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On to the story!!! lol ^_^
Slipping into the ally, she transforms her clothing to a silver tight
sleeveless turtleneck, with a golden crescent moon just above her chest
and slightly tight black pants. With a black mask over her silver blue
eye's, her hair done up in a long silver braid and her legacy, burning
brightly on her forehead as always. She was ready.
Serenity quickly finds the closest latter and climes to the top of the
building. Finding an empty office threw one of the many skylights, in
the banks rough, she makes a quiet entrance.
Police cars could now be heard outside the bank, along with a man on the
gramophone, trying to reason with the crazed robbers. Serenity could now
see the masked men waving guns around, along with all of the innocent
hostages, crowed into a windowless corner. Noticing that one of the
hostages had spotted her, she places a slender silver painted finger to
her lips, motioning for silence. The black hared man nods his head and
reverts his gaze. Waiting for just the right moment, to make her move.
"No Listen here Sargent, we ain't send'in no body out unless you give us
what we what, when we want!" One well-built man yelled at the phone then
slammed it down into its cradle.
"Please just let my wife go, she's has gone into labor!" A man pleaded,
from behind his wife.
The man turns to the couple, frowning.
"The quicker the cops get us what we want, the quicker your little woman
gets out of here." The man retorted angrily.
Spotting one of the men pointing his weapon towards an empty wall, away
from harms way. Serenity briskly throws a moon shaped discus remarkably
fast, knocking the gun from his hand. Slicing right threw the gun,
rendering it useless.
Yelping in surprise he scans the room, anger etched on his face as he
tries to find the fool that dared to do that. Unknown to the rest of the
men; the discus continues to fly about the room, with the guidance from
Serenity, systematically disarming each of the robbers. After a few
seconds of searching the room, the first man gaze finally finds a masked
woman, standing in the hall entrance arms crossed over her chest.
"If you know what is decent, I would submit now." She spoke deadly calm.
"An whatta if we dount." A caucasian man slurred, waving his busted
weapon.
Noticing that his gun was useless, he throws it as hard as he could at
Serenity. The moment that she moved to get out of its path the man
lunges at her, with a battle like cry. Spinning on her left heal,
Serenity's right black booted foot hits the man's chest full force,
knocking the air out of him.
By now the rest of the men were all ready to attack this woman, whom
dared to foil their plans. Taking a sturdy-fighting stance Serenity
coaxes the, deranged men who knew not what they were about to get
themselves into, to make the first move.
"What's a pretty thing like your self gonna do to us?" One of the shorter
men snickered, as he advanced.
Grinning Serenity crosses her arms over her chest.
"Solar Flare!" Serenity commanded.
The room is filled with a brilliant explosion of light, momentarily
blinding the robbers.
Quickly, Serenity hog-ties the shorter man and handcuffs another to a
sturdy stone support.
Without moments notice a Chinese man takes her on, waving about his sharp
swords, like it was mere child's play.
Using her cat like agility Serenity flips and dodges the deadly sharp
swords. Although one manages to catch her left upper arm, drawing blood.
Growling in pain, she flips far enough away from the crazed sword man, so
that she could call upon another spell.
"Tempest Sirocco!" (Hurricane cyclone)
Paper work and small objects, from the surrounding tables, begin to lift
into the air and fly around the Chinese man in a cyclone like manner.
Soon he too was spinning around in circles. The moment the wind dies
down Serenity traps him with a whip like rope.
Finally the Leader has no more lackeys to hide behind; it was now his
turn.
Pulling out a concealed gun he points it at the silver hared heroin.
"I'm going to make you regret ever sticking your nose, into my business!"
He sneered; the safety could be heard as he flipped it off.
Just when she thought that he was going to fire the weapon at her, he
aims it at the cowering hostages.
"Taking the coward's way out? At least your lackeys were MAN enough to
confront me head on." Serenity spat.
"Yeah, look where that got them."
A black blur from the group of hostages, jumps up from the ground and
tackles the robber down to the floor. Setting his sights on knocking the
gun from the robbers hands and receives a blow to the nose from the man's
elbow in the process, temporarily dazing the would be hero. With out
further delay, Serenity kicks the gun from the robber's hands.
Gently Serenity pulls the black hared man off of her pray; she then
quickly digs her knee into the robbers back and handcuffs him.
A relieved cheer erupts, as all of the hostages thank their heroin, as
they slowly make their way out of the bank.
Soon it was only the bank robbers and the black hared man left in the
bank.
"Thank you kindly for your intrepid (courageous) help. Although, you
should have not of interceded. You could have been wounded, or worse
killed." Serenity finally spoke; her silver eye's looking resolutely
(deliberately) into his midnight blue eyes.
"You needed help. I couldn't just stand by and watch them harm you or
the hostages!" The man rebutted.
"I have endured worse exigencies (crisis), than an amateur bank robber
pointing a firearm at me or innocents." Serenity answered as she quickly,
yet elegantly, took to her feet.
The beating of running feet against the marble floor could now be heard.
That was her que to leave.
"I must bid you fare well." Serenity spins, on her right heal and takes
off running down the hallway, she had gained accesses into the bank.
The man opens his mouth to call after her, but he knew she would be long
gone. Looking down at the handcuffed robber, he notices a
perfect white rose placed on the ground, as if it was a calling card.
Picking it up he places it under his nose and inhales the rose's deep and
wonderful smell.
I know it is short, but if I make them tooo long I'll run out of story too fast...So how is it so far!? Let me know!
I hope to at least get to about 10 reviews before I post the next story...that or I'll wait a week before I post the next chapter.
