a/n.HIYA!!! CAHADRAS HERE WIT CHAPTER & OF HIEI"S PROBLEMS!!!*stops yelling
to see hiei covering his ears in pain*ooh srry hiei*hiei glares at me wit
murder in his eyes*I said I wuz srry geez.I didn't mean to.*gives hiei
puppy dog pout and he almost gets a soft kind look on his face but he turns
around and stomps off grumbling about my damn puppy faces*okaaay ppl..i
have a few reviews I want 2 answer..actually im only gonna answer one today
cuzz im bein a lazy jackass but u guys can cope right?now this review is
from chapter 3 but I really want 2 answer it.
DANICA~if u r reading this danica then I thank you 4 the review and im glad u like my fic..but like u I am a big fan of Hiei..and also like u I like 2 say dat he is..*looks around makin sure hiei cant here*HIEI IS MINE!!!..yes dats wut I like 2 say too..and also..me?let Hiei go?R U FREAKIN NUTZ!!! NEVA!!! I RESIST!! I WILL NOT!! I REFUSE!!!*goes on and on 4 about 3 more hours*AND I WILL NOT*looks around*uhhh..*sweet drop*ok..well really I am kinda touchy bout dat subject excuse me 4 dat outburst..
And I would like to thank my internet friend Sakura Kitsune 4 sending me a lot of reviews..she gets.*drum roll*ANOTHER Truck Load of sweet snow!!!have fun!!
Now I own no one..makes me feel sad to say it..*sobs*I only own Cahadras cuzz she is a remake of myself..and plz excuse the bad spellin..spellin sux so I don't try to hard to spell correctly..only on names..like Hiei if I misspelled his name id kill myself..not literally ppl so stop tyryin ta make it look as if I misspelled it..*groans of sadness in the crowd*really this crowd sux!!*thowin veggies at me*hey I DIDN'T MEAN IT LIKE DAT!!!
On wit chapter 7!!
Chapter 7: Fun At The Beach...
(Cahadras Pov)
DAMN YOU HIEI!!! DAMN YOU YUSUKE!!!Yusuke for his driving and making me fall on Hiei's lap!! For Hiei for nearly killing me.Oh yea he got a few bumps and bruises too but really he over reacted just a bit when I fell on his lap..I didn't mean too so he didn't hafta blame it on me!!like I really wanted on his lap anyway!!Yusuke had to drive so recklessly..Yea I admit It was fun..Except for falling on Hiei..My ears will neva be the same..As soon as I fell on Him he yelled really really really loud..loud enough to bust an ear drum..And then he punched me off of him yellin at me for landing on his lap..Naturally I punched him back..He had no right to punch me when it was that detectives reckless driving's fault..
Now we are finaly at the dumb beach..i never been to one before so this is new to me..Same with Hiei I think..but I am just going to act like I have been here before..Just like Hiei..we will see who gets in over their head first.Hmm..Me and hiei are sitting down on a few Beach towels..Damn Kurama..Why did he put our towels close to eachother..he is up to something..When he put mine and hiei's towels down he had this big sneaky grin on his face..Im goning to have to have a talk with that Kitsune later..Botan wants me to go swimming with her..But I cant..My head band might fall off..That would be a crisis..Girl with third eye walking around having fun at the beach..I think that is the same reason hiei is still sitting next to me on his beach towel..Hahahaha..Keiko is chasing Yusuke around the place for flirting with all these girls.Pure entertainment I tell you..Kuwabaka and yukina are having a splash fight.Hmmm..Hiei don't seem to llike that very much..I don't blame him..What does yukina see in that baka anyway..I may never find out..Oh poor Kurama.He cant have anyfun cuzz all these girls are chasing him around..Yea he is cute but those girls are rabid..poor guy.Huh? Some one just tapped on my shoulder.Who the heck is this guy..Some Baka ningen..What does this idiot want?
(Author pov)
"Hey Babe..Whats Up?" This teenage guy seem to have pooped up out of no where to cahadras..It quite surprised her..but her suroprise soon turned to anger when she relised this ugly ningen was calling her "Babe".
"..."
"Looks like you don't talk much babe..Well anyway..I was wondering if you would like to go swimming with me and my friends.."The guy gave cahadras a sparkling white smile that could normally make a girl drool..Cahadras was Disgusted at this guy for hitting on her and she soon saw that the guy was wanting her to swim with five other guys..This made her blood boil.
"Why the hell do you think I would just want to swim wit you when I don't even know who the fuck you are soppossed to be.."Cahadras snarled..She glanced over at hiei's direction to see him staring at the guy with murder in his eyes..She wondered what was going through his mind right then..
"OO A tough girl eh?Well that just shows that women are not week..Come on babe how bout it? I can show you a good time."Cahadras looked at the guy like he was an idiot..
"No thanks"
"Come on babe"The guy grabbed Cahadras' arm causing her to yank back out of his grip.
"I said no..what part of that do you not understand?"Cahadras snarled..She noticed Hiei was getting redder in the face and the murder glint in his eye was getting stronger..what was wrong with him?
"Maybe the part where you are saying it to me babe.."The guy went on and went to grab her shoulder again when.
