Disclaimer: I don't own it, jut twist it to my own sadistic liking!! Heh, heh,
A/N: Well, I'm back!! And I even got some review responses for ya!!
Chibi Kitsune
UPDATE SOON! Cuzz you left all of us hanging on a cliff! ^_^ It didn't have much of a conflict, well the conflict wasn't quite revealed until just now... But it's REALLY GOOD.
Don't you just love stories with mo plot/ conflict/ setting/ or characterization?? Its so…crappy/. My story is crappy? *sniff* Your so mean!!!
RiverStar
Kagome? I hope Inu gets there in time. And the confusion with the feelings, oh lord. Gotta love romatically complicated situations, huh? And I absolutely despise Kikyo and her bitchiness, hate her so much, she needs die. I am strictly Inu/Kag, I love them to pieces. Update soon, can't wait to see what happens ^-^ and if you have time, check out my fics. Ja!
Ooh, you probably wanted to kill me after you read the irat chapter huh…sorry. That one chapter really deceived people SORRY MINNA – SAN!!
Tsukikage
this is good! srry, I am just tuning in to the story.
I have a question...
how did Kikyou get the people in black there so fast? I know she has connections and all but Inuyasha's house is pretty much in the boonies compared to where everything else is.
You'll see, but you got it right when you said connections.
atlas-86
Wow. Okay, I have to admit that I'm VERY confused right now. After reading the whole thing up to the latest chapter (curiosity killed...) I just don't get it. What are all the connections? This is more complicated than anything I have read before. Please PLEASE email me to let me know how everything is connected. *sigh* I have a headache... I am very interested in the story however, and it just got on my favs. list! Update soon!
I LIVE to confuse my readers, if yall don't understand by the end of the story I give yall all the right to revoke my creative writing permit!! Kay!!
narXie-marie
okay it is now 1 o'clock in the morning and i find myself screaming at this stupid computer because it doesn't hold another chapter. soo please end the frustration and continue with the story. bye-now
Well, your going to be screaming for a while, cuz your still gonna have to wait for a next chapter!! But enjoy this one while your at it!
Jasmine (Jvirgo90@aol.com) 2003
this is the best one i read so far. but you need to (really need to (flame in eyes) write some more) well write ya later.
…Um…don't hurt me??
jessie K-I
KILL YOU@\!! oh don't worry I wont kill you just strangel you!! I'm intotal shock! My eye's are killing me because my eyes have been glued to your fucking stoy!!(that good) how could you leave us on a cliff hanger like that!! *Screams bloody murder!!*
Well at least that bitch kikyo got punched! I was wondering when she would get her ass kicked!!I'm a kikyo hater! in my Ask The Gang I kill her! Love the story by the way!! One minute I'm laughing and the next I'm in total shock!! HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY! DO YOU KNOW IT'S 1:OOAM HERE!! THANK GOD I ANT GOT SCHOOL!
Don't miss out on your sleep cuz of me, I wouldn'tr do it for yall, trust me!! If I was at the last sentence and I was tired I would sleep, sorry. Heh.
Tinuviel
Who gives a fuck if this chapter was incomplete? It was long and DAMN good. You've put so many interesting twists i this story, you really are gifted. besides you left it at a very good cliffhanger spot. Continue, onegai!
Ja ne, Anime Angel-san!
Thank you. I think it was a bit short though. Thanx for reviewing by the way. Enjoy!!
Tamababymiko-chan
Wow... not much to say except wow. I hope Kagome's gonna be ok. And I can't belive that she can't trust Inuyasha. And what about her mom? Update soon!
Tamababymiko-chan
Yeah, she'll live…I think. Heh.
