Hey guys! So you came back for more did you? Well, I don't think this
chapter will disappoint you Kai fans because I've been thinking__ a lot!
And my mind was just bursting with ideas. So hopefully this chapter will
come out longer then the last one. I wanna thank the reviewers because I
got a lot of great reviews. Thanks are at the end. I don't own beyblade. I
really hope this chapter doesn't disappoint you. So enjoy and review!
Chapter 4
"Why don't you just kill the boy, after all there's nothing worse then death." Said a man with purple hair that was greased back into a slick deceiving type of style (a.k.a. Boris) as he approached the desk in the mingy office. "That is not good enough! Death is the way to end something, and my grandson is far off from that, but there is one thing that is worse then death, humiliation, betrayal, and my personal favorite the two D's." Calmly replied Voltaire with a sly grin slowly appearing on his features. "Ahhhhhhh yes, deception, and disgrace. But if I may inquire, how are you going to incorporate all these things?" Boris asked with a hint of excitement etched in his cold voice. "Simple, first we make it so that the whole world, especially the Bladebreakers witness the falling and weakness that their captain will suffer, that will be humiliating don't you think? Then they will most likely try to find their friend but we'll make sure that Kai thinks they were laughing while he was suffering which will make Kai feel betrayed meaning he'll be vulnerable. These events will lead to both deception and disgrace." Voltaire replies with a huge grin plastered on his face. "That's brilliant, when should we begin the first part?" The purple haired man asks with excitement building in each word as he takes a seat at the large wooden desk in the gloomy office. "I want maybe a day or two to pass just to make sure he's really weak and tired." Voltaire says.
Meanwhile in the cell chained against a cold, stone wall in a dingy cell sits Kai. His eyes open wide after hearing the booming and cruel laughter echoing down the corridor coming from the direction of Voltaire's office. "I recognize that laugh anywhere, it was only a matter of time before he got out, but what are they planning?" Kai asks himself under his breath a lot calmer now then before. With that Kai smirks to himself, "They can throw whatever they want at me, but they'll never get me down.. I won't give him that pleasure." Kai then closes his eyes in hope of getting a little sleep so as to regain as much strength and composure as possible.
"What a party!" Tyson yells after the last guest leaves. "Yep, no one celebrates like the world champion right Tyson?" Max says to his friend not in a question so much but a statement. "You know it Maxi! That was so much fun Chief did you see me inhale those hot dogs, that was pretty dope, huh!" "Are you kidding Tyson how could anyone miss that feat, it was incredible I thought you would explode!" Kenny says while not able to resist the tempting laughter that threatened to force its way out. "I'm actually surprised that Kai didn't say anything, he's usually the first to step in when you get like that." Rei says while collapsing on the sofa with exaustment. "Oh c'mon even Captain Kai cant resist my mad skills, he was probably laughing his head off in the corner, I mean it was funny." Tyson says while joining Rei, Max and Kenny on the sofa. "So what should we do tomorrow, please don't say eat Tyson I swear it'll be another year before I eat again, I ate so much!" Max says. "I think we were gonna meet up with Andrew and some other guys. I don't know, we'll see." Tyson replies ending with a great big yawn. About twenty minutes later all four boys were sprawled on the floor, fast asleep.
