Disclaimer: InuYasha is not mine…THER I said it!!
REVIEW ANSWERS GALORE!! YAAAAY!!
Yoake
thank you so much for undating. I was just dying to read more and now im dying for you to undate again although I know it wouldn't be fair to ask you to so soon. Just please so as soon as you can. I know what you mean about writer's block. I'm having one of my own with Yashato but others are popping in my head left and right. check them out if you get the time. sore ja
I read part of your story, it looks like it has some major potential!!! This chapter was writtin at the peak of my writers block- so it aint all at.
btRkun
WOW! This story is the best I've read in a LONG time! Please write more VERY soon!
Sorry I took so long to update!! And this story- to me- is loosing edge, so Ima wrap it up asap!
Crazyinulover
OK
very good so far :P Please finish soon for the sake of
all short attention spans ( namly me)
OOH YEAH- DEFINATLY need to finish it!! Starting to get on my nerves, damn writers block.
Rei Woo
I really am beginning to become quite fond of this story. YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT OR I'LL BE VERY PISSED! PLEASE! I luv it!
Of COURSE I'm going to finish it!! I love this story! Just don't like writing it while having a MENTAL BLOCK over my CREATIVITY!!
kagie-chan
i love your story so much, and i have been dying for more! and now i'm dying for even more! but i don't get it, what's up with him having to kill people or drive them away? and why is he doing it to Kagome now? well, hurry back with more! ja ne!
You'll get it soon enough- just a hint, he doesn't 'literally' kill them. Thanx for reading my fic!!
tesuka- chan
*is
confused* so let me get this straight. Inuyasha's
sort of under Kikyou but he has some sort of 'power'
anyway because of his popularity, Kagome's rich and is very horny even though
she's a virgin, and rin - Wha-?
I don't get the thing about rin. So does that mean
Kagome's related to Kikyou or something? *scratches head* Erk. ;p
Anyway, I like the direction this story is going. ^_^ It's really very unusual
and interesting. Though i guess it's kind of
inappropriate to use 'bitch' against guys. hehehe. ^_^
Anyway, update soon! I'll be looking forward to it! Ja! ;P
Its beyond weird! I don't even get where I'm goiung with this (sometimes) Inu works for Kikyou's family. He is Kikyou's personal servent. He is one of the most popular guys at school because he is (1) Rich (2) cute and (3) sexy ( I don't care if you want to categorize 'cute' and 'sexy' as one, its totrally different to me! J ) As for Kag- hey its ,my sick mind at work here- I've read one too many lemons!! And as for guys to be bitches, umm…I dunno ??
sakurachick03
keep on writing!!this
is getting really juicey
i absoutlutel love it. i liked i
when you made kagome get a little naughty, that was funi
I like making 'my' characters do things they wouldn't normally do. That's why I love AU's
Hikari
mhp.so many reviews.how does she do it. must not be envious.must not.. screw it! Just kidding, it's a great story, inu yasha's such a hottie! write soon!
I dunno, its thanx to cool people like you who review my story… but really- my secret is …… Whisper………mumble…AND………So that's i- hope its helpful!!
Chellek
What are you- Sadistic?! That was THE worst cliff hanger in IY history. PLEASE give me some more. By the way *compleate attitude change*, I was wondering how you were going to get Rin in there. Is she still Fluffy's lil' shadow? I appreciate that you upload so often. Ta ta for now ^_^v
MUUUAHAHAHAHA!!! Cliffhangers are me SPECIALTY!!!! Rin? Hmm- she's more independent in this fic- but she's still clingy.
P1
sorry about writers block but, i have a complaint to make about my scoring with the quiz! First of all for 9, he never specifically acknowledged A or C, the only one that was openly thought out was B. So sorry, your form of writing wasn't very clear on that. I put 1 am on my answer for 19, I didn't forget that, I did not put 10, ever! I spelled Sango's last name right, I checked the chapter later. So how did I get 9! questions wrong! I will not stand for this. Thanx for acknoleding me though, I hardly ever get acknoledged. I'm afraid I know why too, tough/sucks to be me.
You dot NUMBER 9 wrong!!! I didn't say you got 9 questions wrong! And for that one- you have to think outside the book. And it was semi mentioned later on- just not at that specific time that he saw her. I tyr to answer MOST of my reviewers!! Especially if they have a question.