Step of Faith
update update update fast! i need more than this. i'm chewing the tip of my nails!is inu going to save her or is he just going to abandon her? who was trying to get her in the van? was it kikyo? why did inuyasha have to do that for? i know he loves her
Don't do that, then your gonna have to pay to get a manicure cuz you messed up you nails, what you gonna say to them? Oh, I was reading thins fanfic and, well, you know. Any hoo, most of those questions are answered in todays new episode. Wow, now I sound like an announcer.
x-Bandet-x
aight, love the fic, love the new chap. update soon. thats all i have to say. except that everybodies lucky that i'm being so calm, not ranting and raveing bought how LONG it took you to update and how the people in my head have been SCEAMING that they just HAVE to read the rest soon. they give me the WORST headaches sometime. so i'm not going to get in the fact about how many times i checked my 'Favorite Stories' just waiting for an update, or how many concussions i got from banging my head against the keyboard when the fic hasn't been updated. NO i'll just say i liked the fic, and NO i do NOT feel homicidal. if i do ANY thing rash...it's the monkeys' fault. =^-^=
Lol, sure, blame it on the monkey!! What did HE ever do to you?? Thank you so much, I appreciated how much you guys inspire me, some in calm ways, some in angry shouts and threats, but it works any which way you dish it.
fallen pheniox 2003-06-14 16 Signed
damn that was SHORT! How could you just end it there?! Please update this soon, it's getting really interesting again, not ot mention I want to kill Kikyo. Using Inuyasha like that... but who just kidnapped Kagome? I can't wait for the rest of this chapter, it took so long for an update, I hope the next update is faster, and that everything will turn out ok, like Inuyasha saving Kagome and soon, =D lol. That was a sad ending though... and Kikyo is just making everything so confusing and worse, especially on Kagome who's in love with Inuyasha. But I feel sorry for Inuyasha cause he's stuck in the middle! How could you torture him so?! =P Well, great story so far, hope for a fast update, and good luck with the rest of this story. Later!
It FUN to tourture Inu, but I won't do it too much, I luv him too!
two*different*people 2003-06-14 16 Signed
Kinza: wow. i luv this story!
Tinza: who couldn't?
Kinza: well - -
Tinza: okay. plz don't start THAT again.
Kinza: fine. it was a simply question you asked and I WAS going to answer it for you.
Tinza: ANYWHO! post soon!
Kinza: yes and could you tell us the japanese word for summer, moon, cloud and quiet? plz and thank you! laterz!
Hi Twiddle- dee and Twiddle – dum
summer: natsu
moon:?
cloud: kumo
quiet: kaniaku
I know, I'm probably late, but I'll give them to you anyway.
AND NOW, DEATH THREATS FROM MY NOTICE!!!
lil diva star
JUST WHEN R U PLANNING 2 FUNKIN UPDATE! WHERE DO U GO OFF AND DECIDE UR NOT GOING TO UPDATE!YOU HAVE ONE HELL OF A STORY AND YOUR NOT UPDATING WHATS UP WIT THAT! MY PATIENTS IS RUNNIG LITTLE HERE!!ALLS I KNOW IS YOU BETTER HAVE A SHIT LOAD OF CHAPTERS BEFORE SUUMER'S OVER!~SORRY FOR BEING RUDE~
hot_anime_babe 2003-06-08 15 Anonymous
I DO NOT CARE IF YOUR FUCKIN COMPUTER AINT WORKIN YA HEARD! GO AND STAY AT YOUR FREND'S HOUSE FOR AS LONG AS YOU CAN AND TYPE THERE, OK?!! OR ANY WHERE ELSE FOR THAT MATTER JUST SOME HOW BE ABLE TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS A SOON AS POSSIBLE.IM SORRY IF IM BEING MEAN BUT I CANT HELP IT IF YOUR STORY'S SO GREAT.IM NOT A VERY PATIENT PERSON SO DO ANYTHING POSSIBLE TO UPDATE OR EVEN BETTER GET SOME ONE TA FIX YOUR COMPUTER.THERE ARE ONLY SO MANY GOOD FANFICS ON THIS SITE AND YOURS IS ONE OF THEM.SOO PLEASE FOR MY SAKE AND OTHERS TRY TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE SORRY FOR BEING RUDE
~Zehra~
Inu-Angel
Please update soon. I've been patiently waiting but my patience is wearing thin. You don't want to be around when it's gone. Oh well. Just update as soon as possible, OK? C'ya IA :)
lil diva aka sunshine star
