Yay!! After waiting and writing for about 3 hours, I got my story!!!
Why am I not jumping around then? *shrugs* Oh well.... Hope that you enjoy
this and I'll try to update as much as I can! Hopefully.... Oh! btw, I'm
only going to put this up once do pay attention! Don't sue me!! *sniff* I
have to face the facts....
Disclaimer: I do not own Jak and Daxter, Jak2, or any of the character from those games. I do, however, own Cabbit, Crazy Man, Jennifer, Kriss, and Rikku so mine!!
***At Jak's Place***
"JJJJJJJJJAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jak was violently hit over the head by Samos. "OW!!!! HE-!!!! OOOWWW!!!!!! STOP!!!!! OW!!!!! I-!!!!! HOLD IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Samos froze with his staff in the air. Jak sighed, "I'm okay...." He put his head under his pillow. "Ow...." Samos grabbed the pillow. "What's all the damn noise?" Daxter said as he walked into the room. Jak got up and stuck his tongue out behind Samos' back. "I saw that Jak." "Saw what???" Jak said as he gave an innocent smile (A/N: or at least what looked like one!).
***At The Naughty Ottsel***
When Jak entered the Naughty Ottsel, he ran straight into a stuffed Metal Head (A/N: not literally) statue. "AAAAAAHHHHHH-cool...." He started to poke the Metal Head. "Is this real?" "No duh." Sig entered with yet another Metal Head. It looked like some type of Pokemon the way it was standing. "Sig, where, why, how, what am I missing.... Oh yeah, when?" Jak's eye caught what looked like Erol. "Neat! This looks like Erol!" Jak pulled back Erol's hair and like magic, (A/N: *cough* *cough*) he leaned back and grabbed Jak's wrist. "Holy shit!!!" Jak said as Erol turned around. "Yeah," Sig said while messing with the M.H. statue, "he's back...." Jak stared, (A/N: like this: O.O) and saw Daxter standing at the entrance with the same look. Then.... Daxter fell backwards.
"Cool!" Daxter said as he looked at Erol. "Your alive! AGAIN!!!" Just then, Torn walked in with a worried look. "What's up Torn?" He ignored Daxter and sat down. "Uh.... Torn?" Everyone gathered around him. Annoyed, he explained. "My sister is coming to Haven." "When!!!" Everyone asked. Before he could answer, a girl dressed in black high-heeled boots, black jeans, and a black shirt walked in (A/N: yeah, all her clothes are black....). "Hey Torn!" She said. Before anyone could answer, an Ottsel with long eyelashes and a black backwards cap that had the name Kriss in red on the front (A/N: her name is said like Chris and the name is printed on the part on the hat above her face). She caught Daxter's eye quick, what caught everyone else's eye was the skull necklace she had on (A/N: Kriss is a Goth, yeah....).
After a while of getting to know Kriss, Torn introduced his sister. "Guys, this is my sister: Jennifer." Everyone stared. "Well hi!" she said. "Please, these idots can't even design a bar." Kriss said while pushing Daxter away from her face. Everyone laughed, except for Sig. "I don't what there's to laugh about cherries." Jak stopped laughing and turned to Sig. "What you talking about Sig?" Sig looked at the wall of Metal Head trophies. "Have any of you saw that on that wall," he pointed to the almost empty wall above the door, "That there are less and less Metal Heads there everyday." Everyone leaned forward to get a better look. Kriss jumped off the counter and was the only one to walk toward the odd trophies. She looked at them for a minute as a low growl came from behind the counter where Tess was standing....
***In A Secret Area In Haven Forest***
"MuhahahahahahaWahahaha.... ha...." A Cabbit stares at it's owner like he gone mad.... maybe he has! "Mew mew mew mew mew mew mew." "Yes, you might be right after all!!!" "Mew?" "No I do not!!!!" "Mew?" "Stop saying that!!!!" "Mew? ....?" "That's an order!!!" "Mew...." "I can hurt you ya know!!" 'My owner really needs some more practice on the Cabbit language....' "I heard that!!!!!" The Cabbit stared (A/N: by the way or btw, a Cabbit is a rabbit that meows). "That backstabbing Ottsel should have already arrived." (A/N: let's call this guy Crazy Man). "I can't wait to see the look on her face!!!" Crazy Man said to his Cabbit (A/N: let's call Crazy Man's Cabbit.... Cabbit!). "Mew...." "Mew indeed Cabbit!" "Mew?"
