy, even if I didn't see his face. I had a strange feeling like I knew him, but why am I running away if there's maybe hope to finally know who I am. Well, I kinda freaked out, he doesn't seem passive.
I looked up at the bright blue sky and I sighed irritated before saying "Is there no hope for me to ever find out my real identity"
At my right I heard an explosion. I looked toward it and ran up to see what could have caused it.
(End of POV)
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Tiff, Tuff, Kirby and Meta Knight was looking for Ricky. They were getting even more worried as time passed, exept for Meta Knight who kept his cool. Sometime the others almost lost hope of ever finding him, but they persevered.
A bright light came out of no where and explosed next to them on the contact of the ground. They covered their eyes from the smoke. When the smoke dissipated, they could see a small crater at the place where the light explosed. They looked around and saw the shadow of a monster near them. The monster looked like a over grown black cat that stood on it's back legs. It was olding in one of its huge paw a sword.
Dedede and Escargoon appeared from behind the monster in the white limousine. Dedede normal laught could be heard. They glared at him, escargoon and the monster.
"Now it is time for my revange. Destroy Kirby " Dedede yelled at the monster.
The monster charged at Kirby who dodged it's sword when it was about to make contact with him. The monster growled at him and tried slashing kirby again and again. Getting irritated, the monster opened the palm of his other paw and the same bright light was forming itself. He pointed his paw to kirby and the light immediately shot of and knocked kirby to the nearest tree. Kirby got back up in time, cuz a few more blast nearly hit him. The monster charged again, but failed to hit kirby.
"Suck up it's sword" Tiff yelled to her friend. Obediently, he tried sucking the sword, but the monster was holding it tightly. Meta Knight knocked the sword out of the monster paw with his own sword, allowing Kirby to finally suck it up. Jumping in the air, a green hat with a yellow pompom came on top of kirby head and hitting him in the face. After that, he made a yellow sword appear. Kirby charged at the monster, who made a other sword appear, and they started to fight. Kirby was mostly defending himself as the monster wildly tried to hit him.
In the shadow under a tree was a figure who looked at the fight. He looked at it terrify. The dark shadow was none other then Ricky. He looked at the monster slashing kirby and was scared for his new friend. He got down from the tree and got closer to the battle. But no one saw him yet.
Kirby was starting to get tired and backed away from the monster. He jumped in the air and his sword glowed before releasing the sword beem attack. The monster exploded and Dedede left furious with Kirby new victory. Kirby went back to his friends, he wasn't sword Kirby anymore.
"cool" a voice said.
They all turned to look and saw Ricky standing there, gaping. Meta Knight eyes widened before he wispered "Eric"
THE END
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Well, here it is, I hope you enjoyed it. IT took me some time and I didn't find anytime to work on my first storie. Maybe I will stop, but I might update the first one during the March Break. I will try to update more often my storie, but I don't garantee that I will manage to do that. I know there was a lot of mystake in my first chapter. I corrected my chapter, but their might still be some erroer. Their might be a lot here too, but I don't know. I also drew a pic of my character Ricky when he was in the space ship in my first chapter, just take out the space.
http://www. angelfire. com/anime5/alucard01/Colored_Unconcious_Eric.GIF