JESUS TAP DANCING CHRIST WHEN R U GOING TO FUCKIN UPDATE! I KNOW YOUR COMPUTER IS DOWN IN ALL BUT SHIT YOUR ASS COULD HAVE CALLED AN COPUTER EXPERT. LISTEN SUMMER IS ABOUT 2 WEEKS FROM NOW (for me at least) AND I PLANNED ON READING YOUR STORY(its a great fic)I HOPE YOUR ASS IS NOT PLANNING ON UPDATING FOR THE NEXT 3MONTHS OFF BEFORE SCHOOL STARTS ALL I KNOW IS U BETTER HAVE A SHIT LOAD OF CHAPTERS B4 THIS SUMMERS END! :long sigh: please forgive my rudeness back there but not getting to read a new chapter of your favorite fanfic 4 while ...it gets pretty frustrating espeacially whhen its left at a wild cliff hanger...ur an evil bitch i hope u know that :hehe: ^_^ ^_- XD
THE YELLING, THE SCREAMING…THE HEADACHES JUST LOOKING AT IT!! I FEEL SO HURT… WELL YA GOT A NEW CHAPTER SO SUCK IT UP AND DEAL WITH THE MOUNTING FRUSTRATION!! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*ON WIT DA FIC~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
The van was musty and damp. A single light fixture was sloppily attached to the roof, the string, blackened with dirt and grime over the years swung like a pendulum in front of her face, occasionally hitting her on her nose, once going in her mouth. The men with the ski masks on were careful not to say anything important around her. She was up against the cold steel frame of the van and the boxes of miscellaneous items were scraping up against her shin bone. It was irritating her to no end, she would have complained by now, but who's going to listen to the grunts of a captive who's bound and gagged?
She listened to the two men talk. She had dubbed them man one and man two. Man one was the driver, so he barely talked, but man two was a motor mouth. He had a familiar voice, but she couldn't determine who it was exactly. She started to fidget and man two looked at her.
"Hey, stop moving." She glared at him and moved more.
"I said stop woman." He said, punctuating his sentence with a slap to her face.
She worked on spitting out the gag. When he realized that's what she was doing he shrugged his shoulders and untied the gag.
As the knot came untied and the rag slowly slipped out of her mouth she took a deep breath …
"You sonnova bitch, you don't waste time assaulting a girl. There was a freaking cockroach on the floor, I didn't want it on me. When I get loose, I'm going to show InuYasha this mark and he'll kick the crap out of you. Ya know what- screw it, I'LL kick the crap out of you…messing wit peoples face like that- that's disrespect. Don't ever touch a woman's face, you jerk. Jerk, jerk, jerk, je..."
He quickly replaced the gag in an attempt to shut her up, but she spit it out before he could tie it.
"OH NO YOU DON'T. YOU are NOT gagging me again. I don't know how many mouths that has been in!! Ewww! That's soo gross."
"SHUT UP!! Damn, you seemed like the type that would be cowering in fear by now, cry why don't ya!"
Kagome rolled her eyes "Boo, hoo. I'm crying like a little sissy girl. OW!!"
She held her cheek as the stinging pain spread through her face.
" Bitch"
Now Kagome felt like crying. What are they going to do with me? Where am I going? Will InuYasha recue me? Why does it smell like armpits and feet in here?
As she continued her trail of thought the man watched her with hungry eyes. When she caught his stare her face twisted into a scowl.
"What the hell are you looking at you moron." His head snapped around to stare out the window, and Kagome sighed.
InuYasha…is he still upset with me? Will he come after me? Or did he set this up in the first place?
Her brows knitted at that last thought.
InuYasha. InuYasha. InuYasha… that's all I can think about nowadays. His name is like a mantra in my head. I should be worried about my safety right now, but all I could think about is weather he's still upset with me. Twice today did I question my trust in him. I would be furious if I were him.
"Hey boss, what are we going to do with her?" Kagome looked up at the man beside her, curious as to what the quiet driver would say.
The man driving the vehicle said nothing.
"Hey, the icicle lady said we could do whatever we wanted with her remember!!" Man two looked at her again, a vicious smile spread across his face, visible even through the thick material of the skii mask.
Kagome would have been terrified if she hadn't been concentrating on the part where he said 'icicle lady'.
"Yeah man, that's one frigid bitch." Man one said "I can't believe she has us on speed dial, we better get paid extra for being there so fast."
