Chapter 1 is here! First chapter was ok to right, second REALLY HARD. So
show appreciation guys! For some strange reason I have written chapters in
the middle somewhere- with darker motives, and strange connections. I hope
you enjoy reading it, thanx for getting this far! If you read no further at
least you have decided to see what this fic is about- this makes me a
privileged person. =^-^= *nods and smiles.*
This is a 'slightly' modified version. I'm just changing ages a little, as some things that happen in later chapters regarding flashbacks might have been a little unrealistic at the age they were. That is regarding sexual situations, and other things, read if you want to find out! I'm writing it as I go, with a basic plan, so new ideas keep coming!! The timing is a little odd- as you'll see by the summary. Although it's series one, Hilary is with them.
Also, before anyone says it, I know Kai didn't leave the abbey when he was nearly fifteen, but, having thought about it, the idea I came up with works best with this arrangement. So no flames please! You'll see by the summary what I mean. There are also certain events that happen later on that are consistent with the timing, later summaries will keep you in check with everything- I sometimes find it difficult to get my head around it!
Please read and review, tell me what you think!! Thanx all.
Summary: The Bladebreakers have made it as the World Champions. All have come a long way in the first year that they've been together. Rei received his bitbeast, Driger, from his best friend Lee's grandfather when he was thirteen, and left the village in search of other Bladers with Bitbeasts. His twin sister Kitty (or Tess, as is her real name) left two months afterwards, in pursuit of the same thing- Rei had refused to take her with him. Max, Tyson, Kenny and Hilary were of course, at school in America, until a series of events brought them together, forming the team. They met Rei, who joined Tyson and Max as the beginning of the Bladebreakers. Kai has lived in Russia, in the Abbey that his Grandfather Voltaire owns, for his whole life. When he was six, he found Black Dranzer, and in using it, destroyed the abbey and managed to escape. Living on the streets for a year taught him a thing or two about life, until Voltaire found him and took him back to the abbey. Kai discovered Biovolt, his grandfather's plan to turn normal kids that showed great potential as bladers into mechanically tampered with ones that had incredible blading skills- the best bladers. Here he met Tala, one boy that suffered at the hands of Voltaire. As well as Jet, a girl from England that had been sent to the abbey by her work- obsessed parents. Amongst others, of course. Kai remained in the abbey until he was nearly fifteen, when he left and again lived on the streets, learning how to fend for himself, and no one else. That was, until he met Rei, Max, Kenny, Tyson and Hilary, and joined the Bladebreakers, going on to win the world championships with them at the end of the year. At the time Kitty comes in, Kai is nearly sixteen, Rei and Kitty are fifteen and a half, Tyson, Kenny and Hilary are all fourteen, and Max is thirteen.
Disclaimer:
Tyson: "Can't we get on with it already, so I can eat that burger?"
Lou (that's me, btw): "Not until we've done this! If we don't, Beyblade will sue me for copying and you will be eating nothing but cow dung. Got that?"
Tyson: *grumbling* "Okay, okay, sure, whatever. Hi everyone! My name's Tyson, I'm 14, the World Beyblade champion. I like burgers and pancakes, and food in general actually. and I will be giving out signed photos after this chapter. I am the most important person in this fiction!"
Lou: "Tyson! You are so not!"
Tyson: "Waddya mean I'm not?"
Kai: "She means that I am the main person in this fiction. Not you, Tyson."
Lou: "When did I..?"
Rei: "Hang on- I thought that was me!"
*battle ensues*
Max: *sigh* "What they all mean is Louise does not own any of the characters from Beyblade apart from Kitty. And, I would just like to add that I am the main person."
All: WHAT?!
CHAPTER 1: Flying burgers, Soda, a Hungry Guy called Tyson, and Kitty.
Hilary was loaded down with burgers. How the hell she'd got herself into this situation she didn't know.
"I am gonna KILL you for this Tyson!" she muttered, heading over to a drinks stand a couple of metres away. She could barely see over the pile of polystyrene boxes in her arms, and so it was inevitable that the person if front of her should turn round and knock them all flying.