***Back At The Naughty Ottsel***
Tess screamed as a Metal Head jumped from behind the counter. Before anyone could make a move, a bullet came flying past everyone's head and into the M.H.'s. It fell over, dead. Everyone turned to find Kriss with a magnificent pistol that said 'Charmed' on it. "Where in the bloody hell did you get that?" Sig said as he kneeled down to get a better look at Kriss' gun. "Look, but no touch. This is my baby. And her name is Charmed." Jak walked over to Kriss. "Uh, and why'd you name your pistol uh, 'Charmed'" "I can answer that." Jennifer said as she walked over to Jak and Sig, followed by Torn and Erol. "You see, Kriss is a Goth and well, she bought this rifle a couple of years ago. Then a weird package appeared on my doorstep. It was that pistol." She pointed to Kriss' pistol while Jak noticed Erol listening to every word she said.
"So your saying that you two traded guns and Kriss' got the name Charmed 'carved' into her pistol right?" Jennifer nodded. "That's it." "Right...." Daxter said as he rolled his eyes. "So baby, how long have you waited for me?" Kriss gave Daxter one of her famous death-looks and smacked him. "Get away from me you pervert!!!!" "Well, I guess you better unpack." Torn said to his sister. "Yeah, I guess so...."
***Crazy Man's Lab***
"HA!" "MEW!" Crazy Man stared at Cabbit. "Don't mock me!" "Mew mew mew!" Cabbit started to mock Crazy Man. "Bad Cabbit!!" "Mew mew!!" "Cabbit!!!!" "Mew!!!!" "NO CABBIT!!!!!!!!" "MEW MEW!!!!!!!!" "Grrrrr...." "Mewwww...." Crazy Man and Cabbit went into a staring contest. (A/N: we'll check on those two later, but now: SONGS!!!! Warning: this is going to be long!).
***At The Palace***
Jennifer was listening to her radio while everyone else unpacked her stuff. "Out of bed at the crack of noon, Blare the music and have a swoon, I can't stop thinking of your face, La la lee la lee loo lace!" Everyone stopped and stared at Jennifer. Kriss jumped on the counter and joined into the song. "I'm six feet under the Bhodi tree, With my crap new-age philosophy, Diamonds where there once were stars, I'm sitting in Jayne Mansfield's car!" Torn begins to laugh. "Yeah Yeah I'm independence, Yeah Yeah I'm borderline, Yeah Yeah I'm California, My minds all screwed and upside down, But my hearts on overdrive, Yeah my hearts on overdrive!" Daxter walks in and stares. "I need to take a shower when I look at you, You sting and hurt like a bad tattoo, I wish you'd change my point of view, I cruise the canyon to get some breeze, With hidden treasures up my sleeve, I like the light and hate the heat, But I'll lick the blood right off your street!" Jak stared with a disgusted look on his face. "Lick the blood off a street.... uh...." Jennifer and Kriss continued to sing. "Yeah Yeah I'm cherry cola, Yeah Yeah I'm Candy-eyed, Yeah Yeah I'm California, My minds all screwed and upside down, But my hearts on overdrive!" Kriss pretends to play a guitar. "They all come here to find a scene, But end up girls on Methedrine, Naked on a TV screen, The dreams that fall beneath my feet, Make my footsteps feel so sweet, But your kisses are my fate accompli!" Everyone starts to clap their hands to the beat as Kriss and Jennifer finish up the song. "Yeah Yeah I'm independence, Yeah Yeah I'm borderline, Yeah Yeah I'm California, My minds all screwed and upside down, But my hearts on overdrive, Yeah my hearts on overdrive!!!!" Everyone applauded afterwards. (A/N: and that was Katy Rose's Overdrive!).
