A/n: I don't own Sonic. And thanks to the following people who reviewed:
RedFox, Crockgirl13, Dragon_Master_Naya, SSJ-Sonic and MysticShadowChick.
And many thanks the inventive person who goes by the name "secret" and failed to leave a signed review. Ye gods that's real inventive genius. And I quote:
Well I'm sorry to say this is the worst most crappy thing ever to be posted on this site! THIS STORY IS SO GAY! The author should stick his penis in an electric pencil sharpener! If its a girl she should jump off a bridge or something! If any one likes this story they are homosexal faggots!
And since you said that this is the "most crappy" thing posted on FF net then how do you explain 31 positive reviews? And can you do any better? Also its not "most crappy" it would be crappiest. See, it's called grammar; if you run this through the spell and grammar checkers you see things like that. I know FF net doesn't have one on there but READ THE DAMN THING. It isn't that hard. And "it's" is supposed to be it's in this case. For it is. Not belongs to it.
Also I'm quite obviously a girl, how many guys would choose the name NEON ROSE? And assuming you mean faggots as in gay people, and also assuming that by the word "homosexal" you me homosexual, I ask you would you get any other kind of faggot? It's like saying you're a stupid moron! It's not necessary okay? To be honest I could repeatedly smack my head on the keyboard and come out with something better than your review, and that's talking it up!
Now don't get me wrong here, I welcome constructive comments on my writing any day but this was just sad. I realise that I'm probably wasting my words here as I doubt my good friend "secret" here can barely read.
Eagerly awaiting your next review, Neon Rose.
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"Dude, you went out with Blue last night? As in the Blue?"
"As in like on an actual date?" Cole rocked back on his chair as his friends interrogated him about his date with Blue last night, he grinned smoothly; they'd been talking the whole time and almost constantly in hysterics with each other. He'd never experienced a date like that before, he was actually attracted to her as a person as well as what she looked like.
"Hey Cole." A boy said walking up to Cole's desk. Cole frowned, and looked up. He recognised the guy was in his year but he didn't know him, he had a vague feeling his name was Sam.
"Hey." He replied.
"I heard you're going out with Blue. Good luck man." He laughed slightly making his mouth twist in an ugly way.
"Why?" Cole asked getting a bad feeling from him.
"I went out with her two years ago, she's a total tease." He smirked.
Cole's mind reeled; this was the guy that had hurt Blue. The guy that Miranda had told him about. He stood up, his chair scraping at a blood curdling pitch on the floor, tension bristled. He looked the boy in the eye and the rest of the room watched in silence. Quick as a flash Cole punched the guy under the jaw and grabbed him by his shirt as he stumbled backwards.
"If you even think of touching Blue ever again, or even talking to her, I will cause you more pain than you thought imaginable." Cole growled menacingly.
Blue strolled happily down the corridor, she was running an errand for one of her teachers, she enjoyed doing this; it meant it got her out of class and she got to talk to anyone who was in the front office. She walked in to see Cole sitting slumped sulkily in a chair in the office. She smiled at him and gave the note to the secretary who scuttled off to the back of the room to do ask the note had instructed.
Blue turned around to face Cole and leant on the desk and smiled at him.
"Heya." She smiled.
"Hey." He smiled back sitting up.
"What did you do?" She asked with a grin.
"Oh, nothing." Cole shrugged remembering Miranda's threat.
"No. Really, why?" Blue said narrowing her eyes as if she could read Cole's mind.
"Look it's nothing!" Cole snapped.
"Fine. If you're going to lie to me then I guess we shouldn't go out." Blue shrugged turning away.
"OKAY! FINE I'LL TELL YOU!" Cole shouted angrily.
"I'm listening." Blue said looking over her shoulder.
"I got into a fight ok? With some guy whose name I don't know." Cole sighed.
"I don't believe you got into a fight with a random stranger." Blue said walking over to him and sitting on her heels and looking straight into his eyes. She paused before speaking again.
"Miranda told you what happened didn't she?" Blue said quietly.