BAM!!! POW!!! CRUNCH!!!
The guy went flying six feet away and into his group af friends..The guys looked over at Cahadras and then ran for it..Cahadras stood there with her fist in the air..She had just punched the guy..But the weird part was..The guy also had his nuts crunched and he was also punched in the lip..Cahadras thoughtthis weird because she only hit the guy in the nose at half power..She turned around to find that Hiei had gotten up and his fist was in the air too and that he was regaining his balance from kicking the guy down below.Cahadras was surprised..Hiei had just helped her..This confused her greatly..hiei still looked as if he was ready to kill but he seemed to be holding back.
"Baka Ningen"Hiei muttered.He trhen sat back down..Cahadras sat back down to and looked at Hiei curiosly.
"Why did you do that"
"hn"
"Fine then don't tell me"
Hiei grunted and turned his back to her..She just shrugged and rolled over herself and muttered.."Baka ningens" She was aiming those words to the guys who were now hitting on a big group of girls..
(Hiei's Pov)
That stupid human..That stupid stupid stupid..human..I outta kill him..Rip Him apart and feed him to the dogs.How dare he make a molve on Cahadras like that..Couldnt he see she wanted him to leave..That baka ningen..he don't deserve life..I should of killed him..I could still kill him..If he was not in so much public..That would be a great thing to see in the news..Especially if I used my demon form..hat guy should know that he shouldn't mess with girls that I happen to li...Waitaminute...what am I saying!!???I don't like her..She is a stupid ugly Bitch..I cant..I wont..I refuse.I take a glance over at Cahadras to see her glancing at me too..I turn my head back..Damn.What is going on with me?? Im not sopposed to act like this.And what is this..IM BLUSHING AGAIN!!!AGH!!! I really need to get to the demon world..soon.AGH!! but I cant..not until lord toddler sets the detective onto another case..I take another glance at cahadras and I notice she has fallin asleep..She is pretty when she sleeps..AGH!! IM DOING IT AGAIN!!This is a really really big problem..
End of chapter 7.
a/n..is it done?yes yes of course it is..and my fingers r killin me!!I hope I made this chapter a little bit longer than the others..I have it planned to male my chapters a whole lot longer or ill just have over 50 chapters to this story..And that would suck.
Hiei~*banging head on wall* why am I going throu this torture? Why couldn't u do a luv fic about Yusuke..Huh?
Cahadras~cuzz..its fun torturing u..you are sooo cute when u do that..*Hiei blushes and walks off*uhh..i said that out loud didn't i? crud.
Review ppl..I fu review enough ill b sure to give u all a lot of cookies!!
*runs off to tell hiei she didn't mean it..*
Yusuke~yea I wished she did a luv fic about me..it would b a good lemon..and sheesh..if she tells hiei that she didn't mean that.damn she lies to much..*goes off to flirt with Keiko*
DANICA~if u r reading this danica then I thank you 4 the review and im glad u like my fic..but like u I am a big fan of Hiei..and also like u I like 2 say dat he is..*looks around makin sure hiei cant here*HIEI IS MINE!!!..yes dats wut I like 2 say too..and also..me?let Hiei go?R U FREAKIN NUTZ!!! NEVA!!! I RESIST!! I WILL NOT!! I REFUSE!!!*goes on and on 4 about 3 more hours*AND I WILL NOT*looks around*uhhh..*sweet drop*ok..well really I am kinda touchy bout dat subject excuse me 4 dat outburst..
And I would like to thank my internet friend Sakura Kitsune 4 sending me a lot of reviews..she gets.*drum roll*ANOTHER Truck Load of sweet snow!!!have fun!!
Now I own no one..makes me feel sad to say it..*sobs*I only own Cahadras cuzz she is a remake of myself..and plz excuse the bad spellin..spellin sux so I don't try to hard to spell correctly..only on names..like Hiei if I misspelled his name id kill myself..not literally ppl so stop tyryin ta make it look as if I misspelled it..*groans of sadness in the crowd*really this crowd sux!!*thowin veggies at me*hey I DIDN'T MEAN IT LIKE DAT!!!
On wit chapter 7!!
Chapter 7: Fun At The Beach...
(Cahadras Pov)
DAMN YOU HIEI!!! DAMN YOU YUSUKE!!!Yusuke for his driving and making me fall on Hiei's lap!! For Hiei for nearly killing me.Oh yea he got a few bumps and bruises too but really he over reacted just a bit when I fell on his lap..I didn't mean too so he didn't hafta blame it on me!!like I really wanted on his lap anyway!!Yusuke had to drive so recklessly..Yea I admit It was fun..Except for falling on Hiei..My ears will neva be the same..As soon as I fell on Him he yelled really really really loud..loud enough to bust an ear drum..And then he punched me off of him yellin at me for landing on his lap..Naturally I punched him back..He had no right to punch me when it was that detectives reckless driving's fault..
