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Hey, I actually think this is a decent story line..{.; You're ego is showing!} Oh, shut up, it's always showing! {Yeah, but it's showing through with flying colors now!!) Oh, be quiet! Well, enjoy the story, guys! {BLAH!}
Better summary: Okay, on the outside I was being attack by fanfiction.net's limit, but now, I will tell you: When a powerful man threatens to take over the earth, the only one willing to stand up to him is Vegeta. Though, he despises Vegeta, his daughter is quickly falling for him. Will she be the only thing keeping this determined rebel from a brutal fate? A/U! B/V, G/CC! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~
Falling for the Enemy
Goku paced steadily back and forth, outraged. "Kakarott, what's wrong?" Vegeta cocked his head at Goku's weariness!
"Gah! Where is she?!" Goku was nearly pulling the hair out of his head.
"Where is who, who is 'she'?"
"ChiChi, the daughter of 'Ox-King', or something like that, but if anything happens to her, he'll have my head!!"
"Hm, can he do that to you, Kakarott?" The saiyan prince seemed confused enough.
"No, but he'll yell at me for three weeks straight, I've been through it before!" He swallowed, "Oh man!"
Vegeta shrugged, then jerked his head slightly, sensing some sort of power," Hey, do you feel that?"
Goku was a little nervous, he sort of felt it, not very clearly, though. "Huh, yeah, whatever, Vegeta."
The smaller saiyan was a bit more curious about this new power, and he let his tail twitch curiously, undoing it from it's coiled position. Goku cocked an eyebrow at him, "It's strong!" Goku was confident he was talking to himself.
"Vegeta, what do you mean? Are you worried?"
Vegeta rolled his head in a circle, to reveal he wasn't sure, "Goku?" Goku smiled and turned, happy to hear that voice.
"ChiChi! Hey, where have you been!?" As her father's friend, he was her 'body guard'. She was no kid, and could take care of herself, her father just wanted someone to look after her, she was wearing a blue dress and was skipping along. Goku put his hand to his forehead and smiled. Now he shot his attention to Vegeta, and the ki, which was stronger than average, now that he got a closer look at it.
"NOW do you feel it, sense your girlfriend's back?"
Goku blushed and hit Vegeta in the head, "She's NOT my girlfriend!"
"Okay, but, this power is really intriguing! There's something about it."
Goku nodded in agreement, "C'mon, what are we waiting for? Let's go check it out!" As Vegeta took off, he turned back to a confused ChiChi, "Look, you stay here, DON'T MOVE!" He flared his ki and took off after Vegeta.
Goku searched the plains and forests for the source of the ki, it seemed to be no where, it should be right in front of him, but it was absolutely no where! "Do you see it?" Vegeta's voice shot from a good distance.
Goku shook his head, "No! Where is it? It should be right here?"
Vegeta looked the place over and over again, they were over a forest, a very dense forest. "C'mon, Kakarott, let's go!" He landed on the ground in the forest, Goku close behind. He continued walking, "Where is it?"
Goku shrugged, "I'm not sure, it seems like it disappeared!"
"It didn't, I still feel it!" Vegeta was very sharp, he was a probably more accomplished fighter than Goku, sense he was raised by saiyans and Frieza, even though Goku had yet to meet this 'Frieza' guy. Vegeta always wore a blue jumpsuit and saiyan armor, Goku was a saiyan but he forgot that when he was sent to Earth and hit his head, Vegeta was 20, and Goku was 21. (I altered the ages, okay?)
"Yeah, I know."
"Are you two looking for someone?"
Vegeta turned immediately, Goku stumbled and made a face before facing this newcomer. "Y-yeah, uh, who're you?" Goku realized quickly that this was the source.
"I'm Triyan, and who're you two?"
"Vegeta!"
"Goku"
"Well, well, well, I take it you two were some of the stronger energy levels I was picking up on this planet?"
"Yes!" Vegeta wasn't scared of him, but Goku was a bit suspicious on who this guy was, and he was giving him the creeps, it was apparent Vegeta was slightly suspicious, too, but he was NO coward, Goku guessed that Frieza clown was pretty tough!
Goku nodded, "We are, and we noticed you had a strong ki, also!"
Triyan nodded his head, "Mm-hmmm." He nodded, then looked at Vegeta's waist, "A saiyan?"
Vegeta was even taken by surprise, "How did you know?!"
"You have a tail! It's a sure sign, and your name's Vegeta?"
Vegeta nodded, "Yes, and I take it you're not from earth either, am I right?"
"You are, but, just like yours, my planet was destroyed." Triyan looked around 25, and he had on a black sleeveless shirt, with light silver armor covering it, he was wearing black pants and silver, black-toed boots. His hair was basically down, and his bangs were stuck up, his hair was black, and his eyes were aqua.
"Oh, really?" Vegeta showed little interest, "Well, that's in the past, but, what are you here for now?"
He smirked, "Um, maybe start a NEW planet for myself?"
"WHAT?!"
Goku jumped a little, "You want to.take o-over Earth?!"
"Uh-huh, and what are you going to do, you're too weak to stop me!"
Goku realized he was right, "No! You-you.are a lot stronger than us!"
"Strength isn't everything, you know!" He flared his ki, determined not to give up.
"You're making a mistake, Prince Vegeta!" He sounded like a smart-mouth jerk to Goku. Goku actually wasn't surprised he knew Vegeta was the prince of the saiyan race, sense the name relation with the planet, but what he didn't know was that Triyan knew a lot more than that! A/N: That was only the prologue, a very short one, mind you, and I wanted to start it quick, so it was kind of fast-paced and chapter one probably will be, too, so plan accordingly! But, however, that is the only thing even remotely, 'fast paced' in this story, it's a rather slow, but tense story!