"Drat!" that was the second time that had happened. The boy who'd bumped into her apologised and helped pick them up.
"Thanks," she smiled warmly as the boy held out his hand. "Tom." "Hilary." She replied, (kinda weird mutual greeting eh?)
But someone else had caught Hilary's eye. Leaning against the park fence and watching her was a girl the same height, and about fifteen years old. She was wearing dark pink baggy corduroy trousers, and a white and aqua green top, plus a choker with a circular pendant, the Chinese yin- yang sign. Her hair was dark, long and tied up high on her head, leaving wisps of hair framing her face. She had auburn cat-like eyes, and as she smiled at Hilary, fangs were revealed where canines would be.
Hilary blinked, but the girl had closed her mouth. "Weird."
She turned to Tom. "Who's that girl leaning on the fence?" her eyes never left the girls face, who was, incidentally, still watching her.
"Oh, her. That's Kitty. She's a loner. No friends, no family, and no one knows where she comes from. So we leave her alone, otherwise we only get our heads bitten off. That's all anyone knows about her. Ok?"
"Yeah, thanks. See you around." She smiled at Tom, and realised the man behind the stall was asking her what she wanted.
"Uh, six sodas please." Kitty was still watching her, and it was freaking her out, actually.
"You want a hand miss?" Good point. How the hell was she going to carry burgers and sodas?
"I've got it." Kitty had appeared beside her, and took the bottles. They turned round and began to head back to the lodge. Hilary raised an eyebrow.
"You know it's rude to stare." She stated matter- of- factly.
"Yeah, sorry." Kitty grinned at her and the fangs appeared again. "I just thought I recognised you. I'm Kitty. Well, my real name's Tess, but I've only ever been called Kitty, or Kit, if you like. The fangs," she added.
A loner? This girl was quite chatty actually. "I'm Hilary. Are your fangs real? Or are you a fan of Bladebreakers?" Hilary hadn't seen stick on fangs yet, but you never know. And besides, the question had to be asked.
"You're with the Bladebreakers?" Kitty grinned again. "That explains a lot."
"Oh yeah? Like what." Hilary frowned. This was weird.
"The fangs are real. I'm from China by the way. And I'm Rei's sister."
Hilary stopped and turned to Kitty. Her mouth dropped open, and the boxes dropped too. "Rei has a sister?"
"Yup. Twin, actually. When he left I was one of the only people that didn't think he'd betrayed us. And I really wanted to go with him. That's what hurt, the fact that he didn't consider taking me with him. I guess he's never mentioned me. I made him feel guilty as hell when he went." To Kitty, it felt like she was pouring out her soul. She'd never told anyone this, trivial as it may seem, and she'd only just met Hilary. She sighed.
"Yup. It really hurt."
Hilary's mouth was still open. "Wow. Big mouth. You might want to close it, unless you're catching flies!" Hilary closed her mouth. For once, she was lost for words. But not for too long, anyway.
"NO WAY!! Why has he never told us about you? Do you blade? How old are you? Do you know the others? You can come and meet them! I wonder what they're gonna say, I wonder what Rei's gonna say! Tyson will just grab the food. Kai might be a bit weird, Max will love you!! Kenny, he's our computer specialist."
Hilary picked up the boxes and together they walked back to the lodge, talking like old friends.
"I blade. Do you? My bit- beast's a leopard, he's called Deshka. What are the team like? I've seen them blade on television. You've no idea how weird it is to see your brother on TV, particularly when he seems to have forgotten you. I'm fifteen, nearly sixteen, what about you?"
By the time they got back, they were in fits of laughter about something or other.
"FOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!" came a voice.
"Uh, I'm guessing that's Tyson, right?!" he ran round the corner of the building at full speed, grabbing a burger and stuffing it in his mouth.
"Gee, Fanks 'Ilary!"
"Tyson you are SUCH a greedy pig!" Hilary rolled her eyes. "Meet Kitty, she's er.." Kitty shook her head.
"Later."
Tyson held out a hand, and tried to speak through the mouthful. Bits of gherkin fell out on the floor. "Tyshon. Nishe." he swallowed, "To meet you."
