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Strange Voices and Mysterious People
RUSS, DWAYNE AND LUIS
The boys decided to have a look downstairs. They found a room with double doors on it. They decided it should be interesting, so they went in.
"Guys its kinda dark in here" Luis commented as they walked in.
"No hey I'm blinded by the light" Russ said in a very sarcastic tone as he walked around the room cautiously.
"Hey how are you doing back there" Luis asked Dwayne
"Freaked out" Dwayne said fear in his voice
All of a sudden the light's flickered on. This made the boys jump.
"I'm calm, I'm calm" Luis said to himself. "I'm not calm" he said wishing he could go back to Eden Hall- that was new!
"Ok we should just watch out for anything and don't go wondering off by yourself" Russ said as he looked at the old chairs and bookcases
"This looks like an old living room" Luis said looking at the books.
"Judging by the dust- very old" Russ said. Just as he said that the lights went out again- this gave Russ an idea. He silently slipped behind a chair and waited for the perfect moment. He heard something creak but decided to ignore it. Once he saw the perfect opening, he jumped and screamed and made a scary face. Luis and Dwayne's faces were white with fear.
"Did I really scare you that much?" Russ asked pleased with himself
His teammates just stood there starting to shake a bit.
"Um... guys it was only a joke" he said to his scared teammates.
They still just stood there, not making a move.
"Guys what's wrong?" he asked curiously
Luis pointed to something behind Russ. Russ turned and nearly fainted. There was a woman behind him, dressed in 18th century clothes and was carrying a dagger. Russ ran to where his teammates were standing.
"I have to find the one who killed my son" she said in a spooky voice
"We didn't kill your son" Luis said shaking with fear
The woman just edged closer. "You're lying" she said her voice sharp
"No we're not. Please don't kill us" Russ said pleadingly.
The woman edged closer and raised her dagger a little bit more. "I don't believe you" she said angrily. Just as she was about to stab one of them, they ran to the door and shut it closed.
"That was close" Dwayne said still a bit shaky
"Oh, yeah- real close" Luis said with a sigh of relief
"Let's go up those stairs" Russ suggested. "I am never going to pull pranks in a freaky house again" he added to himself.
The other boys agreed. They started up the stairs and found themselves in a place filled with boxes. Just as Russ was about to say something, they heard the sound of a young girl humming a tune- but not a very happy one. Then they saw her, she was just as freaky as the older woman they saw in the living room. Her light shining a bit brighter though and she looked like she could've been around 15 or 16 years old.
"My brother, where's my brother?" she asked, her voice as spooky as her mothers
"We don't know" Luis said
"You should know, you look exactly like the one who killed him" she said anger flashing in her eyes. Her voice was cold and hateful and she was holding something behind he back.
"Look there's no need for violence" Russ said trying to be reasonable
"Why should there be no need for violence" she said. "You used the worst possible violence against my brother!" she screamed.
Dwayne took the lasso he was holding and threw it at the girl trying to rope her, but the rope just went through her body and sunk down to the floor. This made her very angry and she took the axe that she was holding out from behind her back and started running towards them with bitterness and hate clearly showing on her face.
"Nice move Dwayne" Luis said running towards the door.
"I was just tryin' to help" Dwayne said innocently
"Well... thanks just it didn't work this time round" Russ said.
They made it to the door and ran down the stairs and out into the hallway. They ran down the hallway and back to where they started.
"You know I would've dated that girl if she wasn't so freaky" Luis said breathlessly
"Luis you would never be able to date that girl- she's a ghost" Russ said as fell to the floor from tiredness.
"I guess so" Luis finally said sadly
"Now let's get back to the others. I've had enough of this place" Dwayne said and the others were very happy to agree.
Hey Guys I hoped you liked this chapter and the end is near so we're almost there to finding out about all the weird things that's going on, but remember we've still got the group with Portman, Connie and Julie to go so don't think it's gonna end too soon. PLEASE R&R!!!!!!!!!!