Now we are finaly at the dumb beach..i never been to one before so this is new to me..Same with Hiei I think..but I am just going to act like I have been here before..Just like Hiei..we will see who gets in over their head first.Hmm..Me and hiei are sitting down on a few Beach towels..Damn Kurama..Why did he put our towels close to eachother..he is up to something..When he put mine and hiei's towels down he had this big sneaky grin on his face..Im goning to have to have a talk with that Kitsune later..Botan wants me to go swimming with her..But I cant..My head band might fall off..That would be a crisis..Girl with third eye walking around having fun at the beach..I think that is the same reason hiei is still sitting next to me on his beach towel..Hahahaha..Keiko is chasing Yusuke around the place for flirting with all these girls.Pure entertainment I tell you..Kuwabaka and yukina are having a splash fight.Hmmm..Hiei don't seem to llike that very much..I don't blame him..What does yukina see in that baka anyway..I may never find out..Oh poor Kurama.He cant have anyfun cuzz all these girls are chasing him around..Yea he is cute but those girls are rabid..poor guy.Huh? Some one just tapped on my shoulder.Who the heck is this guy..Some Baka ningen..What does this idiot want?
(Author pov)
"Hey Babe..Whats Up?" This teenage guy seem to have pooped up out of no where to cahadras..It quite surprised her..but her suroprise soon turned to anger when she relised this ugly ningen was calling her "Babe".
"..."
"Looks like you don't talk much babe..Well anyway..I was wondering if you would like to go swimming with me and my friends.."The guy gave cahadras a sparkling white smile that could normally make a girl drool..Cahadras was Disgusted at this guy for hitting on her and she soon saw that the guy was wanting her to swim with five other guys..This made her blood boil.
"Why the hell do you think I would just want to swim wit you when I don't even know who the fuck you are soppossed to be.."Cahadras snarled..She glanced over at hiei's direction to see him staring at the guy with murder in his eyes..She wondered what was going through his mind right then..
"OO A tough girl eh?Well that just shows that women are not week..Come on babe how bout it? I can show you a good time."Cahadras looked at the guy like he was an idiot..
"No thanks"
"Come on babe"The guy grabbed Cahadras' arm causing her to yank back out of his grip.
"I said no..what part of that do you not understand?"Cahadras snarled..She noticed Hiei was getting redder in the face and the murder glint in his eye was getting stronger..what was wrong with him?
"Maybe the part where you are saying it to me babe.."The guy went on and went to grab her shoulder again when.
BAM!!! POW!!! CRUNCH!!!
The guy went flying six feet away and into his group af friends..The guys looked over at Cahadras and then ran for it..Cahadras stood there with her fist in the air..She had just punched the guy..But the weird part was..The guy also had his nuts crunched and he was also punched in the lip..Cahadras thoughtthis weird because she only hit the guy in the nose at half power..She turned around to find that Hiei had gotten up and his fist was in the air too and that he was regaining his balance from kicking the guy down below.Cahadras was surprised..Hiei had just helped her..This confused her greatly..hiei still looked as if he was ready to kill but he seemed to be holding back.
"Baka Ningen"Hiei muttered.He trhen sat back down..Cahadras sat back down to and looked at Hiei curiosly.
"Why did you do that"
"hn"
"Fine then don't tell me"
Hiei grunted and turned his back to her..She just shrugged and rolled over herself and muttered.."Baka ningens" She was aiming those words to the guys who were now hitting on a big group of girls..
(Hiei's Pov)
That stupid human..That stupid stupid stupid..human..I outta kill him..Rip Him apart and feed him to the dogs.How dare he make a molve on Cahadras like that..Couldnt he see she wanted him to leave..That baka ningen..he don't deserve life..I should of killed him..I could still kill him..If he was not in so much public..That would be a great thing to see in the news..Especially if I used my demon form..hat guy should know that he shouldn't mess with girls that I happen to li...Waitaminute...what am I saying!!???I don't like her..She is a stupid ugly Bitch..I cant..I wont..I refuse.I take a glance over at Cahadras to see her glancing at me too..I turn my head back..Damn.What is going on with me?? Im not sopposed to act like this.And what is this..IM BLUSHING AGAIN!!!AGH!!! I really need to get to the demon world..soon.AGH!! but I cant..not until lord toddler sets the detective onto another case..I take another glance at cahadras and I notice she has fallin asleep..She is pretty when she sleeps..AGH!! IM DOING IT AGAIN!!This is a really really big problem..
End of chapter 7.
a/n..is it done?yes yes of course it is..and my fingers r killin me!!I hope I made this chapter a little bit longer than the others..I have it planned to male my chapters a whole lot longer or ill just have over 50 chapters to this story..And that would suck.
Hiei~*banging head on wall* why am I going throu this torture? Why couldn't u do a luv fic about Yusuke..Huh?
Cahadras~cuzz..its fun torturing u..you are sooo cute when u do that..*Hiei blushes and walks off*uhh..i said that out loud didn't i? crud.
Review ppl..I fu review enough ill b sure to give u all a lot of cookies!!
*runs off to tell hiei she didn't mean it..*
Yusuke~yea I wished she did a luv fic about me..it would b a good lemon..and sheesh..if she tells hiei that she didn't mean that.damn she lies to much..*goes off to flirt with Keiko*