Kitty grinned. "Yeah, you too." Tyson frowned at the fangs but couldn't say anything because at that moment Max ran round the corner and tripped straight over Tyson, sending them both sprawling to the ground.
"Max, you idiot!! Watch where you're going!" Tyson grimaced and licked his bleeding hand.
Max grinned sheepishly. "Sorry." He noticed Kitty. "Hey, er.."
"Kitty." She said, holding out a bottle of soda, and her hand, as well.
"Thanks Kitty. Do you blade?"
"Sure do!! Want to train?" she replied
Tyson laughed. "He'd flatten you!" all thoughts of fangs had been forgotten. " We are the world champions, you know."
Hilary rolled her eyes, again. "That's Tyson for you. Really rude, and totally full of himself." Max winked at Kitty. "Ignore him. He thinks he's incredible. We can train, but I am really hungry first!"
Voices could be heard, coming round the same corner of the same building (strangely enough.)
"Uh- oh." Hilary began. "Here come Kai. and Rei. How do you think he's going to react?
Kitty bit her lip. "I have no idea, but I hope it's a good reaction. Which. it probably won't be."
Kai saw her first. "Hey, who's she?"
"Well I don't know!" Rei began, laughing. Then he stopped dead as he saw her. Woah, this isn't true! She's back? From the village? My own sister has come to find me? She looks so different. So. grown up! I can't believe she's here! This is so strange. Wait, is it really her? Am I sure? Should I feel guilty for leaving her? No.. she looks happy. She's left that behind. Seeing her is so. strange. It's so.. Fantastic! A thousand things rushed through Rei's head. He smiled widely, showing the fangs, unable to help the grin even if he'd tried. One word.
"Woah."
Is that a word? Ah well, it is now! Well *breathes deeply.* First chapter done and dusted (well, again.) And second chapter up immediately! And third chapter.. No, I haven't actually got that far yet. I have written chapter, erm, 6 or something though. I could put that up next! No, really I won't!!
Reviews always appreciated. See that little button down there? To the left? You're one click away from making me a much happier person. Go on, you know you want to!! Pweease? *smiles sweetly.* Manipulative? Me?
This is a 'slightly' modified version. I'm just changing ages a little, as some things that happen in later chapters regarding flashbacks might have been a little unrealistic at the age they were. That is regarding sexual situations, and other things, read if you want to find out! I'm writing it as I go, with a basic plan, so new ideas keep coming!! The timing is a little odd- as you'll see by the summary. Although it's series one, Hilary is with them.
Also, before anyone says it, I know Kai didn't leave the abbey when he was nearly fifteen, but, having thought about it, the idea I came up with works best with this arrangement. So no flames please! You'll see by the summary what I mean. There are also certain events that happen later on that are consistent with the timing, later summaries will keep you in check with everything- I sometimes find it difficult to get my head around it!
Please read and review, tell me what you think!! Thanx all.
Summary: The Bladebreakers have made it as the World Champions. All have come a long way in the first year that they've been together. Rei received his bitbeast, Driger, from his best friend Lee's grandfather when he was thirteen, and left the village in search of other Bladers with Bitbeasts. His twin sister Kitty (or Tess, as is her real name) left two months afterwards, in pursuit of the same thing- Rei had refused to take her with him. Max, Tyson, Kenny and Hilary were of course, at school in America, until a series of events brought them together, forming the team. They met Rei, who joined Tyson and Max as the beginning of the Bladebreakers. Kai has lived in Russia, in the Abbey that his Grandfather Voltaire owns, for his whole life. When he was six, he found Black Dranzer, and in using it, destroyed the abbey and managed to escape. Living on the streets for a year taught him a thing or two about life, until Voltaire found him and took him back to the abbey. Kai discovered Biovolt, his grandfather's plan to turn normal kids that showed great potential as bladers into mechanically tampered with ones that had incredible blading skills- the best bladers. Here he met Tala, one boy that suffered at the hands of Voltaire. As well as Jet, a girl from England that had been sent to the abbey by her work- obsessed parents. Amongst others, of course. Kai remained in the abbey until he was nearly fifteen, when he left and again lived on the streets, learning how to fend for himself, and no one else. That was, until he met Rei, Max, Kenny, Tyson and Hilary, and joined the Bladebreakers, going on to win the world championships with them at the end of the year. At the time Kitty comes in, Kai is nearly sixteen, Rei and Kitty are fifteen and a half, Tyson, Kenny and Hilary are all fourteen, and Max is thirteen.