Crimson Draggon ^_~
On to the story!!! lol ^_^
Slipping into the ally, she transforms her clothing to a silver tight
sleeveless turtleneck, with a golden crescent moon just above her chest
and slightly tight black pants. With a black mask over her silver blue
eye's, her hair done up in a long silver braid and her legacy, burning
brightly on her forehead as always. She was ready.
Serenity quickly finds the closest latter and climes to the top of the
building. Finding an empty office threw one of the many skylights, in
the banks rough, she makes a quiet entrance.
Police cars could now be heard outside the bank, along with a man on the
gramophone, trying to reason with the crazed robbers. Serenity could now
see the masked men waving guns around, along with all of the innocent
hostages, crowed into a windowless corner. Noticing that one of the
hostages had spotted her, she places a slender silver painted finger to
her lips, motioning for silence. The black hared man nods his head and
reverts his gaze. Waiting for just the right moment, to make her move.
"No Listen here Sargent, we ain't send'in no body out unless you give us
what we what, when we want!" One well-built man yelled at the phone then
slammed it down into its cradle.
"Please just let my wife go, she's has gone into labor!" A man pleaded,
from behind his wife.
The man turns to the couple, frowning.
"The quicker the cops get us what we want, the quicker your little woman
gets out of here." The man retorted angrily.
Spotting one of the men pointing his weapon towards an empty wall, away
from harms way. Serenity briskly throws a moon shaped discus remarkably
fast, knocking the gun from his hand. Slicing right threw the gun,
rendering it useless.
Yelping in surprise he scans the room, anger etched on his face as he
tries to find the fool that dared to do that. Unknown to the rest of the
men; the discus continues to fly about the room, with the guidance from
Serenity, systematically disarming each of the robbers. After a few
seconds of searching the room, the first man gaze finally finds a masked
woman, standing in the hall entrance arms crossed over her chest.
"If you know what is decent, I would submit now." She spoke deadly calm.
"An whatta if we dount." A caucasian man slurred, waving his busted
weapon.
Noticing that his gun was useless, he throws it as hard as he could at
Serenity. The moment that she moved to get out of its path the man
lunges at her, with a battle like cry. Spinning on her left heal,
Serenity's right black booted foot hits the man's chest full force,
knocking the air out of him.
By now the rest of the men were all ready to attack this woman, whom
dared to foil their plans. Taking a sturdy-fighting stance Serenity
coaxes the, deranged men who knew not what they were about to get
themselves into, to make the first move.
"What's a pretty thing like your self gonna do to us?" One of the shorter
men snickered, as he advanced.
Grinning Serenity crosses her arms over her chest.
"Solar Flare!" Serenity commanded.
The room is filled with a brilliant explosion of light, momentarily
blinding the robbers.
Quickly, Serenity hog-ties the shorter man and handcuffs another to a
sturdy stone support.
Without moments notice a Chinese man takes her on, waving about his sharp
swords, like it was mere child's play.
Using her cat like agility Serenity flips and dodges the deadly sharp
swords. Although one manages to catch her left upper arm, drawing blood.
Growling in pain, she flips far enough away from the crazed sword man, so
that she could call upon another spell.
"Tempest Sirocco!" (Hurricane cyclone)
Paper work and small objects, from the surrounding tables, begin to lift
into the air and fly around the Chinese man in a cyclone like manner.
Soon he too was spinning around in circles. The moment the wind dies
down Serenity traps him with a whip like rope.
Finally the Leader has no more lackeys to hide behind; it was now his
turn.
Pulling out a concealed gun he points it at the silver hared heroin.
"I'm going to make you regret ever sticking your nose, into my business!"
He sneered; the safety could be heard as he flipped it off.
Just when she thought that he was going to fire the weapon at her, he
aims it at the cowering hostages.
"Taking the coward's way out? At least your lackeys were MAN enough to
confront me head on." Serenity spat.
"Yeah, look where that got them."
A black blur from the group of hostages, jumps up from the ground and
tackles the robber down to the floor. Setting his sights on knocking the
gun from the robbers hands and receives a blow to the nose from the man's
elbow in the process, temporarily dazing the would be hero. With out
further delay, Serenity kicks the gun from the robber's hands.
Gently Serenity pulls the black hared man off of her pray; she then
quickly digs her knee into the robbers back and handcuffs him.
A relieved cheer erupts, as all of the hostages thank their heroin, as
they slowly make their way out of the bank.
Soon it was only the bank robbers and the black hared man left in the
bank.
"Thank you kindly for your intrepid (courageous) help. Although, you
should have not of interceded. You could have been wounded, or worse
killed." Serenity finally spoke; her silver eye's looking resolutely
(deliberately) into his midnight blue eyes.
"You needed help. I couldn't just stand by and watch them harm you or
the hostages!" The man rebutted.
"I have endured worse exigencies (crisis), than an amateur bank robber
pointing a firearm at me or innocents." Serenity answered as she quickly,
yet elegantly, took to her feet.
The beating of running feet against the marble floor could now be heard.
That was her que to leave.
"I must bid you fare well." Serenity spins, on her right heal and takes
off running down the hallway, she had gained accesses into the bank.
The man opens his mouth to call after her, but he knew she would be long
gone. Looking down at the handcuffed robber, he notices a
perfect white rose placed on the ground, as if it was a calling card.
Picking it up he places it under his nose and inhales the rose's deep and
wonderful smell.
I know it is short, but if I make them tooo long I'll run out of story too fast...So how is it so far!? Let me know!
I hope to at least get to about 10 reviews before I post the next story...that or I'll wait a week before I post the next chapter.
Crimson Draggon ^_~