After the song, Jak came up and laughed. "What was that?!" "What? You have a problem with the song Overdrive?" Kriss rudely said as she went over to a large carrying pouch. Ashelin was introduced to the gothic Ottsel and Jennifer. "Now what's with the singing I heard earlier?" "Huh? Oh! That was nothing!" Jak watched Kriss as she tried to get the pouch out from under all the other items piled on top. "You really have a better attitude than your Ottsel." "Yeah, I know. Everyone always says that for some reason." "Maybe.... 'cause.... It's true?" Ashelin said as she watched Kriss pull out the pouch. "What's in that?" "Trust me Jak, you DON'T wanna know!"
***Crazy Man's Lab***
Cabbit blinked. "AH-HA!!!!" Crazy Man jumped up in the air. "I win!!!" Cabbit bit Crazy Man's pinky. "OW!!!!" Crazy Man started to jump up and down from pain. It looked like he was doing some sort of dance. "Mew-Mew-Mew!" Crazy Man stopped and looked at Cabbit. "It's Cha-Cha-Cha not Mew-Mew-Mew!" Cabbit stuck its tongue out at Crazy Man. "Grrrrr...." "Mewwww...." This time Crazy Man blinked. Cabbit laughed. "Mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew!!!!!" "Not funny!!!" Crazy Man rubbed his eyes....
***Palace***
"Hey Kriss!" Jak walked over to her with Daxter on his shoulder. Daxter jumped off. "What ya got there, babe?" Kriss gave him her death- look. She opened the pouch and allowed Jak and Daxter to look inside. She smiled when she saw the look on their faces. Daxter fell backwards. Jak's mouth dropped 5 feet from what he saw. "Are those real?" Kriss laughed. "Ha! Real! They're only the finest from deep within the dark. You can't find these baby's anywhere else in the world except for tombs! Want one? I can always 'get' more...."
***End Of 'The Overdrived Arrival'***
So what'd ya think? Please R&R and easy with the flames please? It's my first fic.... *cries* okay whatever. TTFN (Ta Ta For Now)
Disclaimer: I do not own Jak and Daxter, Jak2, or any of the character from those games. I do, however, own Cabbit, Crazy Man, Jennifer, Kriss, and Rikku so mine!!
***At Jak's Place***
"JJJJJJJJJAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jak was violently hit over the head by Samos. "OW!!!! HE-!!!! OOOWWW!!!!!! STOP!!!!! OW!!!!! I-!!!!! HOLD IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Samos froze with his staff in the air. Jak sighed, "I'm okay...." He put his head under his pillow. "Ow...." Samos grabbed the pillow. "What's all the damn noise?" Daxter said as he walked into the room. Jak got up and stuck his tongue out behind Samos' back. "I saw that Jak." "Saw what???" Jak said as he gave an innocent smile (A/N: or at least what looked like one!).
***At The Naughty Ottsel***
When Jak entered the Naughty Ottsel, he ran straight into a stuffed Metal Head (A/N: not literally) statue. "AAAAAAHHHHHH-cool...." He started to poke the Metal Head. "Is this real?" "No duh." Sig entered with yet another Metal Head. It looked like some type of Pokemon the way it was standing. "Sig, where, why, how, what am I missing.... Oh yeah, when?" Jak's eye caught what looked like Erol. "Neat! This looks like Erol!" Jak pulled back Erol's hair and like magic, (A/N: *cough* *cough*) he leaned back and grabbed Jak's wrist. "Holy shit!!!" Jak said as Erol turned around. "Yeah," Sig said while messing with the M.H. statue, "he's back...." Jak stared, (A/N: like this: O.O) and saw Daxter standing at the entrance with the same look. Then.... Daxter fell backwards.