Disclaimer:
Tyson: "Can't we get on with it already, so I can eat that burger?"
Lou (that's me, btw): "Not until we've done this! If we don't, Beyblade will sue me for copying and you will be eating nothing but cow dung. Got that?"
Tyson: *grumbling* "Okay, okay, sure, whatever. Hi everyone! My name's Tyson, I'm 14, the World Beyblade champion. I like burgers and pancakes, and food in general actually. and I will be giving out signed photos after this chapter. I am the most important person in this fiction!"
Lou: "Tyson! You are so not!"
Tyson: "Waddya mean I'm not?"
Kai: "She means that I am the main person in this fiction. Not you, Tyson."
Lou: "When did I..?"
Rei: "Hang on- I thought that was me!"
*battle ensues*
Max: *sigh* "What they all mean is Louise does not own any of the characters from Beyblade apart from Kitty. And, I would just like to add that I am the main person."
All: WHAT?!
CHAPTER 1: Flying burgers, Soda, a Hungry Guy called Tyson, and Kitty.
Hilary was loaded down with burgers. How the hell she'd got herself into this situation she didn't know.
"I am gonna KILL you for this Tyson!" she muttered, heading over to a drinks stand a couple of metres away. She could barely see over the pile of polystyrene boxes in her arms, and so it was inevitable that the person if front of her should turn round and knock them all flying.
"Drat!" that was the second time that had happened. The boy who'd bumped into her apologised and helped pick them up.
"Thanks," she smiled warmly as the boy held out his hand. "Tom." "Hilary." She replied, (kinda weird mutual greeting eh?)
But someone else had caught Hilary's eye. Leaning against the park fence and watching her was a girl the same height, and about fifteen years old. She was wearing dark pink baggy corduroy trousers, and a white and aqua green top, plus a choker with a circular pendant, the Chinese yin- yang sign. Her hair was dark, long and tied up high on her head, leaving wisps of hair framing her face. She had auburn cat-like eyes, and as she smiled at Hilary, fangs were revealed where canines would be.
Hilary blinked, but the girl had closed her mouth. "Weird."
She turned to Tom. "Who's that girl leaning on the fence?" her eyes never left the girls face, who was, incidentally, still watching her.
"Oh, her. That's Kitty. She's a loner. No friends, no family, and no one knows where she comes from. So we leave her alone, otherwise we only get our heads bitten off. That's all anyone knows about her. Ok?"
"Yeah, thanks. See you around." She smiled at Tom, and realised the man behind the stall was asking her what she wanted.
"Uh, six sodas please." Kitty was still watching her, and it was freaking her out, actually.
"You want a hand miss?" Good point. How the hell was she going to carry burgers and sodas?
"I've got it." Kitty had appeared beside her, and took the bottles. They turned round and began to head back to the lodge. Hilary raised an eyebrow.
"You know it's rude to stare." She stated matter- of- factly.
"Yeah, sorry." Kitty grinned at her and the fangs appeared again. "I just thought I recognised you. I'm Kitty. Well, my real name's Tess, but I've only ever been called Kitty, or Kit, if you like. The fangs," she added.
A loner? This girl was quite chatty actually. "I'm Hilary. Are your fangs real? Or are you a fan of Bladebreakers?" Hilary hadn't seen stick on fangs yet, but you never know. And besides, the question had to be asked.
"You're with the Bladebreakers?" Kitty grinned again. "That explains a lot."
"Oh yeah? Like what." Hilary frowned. This was weird.
"The fangs are real. I'm from China by the way. And I'm Rei's sister."