Lenkia
I
said it before I'll say it again..I
loved Chapter 10 can't wait to read the next one and does Inu-chan
actually do it with Ka-chan?
My guess yes very passionately
ja ne
They will get to it sooner or later ( more likely sooner!)
Kawaii-Chi
yay!! i hope da next chappi com up soon! so lemme guess, rin was inuz ex-prey and den rin talkz to kag bout inu and inu findz
out he relly likez kag and all messed up stuff happenz?
ah, i hope so ^.- well gtg.ja!
Love Always
Chi
xoxo
REEEEALLY close!!! VERY good guess though!
Saro
Writer's
Block it a bitch. It happens to the best. And worst, the only way to get
through writer's block, guarenteed, is to write. It's
a cruel, cruel, ironic world.
I like this chapter. Very interesting, and a little dirty. Can't wait to see
what happens next.
Update soon.
They cruel irony of it all, *sigh* ohj well- this chappie was writtin at the PEAK of my block, oh well.
azureqt
i find this storyline inticing. it has a very "cruel intentions" type appeal. lol. i like the twist on the characters but i find kagome very moody. first she's timid about being so close to inuyasha then she goes all vampy. then she flips and becomes naive and thoughtful. just what is her true personality? also, why was kagome wearing a bathrobe over her clothes in inuyasha's room and why was she planning on taking a bath in his bathroom in the first place? thie is the only part of the story that's confusing. i thought she wanted to check on inuyasha, not take a bath?!
You are SOO right about that, I'll try to make up an excuse for it in the story ( heh) Its fun with her being like that though- you gotta admit!! And she was going to take a bath, but she heard something in the room ,so she just threw on the robe so she could carry it with her to the b.r at the same time.
Hana Song
You like boa?!! me too! She's realli popular in korea rai now.last time i went there.shes was the biggest thing. well good story..YOU GOTTA KEEP ON GOING!! soo ogod
BoA's songs are THE SHIT!! They are really nice- I ove how she sings in japanese, and Valenti, Amazing Kiss, and Sara are thre of my most fav's!! Not to mentin Every Heart- 4th Inu ending. That song introduced me to BoA!
Kaoru Himura
Oh
My God ! what a cliffanger! sorry for nort reviewing the other chapters , I started reading and I
was so hooked that I wanted to read as much as I could non-stop., so here is my
review or the whole story so far. In short: I LOVE IT!really it is very good, romantic ( inu's way though) hot ( heehee
*grins*)and very very original and interesting ! And
a bonus , long chappies!
I've noticed that usually in IY stories each chap is quite short ( dont know why)but yours is
different and I LOVE IT! ( I already said that ,
didn't I?)
so please update soon!( that "Inu.Ya.sha?"
at the end iskilling me!)=
wanna know what happens next
see ya!
Kaoru!
Its ok- I'm not a review fiend ( that's a lie) I try to write as much as I can until I get tired. I see you like Kenshin huh. Well…just to let you know…YOU CAN"T HAVE BATOUSAI AND INU AT THE SAME TIME! Wanna know why, cuz their mine!! And so is Hayama, and Tamahome, and Kurama and Zoro, and Sunkist, and, Heero, and …
Spikesfangirl (asukastwin@yahoo.com)
That's your writing with Writers block! That was amazing! *Dances* Love this story. Very unique, and the characters are well portrayed to the characters in the Anime-- but still have a hint of your writing style in them, that's good though. Excellent!!
Its KILLING ME!!! Thank you for reading, hope you like this crappy, um I mean- well thought out chapter as well!
Lyn/Lin
love it
update soon
please!
and wow.that was the best
chapter in a long time.cause the others weren't
really real.
^-^
ja ne
-Lyn
What you mean by 'not real'? I don't understand, explain it to meee~eeee.
tamababymiko-chan
Oh
my gosh! That description of Inuyasha
made me drool. He is so sexy. Oh, I can't stand it! Yes, this was a good
chapter. Don't put yourself down for being in a writer's block. It isn't your
fault! Update soon!
Tamababymiko_chan
Tama-chan!! Of course- I hope I did InuYasha some justice with that description!
BIG THANX TO EVERYONE ELSE WHO REVIEWED!! I REALLY APPRICIATE ALL THE ENCOURAGEMENT!!!