"WHAT?! No!" Cole said shocked.
"Ye gods, she threatened you too didn't she?" Blue groaned.
"How do you do that?" Cole asked narrowing his eyes.
"What, read your mind? It's easy you're very transparent." Blue sighed sitting next to him.
"Gee thanks." Cole said sarcastically. "I couldn't help it. He was practically bragging about it. I just lost it ok?"
"I know. Just don't tell Sonic ok?" Blue said quietly.
"You mean he doesn't know?" Cole asked looking shocked.
"No. And if you tell him I'll gut you like a fish." Blue threatened.
"I can see why you and Miranda get along." Cole grinned.
Blue walked home, she had just left Cole about five minutes ago and was already missing his company. Blue thought for a second that Cole had somehow managed to get in front of her as she saw a black spiked shape up ahead. But she quickly picked out the crimson streaks on his spikes and realised that it wasn't Cole.
"Hey Shadow, what are you doing here?" Blue asked walking up to Sonic's former rival.
"Oh, nothing. I was just bored is all." He shrugged.
"Heh, I thought you were Cole at first." Blue laughed slightly.
"Cole?" Shadow asked looking slightly confused.
"Oh, Cole was the guy who helped me rescue you guys." Blue explained.
"Oh him. Who is he?" Shadow asked curiously.
"He goes to my school, he's eighteen. He doesn't have any parents either, but I'm lucky to have Sonic; poor Cole doesn't even have any adopted parents. We're kinda going out." Blue blushed slightly.
"Oh really. I take it Sonic doesn't know this?" Shadow smirked.
"NO!" Blue said in a "and-I-want-to-keep-it-that-way" kind of voice.
"I'll see you around. And don't worry I won't say a word." Shadow said and ran off in the direction of Sonic and Blue's house leaving a huge dust- cloud behind. Blue smiled and continued walking, she stopped suddenly a few minutes down the road when she noticed a giant shadow loom over her. She spun around and looked up in the sky with a gasp.
"That really wasn't funny hedgehog." A voice said as Blue's unconscious body fell to the floor.
And many thanks the inventive person who goes by the name "secret" and failed to leave a signed review. Ye gods that's real inventive genius. And I quote:
Well I'm sorry to say this is the worst most crappy thing ever to be posted on this site! THIS STORY IS SO GAY! The author should stick his penis in an electric pencil sharpener! If its a girl she should jump off a bridge or something! If any one likes this story they are homosexal faggots!
And since you said that this is the "most crappy" thing posted on FF net then how do you explain 31 positive reviews? And can you do any better? Also its not "most crappy" it would be crappiest. See, it's called grammar; if you run this through the spell and grammar checkers you see things like that. I know FF net doesn't have one on there but READ THE DAMN THING. It isn't that hard. And "it's" is supposed to be it's in this case. For it is. Not belongs to it.
Also I'm quite obviously a girl, how many guys would choose the name NEON ROSE? And assuming you mean faggots as in gay people, and also assuming that by the word "homosexal" you me homosexual, I ask you would you get any other kind of faggot? It's like saying you're a stupid moron! It's not necessary okay? To be honest I could repeatedly smack my head on the keyboard and come out with something better than your review, and that's talking it up!
Now don't get me wrong here, I welcome constructive comments on my writing any day but this was just sad. I realise that I'm probably wasting my words here as I doubt my good friend "secret" here can barely read.
Eagerly awaiting your next review, Neon Rose.
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"Dude, you went out with Blue last night? As in the Blue?"
"As in like on an actual date?" Cole rocked back on his chair as his friends interrogated him about his date with Blue last night, he grinned smoothly; they'd been talking the whole time and almost constantly in hysterics with each other. He'd never experienced a date like that before, he was actually attracted to her as a person as well as what she looked like.
"Hey Cole." A boy said walking up to Cole's desk. Cole frowned, and looked up. He recognised the guy was in his year but he didn't know him, he had a vague feeling his name was Sam.
