Author's Note: Hello, I'm oowwww (don't make fun of my name), a huge
Hamtaro fan since the 29th of May, 2003. It took me a while to understand
the things about Hamtaro since I didn't see the first episode, but now
everything's clear. Enough about that, now about my fanfic...
This is part one of The Sheiug Trilogy, a Hamtaro trilogy fanfic I have been working on since July. It's about the secret brother of Spat, Sheiug ( again, don't make fun of the name), who plans to take over a planet only the hamsters of Earth know about and eliminate anyone who dares try to stop him and his brother, Spat. The story focuses on action and adventure, but in the 2nd and 3rd parts of the trilogy, there will be glimpses of romance.
Overall, this is my very first Hamtaro fanfic that I have been trying my best to be very neat and emotional. So after you read each chapter, review and tell me what I can do to improve the story in any way. Don't worry, I won't get mad. Just a bit disappointed.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the familiar Ham-Hams in this story, but I own Sheiug, Hale, and other new characters you will meet in the other parts of the trilogy.
Chapter 1: The Door
[Somewhere in the undergrounds of a dark planet...]
..there was a dark room. A table and chair were set in the middle, there were cabinets near the grey walls, the ground was rock-hard, and the ceiling circulated the room, which had 4 baby hamsters in the design: a white one with a wand, a grey one with blue and shining eyes, a black one who for some reason was entirely black (even the clothes, which were hard to see since they blended into the dark hamster) and had red glowing eyes, and baby Spat, all carried by what looked like their mother and father.
On the chair of the table in the middle of the room, Spat was sitting, looking at his watch with a happy face. "Oh boy, one more minute until my 1st birthday!" he said happily. He then turned to look at a door that appeared to be locked. "Soon, I will find out what is behind that door. I remember my mother saying that on the midnight of my 1st birthday, that door will be unlocked and I will find something special! (gasps) 45 MORE SECONDS! Oh time is already going fast for me! (40 seconds) Spat then started sweating as he looked at the door, wondering what was behind it. He couldn't wait much longer. Good thing he got at least a little bit of patience for there were then 5 more seconds....4 more...3....2....1....beep beep. beep beep.
"YES! The wait is over!" Then when the watch stopped beeping after a few seconds, the door started shaking. Soon it opened inward. Spat was then shivering cold, for freezing fog came out. "Wh...whhyy...isss..ii..it..sssooo..c-c-coolllddd?" He then went inside the room...and what he saw shocked him...
Cliffhangers...don't you just hate them? Don't worry, chapter 2 will be in soon...that is, if I find reviews.
This is part one of The Sheiug Trilogy, a Hamtaro trilogy fanfic I have been working on since July. It's about the secret brother of Spat, Sheiug ( again, don't make fun of the name), who plans to take over a planet only the hamsters of Earth know about and eliminate anyone who dares try to stop him and his brother, Spat. The story focuses on action and adventure, but in the 2nd and 3rd parts of the trilogy, there will be glimpses of romance.
Overall, this is my very first Hamtaro fanfic that I have been trying my best to be very neat and emotional. So after you read each chapter, review and tell me what I can do to improve the story in any way. Don't worry, I won't get mad. Just a bit disappointed.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the familiar Ham-Hams in this story, but I own Sheiug, Hale, and other new characters you will meet in the other parts of the trilogy.
Chapter 1: The Door
[Somewhere in the undergrounds of a dark planet...]
..there was a dark room. A table and chair were set in the middle, there were cabinets near the grey walls, the ground was rock-hard, and the ceiling circulated the room, which had 4 baby hamsters in the design: a white one with a wand, a grey one with blue and shining eyes, a black one who for some reason was entirely black (even the clothes, which were hard to see since they blended into the dark hamster) and had red glowing eyes, and baby Spat, all carried by what looked like their mother and father.
On the chair of the table in the middle of the room, Spat was sitting, looking at his watch with a happy face. "Oh boy, one more minute until my 1st birthday!" he said happily. He then turned to look at a door that appeared to be locked. "Soon, I will find out what is behind that door. I remember my mother saying that on the midnight of my 1st birthday, that door will be unlocked and I will find something special! (gasps) 45 MORE SECONDS! Oh time is already going fast for me! (40 seconds) Spat then started sweating as he looked at the door, wondering what was behind it. He couldn't wait much longer. Good thing he got at least a little bit of patience for there were then 5 more seconds....4 more...3....2....1....beep beep. beep beep.
"YES! The wait is over!" Then when the watch stopped beeping after a few seconds, the door started shaking. Soon it opened inward. Spat was then shivering cold, for freezing fog came out. "Wh...whhyy...isss..ii..it..sssooo..c-c-coolllddd?" He then went inside the room...and what he saw shocked him...
Cliffhangers...don't you just hate them? Don't worry, chapter 2 will be in soon...that is, if I find reviews.