Yes… it has taken a while… but… yeah… I've almost had a detention, I'm not going to well in school… but other than that, I should have reviewed earlier.
Cheetah, if you're reading this, I'm sorry… I'm sorry I didn't out this first and post it up sooner… but at least I'm posting it up…
Enjoy!
Chapter 5
The Finally….
Cheetah's POV
I awoke, in a bed, and looked around the room for Hiei… he wasn't there I ran to the next room, on the floor I saw a piece of paper that was all, it said
"We have your boyfriend, and if you don't want him to be used as… dog meat you'd better come to the lake at midnight, bring no one with you, or Hiei will be making our pets very happy…
The Weird Sisters…"
I collapsed to the ground sobbing, this was my fault, it was my fault he was in this danger… I would go, tonight at midnight and save him.
At midnight…
I ran through the forest, I kept making wrong moves, was it this way, or that way? Oh…
"I wish I was at the lake," I said as I held my pendant, this time, I saw it glow, I saw the words, 'your wish, is granted…' etch themselves onto the pendant, than bam, I was at the lake. I looked around and saw him, he was out cold, and covered in cuts in the water, I ran over to him, I went into the water, as soon as my skin touched it, Hiei began to heal, I ran to him faster, and faster, when I got to him, he got up, it wasn't Hiei, but a shape shifter! You promised me my Hiei!
"I know, I meant you would be joining him, gahahaha!" I saw the real Hiei come out of the ground, he was caged, and out cold, the shape shifter picked me up and threw me at the cage, the bars separated so I was allowed in, but not out, I kneeled next to Hiei,
"Hiei, come one… Please wake up!" I said, the doppelganger laughed,
"I wouldn't try to wake him up, he'll die soon in the ceremony, which is starting now!" Suddenly a row of 10 beautifully clad women came out of the water, a dark light emanated from each of them, in their hands each ahd a darks orb of swirling black and deep purple, they were floating over the water, at the end of their row there was an offering table and three women, all in black cloaks, the doppelganger laughed again, "Now, to offer the sacrificial blood to take you over, girl…" the cage moved, slowly towards the offering table, (AN: No it is not an altar, it is an offering table, because that's what it is, a table, for offerings) it seemed to soon that we got there. Hiei levitated out of the cage, not of his own doing but one of the three hags, Hiei's head flopped down, he was totally out of himself. He floated down to the table. It was like a living nightmare for me, the hags pulled apart his shirt to show his chest.
I didn't understand why,
The sisters passed a dagger of jade around themselves to bless, or curse it,
Why did I care what happened to him?
One of them raised the knife.
What is this feeling I feel for him that is so strong?
She started to bring the knife down, to me it was slow motion my eyes widened,
"No Hiei!" I yelled, than, it hit me, my mind clicked, the knife sped up a bit, it was almost there, "I love you…" I whispered, tears streamed down my face, than I only saw red, "YOU WILL NOT HARM HIM!!!" I yelled, the hag brought the knife down full force, it shattered as it seemed to hit a barrier around him, the water around surrounded me, I focused all my energy into one shock wave that would kill everyone who had no shield, I released it, the hags and the girls vanish into nothingness, so did the doppelganger, the table under Hiei disappeared, so did the bars around me, I levitated to him quickly before he touched the water. I carried him to shore and set him down lying on his back, I collapsed to my knees next to him, I took went to the water and took some in my cupped hands, and quickly pored it into Hiei's mouth, he swallowed it, which was a good sign. A little while later his red eyes flew open.
Hiei's POV
My eyes opened, she was looking at me,
"Cheetah, you, you stopped them, from sacrificing me, didn't you?" I asked, 'Why did she do that? She doesn't, feel like me does she?' she nodded, and blushed slightly, I got up from my lying down, and she practically fell into my arms, "Cheetah, I have wanted to tell you this for a while, but, I haven't been able to because of some bakas who kept butting in, so, I just want to tell you, I, truly, I… I…" she looked into my blood red eyes, I was blushing like there was no tomorrow,
"Yes?" she said,
"I… I love you…" I blushed even more, she blushed to,
"Oh, Hiei, the truth is, I love you too…" My eyes widened,
"You… You serious!?" I asked, she nodded,
"That's, just, wow…" I smiled, and pulled her chin up, tilting her head towards mine and…
Cheetah's POV
"I… I love you…" he said, he blushed, his jagan looked so lovely when he did that, I blushed, so this whole time, he had loved me, and I didn't notice,
"Oh, Hiei, the truth is, I love you too…" I said, his lovely red eyes sparkled and widened.
"You… You serious!?" he asked, I just blushed a bit more and nodded,
"That's just, wow…" he smiled, and pulled my chin up, tilting my head towards his, only just this morning I hated people doing this, but when Hiei did, it felt, so right, he leant closer, my heart beat sped up, neither of us was sure how to do this, but, I let Hiei take the lead, he lent in to kiss me, but then there was a,
"Wahoo! Go Hiei! Go Cheetah! Way to go!" Kuwabara, Kurama, Yusuke, Botan, Keiko and Koenma came out of the trees, Hiei and I blushed and he lent away from me,
"What are you guys doing here!?" I yelled, they ruined my perfect moment!
"We sensed the demonic power surge," Kurama explained,
"Go Hiei, way to save the girl!" Yusuke said,
"Uh… actually, it was… Cheetah's power you sensed…" Hiei blushed and looked away, "She stopped those weird sisters from sacrificing me," Kuwabara looked like he was about to say something,
"And no Kuwabara, I did not do it to stop my self getting controlled, if it had been someone else, maybe I wouldn't have." I said, Kuwabara sweat dropped.
"Hiei, you are now free of having to take care of the girl, unless, you want to stay with Hi-"I butted in,
"I want to stay with Hiei!" I blushed, Hiei put his arm around my waist, someone started to sing
"Love is in the air! Duh duh duh duh duh duh.Oh love is in the air!" Than stopped, because whoever it was, Hiei had given them the death stare.
"You, would, stay with me?" he blushed, I nodded, he smiled. "Great!" He lent closer to my face, but than everyone else, started to go,
"Come on, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss…" Hiei glared at them, but then looked back at me, he lent closer, my heart started to race again, Hiei's soft lips touched mine,
'My first kiss…' I thought, Hiei's arms were around my waist, gently pulling me close to him, we were oblivious to the gang shouting,
"Wahoo!" and going, "Aw… isn't this sweet," the kiss seemed to last for ever, and that's all I wanted, to be here with him for ever, I wrapped my arms around his neck. He pulled away from the kiss, and picked my up into his arms, I held on tight, knowing what he was going to do, and he ran with me, off into the sunset…
The End
Yes… a corny ending… I know… but Cheetah would have loved it… it's short… yes… but she didn't want it to be long and hard to read… I tried as hard as I could to make it worthy to be posted up…
Anyways… I would like to thank everyone for reviewing, please tell me what you thought of this ending… I've been thinking of a sequel.. but I don't know…
Anyways, Cheetah… I hope you liked it…