Cerridwen Evereven: Thank you so much!!!!! I'm glad that you like it!
You're so fast with updating, I'm really slow opposite to you! To much
schoolwork*gg*!
Vicki: Thank you! Sorry about that "elf" thing but I couldn't find the word in the dictionary so I decided to just try it! Hope you'll like the new chapter
Lome: Endlich mal nen Deutschen außer mir gefunden!! Echt schade, dass es nearly keine Rubrik auf Deutsch gibt, ich glaub das wäre besser für mich*gg*! Ich fänd's echt nett wenn du meine chapters lesen würdest bevor ich sie poste, da können teilweise noch Fehler drin sein, bin ja noch klein! Erst 15! Schön, dass es dir gefällt! Hier kommt mehr:
** Eldarion pulled his sister nearer to him to protect her. Now he could smell the Orcs and he could see hundreds of them through the trees. "Why didn't we notice them? We should have smelled them," he whispered to his sister and shook his head. Alia nodded and tried to get a look at the creatures in front of them but her brothers squeezed her when she moved a bit. The Orcs stood in a row a few meters behind the edge of the forest, completely silent as if they were made out of stone.
Legolas studied their faces and realised that they had changed. They were not longer fighting machines which followed the commands of someone because they were to low brained to make own decisions. The Orcs had gotten intelligent and were now following a strategy which the elf tried to find out.
Suddenly, one of them went a step out of the row and yelled: "Pray to your gods for a quick dead, elves. You are trapped, my men have surrounded you- there's no escape! Attack!!!!!" The Orcs stormed into their direction, the sharp blades of their swords blinking in the sunlight. "Run, run for your lives," screamed an elf, trying to find a way through the forest.
Eldarion grabbed Alia's cape and dragged her with him, away from the path and deeper into the woods. "Eldarion, wait, it's useless! They will kill us all," shouted the girl but her brother wasn't willing to give up without a try. "We have to try it!" He stopped for a second to analyse their surrounding, before he stormed further and further. The boy could see other elves running near them, some of them fell over bushes or slipped on wet leaves. Screams of agony filled the air and Alia turned around to see an Orc near them who slammed his sword into the chest of an elfish woman. "Lydicea," yelled Alia and wanted to run back to the woman but two strong hands grabbed her wrists and held her back. "Alia don't. It's too late, you can't help her anymore," said Legolas softly and showed her to follow him.
Tears filled the girl's eyes when she followed her brother and Legolas. In a second where she was blinded by tears, she fell over a root and hit the ground with a moan of pain. As fast as she could she tried to stand up but she could feel a sharp pain in her legs as if claws were digging into her skin. "Don't cry little princess. It won't hurt.," whispered a scary voice in her left ear and she could feel the heat of another body. Alia turned around and looked into the ugly face of an Orc. He smiled at he, evil sounds of laughter escaped from his lips when he lifted up his sword and slammed it into the stomach of the girl.
Eldarion heard his sister's scream and realised that she wasn't next to him anymore. Legolas stopped as well and they both could see her lying on the ground with the Orc over her body, the bloody sword still in his hands. "No!!!!!" The boy grabbed a knife which was lying next to the dead body of an Orc and ran. He stormed over to his sister and pulled the Orc from her lifeless form. "Haha, don't think that you can kill me, boy," laughed the creature and kicked Eldarion into his chest. For some seconds, the boy couldn't breath anymore, he gasped for air. Then he took all of his strength and rammed his body against the Orc's body who fell to the ground. Eldarion gritted his teeth and pulled the knife deep in the flesh of his enemy, drilling it into his heart. Blood streamed over his hands and for a few seconds he stared at them in shock, then stood up from the ground.
He rushed over to his sisters side where Legolas was already kneeling and stroked her head. "Alia, please, say something," he begged and felt tears coming to his eyes. "Muindor," whispered a weak voice and Alia opened her eyes. She smiled at him as if she would feel no pain, not the presence of death. "You have to flee, Eldarion, please. Please get home and warn ada and nana. Tell them that I loved them, will you do that for me? I love you too, brother. Forever. I.", she wanted to continue but coughs let her body shake and blood poured out of the corner of her mouth. Then she fell back to the ground and didn't move anymore. "Let her find peace, Valar," said Legolas and closed her wide opened eyes while Eldarion broke out into tears. "We have to get away, Eldarion, I know it's hard. But they will find us soon if we stay here any longer, please come with me. He death will not be for nothing, the Orcs will get their right punishment," added the elf and stood up.
Eldarion couldn't move, he felt like being out of stone. Tears streamed down his cheeks and he didn't care about being killed anymore. His beloved sister was dead and he just couldn't see a sense in fighting on. Legolas voice seemed so far away that he hardly could make out what he had said. Just when he thought that he was going to lose it, everything faded to black.
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That's for now, hope you liked it! I know it's evil of me to let Alia die but this fight hasn't come to an end yet, they will discover more bad things soon! Constructive flames are welcome and so are Reviews!!