Man two shrugged his shoulders. "Naw,
she's not only frigid, but she's stingy too, typical rich Caucasian."
(No offense to anyone)They laughed smugly at their own joke and Kagome couldn't
help but snort.
Man one glanced at her through the rear view mirror and rolled his eyes.
"Not my type you have her."
Kagome was shocked. A simple statement it was.
"What, am I too rich for your blood?" she spat. Glaring at his head back. He looked at her through the mirror again.
"Nothing personal ya know, but I don't like snotty girls such as yourself. Pretty and all, but a bitch anyway.
"You two are infuriating. My god, you abduct me then have the gall to insult me!! Wow, I'll give you props, yall have balls. I would give you a round of applause. But I'm kinda tied up."
Man two glared at her. "Would you always speak to people who have you in a life threatening situation this way?"
Kagome shrugged her shoulders. "It depends" She smirked "If my capturers weren't bumbling assholes mabey then I wouyld be scared, but seeing that you two suck, I have no reason to be."
The man blinked. "Oh" he blinked again "Well, screw you too"
"Wouldn't you like to!" she retorted, and the man smiled.
"Oh, you know me only so well" he began to reach over to her
"Hey" she snapped "I never had a booster shot!! I may be Hepatitis B positive!" (or negative, whichever one means you have it)
"Yeah right"
"I'll bite you"
"No you…OW"
She bit him
"You wench!!"
Kagome shut up after hearing that. Her shoulders slumped and she bent her head, her banmgs covering her eyes. The man looked at her, expecting her to bark at him, but her got nothing. He took advantage of it and grabbed her arm. She did nothing. Looking at her cautiously he peered under her bangs and audibly gulped at what he saw.
She was trying so hard
So hard to hold back the tears.
"Oi, whats wrong with you? Now you cry? What a weird chick."
The driver looked in the rear view mirror and suddenly jerked the car over to the side. Stepping out the van he moved to the back and swung open the door.
He grabbed her arm and she stood up, not even bothering to resist.
"Hey, boss, where are we?"
"By the river" he responded casually. His voice sounded different form earlier. It was more, calm, and nonchalant. It was sort of nostalgic for her. For some odd reason she didn't feel threatened by his presence. She did however feel threatened by the prospect of them being near a river. She looked up and gasped, there they were, parked on an unfinished bridge. Looking across the river she saw the reflection of the moon on the water surface. She stared at it, and smiled softly as she thought of the silvery white color of it.
As the sun set, and the sky turned into shades of pink, orange and red a small boat passed right through the reflection, disturbing the water surface and she couldn't help but think how much it reminded her of his flowing mane. Her dreamy thoughts were disturbed.
"Well do you?" he said calmly.
"Huh?"
Man one sighed and shook his head. "Do you know why our employer would want you gone?" he asked again, slightly upset he had to repeat himself.
Kagome got angry "No! I don't even know who it is!!" She struggled out of his grip, but he was too strong for her.
"Why bother struggle?" he stifled a yawn "No one is coming for you". He had said it so plainly that she stopped, almost afraid.
"H-how would you know?" she stammered, suddenly nervous. She never thought of the idea that no one would come.
"They would never find us." Shit, she never thought of that either.
"Boss!" Kagome rolled her eyes on hearing the other mans disgusting voice. "Boss! Why are you talking to the captive?"
Kagome could tell the guy was glaring at his apprentice through the ski mask.
"Who are you to question me?" he said in an authorative voice. The other man cringed and kept silent.
Then Kagome had an idea.
"Hey, since your going to get rid of me anyway, can we play something?"
"Are you crazy…"
"Sure"
"Boss!!"
"I said sure, my decision is of no concern to you."
Kagome smiled.
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"Ok, hit me." Kagome said.
Mr. 1 dealt her a card.
"Hit me" Mr. 2 said, and Mr. 1 dealt him a card.
"Ok, stay" Kagome said.
"Hit me again…" He smiled, Kaogme smiled.
"20" he said
"21"
"Shit"
"Pay up" she gloated.
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"Got any 2's?" Mr 2 said.
"Here" Kagome handed over her two's. she turned to the next person.
"Got any kings?"
"Go fish" he said monotonously.