The Next Day__
Kai awoke, hoping once again that perhaps this was one terrible dream, that he wasn't in the place he dreaded the place that had stolen his innocent child hood from, run by the monster that murdered his beloved mother and father. As his weary eyes and mind (still under slight effect of the drug) took in nothing but darkness of the cold dingy cell (though it was morning). Kai surprised himself. Instead of immense fear he chuckled. "Hmmm, its funny, I'm in the one place I dread so and it took this long for my past to catch up, that's gotta be a record." Kai thought to himself as he silently laughed to himself. His silent laughter was interrupted by a cold figure standing in front of the frightening cell, Voltaire. Kai quickly changed his mood to disgust. "So, I guess Russia needs to reconstruct its security system if scum like yourself could get out." Kai said with a fierce yet smug ting to his voice. At this statement Voltaire would be furious and have his sticky and dirty hands around Kai's neck in seconds, but he had to follow the plan. "Amusing that you would say such things to your own grandfather, however if I were you, I would certainly consider the position I'm in, and rethink how far I would push it!" Voltaire replied now opening the cell to step in. "Just cut to the chase, what is it you want." Kai says as he eyes his grandfather suspiciously. As the old but frightening man approached closer Kai had to be sure not to give away any signs of fear. "Relax, don't show your fear just pretend it's a movie or something and that he cant do anything." Kai thought to himself. He knew exactly what his grandfather was capable of, and normally Kai wouldn't try to mask the harsh reality with something fake, but still the comforting, (though false) words helped. Voltaire then kneeled down to Kai's level since the chains had his body tightly restrained. "Quite, hiding your fear with words, I know that you fear me, and I know that my threats stuck, so stop acting like a fearless leader after all if you were so strong why is it, that one simple injection was able to bring you down so easily." (Why would Voltaire admit that he had to use one of the strongest drugs he had?) "I mean to say, that I am impressed you lasted ten minutes but, I thought you were better then that." "You are nothing but a piece of jail crud that managed to slip through the bars, I have and never will have respect for someone as low and dirty as you!" Kai says with extra intensity.
Something in these words must've struck something because Voltaire lost control. He then punched Kai in the face hard enough to give him a nosebleed and a bit of a split lip. "I'm surprised with you Kai! I thought you knew better then this." With that he kicked him in the stomach which knocked the wind out of him. After taking a breath of air Voltaire gets to his knees so he's eye to eye with Kai. Then he slides his hand under Kai's chin and jerks his face up so that he is eye to eye with him. "Don't you dare make comments like that, consider the following, with each comment you decide to slip I'll increase the pain that you'll inflict. . . I'll make sure that the last breath you take will be done by my hands, Ill make sure that when you plead for mercy it'll be for me, and I will most certainty squeeze every ounce of emotion out of you, until you're my pet again!" After stating these new threats in Russian Voltaire strolls out of the cell leaving his tired and now frightened grandson once again the dark dingy cell to wait for his death day.
"We'll, be back by lunch, so don't worry Gramps!" Tyson yells as him and his friends head out the dojo gate and to the park. "Wow, its so cool to meet you guys!" said a short brown spiky haired kid who wore a pair of jeans, and a random dark orange sweater. His dark deep brown eyes sparkled of excitement when he first met the other Bladebreakers. "Its an honor to meet you guys, my friends and I have been taping every single beybattle that you guys participated in, my absolute favorite was when Kai battled Spencer from the Demolition Boys.. It was such a cool clash of the elements! I'm not trying to sound ungrateful or anything, but where is he, I mean I was sorta hoping to meet him. But I'm still honored to meet you guys!" Replied the kid with as much excitement as he could get together. "Well, its kinda weird with him, Josh I mean he's not so into fans and stuff like that!" Tyson said in a desperate attempt to get the conversation back to his battle. "C'mon Mareese! Hurry up." Josh yelled to his sister, Mareese then quickly brought up the pace to catch up with them. "Mareese, what's up with you? You seem kinda out of it. Too much partying!" Tyson teases. The younger girl turned a small shade of pink at that comment. "No, I. well, um, its just I was thinking, about. something__ nothing important." The young girl says in a very shy manner. "So guys what should we do next?" Max says in an attempt to ease the attention of the younger girl who was clearly embarrassed. "Lets just, hang!" Tyson says and with that the whole group heads of to the park.
The rest of the afternoon just seemed to blow by. After lunch Tyson and the rest of the bladebreakers (except Kai) met up with some other kids. Nothing too special happened a few times one of the girls who were casually hanging out (being friends with Tyson) would wander aloud were Kai could be. But other then those few moments of awkward silence were Tyson, nor Max, Kenny, or Rei could answer to where the wanderings of Kai could be. However, Kai's afternoon was quite different.