Vicki: Thank you! Sorry about that "elf" thing but I couldn't find the word in the dictionary so I decided to just try it! Hope you'll like the new chapter
Lome: Endlich mal nen Deutschen außer mir gefunden!! Echt schade, dass es nearly keine Rubrik auf Deutsch gibt, ich glaub das wäre besser für mich*gg*! Ich fänd's echt nett wenn du meine chapters lesen würdest bevor ich sie poste, da können teilweise noch Fehler drin sein, bin ja noch klein! Erst 15! Schön, dass es dir gefällt! Hier kommt mehr:
** Eldarion pulled his sister nearer to him to protect her. Now he could smell the Orcs and he could see hundreds of them through the trees. "Why didn't we notice them? We should have smelled them," he whispered to his sister and shook his head. Alia nodded and tried to get a look at the creatures in front of them but her brothers squeezed her when she moved a bit. The Orcs stood in a row a few meters behind the edge of the forest, completely silent as if they were made out of stone.
Legolas studied their faces and realised that they had changed. They were not longer fighting machines which followed the commands of someone because they were to low brained to make own decisions. The Orcs had gotten intelligent and were now following a strategy which the elf tried to find out.
Suddenly, one of them went a step out of the row and yelled: "Pray to your gods for a quick dead, elves. You are trapped, my men have surrounded you- there's no escape! Attack!!!!!" The Orcs stormed into their direction, the sharp blades of their swords blinking in the sunlight. "Run, run for your lives," screamed an elf, trying to find a way through the forest.
Eldarion grabbed Alia's cape and dragged her with him, away from the path and deeper into the woods. "Eldarion, wait, it's useless! They will kill us all," shouted the girl but her brother wasn't willing to give up without a try. "We have to try it!" He stopped for a second to analyse their surrounding, before he stormed further and further. The boy could see other elves running near them, some of them fell over bushes or slipped on wet leaves. Screams of agony filled the air and Alia turned around to see an Orc near them who slammed his sword into the chest of an elfish woman. "Lydicea," yelled Alia and wanted to run back to the woman but two strong hands grabbed her wrists and held her back. "Alia don't. It's too late, you can't help her anymore," said Legolas softly and showed her to follow him.
Tears filled the girl's eyes when she followed her brother and Legolas. In a second where she was blinded by tears, she fell over a root and hit the ground with a moan of pain. As fast as she could she tried to stand up but she could feel a sharp pain in her legs as if claws were digging into her skin. "Don't cry little princess. It won't hurt.," whispered a scary voice in her left ear and she could feel the heat of another body. Alia turned around and looked into the ugly face of an Orc. He smiled at he, evil sounds of laughter escaped from his lips when he lifted up his sword and slammed it into the stomach of the girl.
Eldarion heard his sister's scream and realised that she wasn't next to him anymore. Legolas stopped as well and they both could see her lying on the ground with the Orc over her body, the bloody sword still in his hands. "No!!!!!" The boy grabbed a knife which was lying next to the dead body of an Orc and ran. He stormed over to his sister and pulled the Orc from her lifeless form. "Haha, don't think that you can kill me, boy," laughed the creature and kicked Eldarion into his chest. For some seconds, the boy couldn't breath anymore, he gasped for air. Then he took all of his strength and rammed his body against the Orc's body who fell to the ground. Eldarion gritted his teeth and pulled the knife deep in the flesh of his enemy, drilling it into his heart. Blood streamed over his hands and for a few seconds he stared at them in shock, then stood up from the ground.
He rushed over to his sisters side where Legolas was already kneeling and stroked her head. "Alia, please, say something," he begged and felt tears coming to his eyes. "Muindor," whispered a weak voice and Alia opened her eyes. She smiled at him as if she would feel no pain, not the presence of death. "You have to flee, Eldarion, please. Please get home and warn ada and nana. Tell them that I loved them, will you do that for me? I love you too, brother. Forever. I.", she wanted to continue but coughs let her body shake and blood poured out of the corner of her mouth. Then she fell back to the ground and didn't move anymore. "Let her find peace, Valar," said Legolas and closed her wide opened eyes while Eldarion broke out into tears. "We have to get away, Eldarion, I know it's hard. But they will find us soon if we stay here any longer, please come with me. He death will not be for nothing, the Orcs will get their right punishment," added the elf and stood up.
Eldarion couldn't move, he felt like being out of stone. Tears streamed down his cheeks and he didn't care about being killed anymore. His beloved sister was dead and he just couldn't see a sense in fighting on. Legolas voice seemed so far away that he hardly could make out what he had said. Just when he thought that he was going to lose it, everything faded to black.
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That's for now, hope you liked it! I know it's evil of me to let Alia die but this fight hasn't come to an end yet, they will discover more bad things soon! Constructive flames are welcome and so are Reviews!!