Disclaimer: Ok, ok, So I only use them, so what, I got better ideas any way….ok….no…sorry, don't sue me, I don't own it ok!……meanie.
A/N: MY THUMB GREW BACK, TIME FOR ANOTHER CHAPPIE!!
Review Response:
soul-fire2
This story is awsome I loved it I am usally a Sess/Kogame fan but you have made me fall in love with Inu. He is just so sexy in this fan fic keep up the good work. Your ideas are unique I like that alot of the time you read the same thing over and over I read all 17 ch in one day lol. Your story is sweet, romantic, drama all combined in one I have added you to my Author list. I know it takes time to update so I will be patient lol can't wait until the rest
Watashi wa ureshii desu!! Honto!! (I am happy. Really)
I got to convert another person!! Inu/Kag 4ever!!! Thank you for r/r ing I really appreciate it.
bluefuzzyelf
im very sorry about your
thumb. I hope you feel better soon. I know what that feels like. It sucks.
Anyway, i really like how you've got this going. It's
very complicated. I love complicated stories. The more
complicated, the better the writer. And you're a great writer. Just one thing. Please let Kagome and Inuyasha
get it on without getting interrupted the next time you update onegai. Feakin Murphy's Law. Did anyone ever tell you what that meant?
It's like where everything always goes wrong.
When you feel like updating again, you can trust i'll
be here to read it.
Thank you, it healed. I'll try to let them do what they have to( or more want to ) do K?
VioletEyesSilverShadow
Sesshy is confusing as hell.@_@ Ok loved the story can't wait for the next chapter^^Somewhere could you um...maybe put in a lemon..*holds up hand in defensive manner* JUST a suggestion.update soon onegai...Ja ne
Sessy is always comfusing. As for a lemon *evil grin* oh yeahhh, but more toward the end
DO YOU HEAR THAT PEOPLE!! THE LEMON WIL BE TOWARDS THE END OF THE STORY STOP ASKING!! YOU WILL GET IT!!
Jeena
im sorry.. but im soo confused!! did kagome and inuyasha have sex or was he jus 'playin' with her. I mean it did happen at 5. but then kagome bursts in on kikyo at 6. was inuyasha doin something with kikyo also? i mean... were they havin sex or was he fingerin her.. or what?... ? i was soo confused. please clarify.
What the hell are you talking about? Before I clarify YOU have to clarify. What chapter are you talking about- give me the name of the chappie and I'll tell you what happened.
LoLo-de-la-Ro
Good story.
The names of the games, in order of which they were played, were: BlackJack, Go Fish, Chutes & Ladders, and finally Truth
or Dare.^__^
If your gonna kill off Kikyo,
can Kagome do it? But of course before she meets her timely demise, can you completly humiliate her, and strip her of her status,
wealth, and all other things that she holds dear. Maybe you can put in
something like what happend at the end of Cruel
Intentions to Sarah Michelle Gellar.
Keep updating, and I
hope your thumb grows back.
Wow…your mean. COOL!! Don't worry, Kikyo will meet her maker (ok mabey she won't die, but she'll be in a situation that she might as well be!)
Heh~
Kaora
oh! very good chapter, and fast updating! welldone! love your fic, heaps awesome! and also, the games they wre playing, was it truth or dare (nah duh) 21, or black jack u can call it wich ever, and go fish! is that right? lol. oh and i sped through some of your reviews, and you were translating some stuff for kinza and tinza? well summer is natsu, that was correct, but moon had a question mark on it and being japanese, i should know this^^ Moon is tsuki, and quiet, i was sorta confused, so was mum. i asked her what it meatn and she said she'd never heard of the word. quiet is shizuka. kaniaku... did u make that up or something? because no such word in the jap dictionary! sorry. any also, those nasty flamers, ouch huh? good vluck with the nest fic, i want more seshy but good sort of seshy! get him back with rin! Please??
Tell them that not me!! See, I have a Japanese translation program, but what I don't like about it is that it always gived me more that one response- it gets confusing. Sorry if I got it wron- I really need to get a jap-engh dictionary and stop reling on the translator- it bites.
Thank you for your corrections though.