Most of the time Kai was just left in his dungeon wrapped up in cold steel chains. Occasionally, he would open his eyes to glance around and make sure he still recognized his situation and make sure it wasn't a dream. But when his eyes were closed, all he could do was imagine what would happen. Maybe he would be left to rot in this miserable cell, or perhaps he would be slaughtered, none of these things could be as bad as what was going to happen later this evening as soon as the night lights went on, and the downtown part of Japan was lit something was going to happen that neither Kai, nor his team would ever want to deal with.
****Later that evening****
"That was so much fun, hanging out with all your friends!" Rei says in a very happy and content voice. "Oh yeah! It was really cool, Ill never forget your face Chief when you almost fell in the shallow part of the river, that was hilarious." Tyson says while punching the air. "Hey, Little Dudes I'm gonna forget the fact that you didn't listen and went near the river, because I got tickets to the Beyblade convention that's here in town." "Awesome!" the team chants together. "I didn't know there was a convention, besides the ultra cool one that's sold out!" Rei says while the rest of the team begins to chat excitedly on all the cool stuff they'll get to see. "We better get cruisen cause it starts at 8:oo tonight!" "Ahhhhh, its 7:30 we better get going!" Kenny says in a worried voice.
"Master Voltaire, the cameras are set, and hooked up to the big screen at the convention tonight. "Boris says trying his best to hide his excitement. "Well done, Boris I expect that nothing will go wrong." Voltaire says as he turns his large black chair to face Boris. "I have checked, and re-checked for flaws and this time it is utterly fool- proof." "It seems to me that young Kai will feel as much humiliation as he caused me at the world championships!" Voltaire says ending with a heavy and dark laugh. "I believe the next step is to prepare him, so how would you like to do this Sir?" Boris asks with more anticipation. "Simple, we need him weak, so he doesn't put up a fight, so ill need that paralyze solution of yours ready in an hour at the most, then we'll be able to get him, and make sure that those at the convention and every beyblade official in the country witness my true strength." With the instructions said Boris runs off to fulfill his task of creating a very strong paralyzing solution. "Within the hour Kai. . . you'll be very sorry that you messed with me, and then I'll make sure that you'll be hurt inside and outside.. with in the hour.." Voltaire says as he lifts a small glass of sadkie to his lips and drinks deeply. "With in the hour.."
******An hour in to the convention all the visitors are in their seats as a few new beyblades are about to be demonstrated in the dish at the bottom of the large auditorium. The convention center is quite fancy and has rows of red velvet seats on top of each other (think opera house). *******
"Ladies and Gentlemen, next up we have the newest beyblades, the Foll- Vorce. These blades can go up to 50 miles an hour. With a chrome attack ring to create a flashy effect. Please look at the large screen in the center to witness the abilities of these new exclusive beyblades." As the speaker finishes his last words a large movie theatre like screen comes out of the marble sealing. Just as the bladers are about to launch the image of the blades being put in the rip cord is gone of the screen, and a very feared and supposedly arrested man appears on the screen in a cell type of room. "Boris!" Tyson says in a very hate filled voice.
"Greetings," Boris says on the screen in a voice that would make any one shrivel. He then turns to the side that all the visitors who are at the convention can see a slightly battered up boy chained up to the cold cell wall. As the view becomes clearer the figure is recognized as Kai. The once beautiful white scarf lost its clean white pure look and was now covered with dirt and a bit of blood. Kai's head hung down low and he would have collapsed if the chains had not held him with their forceful steel cuffs (due to the drugs, and mal-nourishment). His face (though not visible) was a bit bloody but mostly dirty. He had a nasty split lip that had closed and a dry bloody nose. "KAI!" the Blade breakers say quietly together as if on Que. This terrible sight made the whole convention freeze with fright at would happen next to their favorite captain. None of them would ever guess that it could get much worse for him.