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"Rin… Is that you?" InuYasha stood up in a state of shock. He didn't want to believe it. She was standing there right in front of him, he thought he had…he had…'gotten rid' of her, or at least that Sessy did it. The girl in front of him bowed her head meekly and answered with a simple 'hai'.
"Rin? WHY are you here!! You KNOW Sesshoumaru won't like it!!"
"I KNOW" she suddenly yelled. InuYasha shut his mouth to let her continue. " I know, I know…"
"KNOW WHAT!!"
"INUYASHA!!" Kagome screamed "Stop yelling at her!!"
"I can yell as much as I damn well want to bitch!!" he growled. Kagome stormed over to him, completely forgetting the young girl next to her and grabbed Inuyasha by one of the locks of his hair, falling down the side of his face.
"Listen you." She said in a relatively calm voice " I haven't seen my cousin in years, and I am NOT about to have you run her off like this." After hearing her words, InuYasha's face was void of emotions.
"Cousin? Did you say you two are cousins?" He said each word carefully, as if he were still trying to soak in.
The music blasted in the background as Kagome both tried to figure out his actions.
Rin already knew what he was thinking, she turned to Kagome. " Hey Kag? Lets go get something to eat, I'm starved!!" she grabbed Kagome by the hand and dragged her inside. Kagome couldn't help but look back at InuYasha. He was standing at the edge of the pool looking out into space. And she had no clue what he could be thinking about.
Meanwhile, Rin was lost in her own thoughts.
Two Akumas', two Shikon's and a Higurashi under one roof. This is what I call bad.
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"AHHHH PERVERT!!"
And audible smack was heard throughout the house for the tenth time that half and hour.
"Here Rin" Kagome led Rin through the crowd of girls that seemed to be surrounding someone. " This would be Miroku. You know… the lech I have been telling you about?" Rin looked down on the floor at the boy whose face was covered with bright red handprints. Miroku perked up as soon as he saw Kagome.
"AH, Kagome-sama, I didn't know you talked about me. Have you told her of my lovely offer?" he turned to Rin with hopeful eyes. "Its free and has benefits."
"Only for you! Your perv.!!" And elbow came from nowhere and knocked Miroku on the head. Its owner sighed.
"And this is Sango. The Miroku exterminator/ babysitter." Ksgome said happily.
Sango balled her fists and waved them in front of Kagome's face. "Oi! You wanna repeat that!!" Kagome laughed while Miroku snuck away. Sango realized he was gone and went after him quickly, before he could cause more damage.
Mainly to himself.
"Rin? How do you know Inuyasha?"
Rin bit her lip. She knew the question was coming, but she didn't figure out how to answer it yet She didn't want to lie to her cousin, especially since she hasn't seen her in over a year, so she decided to tell the truth, well, some of the truth.
" I met him through his brother. And I met his brother at school. The school your going to actually. I met him first year."
Kagome raised her eyebrow. " You mean Sess?"
"And who are you to dare call this Sesshoumaru by that wretched pet name?" a dark voice piped in from behind them. They both turned around to find, who else, but Sesshoumaru behind them.
"SESSHOUMARU- SAMA!!!!" Rin screeched and wrapped herself on his arm.
"Rin, what are you doing here." He asked in a commanding voice, obviously he's the type that was used to getting what he wants.
"I missed you Sesshoumaru – sama!" Rin said excitedly as she tried to keep her hold on him. Meanwhile, he was trying to pry her off of his arm so he could breathe.
"Rin, get off of me." He commanded her. She didn't bother to listen and started to hum happily to herself. Kagome watched in awe as Sesshoumaru's features softened a bit as he looked at the girl on his arm. She swore she even saw the corner of his lips go up ever- so- slightly.
"Rin, please get off, we'll talk in a little while." His voice had a hint of emotion in it, Kagome couldn't quite place what it was, but it was there. She smiled as her cousin released his arm and grabbed his hand to drag him away, however he stood his ground. Kagome noticed he was looking at something over he shoulders, so she looked beind her. It was InuYasha. Not only that. It was InuYasha AND Kikyou. Kagome couldn't help but be disturbed at the scene in front of her. They were dancing while having a conversation, and the crowd of people pushed them closer and closer to where Kagome and Rin were standing. When they were less than 6 feet away, Kikyou caught her glare and smiled a catty smile. She moved even closer to InuYasha, and Kagome noted that he didn't take the liberty of moving back. In fact, he moved closer himself. She began to push herself on him and bring her hands up to place it on his chest. Kikyou grabbed InuYasha's shirt collar to pull him down to her eyelevel, and with a final glare shot in Kagome's direction, she kissed him. InuYasha stopped moving. He didn't kiss her back.When she let him go, he didn't even look up at her, he automatically turned around to look behind him and saw who he hoped he wouldn't see.