Strange Voices and Mysterious People
RUSS, DWAYNE AND LUIS
The boys decided to have a look downstairs. They found a room with double doors on it. They decided it should be interesting, so they went in.
"Guys its kinda dark in here" Luis commented as they walked in.
"No hey I'm blinded by the light" Russ said in a very sarcastic tone as he walked around the room cautiously.
"Hey how are you doing back there" Luis asked Dwayne
"Freaked out" Dwayne said fear in his voice
All of a sudden the light's flickered on. This made the boys jump.
"I'm calm, I'm calm" Luis said to himself. "I'm not calm" he said wishing he could go back to Eden Hall- that was new!
"Ok we should just watch out for anything and don't go wondering off by yourself" Russ said as he looked at the old chairs and bookcases
"This looks like an old living room" Luis said looking at the books.
"Judging by the dust- very old" Russ said. Just as he said that the lights went out again- this gave Russ an idea. He silently slipped behind a chair and waited for the perfect moment. He heard something creak but decided to ignore it. Once he saw the perfect opening, he jumped and screamed and made a scary face. Luis and Dwayne's faces were white with fear.
"Did I really scare you that much?" Russ asked pleased with himself
His teammates just stood there starting to shake a bit.
"Um... guys it was only a joke" he said to his scared teammates.
They still just stood there, not making a move.
"Guys what's wrong?" he asked curiously
Luis pointed to something behind Russ. Russ turned and nearly fainted. There was a woman behind him, dressed in 18th century clothes and was carrying a dagger. Russ ran to where his teammates were standing.
"I have to find the one who killed my son" she said in a spooky voice
"We didn't kill your son" Luis said shaking with fear
The woman just edged closer. "You're lying" she said her voice sharp
"No we're not. Please don't kill us" Russ said pleadingly.
The woman edged closer and raised her dagger a little bit more. "I don't believe you" she said angrily. Just as she was about to stab one of them, they ran to the door and shut it closed.
"That was close" Dwayne said still a bit shaky
"Oh, yeah- real close" Luis said with a sigh of relief
"Let's go up those stairs" Russ suggested. "I am never going to pull pranks in a freaky house again" he added to himself.
The other boys agreed. They started up the stairs and found themselves in a place filled with boxes. Just as Russ was about to say something, they heard the sound of a young girl humming a tune- but not a very happy one. Then they saw her, she was just as freaky as the older woman they saw in the living room. Her light shining a bit brighter though and she looked like she could've been around 15 or 16 years old.
"My brother, where's my brother?" she asked, her voice as spooky as her mothers
"We don't know" Luis said
"You should know, you look exactly like the one who killed him" she said anger flashing in her eyes. Her voice was cold and hateful and she was holding something behind he back.
"Look there's no need for violence" Russ said trying to be reasonable
"Why should there be no need for violence" she said. "You used the worst possible violence against my brother!" she screamed.
Dwayne took the lasso he was holding and threw it at the girl trying to rope her, but the rope just went through her body and sunk down to the floor. This made her very angry and she took the axe that she was holding out from behind her back and started running towards them with bitterness and hate clearly showing on her face.
"Nice move Dwayne" Luis said running towards the door.
"I was just tryin' to help" Dwayne said innocently
"Well... thanks just it didn't work this time round" Russ said.
They made it to the door and ran down the stairs and out into the hallway. They ran down the hallway and back to where they started.
"You know I would've dated that girl if she wasn't so freaky" Luis said breathlessly
"Luis you would never be able to date that girl- she's a ghost" Russ said as fell to the floor from tiredness.
"I guess so" Luis finally said sadly
"Now let's get back to the others. I've had enough of this place" Dwayne said and the others were very happy to agree.
Hey Guys I hoped you liked this chapter and the end is near so we're almost there to finding out about all the weird things that's going on, but remember we've still got the group with Portman, Connie and Julie to go so don't think it's gonna end too soon. PLEASE R&R!!!!!!!!!!