Hilary stopped and turned to Kitty. Her mouth dropped open, and the boxes dropped too. "Rei has a sister?"
"Yup. Twin, actually. When he left I was one of the only people that didn't think he'd betrayed us. And I really wanted to go with him. That's what hurt, the fact that he didn't consider taking me with him. I guess he's never mentioned me. I made him feel guilty as hell when he went." To Kitty, it felt like she was pouring out her soul. She'd never told anyone this, trivial as it may seem, and she'd only just met Hilary. She sighed.
"Yup. It really hurt."
Hilary's mouth was still open. "Wow. Big mouth. You might want to close it, unless you're catching flies!" Hilary closed her mouth. For once, she was lost for words. But not for too long, anyway.
"NO WAY!! Why has he never told us about you? Do you blade? How old are you? Do you know the others? You can come and meet them! I wonder what they're gonna say, I wonder what Rei's gonna say! Tyson will just grab the food. Kai might be a bit weird, Max will love you!! Kenny, he's our computer specialist."
Hilary picked up the boxes and together they walked back to the lodge, talking like old friends.
"I blade. Do you? My bit- beast's a leopard, he's called Deshka. What are the team like? I've seen them blade on television. You've no idea how weird it is to see your brother on TV, particularly when he seems to have forgotten you. I'm fifteen, nearly sixteen, what about you?"
By the time they got back, they were in fits of laughter about something or other.
"FOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!" came a voice.
"Uh, I'm guessing that's Tyson, right?!" he ran round the corner of the building at full speed, grabbing a burger and stuffing it in his mouth.
"Gee, Fanks 'Ilary!"
"Tyson you are SUCH a greedy pig!" Hilary rolled her eyes. "Meet Kitty, she's er.." Kitty shook her head.
"Later."
Tyson held out a hand, and tried to speak through the mouthful. Bits of gherkin fell out on the floor. "Tyshon. Nishe." he swallowed, "To meet you."
Kitty grinned. "Yeah, you too." Tyson frowned at the fangs but couldn't say anything because at that moment Max ran round the corner and tripped straight over Tyson, sending them both sprawling to the ground.
"Max, you idiot!! Watch where you're going!" Tyson grimaced and licked his bleeding hand.
Max grinned sheepishly. "Sorry." He noticed Kitty. "Hey, er.."
"Kitty." She said, holding out a bottle of soda, and her hand, as well.
"Thanks Kitty. Do you blade?"
"Sure do!! Want to train?" she replied
Tyson laughed. "He'd flatten you!" all thoughts of fangs had been forgotten. " We are the world champions, you know."
Hilary rolled her eyes, again. "That's Tyson for you. Really rude, and totally full of himself." Max winked at Kitty. "Ignore him. He thinks he's incredible. We can train, but I am really hungry first!"
Voices could be heard, coming round the same corner of the same building (strangely enough.)
"Uh- oh." Hilary began. "Here come Kai. and Rei. How do you think he's going to react?
Kitty bit her lip. "I have no idea, but I hope it's a good reaction. Which. it probably won't be."
Kai saw her first. "Hey, who's she?"
"Well I don't know!" Rei began, laughing. Then he stopped dead as he saw her. Woah, this isn't true! She's back? From the village? My own sister has come to find me? She looks so different. So. grown up! I can't believe she's here! This is so strange. Wait, is it really her? Am I sure? Should I feel guilty for leaving her? No.. she looks happy. She's left that behind. Seeing her is so. strange. It's so.. Fantastic! A thousand things rushed through Rei's head. He smiled widely, showing the fangs, unable to help the grin even if he'd tried. One word.
"Woah."
Is that a word? Ah well, it is now! Well *breathes deeply.* First chapter done and dusted (well, again.) And second chapter up immediately! And third chapter.. No, I haven't actually got that far yet. I have written chapter, erm, 6 or something though. I could put that up next! No, really I won't!!
Reviews always appreciated. See that little button down there? To the left? You're one click away from making me a much happier person. Go on, you know you want to!! Pweease? *smiles sweetly.* Manipulative? Me?