The tension in the air was abnormal. The group of teenagers was looking at everything else in the room except each other.
Two Akuma's, Two Shikon's and a Higurashi.
Now Kagome knew what the tension was about. It wasn't all about the little show Kikyou put on, she wasn't phased at all by it. She knew she did it on purpose. Plus InuYasha didn't kiss her back. That was a good sign…right?
Sesshoumaru was the one to break the silence.
"InuYasha, pass me the black book please." He said politely, yet in an authorative voice.
InuYasha shrugged. " It's in my room, help yourself." Instantly Sesshoumaru turned around and walked off the scene. Rin hesitated and looked between Kagome, InuYasha and Kikyou, then at Sesshoumaru's retreating back, then opted for the safest place.
Whit Sessy.
"OI!! MATTE SESSY -CHAN!!" Rin shouted.
The music stopped and the entire room stared at where Sesshoumaru's after image was, he had been gone in a second.
Rin run to catch up to him, and went around the corner to the corridor. Everyone shrugged and went along their merry way, singing and dancing as if not a thing happened. Kagome still didn't feel comfortable with all the tension in the air. She saw InuYasha fidgeting under Kikyou's scrutinizing glare. Kagome was about to take this chance to slink away, but Kikyou caught her.
"So, are you enjoying the party Kagome?"
Kagome faltered under her look, she noticed that InuYasha was relieved that he finally got a break.
"Yeah" she stammered she never really had anything so say to her. If she did, she would actually take the liberty to talk with her, but that idea never ever floated across her mind
"Oh, well that's simply wonderful. I'm surprised I was the only one that didn't know about the party" she said as she stared accusingly at InuYasha. "Everyone was gone when I left the arena"
"Hey! I didn't set this up! Miroku did." He said, trying to defend himself.
She turned to him and poked him in the chest.
"Well, you could have CALLED me!!"
"WHAT!! Why would I ! You live not even a half a block away and I have to CALL you? You can HEAR it from there!!" Kagome took this as her que to leave and she went back outside to look up at the stars.
Stars have a simple life, they are soo lucky. They are carefree, they don't need to learn or go to school, they just sit there and shine.
"Beautiful aren't' they?" InuYasha said as he went to sit down on his chair. "They are lucky, don't have to go to school, worry about grades, or ex. Girlfriends. The stars, they are really lucky."
Kagome gaped at him, he just said exactly what she was thinking. That was surprising enough, but it came from InuYasha's mouth!! She didn't think he was the romantic type, playa playa status…yes, but not romantic! He looked over at her.
'What, find it funny that I would say something like that huh? Well, its true, but I think we all are like them in a way."
Sparking her interest, Kagome rolled off her chair and sat on the edge of his by hr thigh, her back towards the pool so that she could look at his face.
"Well" she said impatiently "continue."
He looked into her eyes as he spoke. " Each of them want to be the brightest one, they want to stand out above the rest. They shine and shine until they can't anymore." His voice was dropping with each word, and Kagome had to move closer so she could hear him properly. " They burn out, they eventually die, just like normal humans. But they have something to live for, even if it is rough and its hard to achieve."
By now his vouce was barley a whisper and her cheek was pressed against his, so that her ear was right by his mouth.
"Death?" she whispered
"Are you afraid to die Kag?" he asked
"I'm terrified." Her reply was shaky
He took a deep breath " What If it was for a good cause?"
She moved to look him in the eye. "Depends, I'd die willingly for my family."
He took in another deep breathy " What if… what if I killed you?" his face was serious. NO emotions at all, and she couldn't tell what was going on behind his shades.
"She smiled, Id forgive you of course." She teased
He wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her on top of him so that she laid flat on top of him, with her legs straddling his left leg.
"Kag, seriously"
Her eyes grew wide as she pondered the question; her noise was brushing against his and her lips quivered from the close proximity.
"Id… probably..forgive you." Her mind was ragging, she couldn't explain it at all. Had she always felt this way around him? No, she hadn't, he was just another boy to her.