"Crap."
Mr. 1 turned to Mr. 2. "Have any 6's?
"Here"
"I'm out"
Kagome folded her arms "You cheated."
"Yeah" Mr. 2 piped in.
"NO! Shut it."
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"Roll the dice! Roll it" Kagome squealed.
Mr 1 sighed and rolled the dice. "Four" He moved his piece 4 spaces.
"My turn" she said, grabbing the dice. "6" She moved 6
spaces. "Hey, I got a ladder!!
"You always get a ladder, you cheated!!" Mr 2 said.
"No!"
"Yes"
"Will you two shut your holes!"
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"Ok, truth or dare" Kagome said mischievously.
"Truth" said the Mr.1, who's name she found out was Uramu via a previous 'truth'.
"Awwe, you suck. Umm, is the person who employed you anyone I know?"
"Yes"
"Really? Who?"
"One question at a time, Truth or dare.
"Truth" Kagome said. "Im not dumb enough to choose dare"
"Have you ever fell in love"
Kagome bit her lip. A certain name along with an arrogant smirk on a beautifully defined face flashed in her mind.
"W-why would you ask me something like that?"
"Just answer the question girle" Mr 2 said
"Um" Yes, Yes, YES, I love him I LOVE HIM!! "No, um my turn., Mr 2, truth or dare?"
"Dare"
Kagome smiled "I dare you to take of your mask"
Uramu stood up. "Your dare is out of question, playtime is over"
"Its ok boss, since this is going to be the last face she's ever going to see.." He got up and slowly began to pull the mask off.
Kagome gasped as he began to uncover his scarred face…
"You!!"
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He sped along on his midnight black motorcycle. Leaning forward he pushed a button and the curved windshield came up and around, covering half his body, protecting him form the bone crushing pressure around the speeding bike. He watched the digital speedometer rise on the LCD screen. 105 -108 – 210. He even kicked in some nitro.
Kagome Kagome Kagome Kagome. Oh gods, if they touched her.
He looked up into the sky and noticed the moon. Then he noticed the reflection on the water surface, it was red. He starred at it as the reflection stretched across the expanse of the river he noticed the unfinished bridge. He was practically across town from it. He stared at it. In the rich moonlight he could have sworn he saw movement on the bridge. He had very good vision.
"Why would anyone be there at this time of night? Construction workers leave two hours before sundown, and no one is allowed on the bridge otherwise…"
He swerved in the road, causing a car to run off road. He stared long and hard at it. "Masaka… I'll KILL him!!!"
He sped down the road, going faster than any sports car.
"Hey you asshole!! Watch the road!!"
But all he heard was a roar of a departing motorcycle.
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A/N: I was gonna leave it here…evil, I know, but, let the show go on!!
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An elbow flew past Kagome's face and crunching sound of a connecting hit was heard. She gasped as she looked over the edge of the bridge to see that familiar face fall into the river. In her state of shock she didn't even notice that Uramu saw staring at her.
"She backed up towards the edge, half expecting an elbow in her face also.
"Iiya" she stuttered. "Onegai…"
"Please what?" Uramu said in a monotonous voice. Kagome's eyes widened. It was all too much. First the guy that fell, him too? Are the all against her?
She looked at him in shock "Uramu…Uramu…U-r-a-m-u…U-m-a-r-u. Umaru. No!"
"Surprised to see me?" he said coolly "Well, at least my little brother picked up a smart one."
"SESSHOUMARU!!" Kagome looked toward the foot of the bridge, only to find a steaming InuYasha there. "What..the fuck…are you DOING!!" InuYasha jumped of his bike and raced towards his elder brother fist drawn back. Sesshoumaru easily dodged it.
"Brother Dearest, you shouldn't get so excited." Sesshoumaru said, trying to keep the smirk off his face.
"Bite Me" InuYasha spat."Ow! Well that was ungraceful Sessy- chan" he said mockingly. Sesshoumaru backhanded him and Inu flew towards the edge of the unfinished bridge. Sesshoumaru was on him in an instant.
"Well, well little brother, it seems I have the advantage. Hmmm, let you fall to your death, then take your woman for my own pleasure. Then I complete the job and get rid of her like you were suppose to." He was hissing in his ear, low enough that only InuYasha, with his heightened senses could hear.