"Cool!" Daxter said as he looked at Erol. "Your alive! AGAIN!!!" Just then, Torn walked in with a worried look. "What's up Torn?" He ignored Daxter and sat down. "Uh.... Torn?" Everyone gathered around him. Annoyed, he explained. "My sister is coming to Haven." "When!!!" Everyone asked. Before he could answer, a girl dressed in black high-heeled boots, black jeans, and a black shirt walked in (A/N: yeah, all her clothes are black....). "Hey Torn!" She said. Before anyone could answer, an Ottsel with long eyelashes and a black backwards cap that had the name Kriss in red on the front (A/N: her name is said like Chris and the name is printed on the part on the hat above her face). She caught Daxter's eye quick, what caught everyone else's eye was the skull necklace she had on (A/N: Kriss is a Goth, yeah....).
After a while of getting to know Kriss, Torn introduced his sister. "Guys, this is my sister: Jennifer." Everyone stared. "Well hi!" she said. "Please, these idots can't even design a bar." Kriss said while pushing Daxter away from her face. Everyone laughed, except for Sig. "I don't what there's to laugh about cherries." Jak stopped laughing and turned to Sig. "What you talking about Sig?" Sig looked at the wall of Metal Head trophies. "Have any of you saw that on that wall," he pointed to the almost empty wall above the door, "That there are less and less Metal Heads there everyday." Everyone leaned forward to get a better look. Kriss jumped off the counter and was the only one to walk toward the odd trophies. She looked at them for a minute as a low growl came from behind the counter where Tess was standing....
***In A Secret Area In Haven Forest***
"MuhahahahahahaWahahaha.... ha...." A Cabbit stares at it's owner like he gone mad.... maybe he has! "Mew mew mew mew mew mew mew." "Yes, you might be right after all!!!" "Mew?" "No I do not!!!!" "Mew?" "Stop saying that!!!!" "Mew? ....?" "That's an order!!!" "Mew...." "I can hurt you ya know!!" 'My owner really needs some more practice on the Cabbit language....' "I heard that!!!!!" The Cabbit stared (A/N: by the way or btw, a Cabbit is a rabbit that meows). "That backstabbing Ottsel should have already arrived." (A/N: let's call this guy Crazy Man). "I can't wait to see the look on her face!!!" Crazy Man said to his Cabbit (A/N: let's call Crazy Man's Cabbit.... Cabbit!). "Mew...." "Mew indeed Cabbit!" "Mew?"
***Back At The Naughty Ottsel***
Tess screamed as a Metal Head jumped from behind the counter. Before anyone could make a move, a bullet came flying past everyone's head and into the M.H.'s. It fell over, dead. Everyone turned to find Kriss with a magnificent pistol that said 'Charmed' on it. "Where in the bloody hell did you get that?" Sig said as he kneeled down to get a better look at Kriss' gun. "Look, but no touch. This is my baby. And her name is Charmed." Jak walked over to Kriss. "Uh, and why'd you name your pistol uh, 'Charmed'" "I can answer that." Jennifer said as she walked over to Jak and Sig, followed by Torn and Erol. "You see, Kriss is a Goth and well, she bought this rifle a couple of years ago. Then a weird package appeared on my doorstep. It was that pistol." She pointed to Kriss' pistol while Jak noticed Erol listening to every word she said.
"So your saying that you two traded guns and Kriss' got the name Charmed 'carved' into her pistol right?" Jennifer nodded. "That's it." "Right...." Daxter said as he rolled his eyes. "So baby, how long have you waited for me?" Kriss gave Daxter one of her famous death-looks and smacked him. "Get away from me you pervert!!!!" "Well, I guess you better unpack." Torn said to his sister. "Yeah, I guess so...."
***Crazy Man's Lab***
"HA!" "MEW!" Crazy Man stared at Cabbit. "Don't mock me!" "Mew mew mew!" Cabbit started to mock Crazy Man. "Bad Cabbit!!" "Mew mew!!" "Cabbit!!!!" "Mew!!!!" "NO CABBIT!!!!!!!!" "MEW MEW!!!!!!!!" "Grrrrr...." "Mewwww...." Crazy Man and Cabbit went into a staring contest. (A/N: we'll check on those two later, but now: SONGS!!!! Warning: this is going to be long!).