TBC
So what did you think, I kinda decided to milk it a bit, but I'm not kidding the next chapter will be pretty torturish so be ware. Oh yeah I wanna thank you guys for telling me if I should make it Kai/Mareese (NOT!) only like, 2 people told me, well, even if you guys did want a Kai/Mareese I wouldn't do it anyway. So review please! I need em to update faster. Maybe even by this Tuesday. I hope this was long enough for you guys.
THANKS
Sherbert Mayhem: Oh mi god! I'm so happy you reviewed let alone liked it. I love your story WAR (read it if you haven't __its brilliant!) Thanks for pointing out my errors. I'll update if you do! LOL
Sailor Centauri: Thanks well, I sure did, so come back for more!
Libe: THANK YOU! ^_^! You are one of the only people who said if I should make it Kai/Mareese (you guys should follow her example 'assuming this is a girl LOL') Well, come back for more, and don't worry it wont be Kai/Mareese!
Shantel: Glad you liked it! Ice cream for you! ^_^
TYDY Girl: I like the pen name! Its cull! I'm glad you like it!
Ruth 4 Kai: ahhhh, Kai plush for you LOL I'm glad you like keep on coming back!
Identity Theif: Amen to that one! Boris should die with a catapult! LOL. But doomsday staff is good too (does a little angelic grin) ^_^ I'm glad your loving the torture.
Tiger Terror: LOL I'm soooooooooooooooooooo glad that you like it! I hope you liked this one, and I'll work on my spelling, thanx lol!
Dragon Blade: Sheep? Where? LOL I'm glad you like it hope this chapter pleases yea!
Well, that 'bout done it son! LOL (I'm soo corny ahahahahahahah 6_6 (Hey I made that smiley up!) This just came to thought, that questions our society, I noticed that the reviews have gotten better and more now that the torture is happening. Questionable? Very! LOL ^_^
Well, update I appreciate them all and that comment up there was just something to ponder (for those of who are serious up there was just a joke, so don't shun me please!) Well, review please and I'll give you a warm handshake and a cold milk shake YUM! ^_^
Chapter 4
"Why don't you just kill the boy, after all there's nothing worse then death." Said a man with purple hair that was greased back into a slick deceiving type of style (a.k.a. Boris) as he approached the desk in the mingy office. "That is not good enough! Death is the way to end something, and my grandson is far off from that, but there is one thing that is worse then death, humiliation, betrayal, and my personal favorite the two D's." Calmly replied Voltaire with a sly grin slowly appearing on his features. "Ahhhhhhh yes, deception, and disgrace. But if I may inquire, how are you going to incorporate all these things?" Boris asked with a hint of excitement etched in his cold voice. "Simple, first we make it so that the whole world, especially the Bladebreakers witness the falling and weakness that their captain will suffer, that will be humiliating don't you think? Then they will most likely try to find their friend but we'll make sure that Kai thinks they were laughing while he was suffering which will make Kai feel betrayed meaning he'll be vulnerable. These events will lead to both deception and disgrace." Voltaire replies with a huge grin plastered on his face. "That's brilliant, when should we begin the first part?" The purple haired man asks with excitement building in each word as he takes a seat at the large wooden desk in the gloomy office. "I want maybe a day or two to pass just to make sure he's really weak and tired." Voltaire says.
Meanwhile in the cell chained against a cold, stone wall in a dingy cell sits Kai. His eyes open wide after hearing the booming and cruel laughter echoing down the corridor coming from the direction of Voltaire's office. "I recognize that laugh anywhere, it was only a matter of time before he got out, but what are they planning?" Kai asks himself under his breath a lot calmer now then before. With that Kai smirks to himself, "They can throw whatever they want at me, but they'll never get me down.. I won't give him that pleasure." Kai then closes his eyes in hope of getting a little sleep so as to regain as much strength and composure as possible.