Shorti-chan
WAI! I want more...suspense is killing me...~.O..must...kill...kikyou...I absolutely "LOVE" your story.. It's
very very good... This has gots
to be one of the best story ever! You sure you're
16...O.o...cuz
I am too and I sux at writing...hehe...Hayaku and UPDATE SOON... Oh..gomen nasai about your
thumb...hopes you get better...and please try to write even though you're in
pain...I know I'm being selfish but..I wanna read your story...*sniffles*...
1.Black Jack
2.Go Fish
3.I've never played it so I dunno
4.Truth or Dare (my fave)
P.S. I truely love this story. I like your writing
style and the way you described things...
~always~
§~*Shorti*~§
It grew back- yay! What suspense? I didn't leave it at a cliffy this time!!! And Ya, I'm sure I'm 16- unless there was a freaky time warping/shifting thingy and time was fast forwarded a couple years an rewinded really fast and in that time I did things I wasn't suppose to do…hmmmmm…… 16? It's a mystery…
Silver Magiccraft
Great story! Wonderful great...With only two typos that I
noticed...I love the story-line and how well you've done the chars This is how I would think they really would be given their
situations, and So I really admire you for being able to do that. The chapters
are all very well written and very long...also great things. Now that it's 4:15AM I'm off to bed...so update asap!
Sayonara
~~Silv~~
PS(I do not spell well when I'm tired, and I make more mistakes...I also tend to be a bit dilutional(sp) but that's not the point...Please put off any mistakes in the review to my being half dead...with tiredness)
Thank you very much- I try. It is an A/U so I get upset when people don't read it cuz of that. I try to give the characters some new traits, or else it wouldn't be original right? But I also try to stick to their original characteristics. Thanx for noticing, and reviewing!
Call Me Kagome (sunshineandclouds@hotmail.com)
OMG, your story rocks! It's so awesome that Kagome really
and truely admitted to herself that she loved Inuyasha, and it was SO cool that Sesshomaru
was the guy that Kikyo (good god, I hate saying her
name. Fills my mouth with a rotten taste.) hired! Oh, and I had completely forgotten about the security
guard from the beginning. Well, your story keeps me enthralled, and it's one of
the best ones out there.
Awesome work! Please don't leave me hanging for the next chapter!!
~*Kagome*~
She had to do it sometime or another right?I try to do everything for a reason in my stories. So if you meet a character- most likely you'll meet them again.
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SEDUCE ME CHAPTER FIFTEEN
InuYasha gently laid her down on his bed. It had taken him a good two hours to get the dorm. And unfortunately for him she fell asleep after the first half an hour.
How someone could fall asleep on a motorcycle was beyond him, but she did.
And scaling the 15 foot iron bar fence was no easy task with Kagome over his shoulder. But he managed.
Then sneaking into the dorm wasn't any better with the heavy patrol. He never even knew the school had security guards. Now it looks like they hade some real cops.
He walked over to the balcony of his suite and closed the glass paned doors and drew the light mahogany curtains. Looking over at her he could only see her sleeping form on her bed. He moved swiftly and gathered a chair and a spare pillow from across the room. Turning on his bedside lamp he sighed as the soft glow of the light illuminated her face. Her almost flawless skin was tainted with a slight bruise on her right cheek. He touched her cheek gently and felt the slight raise of the skin around the bruise.
He froze as he heard a murmur. Fearing that she had woken up. He never had time like this to just simply observe her. She always seemed to put on some sort of front. Weather it be anger or bemusement. Sometimes to him, her emotions felt fake. But then other times, when she smiled at him, and her eyes grew big, He swore he was swimming in his emotions.
At times it was difficult to keep himself in check. He chuckled on remembering his little pledge on the balcony that night of the security guard incident. To only keep it to touching. Not to go any further, or else he might get attached. His chest heaved as he quirked at that thought.
It was too late. He may have not gone all the way physically, but emotion wise…there was no going back. He could just hope and pray that she felt the same way.
Oh he knew she wanted him. He could just tell by the way her scent changed when he talked dirty to her. Or even when she had finally emboldened and took the lead in the car that night. He bit his lip on remembering how lovely it had felt having her small hand wrapped around him member. Just the thought was doing things to him. He knew what she wanted. And it defiantly wasn't candles and a large heart shaped bed on a honeymoon.