"What if I 'killed' you and you lived through it? He murmured. He shook his head when she shot him a questioning look.
"Never mind...........Kagome" he closed the millimeters between his lips and hers to kiss her lightly.
"You said my name." she murmured against his lips. The kiss had been tender, unlike the ones they shared previously. She kept her eyes closed and he kissed her again, this time lightly nibbling on her bottom lip. He licked her lips and she parted her mouth to invite it in. His tongue played with hers, once again not as passionately as they had previously, but more gently with more feeling than just utter desire. Kagome was breathless when she drew back.
He smiled up at her. " Ka-go-me" it's a beautiful name, guess I should use it more often." She blushed at his remark and he brought her head down to kiss her again.
Her lips are so sweet; I want to taste more of her.
With that thought the kiss grew deeper as he probed her mouth with his tongue. Kagome could barley believe the feeling he awoke in her, and all he was doing was kissing her! He was demanding as his own tongue retreated into his mouth and he broke the kiss, before they could fully pull apart he gave her a peck on the lips, then the corner of her mouth, down her jaw to her collarbone. He nearly lost it when she moaned.
In one swift movement he flipped her over so she was on the bottom. His right leg was bent and his knee was flush against her thigh. His other leg was over the side of the chair- his foot on the ground to brace himself. She wrapped her arms around his neck and buried her face in his chest.
"InuYasha, you have an unusual name- matches your personality though. Inu!"
He nudged her neck with his nose and chuckled. " Woof!"
" Animal!" she lightly pushed him, and responded with a growl. "InuYasha, how do you know Rin?"
"One of my old aquanitances. She was more interested in Sessy though, I felt used" Kagome laughed at this and he pouted.
"Not funny, anyway, she was in my 'Big Black Book' of females, so I got to know her, and then I took her out."
Kagome cocked her head and he rushed to fill in the sentence.
" Um… to dinner, I had to take her out to dinner, as a… um… request from Sessy. Don't tell him I told you, and don't mention it to Rin either ok?"
She giggled. " Your, amusing. Earlier I heard you say that Kikyou lives ' not even a stone throw away'. Is that true?"
" You ask a lot of questions." Came his reply. " Yes, I live on the Shikon compound. We own the house, but not the land it is on."
Kagome looked thoughtful. " I see, so your family works for hers, no wonder your always miserable."
InuYasha looked like he was in shock. " W-w-who told YOU that! I didn't say that." Damn this bitch is sharp.
She smiled up at him and all thoughts of following up on his rebound disappeared. How does she affect me like this? It has gone to far, its just as bad that she is a Higurashi, if she has both bloods running through her, then the prediction will come true. Sessy would hate me if I was the one to do it, for all the most powerfull politicians to join into one political/business group.Rin Shikon, that girl, why is she here? I thought Sesshoumaru 'terminated' her. But that's not even it. If Rin is Kag's cousin… then! Masaka!! Kikyou is, she is…
"InuYasha, you know trhat scene that Kikyou put on was not impressive." She gave hiom a flat look and he shrugged. You didn'[t even try to move away."
"What can I say, I'm a guy. I like female bodies pressed against me, the reactions happen on their own."
She rolled her eyes and leaned into him more. She coyld tell he was smiling.
"Ah, yeah- just like that baby." She snorted at her new pet name.
"InuYasha?" she mumbled against his chest. " Your eyes…"
He froze, then calmly asked her what she meant.
"Only Akumas have that eye color- right?"
"What are you talking about Kagome." He hated his eyes, he hated his hair, he hated his bloodline, it's all because of that why he had to suffer under Kikyou's wrath. And his mom had to suffer because of one jealous Shikon father. He was the reason why his father had to…
"Can I see them?" InuYasha was shaken, once again, from his thoughts. "Can I see your eyes" she repeated. He said nothing and she took the liberty to reach up to snatch off the shades, when flouracent light streamed through the open screen door blinding her for a while. It took a while for her pupils to dilate and when she was finally accustomed to the light she heard a voice hovering over her.
"Well, don't you two look cozy."
SEDUCE ME CHAPTER NINE: Two, Two, One
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SORRY I TOOK SO LONG!!
At least it was UNDER a month this time!!
Thank you everyone for reviewing!!! This story should be wrapped up in the MAXIMUM of 3 chapters!!
THANX