"What a party!" Tyson yells after the last guest leaves. "Yep, no one celebrates like the world champion right Tyson?" Max says to his friend not in a question so much but a statement. "You know it Maxi! That was so much fun Chief did you see me inhale those hot dogs, that was pretty dope, huh!" "Are you kidding Tyson how could anyone miss that feat, it was incredible I thought you would explode!" Kenny says while not able to resist the tempting laughter that threatened to force its way out. "I'm actually surprised that Kai didn't say anything, he's usually the first to step in when you get like that." Rei says while collapsing on the sofa with exaustment. "Oh c'mon even Captain Kai cant resist my mad skills, he was probably laughing his head off in the corner, I mean it was funny." Tyson says while joining Rei, Max and Kenny on the sofa. "So what should we do tomorrow, please don't say eat Tyson I swear it'll be another year before I eat again, I ate so much!" Max says. "I think we were gonna meet up with Andrew and some other guys. I don't know, we'll see." Tyson replies ending with a great big yawn. About twenty minutes later all four boys were sprawled on the floor, fast asleep.
The Next Day__
Kai awoke, hoping once again that perhaps this was one terrible dream, that he wasn't in the place he dreaded the place that had stolen his innocent child hood from, run by the monster that murdered his beloved mother and father. As his weary eyes and mind (still under slight effect of the drug) took in nothing but darkness of the cold dingy cell (though it was morning). Kai surprised himself. Instead of immense fear he chuckled. "Hmmm, its funny, I'm in the one place I dread so and it took this long for my past to catch up, that's gotta be a record." Kai thought to himself as he silently laughed to himself. His silent laughter was interrupted by a cold figure standing in front of the frightening cell, Voltaire. Kai quickly changed his mood to disgust. "So, I guess Russia needs to reconstruct its security system if scum like yourself could get out." Kai said with a fierce yet smug ting to his voice. At this statement Voltaire would be furious and have his sticky and dirty hands around Kai's neck in seconds, but he had to follow the plan. "Amusing that you would say such things to your own grandfather, however if I were you, I would certainly consider the position I'm in, and rethink how far I would push it!" Voltaire replied now opening the cell to step in. "Just cut to the chase, what is it you want." Kai says as he eyes his grandfather suspiciously. As the old but frightening man approached closer Kai had to be sure not to give away any signs of fear. "Relax, don't show your fear just pretend it's a movie or something and that he cant do anything." Kai thought to himself. He knew exactly what his grandfather was capable of, and normally Kai wouldn't try to mask the harsh reality with something fake, but still the comforting, (though false) words helped. Voltaire then kneeled down to Kai's level since the chains had his body tightly restrained. "Quite, hiding your fear with words, I know that you fear me, and I know that my threats stuck, so stop acting like a fearless leader after all if you were so strong why is it, that one simple injection was able to bring you down so easily." (Why would Voltaire admit that he had to use one of the strongest drugs he had?) "I mean to say, that I am impressed you lasted ten minutes but, I thought you were better then that." "You are nothing but a piece of jail crud that managed to slip through the bars, I have and never will have respect for someone as low and dirty as you!" Kai says with extra intensity.
Something in these words must've struck something because Voltaire lost control. He then punched Kai in the face hard enough to give him a nosebleed and a bit of a split lip. "I'm surprised with you Kai! I thought you knew better then this." With that he kicked him in the stomach which knocked the wind out of him. After taking a breath of air Voltaire gets to his knees so he's eye to eye with Kai. Then he slides his hand under Kai's chin and jerks his face up so that he is eye to eye with him. "Don't you dare make comments like that, consider the following, with each comment you decide to slip I'll increase the pain that you'll inflict. . . I'll make sure that the last breath you take will be done by my hands, Ill make sure that when you plead for mercy it'll be for me, and I will most certainty squeeze every ounce of emotion out of you, until you're my pet again!" After stating these new threats in Russian Voltaire strolls out of the cell leaving his tired and now frightened grandson once again the dark dingy cell to wait for his death day.