She wanted it hard yet gentle in the back of the limo right after the wedding.
He continued to watch her. Her eyebrow twitched and her tongue darted put to wet her dry lips in her sleep. His focus shifted. Her mouth was slack and her pink lip seemed inviting. He smiled.
Such a beautiful mouth has said so many nasty pestering things to him. It was loud and obnoxious…yet the sweetest thing he ever tasted. He remembered how her tongue always seemed to dance with his. He wondered how it would feel to have that tongue of hers, and that sweet little potty mouth busy entertaining his dick.
Now that thought required some willpower. His breathing was uneven and he had to bite back a moan. He needed to think about something else. He looked at her hair; it almost formed a halo around her head. But she was anything but an angel…more like a messenger of death. Yes, she was to die for, he'd kill to take her right now. He ran his hand trough her hair then fisted his hand in it. Even this simple action seemed to bring mental images that involved her on her knees.
He needed more. He pulled back the cover and frowned slightly seeing that she shivered. He replaced the cover, but seeing what he saw was enough.
Her pale neck.
The curve of her breast
Right down her shapely legs.
Everything was inviting him to take her. No, it was screaming at him for neglecting to see how much he had wanted her in the first place. He bowed his head. He couldn't believe that this wonderful thing called Kagome could possible be related to the bitch queen. He also couldn't believe it would be her to be the source of his problems in the near future. But for now, he wanted to throw everything to the wind and just be here. In his private suite with his important person on his bed. If she had been writhing under him it would be better, but watching gave him much satisfaction.
Not being able to resist he threw back the covers again to enjoy the view, and a strong sweet scent smacked him in the face. He couldn't believe it. He smirked to himself when he realized she was wet. The thin layer of the grey short shorts she wore told him all. That was when he realized where his hands were. He had been toying with a sweet spot on her neck he had found previously, while his other hand was somewhere a bit lower but still in the northern hemisphere.
He tweaked a nipple and snorted as she shifted toward him
" Even in her sleep she's horny" he said to himself just for the hell of it. " Kag baby, you want me to make you cum in your sleep? Then your going to wonder why you feel so sticky when you wake up" he smirked to himself. But he suddenly stiffened when she shifted and her arm fell over the side of the bed, her hand somehow landed squarely on his manhood and molded into it.
"Inu…Yasha"
He gasped. She was dreaming about him??
The gasp turned into a choked moan as her grip tightened around his now fully hard length.
"InuYasha" she moaned out in her sleep. His eyes nearly rolled to the back of his head.
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She could feel his eyes burning into her. She internally shuddered at the sensation. His amber eyes haunted her dreams and thoughts ever so often. She heard that the eyes were the windows to the soul.
If so, InuYasha had no soul.
Everything about him was a mystery to her. She could never guess what he was thinking.
But if anything, he probably was the most soulful person she had ever met.
All he want is to keep his mother happy.
He looks out for everyone other than himself. At least those are his intentions. He always has to give off this ' bad bay' attitude.
Its cute though.
Wonder where we are? I was knocked out for a while, I was really tired. I can't believe that damn security guard! Just cuz he thought I was a prostitute doesn't mean he has to get some. And Sesshoumaru of all people! Posing as Uramu. How did I not see that!
I don't even know if he was doing that to save me or the get rid of me himself, seeing that apparently InuYasha won't.
Oh, I feel horrible now, I doubted him. I BLAMED him! I'm really not deserving of this…this…OH MY GOD! What is he doing? My hair, why is he touching my hair!! I just washed that! Now he's…wow, that feels…nice. My neck…he's. Mmmmmmm.
That feels good.
Kagome had to stifle a moan. She didn't want him to know she was awake- she didn't want him to stop…but knowing InuYasha, that wouldn't have stopped him. His touches were turning her on. She just hoped he didn't realize…and that's when he pulled back the covers again.
Feeling his hungry eyes in her made her shiver. She was glad when he replaced the cover. But then he decided to have a little fun at her expense and play with her. Her body moved on its own accord. She eased in towards him and that earned her a snort and a smart ass comment. If she wasn't pretending to be asleep, then she would have slapped him. But now, all she could do is blush. She smiled to herself and decided to have fun with him. He was soo delicious to her. Going back home to her family was almost out of the picture. Leaving her friends was a painful thought for her. But to leave InuYasha, it felt like thousands of wasps got into her head and were stinging her brain and laying eggs in their creating mutant spawn.