"Hey." He replied.
"I heard you're going out with Blue. Good luck man." He laughed slightly making his mouth twist in an ugly way.
"Why?" Cole asked getting a bad feeling from him.
"I went out with her two years ago, she's a total tease." He smirked.
Cole's mind reeled; this was the guy that had hurt Blue. The guy that Miranda had told him about. He stood up, his chair scraping at a blood curdling pitch on the floor, tension bristled. He looked the boy in the eye and the rest of the room watched in silence. Quick as a flash Cole punched the guy under the jaw and grabbed him by his shirt as he stumbled backwards.
"If you even think of touching Blue ever again, or even talking to her, I will cause you more pain than you thought imaginable." Cole growled menacingly.
Blue strolled happily down the corridor, she was running an errand for one of her teachers, she enjoyed doing this; it meant it got her out of class and she got to talk to anyone who was in the front office. She walked in to see Cole sitting slumped sulkily in a chair in the office. She smiled at him and gave the note to the secretary who scuttled off to the back of the room to do ask the note had instructed.
Blue turned around to face Cole and leant on the desk and smiled at him.
"Heya." She smiled.
"Hey." He smiled back sitting up.
"What did you do?" She asked with a grin.
"Oh, nothing." Cole shrugged remembering Miranda's threat.
"No. Really, why?" Blue said narrowing her eyes as if she could read Cole's mind.
"Look it's nothing!" Cole snapped.
"Fine. If you're going to lie to me then I guess we shouldn't go out." Blue shrugged turning away.
"OKAY! FINE I'LL TELL YOU!" Cole shouted angrily.
"I'm listening." Blue said looking over her shoulder.
"I got into a fight ok? With some guy whose name I don't know." Cole sighed.
"I don't believe you got into a fight with a random stranger." Blue said walking over to him and sitting on her heels and looking straight into his eyes. She paused before speaking again.
"Miranda told you what happened didn't she?" Blue said quietly.
"WHAT?! No!" Cole said shocked.
"Ye gods, she threatened you too didn't she?" Blue groaned.
"How do you do that?" Cole asked narrowing his eyes.
"What, read your mind? It's easy you're very transparent." Blue sighed sitting next to him.
"Gee thanks." Cole said sarcastically. "I couldn't help it. He was practically bragging about it. I just lost it ok?"
"I know. Just don't tell Sonic ok?" Blue said quietly.
"You mean he doesn't know?" Cole asked looking shocked.
"No. And if you tell him I'll gut you like a fish." Blue threatened.
"I can see why you and Miranda get along." Cole grinned.
Blue walked home, she had just left Cole about five minutes ago and was already missing his company. Blue thought for a second that Cole had somehow managed to get in front of her as she saw a black spiked shape up ahead. But she quickly picked out the crimson streaks on his spikes and realised that it wasn't Cole.
"Hey Shadow, what are you doing here?" Blue asked walking up to Sonic's former rival.
"Oh, nothing. I was just bored is all." He shrugged.
"Heh, I thought you were Cole at first." Blue laughed slightly.
"Cole?" Shadow asked looking slightly confused.
"Oh, Cole was the guy who helped me rescue you guys." Blue explained.
"Oh him. Who is he?" Shadow asked curiously.
"He goes to my school, he's eighteen. He doesn't have any parents either, but I'm lucky to have Sonic; poor Cole doesn't even have any adopted parents. We're kinda going out." Blue blushed slightly.
"Oh really. I take it Sonic doesn't know this?" Shadow smirked.
"NO!" Blue said in a "and-I-want-to-keep-it-that-way" kind of voice.
"I'll see you around. And don't worry I won't say a word." Shadow said and ran off in the direction of Sonic and Blue's house leaving a huge dust- cloud behind. Blue smiled and continued walking, she stopped suddenly a few minutes down the road when she noticed a giant shadow loom over her. She spun around and looked up in the sky with a gasp.
"That really wasn't funny hedgehog." A voice said as Blue's unconscious body fell to the floor.