"We'll, be back by lunch, so don't worry Gramps!" Tyson yells as him and his friends head out the dojo gate and to the park. "Wow, its so cool to meet you guys!" said a short brown spiky haired kid who wore a pair of jeans, and a random dark orange sweater. His dark deep brown eyes sparkled of excitement when he first met the other Bladebreakers. "Its an honor to meet you guys, my friends and I have been taping every single beybattle that you guys participated in, my absolute favorite was when Kai battled Spencer from the Demolition Boys.. It was such a cool clash of the elements! I'm not trying to sound ungrateful or anything, but where is he, I mean I was sorta hoping to meet him. But I'm still honored to meet you guys!" Replied the kid with as much excitement as he could get together. "Well, its kinda weird with him, Josh I mean he's not so into fans and stuff like that!" Tyson said in a desperate attempt to get the conversation back to his battle. "C'mon Mareese! Hurry up." Josh yelled to his sister, Mareese then quickly brought up the pace to catch up with them. "Mareese, what's up with you? You seem kinda out of it. Too much partying!" Tyson teases. The younger girl turned a small shade of pink at that comment. "No, I. well, um, its just I was thinking, about. something__ nothing important." The young girl says in a very shy manner. "So guys what should we do next?" Max says in an attempt to ease the attention of the younger girl who was clearly embarrassed. "Lets just, hang!" Tyson says and with that the whole group heads of to the park.
The rest of the afternoon just seemed to blow by. After lunch Tyson and the rest of the bladebreakers (except Kai) met up with some other kids. Nothing too special happened a few times one of the girls who were casually hanging out (being friends with Tyson) would wander aloud were Kai could be. But other then those few moments of awkward silence were Tyson, nor Max, Kenny, or Rei could answer to where the wanderings of Kai could be. However, Kai's afternoon was quite different.
Most of the time Kai was just left in his dungeon wrapped up in cold steel chains. Occasionally, he would open his eyes to glance around and make sure he still recognized his situation and make sure it wasn't a dream. But when his eyes were closed, all he could do was imagine what would happen. Maybe he would be left to rot in this miserable cell, or perhaps he would be slaughtered, none of these things could be as bad as what was going to happen later this evening as soon as the night lights went on, and the downtown part of Japan was lit something was going to happen that neither Kai, nor his team would ever want to deal with.
****Later that evening****
"That was so much fun, hanging out with all your friends!" Rei says in a very happy and content voice. "Oh yeah! It was really cool, Ill never forget your face Chief when you almost fell in the shallow part of the river, that was hilarious." Tyson says while punching the air. "Hey, Little Dudes I'm gonna forget the fact that you didn't listen and went near the river, because I got tickets to the Beyblade convention that's here in town." "Awesome!" the team chants together. "I didn't know there was a convention, besides the ultra cool one that's sold out!" Rei says while the rest of the team begins to chat excitedly on all the cool stuff they'll get to see. "We better get cruisen cause it starts at 8:oo tonight!" "Ahhhhh, its 7:30 we better get going!" Kenny says in a worried voice.
"Master Voltaire, the cameras are set, and hooked up to the big screen at the convention tonight. "Boris says trying his best to hide his excitement. "Well done, Boris I expect that nothing will go wrong." Voltaire says as he turns his large black chair to face Boris. "I have checked, and re-checked for flaws and this time it is utterly fool- proof." "It seems to me that young Kai will feel as much humiliation as he caused me at the world championships!" Voltaire says ending with a heavy and dark laugh. "I believe the next step is to prepare him, so how would you like to do this Sir?" Boris asks with more anticipation. "Simple, we need him weak, so he doesn't put up a fight, so ill need that paralyze solution of yours ready in an hour at the most, then we'll be able to get him, and make sure that those at the convention and every beyblade official in the country witness my true strength." With the instructions said Boris runs off to fulfill his task of creating a very strong paralyzing solution. "Within the hour Kai. . . you'll be very sorry that you messed with me, and then I'll make sure that you'll be hurt inside and outside.. with in the hour.." Voltaire says as he lifts a small glass of sadkie to his lips and drinks deeply. "With in the hour.."
