THE LOST SOULS STORY ARC

Changes have been made to There Will Come Soft Rain, The Encounter of Lost Souls, The Parting of Lost Souls, and The Descent of Lost Souls. This was done due to the following reasons:

Simplified the sentences, in efforts to make it flow more smoothly. Worked on Emrys' Mary-Sueness The manga series is over, and the way it ends changes the course of where I want my story arc to go. It is my intention to make it as an adventure along the lines where the manga would go, just like I wanted to in the beginning

As a result, the following happened to the three stories:

Expect more conflict and interaction between the characters Expect that the story will make you think more as to why a character would act or say things in a certain way Expect that the story changed a little - believe me, it's for the best.

If you're interested in knowing these changes, I invite you to read the story at your convenience and constructively let me know...

If the shorter sentences and "smoother" writing style is better OR do you like my old way of writing (which others have noted as "flowery") If the character interaction is better than before If the Mary Sue issue is taken care of

Thanks a lot for your patience, as well as your support.

Luv lots, Zatken