"You bastard!"
"No Inuyasha, you forget, YOU'RE the bastard of the family."
"Well, if I'm the bastard, th en my mother is a whore, and if you dare agree to that, I WILL kill you."
Sesshoumaru growled a very InuYasha – like growl. Inu smiled. "Your learning brother. Now get the hell off me."
"InuYasha, if you wish to live peacefully with you bitch you have to settle this. The day is coming soon, the day when the location and identity of the new caregiver of the shikon is revealed. If it is to be Kikyou, then all of this would be over, but if there is any possibility that your woman is related to that family…"
IunYasha looked over Sesshoumaru's shoulder to look at Kagome; she was staring over the edge of the bridge. He stared at the little rail that was her only barrior from falling.
"I'm that rail…"
"What?" Sess looked at his brother who was staring at the girl. He sighed. He understood how he felt. He went though the same with Rin. Rin was like a sister to him, and Kikyou was mean enough to have him get rid of her. Speaking of which, she was eternally lucky.
Termination he thought So many ways to do it, but of all the ways she chooses, she chooses to socially terminate people. No records at all, birth certificate, dental records, hospital records, school records, along with a fake funeral and the memory loss powder put in the flowers around the persons 'dead' body. The powder only worked for a year, so ever year or so they arrange for a service for the person, where everyone attends and then are fed more poison. Yeah, its poisonous to take in so much of that powder, but the bitch doesn't care. Icicle lady is right.
Sess felt himself being flung aside roughly. His brother got up and walked towards the waiting girl.
He truly cares foe her, and Kikyou will use that to her advantage. Jelousy is indeed an ugly thing, and next time…Inu might now be as so luvk that I overheard. Heh, it was fun to scare her though, even more fun to knmock out the guy Kikyou really hierd, that kid from school who idolizes her…Kouga…
"Kag?" she looked over at him and cringed when he tried to touch her. "Kag?"
"Why? Your brother…the security guard…why? What did I do?" She was crying. He hated to see females cry.
"No, Sess was there to protect you" I think, I'll have to beat some answers out of him tomorrow " it was a front! Please Kag, baby don't cry" She sniffed and leaned in towards him. He took her into his arms and took a deep breath. He loved her smell, her taste, the voice, her eyes, her. It was all her. He loved every bit of her. He knew now.
He sighed contentedly "Come on wench, lets go home"
Kagome looked up at him happily "You know I never thought Id be so happy to hear you say that"
He looked at her confused, but she shook her head. He jumped on the bike and put her on the back.
"Lean forward and hold on tight." He said.
She complied. Her arms wrapped tight around his waist and she buried her face in his long hair.
Its as soft as I thought it would be "Inu..Yasha, you said my whole name earlier."
"What?" he shouted. He thought he heard her say something.
She shook her head and pressed herself closer to him.
He sighed. "Kagome.." he murmured. "…I don't know what I would do if anything…"
And the moon was silvery white in a bluish black sky.
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SEDUCE ME CHAPTER FOURTEEN: The Kagome That Got Away
A/N: Talk about lack of a good title, well, it might not be as long as I would like it t be, but suck it up and take it, luv yall, and REVIEW!!
And, DON"T ask me where they got the games from, it was in back of the van ok!! Speaking of which.
*Can anyone tell me what games they were playing? The names of all of them!*
NOTE: IF I DON'T UPDATE FOR A WHILE ITS CUZ I DON'T FEEL LIKE WRITING, I JUST CHOPPED OFF A PIECE OF MY THUMB WHILE COOKING DINNER (PEPPERED STEAK IF YOU WANT TO KNOW) DAMN PEOPLE COULDN'T TELL ME TO BE CAREFUL SINCE THEY GOT THE KNIFE SHARPENED. THE IDIOTS…SO IF YOU DON'T HEARD FROM MY, YOU KNOW I'M WRITHING IN PAIN OR SOMETHING, I'LL LIVE…* SNIFF* BUT IT HURTS!!
OPPOSABLE THUMBS SUCK!!! …ITS BLEEDING AS I TYPE …JA- NE!!!