******An hour in to the convention all the visitors are in their seats as a few new beyblades are about to be demonstrated in the dish at the bottom of the large auditorium. The convention center is quite fancy and has rows of red velvet seats on top of each other (think opera house). *******
"Ladies and Gentlemen, next up we have the newest beyblades, the Foll- Vorce. These blades can go up to 50 miles an hour. With a chrome attack ring to create a flashy effect. Please look at the large screen in the center to witness the abilities of these new exclusive beyblades." As the speaker finishes his last words a large movie theatre like screen comes out of the marble sealing. Just as the bladers are about to launch the image of the blades being put in the rip cord is gone of the screen, and a very feared and supposedly arrested man appears on the screen in a cell type of room. "Boris!" Tyson says in a very hate filled voice.
"Greetings," Boris says on the screen in a voice that would make any one shrivel. He then turns to the side that all the visitors who are at the convention can see a slightly battered up boy chained up to the cold cell wall. As the view becomes clearer the figure is recognized as Kai. The once beautiful white scarf lost its clean white pure look and was now covered with dirt and a bit of blood. Kai's head hung down low and he would have collapsed if the chains had not held him with their forceful steel cuffs (due to the drugs, and mal-nourishment). His face (though not visible) was a bit bloody but mostly dirty. He had a nasty split lip that had closed and a dry bloody nose. "KAI!" the Blade breakers say quietly together as if on Que. This terrible sight made the whole convention freeze with fright at would happen next to their favorite captain. None of them would ever guess that it could get much worse for him.
TBC
So what did you think, I kinda decided to milk it a bit, but I'm not kidding the next chapter will be pretty torturish so be ware. Oh yeah I wanna thank you guys for telling me if I should make it Kai/Mareese (NOT!) only like, 2 people told me, well, even if you guys did want a Kai/Mareese I wouldn't do it anyway. So review please! I need em to update faster. Maybe even by this Tuesday. I hope this was long enough for you guys.
THANKS
Sherbert Mayhem: Oh mi god! I'm so happy you reviewed let alone liked it. I love your story WAR (read it if you haven't __its brilliant!) Thanks for pointing out my errors. I'll update if you do! LOL
Sailor Centauri: Thanks well, I sure did, so come back for more!
Libe: THANK YOU! ^_^! You are one of the only people who said if I should make it Kai/Mareese (you guys should follow her example 'assuming this is a girl LOL') Well, come back for more, and don't worry it wont be Kai/Mareese!
Shantel: Glad you liked it! Ice cream for you! ^_^
TYDY Girl: I like the pen name! Its cull! I'm glad you like it!
Ruth 4 Kai: ahhhh, Kai plush for you LOL I'm glad you like keep on coming back!
Identity Theif: Amen to that one! Boris should die with a catapult! LOL. But doomsday staff is good too (does a little angelic grin) ^_^ I'm glad your loving the torture.
Tiger Terror: LOL I'm soooooooooooooooooooo glad that you like it! I hope you liked this one, and I'll work on my spelling, thanx lol!
Dragon Blade: Sheep? Where? LOL I'm glad you like it hope this chapter pleases yea!
Well, that 'bout done it son! LOL (I'm soo corny ahahahahahahah 6_6 (Hey I made that smiley up!) This just came to thought, that questions our society, I noticed that the reviews have gotten better and more now that the torture is happening. Questionable? Very! LOL ^_^
Well, update I appreciate them all and that comment up there was just something to ponder (for those of who are serious up there was just a joke, so don't shun me please!) Well, review please and I'll give you a warm handshake and a cold milk shake YUM! ^_^