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Enough with the long angsty A/N and on with the story.
Thoughts ((Means A/N))
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~~~An Unexpected Turning~~~
"Stop that man!" someone in the crowd yells. "He's kidnapping the Lady Zaliestia!" yells another.
My eyes go wide in shock. They think that Auron, my protector, my Aurie is kidnapping me? I fling my arms around Auron's neck, Maybe this will make them understand...
If only I were right. I had never been so mistaken before in my life. "Kill him before he corrupts her any more!" "Don't let him get away with her!" "Stop heathen, leave the Lady alone!" Those were a few of the shouts that I was able to decipher coming from the throng.
"Auron, I'm going to try something, hold on to me and don't let go unless I tell you to, and then double check." I start humming and a silvery gateway appears. It looks like a pond standing on end... a silver and very small pond. Still holding onto Auron's hand I run through it, and disappear into blackness.
Sir Aurie and I traveled through that blackness; the only thing informing us of the other's presence was our hands clasped together. It was pitch black, even though we were standing next to one another, we could not see each other.
Finally, we step through another gate, my hand unconsciously tightening its grip on his hand. I blink at the bright light that is now flooding into my eyes. "Aurie, we're here! Don't let go or you might fall through!" I look around and suddenly start whistling, loudly whistling.
"Oww! Don't whistle so loud; I won't let go... Yevon! Is that an Aeon?" Auron exclaims.
"Behey! The Al Bhed came and interrupted my stupid ball thing and now everyone thinks that Aurie was trying to kidnap me. Can you guys come back with us, or will I have to go back and call you?"
Beheyshee laughs, "I'm sure that we will be able to come back with you. I don't believe your friend and I have been introduced."
"Oops," I blush. "Aurie, this is Behey, I mean, the Aeon Beheyshee. Behey, this is my Knight, Sir Auron."
"I see Zali has told you about the dangers of traversing the Land of the Aeons." Behey says as he spies our clasped hands.
"Actually, she just told me told me to not let go, I... wait, Land of the Aeons?"
"Zali, perhaps you should inform your friends of where you are taking them. As to the dangers, well, if you have not received a talisman from the Aeons, or are holding on to an Aeon of someone who has a talisman, when you come to the Land of the Aeons you will fall through the land. The land will not be solid; it will be mist. When you fall through you will cease to exist," Behey said. "Although, there is one exception... if you are an Unsent, you will not fall through."
"Since I don't have a talisman, and I don't think Zali is an Aeon," he smiles slightly, "although I could be wrong... I'm going to assume that she is in possession of a talisman. He unconsciously tightens his grip on my arm as we speak. "Zali, I have an idea, let's go back to Spira, I think it's safer there. Even with the mobs who think I'm a 'traitor to Yevon' and a 'kidnapper' honestly, I am a novitiate in the order of Yevon, why are they calling me a traitor?"
I giggle. "I don't know Aurie, but I agree that we should go back. Behey, would you be as kind as to go and get the other Aeons?"
Behey nods and disappears. Shortly afterwards he reappears, this time with the rest of the Aeons, even some that Auron had never heard of before. Then again, he had never heard of Behey before either.
I then cast a gate, and we all go through that familiar darkness again. Auron is holding tightly to my arm.
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((A/N)) Gah! Sorry about the long wait and the bad ending. I'll attempt to make the endings of chapters more semi-decent. Please R/R!!!!!!!!
Arcander
I'm seriously thinking of taking this down since I'm not getting any feedback. But here I am anyway, posting the next chapter. You should feel loved. If I don't get reviews there is a good chance that I will take it down... come on, 1 review a chapter, how hard is that?
Enough with the long angsty A/N and on with the story.
Thoughts ((Means A/N))
--
~~~An Unexpected Turning~~~
"Stop that man!" someone in the crowd yells. "He's kidnapping the Lady Zaliestia!" yells another.
My eyes go wide in shock. They think that Auron, my protector, my Aurie is kidnapping me? I fling my arms around Auron's neck, Maybe this will make them understand...
If only I were right. I had never been so mistaken before in my life. "Kill him before he corrupts her any more!" "Don't let him get away with her!" "Stop heathen, leave the Lady alone!" Those were a few of the shouts that I was able to decipher coming from the throng.
"Auron, I'm going to try something, hold on to me and don't let go unless I tell you to, and then double check." I start humming and a silvery gateway appears. It looks like a pond standing on end... a silver and very small pond. Still holding onto Auron's hand I run through it, and disappear into blackness.
Sir Aurie and I traveled through that blackness; the only thing informing us of the other's presence was our hands clasped together. It was pitch black, even though we were standing next to one another, we could not see each other.
Finally, we step through another gate, my hand unconsciously tightening its grip on his hand. I blink at the bright light that is now flooding into my eyes. "Aurie, we're here! Don't let go or you might fall through!" I look around and suddenly start whistling, loudly whistling.
"Oww! Don't whistle so loud; I won't let go... Yevon! Is that an Aeon?" Auron exclaims.
"Behey! The Al Bhed came and interrupted my stupid ball thing and now everyone thinks that Aurie was trying to kidnap me. Can you guys come back with us, or will I have to go back and call you?"
Beheyshee laughs, "I'm sure that we will be able to come back with you. I don't believe your friend and I have been introduced."
"Oops," I blush. "Aurie, this is Behey, I mean, the Aeon Beheyshee. Behey, this is my Knight, Sir Auron."
"I see Zali has told you about the dangers of traversing the Land of the Aeons." Behey says as he spies our clasped hands.
"Actually, she just told me told me to not let go, I... wait, Land of the Aeons?"
"Zali, perhaps you should inform your friends of where you are taking them. As to the dangers, well, if you have not received a talisman from the Aeons, or are holding on to an Aeon of someone who has a talisman, when you come to the Land of the Aeons you will fall through the land. The land will not be solid; it will be mist. When you fall through you will cease to exist," Behey said. "Although, there is one exception... if you are an Unsent, you will not fall through."
"Since I don't have a talisman, and I don't think Zali is an Aeon," he smiles slightly, "although I could be wrong... I'm going to assume that she is in possession of a talisman. He unconsciously tightens his grip on my arm as we speak. "Zali, I have an idea, let's go back to Spira, I think it's safer there. Even with the mobs who think I'm a 'traitor to Yevon' and a 'kidnapper' honestly, I am a novitiate in the order of Yevon, why are they calling me a traitor?"
I giggle. "I don't know Aurie, but I agree that we should go back. Behey, would you be as kind as to go and get the other Aeons?"
Behey nods and disappears. Shortly afterwards he reappears, this time with the rest of the Aeons, even some that Auron had never heard of before. Then again, he had never heard of Behey before either.
I then cast a gate, and we all go through that familiar darkness again. Auron is holding tightly to my arm.
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((A/N)) Gah! Sorry about the long wait and the bad ending. I'll attempt to make the endings of chapters more semi-decent. Please R/R!!!!!!!!
Arcander