All in all, the thought made her feel like shit.
Then a thought hit her. She'll pay him back tenfold.
Carefully she flipped over, looking as smooth and sleepy-like as possible, and let her hand slid of the bed and land directly on…well, you know.
She felt hjim go stiff under her hand. "Inu…Yasha" she said to tease him a bit. She heard his gasp.
She pushed her luck a bit and gave it a little squeeze. He was as hard as hell.
"InuYasha". She moaned.
Now that was unintentional.
She felt him stiffen up under her and suddenly moved away.
"Go to sleep Kagome" he said softly.
She abruptly sat up in the bed.
"But…"
"No buts, go to bed."
She grabbed a hold of his sleeve as he tried to move away.
"You don't understand, InuYasha I…Look at me!"
"No."
"InuYasha Look at me, Its rude to talk to someone like that."
"Leave me the fuck alone. Shit, are you my mama or what?"
"OR WHAT!! I'm not your mama, I'm your woma…" She caught herself and bit her lip. "InuYasha please." She pleaded.
Slowly he turned around and Kagome saw why he didn't want to look her in the eye. She saw all the pain and frustration he was holding in all this time.
"Inu…I, you don't understand."
He slammed his hand on the bed with enough force that Kagome heard the base of the bead crack.
"What don't I fucking understand, please tell me oh mighty bitch that almost got raped and thrown over a god damn bridge!"
Kagome opened her mouth, then closed it.
" What don't I understand in that fact you were almost Killed because of me. Whats not to understand Kagome. Tell me please…..please tell me."
He covered his face as his eyes started to burn. "How could I not understand that I put you in the line of danger. Kagome I…I don't knw what I wopuld have done if anything happened. I don't know. Dammit, I should have just fucked you and got it over with, but noooooo. I had to fall in love with youuuuoooooooOH SHIT."
Kagome who was on the verge of a mental and physical breakdown at his verbal abuse caught the last few words.
"InuYasha??" He refused to look at her. "Did you say…"
"Shit…Uh…Go to sleep, that's what I said."
He roughly pushed her back down onto the bed, and tucked her in, despite her protests.
"Inuyasha….I"
"Shhhhhh" he whispered "Please get some sleep, I gotta take you home tomorrow."
"Inu….mmmmh."
The rest of her sentence had been muffled with his mouth as he kissed her softly.
"Go to sleep" he murmured.
She looked up at him with wide eyes and smiled.
Gods she's bueatiful. Somehow she got under my skin. If anything goes wrong…I.
"Kiss me again." She asked quietly.
He couldn't resist that small voice, and bent down and kissed her on her forehead, down to her nose and the corner of her mouth, then captured her bottom lip and suckled on it for a while.
"Now can you got to sleep?"
"More" she said playfully.
Smiling he sat up and pinched her nose "Your getting greedy"
"Mmmh, G'night"
InuYasha moved to the other side of the room and sat quietly, thinking about what he had just said.
Am I really in love with her?Does she feel that same way? Un requited love is not my strong point
"…..Inu…..Yasha….."
His thoughts were cut as he heard a quiet sleepy like voice reach his ears.
Just for a kick he responded. "Yeah baby?"
"…..Kawaii…..Inu….."
He chuckled to himself, then froze at what she said next
"…..Yasha daisuki……I ….luv …you….InuYasha…."
All her sleep talking for the night was blocked out of his mind.
In his head all he heard was " InuYasha daisuki, I love you."
Hah, I guess that answers my question.
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Kagome opened an eye.
"I love you too InuYasha"
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Seduce Me Chapter Fifteen: Pleasures to Realizations
A/N: Almost finish people!!! Close to the end!!!
Review, tell me what you think about what they think….huh? Ok, I shouldn't fry my brain. Or what's left of it.
Sorry for the shortness and the lateness also.
I started a new fic people!!! Its an InuYasha AU called Opaque Rogue, you might wanna check it out and see if its any good- though I promise I won't disappoint!
Arigatou gozaimasu minna san!!!