***At The Palace***
Jennifer was listening to her radio while everyone else unpacked her stuff. "Out of bed at the crack of noon, Blare the music and have a swoon, I can't stop thinking of your face, La la lee la lee loo lace!" Everyone stopped and stared at Jennifer. Kriss jumped on the counter and joined into the song. "I'm six feet under the Bhodi tree, With my crap new-age philosophy, Diamonds where there once were stars, I'm sitting in Jayne Mansfield's car!" Torn begins to laugh. "Yeah Yeah I'm independence, Yeah Yeah I'm borderline, Yeah Yeah I'm California, My minds all screwed and upside down, But my hearts on overdrive, Yeah my hearts on overdrive!" Daxter walks in and stares. "I need to take a shower when I look at you, You sting and hurt like a bad tattoo, I wish you'd change my point of view, I cruise the canyon to get some breeze, With hidden treasures up my sleeve, I like the light and hate the heat, But I'll lick the blood right off your street!" Jak stared with a disgusted look on his face. "Lick the blood off a street.... uh...." Jennifer and Kriss continued to sing. "Yeah Yeah I'm cherry cola, Yeah Yeah I'm Candy-eyed, Yeah Yeah I'm California, My minds all screwed and upside down, But my hearts on overdrive!" Kriss pretends to play a guitar. "They all come here to find a scene, But end up girls on Methedrine, Naked on a TV screen, The dreams that fall beneath my feet, Make my footsteps feel so sweet, But your kisses are my fate accompli!" Everyone starts to clap their hands to the beat as Kriss and Jennifer finish up the song. "Yeah Yeah I'm independence, Yeah Yeah I'm borderline, Yeah Yeah I'm California, My minds all screwed and upside down, But my hearts on overdrive, Yeah my hearts on overdrive!!!!" Everyone applauded afterwards. (A/N: and that was Katy Rose's Overdrive!).
After the song, Jak came up and laughed. "What was that?!" "What? You have a problem with the song Overdrive?" Kriss rudely said as she went over to a large carrying pouch. Ashelin was introduced to the gothic Ottsel and Jennifer. "Now what's with the singing I heard earlier?" "Huh? Oh! That was nothing!" Jak watched Kriss as she tried to get the pouch out from under all the other items piled on top. "You really have a better attitude than your Ottsel." "Yeah, I know. Everyone always says that for some reason." "Maybe.... 'cause.... It's true?" Ashelin said as she watched Kriss pull out the pouch. "What's in that?" "Trust me Jak, you DON'T wanna know!"
***Crazy Man's Lab***
Cabbit blinked. "AH-HA!!!!" Crazy Man jumped up in the air. "I win!!!" Cabbit bit Crazy Man's pinky. "OW!!!!" Crazy Man started to jump up and down from pain. It looked like he was doing some sort of dance. "Mew-Mew-Mew!" Crazy Man stopped and looked at Cabbit. "It's Cha-Cha-Cha not Mew-Mew-Mew!" Cabbit stuck its tongue out at Crazy Man. "Grrrrr...." "Mewwww...." This time Crazy Man blinked. Cabbit laughed. "Mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew mew!!!!!" "Not funny!!!" Crazy Man rubbed his eyes....
***Palace***
"Hey Kriss!" Jak walked over to her with Daxter on his shoulder. Daxter jumped off. "What ya got there, babe?" Kriss gave him her death- look. She opened the pouch and allowed Jak and Daxter to look inside. She smiled when she saw the look on their faces. Daxter fell backwards. Jak's mouth dropped 5 feet from what he saw. "Are those real?" Kriss laughed. "Ha! Real! They're only the finest from deep within the dark. You can't find these baby's anywhere else in the world except for tombs! Want one? I can always 'get' more...."
***End Of 'The Overdrived Arrival'***
So what'd ya think? Please R&R and easy with the flames please? It's my first fic.... *cries* okay whatever. TTFN (Ta Ta For Now)