Hey, I actually think this is a decent story line..{.; You're ego is showing!} Oh, shut up, it's always showing! {Yeah, but it's showing through with flying colors now!!) Oh, be quiet! Well, enjoy the story, guys! {BLAH!}
Better summary: Okay, on the outside I was being attack by fanfiction.net's limit, but now, I will tell you: When a powerful man threatens to take over the earth, the only one willing to stand up to him is Vegeta. Though, he despises Vegeta, his daughter is quickly falling for him. Will she be the only thing keeping this determined rebel from a brutal fate? A/U! B/V, G/CC! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~
Falling for the Enemy
Goku paced steadily back and forth, outraged. "Kakarott, what's wrong?" Vegeta cocked his head at Goku's weariness!
"Gah! Where is she?!" Goku was nearly pulling the hair out of his head.
"Where is who, who is 'she'?"
"ChiChi, the daughter of 'Ox-King', or something like that, but if anything happens to her, he'll have my head!!"
"Hm, can he do that to you, Kakarott?" The saiyan prince seemed confused enough.
"No, but he'll yell at me for three weeks straight, I've been through it before!" He swallowed, "Oh man!"
Vegeta shrugged, then jerked his head slightly, sensing some sort of power," Hey, do you feel that?"
Goku was a little nervous, he sort of felt it, not very clearly, though. "Huh, yeah, whatever, Vegeta."
The smaller saiyan was a bit more curious about this new power, and he let his tail twitch curiously, undoing it from it's coiled position. Goku cocked an eyebrow at him, "It's strong!" Goku was confident he was talking to himself.
"Vegeta, what do you mean? Are you worried?"
Vegeta rolled his head in a circle, to reveal he wasn't sure, "Goku?" Goku smiled and turned, happy to hear that voice.
"ChiChi! Hey, where have you been!?" As her father's friend, he was her 'body guard'. She was no kid, and could take care of herself, her father just wanted someone to look after her, she was wearing a blue dress and was skipping along. Goku put his hand to his forehead and smiled. Now he shot his attention to Vegeta, and the ki, which was stronger than average, now that he got a closer look at it.
"NOW do you feel it, sense your girlfriend's back?"
Goku blushed and hit Vegeta in the head, "She's NOT my girlfriend!"
"Okay, but, this power is really intriguing! There's something about it."
Goku nodded in agreement, "C'mon, what are we waiting for? Let's go check it out!" As Vegeta took off, he turned back to a confused ChiChi, "Look, you stay here, DON'T MOVE!" He flared his ki and took off after Vegeta.
Goku searched the plains and forests for the source of the ki, it seemed to be no where, it should be right in front of him, but it was absolutely no where! "Do you see it?" Vegeta's voice shot from a good distance.
Goku shook his head, "No! Where is it? It should be right here?"
Vegeta looked the place over and over again, they were over a forest, a very dense forest. "C'mon, Kakarott, let's go!" He landed on the ground in the forest, Goku close behind. He continued walking, "Where is it?"
Goku shrugged, "I'm not sure, it seems like it disappeared!"
"It didn't, I still feel it!" Vegeta was very sharp, he was a probably more accomplished fighter than Goku, sense he was raised by saiyans and Frieza, even though Goku had yet to meet this 'Frieza' guy. Vegeta always wore a blue jumpsuit and saiyan armor, Goku was a saiyan but he forgot that when he was sent to Earth and hit his head, Vegeta was 20, and Goku was 21. (I altered the ages, okay?)
"Yeah, I know."
"Are you two looking for someone?"
Vegeta turned immediately, Goku stumbled and made a face before facing this newcomer. "Y-yeah, uh, who're you?" Goku realized quickly that this was the source.
"I'm Triyan, and who're you two?"
"Vegeta!"
"Goku"
"Well, well, well, I take it you two were some of the stronger energy levels I was picking up on this planet?"
"Yes!" Vegeta wasn't scared of him, but Goku was a bit suspicious on who this guy was, and he was giving him the creeps, it was apparent Vegeta was slightly suspicious, too, but he was NO coward, Goku guessed that Frieza clown was pretty tough!
Goku nodded, "We are, and we noticed you had a strong ki, also!"
Triyan nodded his head, "Mm-hmmm." He nodded, then looked at Vegeta's waist, "A saiyan?"
Vegeta was even taken by surprise, "How did you know?!"
"You have a tail! It's a sure sign, and your name's Vegeta?"
Vegeta nodded, "Yes, and I take it you're not from earth either, am I right?"
"You are, but, just like yours, my planet was destroyed." Triyan looked around 25, and he had on a black sleeveless shirt, with light silver armor covering it, he was wearing black pants and silver, black-toed boots. His hair was basically down, and his bangs were stuck up, his hair was black, and his eyes were aqua.
"Oh, really?" Vegeta showed little interest, "Well, that's in the past, but, what are you here for now?"
He smirked, "Um, maybe start a NEW planet for myself?"
"WHAT?!"
Goku jumped a little, "You want to.take o-over Earth?!"
"Uh-huh, and what are you going to do, you're too weak to stop me!"
Goku realized he was right, "No! You-you.are a lot stronger than us!"
"Strength isn't everything, you know!" He flared his ki, determined not to give up.
"You're making a mistake, Prince Vegeta!" He sounded like a smart-mouth jerk to Goku. Goku actually wasn't surprised he knew Vegeta was the prince of the saiyan race, sense the name relation with the planet, but what he didn't know was that Triyan knew a lot more than that! A/N: That was only the prologue, a very short one, mind you, and I wanted to start it quick, so it was kind of fast-paced and chapter one probably will be, too, so plan accordingly! But, however, that is the only thing even remotely, 'fast paced' in this story, it's a rather slow, but tense story!